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Pokémon Fledglings

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
Narrator: “It was here that Fledglings… lost its T rating.”

Even better, it has a K+ rating. I mean, it’s a boundary-pusher much in the same way that GL is with its T rating, especially towards the end. But still. :V

Nida to Guardia: “A fair and impartial justice system, eh?” :v

Guardia: “Hrmph, if it gets these defilers a stiff bonk, it’s fair and impartial enough.”
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Guardia, swinging it around: “Hmmm… good weight. Sharp edges. Yes, this will do! Mine!”

While it’s a funny mental image, that’d be a bit hard for her to pull off since Nori’s bone is likely almost as long as she is tall.
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Nida: “Oh, great. So there isn’t aaaanywhere in this world where we can hide!” >-<

Hey man, you can’t just allow your protags to get away with running away from the plot! >:V

Also Elty: “Although… they ARE after Pleo first and foremost. If I strike a deal and bring them to him…”

Nida: _glares_

Elty: “Erm, I meant—we can’t go back! Nope!” O_O”

Smart dog.
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_Gets whacked in the head_

Even if it’s true, at least pretend to comply :v

What can I say? Those three are a little stubborn and slow to take hints.
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In the realm of obtaining salvation in the afterlife, it doesn’t come much easier than this! Some people have to live their entire lives by rigid moral rules—others just have to deliver this one journal for Pleo xD

It’s less salvation and more “have your body buried in a place along with from your forebears where your future progeny can commune with it”. It’s a pretty potent threat in their culture and belief system, even if it sounds a bit doofy to outsiders.

Pleo frowned as he looked at the cave paintings: “Awww, but I wanted to lay low here until the Company stopped looking for us! Can we, miss? Can we?”

Tetsuzui: “No.” >:(

Tetsuzui: “You have a plot to take part in.” >:(
Pleo:
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Elty: “Oh, nooo! Guess I’ll just have to take the sacrifice and… stay behind… N-Nida, don’t look at me like that!” O_O”

Hey man, you didn’t expect her to just roll over when the team’s self-preservation was on the line, did ya?” :V

:sceptical:

I see we have not just Sawgrass Town, but Sawgrass Island… Perfect destination for our next journey!

That depends on your definition of ‘Sawgrass Island’, since the one in the Dead Zone there, while not the place you’d wanna day trip, isn’t one that I’d really grant the moniker. It’s called the Dead Zone for a reason, while Sawgrass Town was implied to have life, just not life that you’d want to be anywhere near around.

Aaaah, but you see, a superior mind would say: it’s the last place they’d expect you to be in! :5000IQ:

Also, why not head to Imperial territory? Or is that on the complete opposite side of the Cradle? I’m… erm, sure that they won’t go after Pleo at all!

Longer flight. They’re looking at their immediate options for places they can go to right here and now to get out of dodge until they can think through a more permanent solution.

Mosin Nagant!”

Yup. That is indeed where Nagant’s name originates from. It’s been a while since someone else picked up on that.

Oooh, exciting! I really want to see more of the Empire—they’ve only really been mentioned until now, and even then not very much. They’ll bring some much-needed politics to the equation, and frankly, I usually root for empires in stories purely for the cool factor xD

You won’t need to wait long, since this present island is the last Company-aligned island the cast goes to for a long while in this story.

Oooh, new banner image! They look like… stone claws? Some rougher form of a moai? Hm, no idea.

Think Geosenge Town from XY.

Pleo yawned. “Hng… maybe just five minutes…”

His flight path started drifting downwards.

“PLEOOOOO!” O_O”

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Aaaah, this explains the new header. But that one has three rocks on it! Tsk tsk

Something something, it’s elsewhere in town. But yeah, there’s a lot of those standing stones around. ‘Mengir’ means something pretty specific related to them.

Have we just left pirate Japan island for Easter Island… island?

More like Kalos Route 10 Island, even if that’s still an imperfect comparison and has some different-speaking locals crawling around.

Ironclads? We’ve reached that level of technology? OwO

Seeing their rarity, and the lack of metal in the cradle, they’re probably new creations AND very few in numbers. I’d be excited to see our plucky adventurers boarding one to check it out!

“Ironclads” in this setting are just big ships with iron plates on their hulls for protection. So you know, basically the same as the Mare Nostrum from your story as depicted at the time of writing, just wholly sail-driven and a lot rarer. In the Cradle, they more or less occupy the same spot on the totem pole as an aircraft carrier for modern navies: big, slow, flagships that are armed to the teeth and usually a serious pain to scuttle.

Elty: “... Oh my gods. She’s genuinely stupid.”

Nida: “I’m… starting to rethink your objections.” >.<

Pleo: “M-maybe she just wants to play with them! Wouldn’t that be nice?”

Yeeeeah, there was a bit of a learning curve for her.
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Ah, yes. That feral mentality kicking into play. I’m loving Guardia already!

Guardia: “Works on my island.”
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Elty: “We’re not on your island right now, bone-head!” >_>;

HMMMMMMMM… :sceptical:

Nida: “Oh! Let’s ask that Charmeleon—I have a feeling he could help us figure something out about the ancient humans!”

Elty: “Eh? Humans? Where did THAT come from?”

Nida: “... Erm, I’m not sure. Just a sudden intuituion. Why is the word ‘Leo’ stuck in my head?”

Guardia, swinging her club: “Hmpf. Yet another enemy to fight.”

“NOOOO!”

Hey man, you’re not the only one who read Overthrown back in the day. :V

While time and the scene march on, and Fledglings’ tone is very different, there’s bits and pieces of influence from Team Salient’s (unfinished) adventures if you know where to look in the story, especially in earlier sections.

Italian? OwOwOwO

Also, I assume he’s from not!Sawgrass Island that was crossed out on the map. Hopefully we get some juicy details about that place. But why would Nida and Elty know him personally?

He’s not, but you probably wouldn’t wanna day trip from the island he’s from either. Pokémon that do have a nasty tendency of not being able to tell the tale to others afterwards.

Neeeever mind, she just had a small trauma with his species. And Elty… maybe he fought against him in his pirate days?

Hold onto that thought there, though I will say that even if it’s frequently overlooked, Elty’s comment there wasn’t an accident.

To be fair, you are confusing the poor exchange student xD

But! It’s refreshing to see Nida’s character and psychology enter the spotlight again—her development has been frozen for some time, and we haven’t really learnt much new about her in quite a few chapters. Keep these character moments coming!

Admittedly, things are a bit set in stone after a while after this, but I’d like to think that Virgil and I did a good job at showing Nida gradually growing into the team leader role that she needs to fill narratively. We’ll see how you feel about it, since there’s a couple speed bumps she hits as a character after this point in the story in her journey.

Hatteras puffed his chest out. “Why, how dare you good sir! I’m Hatteras, Mayor of Bluewhorl Town, Chief Magistrate of Tromba Court, Defence Minister, Agriculture Minister, Housing Supervisor, future Imperator and Pontifex Maximus of the Tromban Empi—”

Unfezant: “L-look, just take the letter!”

Fortunately Hatteras probably doesn’t have eyes on world domination. [loltias]

Marley looked at the Cardellini-shaped hole that now adorned the wall. “Tsk. You were saying?”

-snerk-

Hitmontop squinted at Crom. “Hmmmm… I didn’t remember the Company hiring children so young…”

He’d actually be either just right below or just right at the age where he’d be considered fair game to be recruited based off some details explicitly laid out in Casting Off. Also starting young wasn’t exactly unheard of in the Age of Sail which this story heavily vibes after. After all, powder monkeys weren’t exactly seasoned veterans.

Ooooh, we’re going to get a small father/son adventure in Kenobi! Yay! I want to see more of the two spending time together. Pladur’s awkwardness is just too adorable, hehehe.

Crom: “Hey, dad. Maybe if you enlisted with the Company, they’d give you the rations to let you evolve without problem!”

Pladur: “Hehehe… heh… w-would be nice. As much as I love your mother, it IS embarrassing to still be receiving kisses on my head every time I’m leaving on the ship…”

Sounds more like a way to have Marley constantly watching him like a hawk and giving him more problems with anxiety and high blood pressure. At least if his enlistment wasn’t fielded through Osmund.
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Makes sense for pokémon who are just getting off a ship. As always, little details like this one are what makes your worldbuilding so solid!

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Looks like trouble caught up with them eventually, hehehe

Well, the good news for them is that they don’t get shooed off stage left for a number of arcs afterwards. But… yeah, they’re kinda going to have problems within the Company’s structure.

Dragonite, Gyarados? You’re spoiling me with cool pokémon! Let’s hope we see this Dragonite’s fighting power!

Careful what you wish for there. >:V

Ooooh, he’s THAT Dragonite! xD

Yup, one and the same.

Overall, fantastic set of chapters! Guardia promises to be a great addition to the cast, and we get to explore a new location—plus see how Crom and Pladur handle themselves on an infiltration missions! My only complaint would be that we haven’t been getting enough character development for our main trio, but Nida’s incident with the Skarmory gives me hope that that’s about to change. I pray we see more of the Empire, too.

All in due time. And you’ll be seeing a lot more of the Empire right after your present arc. After all, there are two factions gunning for a Protector to call their own.

I’ve been away from this story for far too long. Let’s try and fix that, eh?

Well, Virgil and I will be looking forward to seeing you around more often. After all, you’re only 10 chapters off from today’s release, and there’s no better time to catch up than Review Blitz. :V

The chapter picks up from where the previous one left off where pirates attacked the island. What I liked about the first scene was Pleo, bless his babey soul, being super hesitant to follow the others and fight pirates. By seven chapters, it's easy to forget that Pleo is still probably less than a week old and his first experience of pain and battle reasonably left a bad impression on him. However, it was honestly quite endearing to see that he did not take too long to join the others. Pleo joined the fray not because he felt obligated to, or because he suddenly grew masochistic tendencies, but because he just wants to fight for the people who liked him.

Yeah, it just seemed like the most logical way to bring someone that inexperienced into the fray. Though glad to hear that the setup clicked that well with you.

In terms of the fight against the three pirate lackeys, I think you guys did a decent job at making all the action easy enough to follow. There weren't any paragraphs that left me wondering what image to picture in my head. Having Nidoran and Druddigon characters in a fight bring fun avenues for useful tools in fights. It was clever of them to poison and split the gabite off from his teammates while picking off the less threatening pupper and bear trap. Chrom was like the worst match for Trapinch especially lol. What was even better is that those useful quirks weren't the sole determining factors to their victory.

Crom, but we’re glad to hear that the fight with Elty and his buddies was fun to read. As a general philosophy, we try to make sure that any battle that is worth investing words into writing does something neat to see.

The last portion of the fight sees us face to face with the pirate captain himself, and the prose did well in introducing him in an imposing manner. Nidorina's personality was a delight here because she would not back down even against someone like that. #StronkMomma. Still, the captain's earthquake and I think rock slide attacks did a number on his opponents, which became the catalyst to awaken Pleo's first use of Aeroblast.

That wasn’t quite an Aeroblast, but… Yeaaaaaah, they kinda would’ve been in a pinch there had Pleo’s powers not been there for him at the time. Fortunately narrative pacing’s like that, huh? :V

To close things off, this chapter accomplished a few things. It introduced us to the pirate pokemon and the kind of destructive potential they can pose to islanders, and it serves as the first of many steps that'll take Pleo on his journey to being the strong Protector he was born to be. Overall I had fun reading and I'll be sure to check back in the future.

And we’ll be looking forward to seeing you again in the future. Thanks for the review, and good luck with Review Blitz. ^^

Speaking of today’s release, we’re back with some more art for the first post. Also, the last update of the year, which happened to line up quite well since it’s the second special chapter and sets things up quite well to launch straight into the next arc in the new year. So without further ado, let’s get right down to things with…
 
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Special Chapter: Swinging the Lamp

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
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Throughout the Cradle's history, settlements always had a propensity to extend their rule beyond their boundaries. On sleepier islands, minor hamlets ruled over the fringes which provided room for fields and more spacious abodes, serving as defenders and places of meeting and trade for those lands. Similarly, it was perhaps most apt to consider the cities of the Cradle the towns of towns, the abodes whose pulses affected the livelihoods of a web of smaller vassals.

It was a state that the Pokémon of the cities were all too aware of. With their vast numbers and monuments accumulated over the ages by seekers of wealth, fame, and power; the tendency of their kind was to seek out smaller counterparts to subordinate. Such constructs had gone through many names under the sun, though what they were was unmistakable- an empire- where the whims of the greatest of cities shaped the course of their subjects for better or worse.

In spite of its protestations of abolishing Anyilla's monarchy, the Company's territory too fit the mold of empire with its crown jewel in Canalhouse City. In past ages, the burg was a shipyard town characterized by its spindly, gaily-colored gabled buildings, which lined a constellation of islets nestled in a lagoon. The normal lanes and roads of towns largely replaced by canals filled by the sea itself that gave the settlement its pulse.

Since the fall of Conntow, the Company spared no expense in resource nor settlement orders to try and make Canalhouse into a proper successor to Middleguard City. More islands were dredged to expand the city proper and suburb towns to service them sprang up on the shores like weeds. On the islets of Canalhouse, the gable-roofed buildings grew ever taller and ever more numerous as more great monuments joined them.

Other changes to the city reflected the troubled times that followed the end of Conntow. A series of coastal ramparts had been constructed after the swath of destruction left behind by the raid of Beatrice the Swift. Perhaps it was due to the tougher defenses, the wrathful response to the raid, or just plain fortune, but the Garchomp's armada from Orleigh mercifully had never again been matched again in size or strength in all of Anyilla. In more recent years, a new military harbor had been dredged along the central canal, constantly packed with lavender-sailed ships and their crews.

Swish… Swish…

Including a Samurott in a fresh third-rank scarf who stood at the bridge of a galleon currently in port, idly spinning one of his seamitars about his knuckles. The Formidable Pokémon waited patiently as his crew set about loading his craft with provisions, and went down through the pre-departure checklist that had become rote to them. Just then, the Samurott's patience was rewarded, as the water bubbled and gave way to the lumbering form of a stern-eyed Gyarados. The sea serpent snaked over, and craned his head down in order to speak to the waiting captain.

"Good morning. You're the new Commissioner, I presume," the Gyarados said. "Lyn, was it?"

"That's correct, Administrator," the Samurott answered, nodding.

"Are your ship's preparations all in order?"

"My crew just wrapped up the last arrangements, Administrator Zorn," Lyn replied. "We should be able to push off at a moment's notice."

"Let's get moving, then."

Satisfied, Zorn pulled himself away from the ship and lowered himself slightly into the canal's water. Lyn lingered a moment, allowing the Gyarados to lead the way seaward, before turning to his crew and barking out orders to raise the anchor so that his Argent Aviso could follow after the aquatic Administrator.

The moorings were undone and as the sails and anchor found their proper places, the galleon lurched away from the docks. The ship carried on along the channel the military harbor was built along, entering the central canal of the city. The Samurott Commissioner and guiding Gyarados Administrator carried forward, passing the stone multistoried buildings lining the channel, along with the swarm of small boats and swimming Pokémon that plied Canalhouse's waterways. The pair and their craft followed the canal past the raucous Strandmeer Arena, the water-straddling temple complex erected in honor of the city's Protector, and the central square overlooked by the Company's local offices before reaching the open lagoon. As Canalhouse and its gabled roofs faded out behind them, Zorn sidled up against the Argent Aviso's starboard, prompting Lyn to approach and air a question that had been troubling him since they left harbor.

"Administrator Zorn, if I may, but is there something that I don't know about this mission?" the Samurott prodded. "At my briefing I was told that this would be a cut-and-dry matter of capturing some pirates."

"There were a few details that were withheld in your briefing that the Board felt were on a need-to-know basis," the sea serpent answered.

Lyn frowned as a mixture of confusion and suspicion etched itself across his face. Just what was so special about this request?

"How so? Aren't the pirates I'm chasing the same ones who raided the Merchantry warehouses in De Kust just two nights ago?" the otter demanded. "That seems like a fairly mundane mission to me."

"The Merchantry stored something of importance to the Company in those district warehouses," Zorn explained. "When we did a damage assessment, we found that some documentation the Merchantry was slated to turn over to us was missing."

"This is the Taloons' Chronicle that I've heard of, right?" Lyn asked. "Why don't you just demand that the Merchantry send you a copy?"

"Because the documentation in question was a source document that the Board deemed strategically important," the Gyarados said, giving a shake of his bulky head. "We have reason to believe that the Merchantry couldn't have given us a full copy of it even if it wanted to."

"Ah, I see," the otter murmured. "I take it that's why you're coming along, Administrator?"

"Yes, I am. It's important we retrieve this register," Zorn grunted. "Besides, I have a report to pass after we're done."

Lyn cocked an eyebrow at the Administrator dubiously. Perhaps it was to be expected from such a high-ranking member of the Company, but he sure did have a lot of secrets to keep.

"What do you mean, a report?"

"Don't worry about it, Commissioner," Zorn rebutted. "Just focus on doing your job."

Lyn frowned before deciding to shrug the matter off, reasoning that it wouldn't be needed in a mission that was mostly there to prove himself to the Board anyways. As the Argent Aviso approached the rampart-laden barrier islands at the mouth of Vollezee's lagoon, Lyn looked back one last time towards Canalhouse, its stony buildings now hazy and indistinct from each other, only to be interrupted by the sound of a Gyarados clearing his throat.

"Anyhow, since we're about to hit the open sea," Zorn prodded. "Have you find any leads so far?"

"Actually, I think that I have…"



Meanwhile, on Kenobi Island, Mossaisle Town's mass of colorful hillside buildings slowly roused itself into a morning buzz. Shops opened, Pokémon came in with crops from the field, and rescue teams gathered at the local guild. As the rhythms of Mossaisle's normal life began to pick up in activity, so too did the gaudy and seedy alleys of Andaku.

The crews of visiting ne'er-do-wells came out to tend to their ships, some staggering along less soberly than others. The local merchants daring enough to do business with their shady clientele began to spread their wares, taking care to keep a sharp eye for any strange behavior from would-be customers. It was in this collective rousing that a group of three Pokémon in white scarves carried along. An Illumise leading the charge, a skeptical-looking Unfezant following behind, and a deathly pale Fraxure trailing at the rear.

Beatrix flitted along briskly, never turning her eyes to meet the sight of the various Pokémon casting glances at her from the shifty shops. If any of the usual gossip shifted to focus on her and her acquaintances, she made no attempt to engage the scruffy prattlers. Shortly behind followed Pladur and Pat, walking from shop to shop with some notable difficulty, though they too made a point of avoiding eye contact as much as possible.

"C-Captain Beatrix?" Pladur gulped. "Couldn't we have done this on the ship?"

"I tried, but they were adamant about meeting at a land site," the Illumise captain sighed. "Just don't draw any attention to yourself, and this deal should go down smoothly."

"B-But why did I have to come?!" the Fraxure cried. "I'm a cook, not a negotiator!"

"We need some strength, just in case," she insisted. "And once you've gotten a Dragon Dance going, you're one of the toughest Pokémon on the entire crew."

Beatrix’s words failed to ease Pladur's tense and nervous gait, which did not go unnoticed by his Unfezant teammate. The Flying-Type gave an uncomfortable rustle of his feathers before giving a begrudging sigh.

"Well, whatever happens, it better be a good job for it to be worth coming into this pit..." Pat murmured.

The Unfezant gestured down an alley next to a low-slung shop smelling strongly of Lansat Syrup, where the three made their way down a winding, dingy maze of alleys before coming to a stone warehouse with a tile hipped roof.

"Looks like this is it…" Beatrix buzzed.

"A-are we sure?" Pladur stammered. "This really doesn't look inviting."

"This is the only building with a hipped roof I've seen so far in this district…" Pat muttered. "Which is what that Kecleon said to expect."

"Tranquilo, Pladur," the Illumise reassured. "It's nothing that I haven't seen before during a run like-"

She caught herself as she saw movement coming from deeper within the warehouse, followed by the sight of vibrations rocking the roof of the structure. The three looked ahead apprehensively, as a rough-looking trio consisting of a Zangoose, a Flareon, and a Banette came out the door and into the alleyway.

"Bah, what sort of reward was that?" the Zangoose fumed. "We could have gotten more from those lizards if we'd tried to snatch 'em right there!"

"Really, Scian?" the Flareon huffed. "I'm pretty sure that attempting to kidnap one of those Kecleon with that bodyguard of theirs watching would've been the last mission any of us went on."

"Yeah, lighten up," the Banette added. "We still have an entire hull full of loot!"

The vibrations grew stronger and stronger, as a growling voice asserted itself over the three Pokémon, and a pair of glowing eyes high off the ground caught the attention of Beatrix, Pladur, and Pat. The three watched as the strong-jawed form of a Tyrantrum emerged, and felt their blood run cold.

"All of you, pipe down. I didn't take you three along so you could argue the entire time!" he snarled. "That said, I wonder why those lizards were so hung up over that little parcel…"

It was a sight that the Pokémon of Tromba knew all too well, from the days of Administrator Darzin's rule of the island. A hundred questions swirled through the minds of the petrified sailors, with one coming to the fore as the Dragon-Type stopped in front of the Tromban group.

Were they also familiar to this Tyrantrum?

"What are you looking at?" the tyrannosaur snarled, glaring down at a pallid and faltering Fraxure.

"E-eeep…"

"We were just moving along!" Pat squawked, ushering Pladur and Beatrix hurriedly along to the warehouse. The three quickly slipped into the darkened building, leaving the pirate crew's voices to fade into the distance.

"Captain, come on, let's get going!" the Banette exclaimed. The Ghost-Type's words fell on deaf ears as the Tyrantrum continued staring after the Pokémon disappearing into the warehouse, leaving the Zangoose named ‘Scian' to ask as the three sailors slipped out of sight.

"Eh? Why are you just standing there like that?"

"Their voices," the Dragon-Type murmured. "That accent of theirs sounded familiar to me..."

Evidently they weren't that familiar, or at least not enough for the sawtoothed fiend to stop and investigate them. The three paused in the darkened warehouse, panting as their hearts pounded with racing beats.

"That was way too close," Pat murmured.

"Well, at least we made it-" Beatrix began, only for her reassurance to be cut off from a squeak by her Fraxure subordinate.

"Ah- Ah- Ungh…"

Pladur faltered, only barely keeping himself from falling over. He teetered back and forth on his feet, his eyes losing their focus, before a startled Unfezant rushed to his side to keep him upright.

"Pladur!"

Pat hastily threw out a wing underneath Pladur, feeling the weight of his Fraxure compatriot weighing it down limply. Beatrix rushed over and tugged at the Dragon-Type from his back, dragging him back up to his feet as the reptile's senses started to return and the Fraxure uneasily regained a quivering footing.

"Keep it together!"

"Wh-What- W-Why is Commander Tarquin here?!" the Dragon-Type squeaked. "I thought that we got rid of him!"

"I'd heard rumors that Tarquin turned his claws to piracy after the Company sacked him," Beatrix said, shaking her head. "I suppose those weren't just rumors."

"Yeah, but even so, something's not adding up here…" Pat murmured. "What was he doing at our rendezvous point?"

The three Pokémon mulled uneasily. Pirate or not, it did seem strange that Commander Tarquin would just be loitering around their meeting place. And what business would the Merchantry have had for pirates to give them anything other than a price on their heads?

The trio's pontificating was broken by the sound of a creature in the darkness clearing its throat, which made the three sailors jolt upright with a start.

"Aherm, I'm not sure how promptness is understood back on Tromba, but are you coming?" a voice called from deeper within the warehouse. "We've all been waiting for you."

"Right, we'll be right over!" Beatrix said.

Beatrix led her subordinates on towards the light of a desk illuminated by candles up ahead. There, a gathering of four Kecleon had already formed. At the head of the desk, a violet Kecleon with green frills and a yellow-green counterpart with a zigzag of blue scales on his belly sat, tucking away some notes jotted on scrap paper. Beside them was a bookish-looking one fiddling with a red journal, along with a noticeably larger counterpart watching the proceedings with a keen eye, evidently their bodyguard.

"Eh?" Pladur asked. "Weren't you that Kecleon that told us about this job back in Vollezee?"

"Bruna, right?" Pat added. "What are you doing here?"

"What does it look like?" she scoffed. "I'm here to give you your work!"

"This ‘job' is a bit sensitive," the Shiny Kecleon explained. "Bruna here insisted on overseeing the proceedings in person, so I arranged for her and Calino to be present with us."

"Pah, you didn't have to arrange anything, Nitori," the bookish Kecleon, evidently ‘Calino' chortled. "With Bruna, everything is a hands-on matter, whether or not you know about it yet!"

The bookish Kecleon's teasing was swiftly met with a trio of glares from his now ruddy-scaled colleagues. Sensing his banter was unwelcome, Calino bit his tongue and hastily attempted to change the subject.

"Er… right," he said. "We should get down to business."

"Well, what exactly are we transporting here?" Beatrix asked. "It's not often that the Merchantry has to reach out to common free-traders like us."

"We have a small parcel delivery to Giotto," Bruna explained. "Time sensitive."

The Kecleon reached under the table and pulled out a small paper parcel before sliding it across. Beatrix reached to pick up the package, only to realize that it was a ratty dust jacket. Underneath it was a bulky codex wider than the ropes used for the Siglo Swellow's rigging. The tome was bound in a red lacquerware cover, adorned with a golden swirl inside a diamond with four leaves, and what looked like a line of footprints.

"Eh?!" Pladur exclaimed. "This is just a book!"

"If you needed a book sent over to Giotto quickly, why not send it with a mail carrier?" Pat wondered.

"Because as of two nights ago, this book was officially stolen by a band of pirates from one of our storage facilities on Vollezee," Nitori said.

"You mean the ones we ran into on the way in?" Beatrix pried, giving a skeptical twitch of her antennae.

"That's correct," the chameleon replied.

"But why go through all this trouble to begin with?" Pat questioned. The Unfezant's question drew an uncomfortable pause from the group of Kecleon, as Bruna's extremities started to turn a flustered pink.

"We've had some… complications after one of our own received a high position with the Imperials earlier this month," Bruna explained. "The Company gave our outfit's branch in Vollezee a week's notice to surrender it over to them."

"Naturally, we have no intention of playing along if we don't have to," the Shiny Kecleon added. "But the Company has undoubtedly been tracking Tarquin and his gang ever since they sailed off in search of the Taloons' Chronicle."

"Our best hope of actually getting our book to Giotto would be to contact smugglers and place it aboard a ship that can defend it and still move reasonably quickly," Bruna said. "Which is where you come in."

Bruna's colors returned to their normal purple as she pulled out the tome and slid it across the table towards the three sailors.

"We need it in Tidemill City by the crack of dawn tomorrow," the creature continued. "We'll pay 200,000 Poké if it comes in, and not a single coin if it doesn't arrive in one piece."

"But what's inside that book that's making you turn to a crew like us?" Pladur asked.

"This," the bulky Kecleon answered.

The guard flipped the dusty book open on the table, showing page after page of yellowed paper filled with handdrawn illustrations and line after line of runes composed of footprint shapes. Beatrix, Pat, and Pladur stared at the pages and then at each other… did this book contain what their mission was supposed to be?

"Er… I can't read that," the Fraxure murmured.

"I wouldn't expect you to," Bruna scoffed. "It's a family heirloom written in Footprint Runes."

"Eh?" Pladur asked. "But then what does it say?"

"... That's something that you don't need to know for this job," the purple Kecleon said, before clamping the tome shut on the table. "So do we have a deal, or what?"

Beatrix fluttered over the desk and studied the lacquerware cover of the book closely. Even though the sun had just cracked over the horizon, a run to Giotto by dawn tomorrow would undoubtedly be a tight squeeze. She'd have to empty the hold as much as possible to reduce weight and lean on her ship's escorts for help… but, with the free-trading jobs her crew had taken in the past, it shouldn't be that unprecedented for them.

"We'll take it," the Illumise buzzed. "Though... is there anything else we should be aware of?"

"Yes, Calino will be accompanying you for this mission," Bruna responded, pointing at her bookish counterpart. "In our line of business, it's important that we both trust and verify our business partners."

"If any further information is needed for your mission, he will provide it to you," the blue-banded Kecleon added.

"Hrm, right! I'll be sure to keep them up to speed."

Calino headed around the table and joined up with Beatrix and her subordinates with a wave and a cheery pink flush of his scales. From there, the three members of the Siglo Swellow and their new ally set off from the table and towards the light peeking through the warehouse's doors. Along the way, Pladur and Pat sized up the Kecleon, wondering if it was just them who needed to be brought up to speed.

"So… you travel on ships much?" Pat asked.

"Nope!" he cheerily replied. "The trip to Kenobi today was the first time I've been on one!"

The three sailors stopped in their tracks and looked back at the Kecleon blankly. How was a Pokémon who didn't know the first thing about working on a ship supposed to help them?

"... Come on," Beatrix sighed. "We can give a primer once we're back aboard the ship."

The four continued off for the entrance of the warehouse, carrying on back out into Andaku's spoiled sea air. All the while, the sailors of the group were filled with a sense of trepidation…

Just what other surprises did this mission have in store for them?



Unbeknownst to the Pokémon inside the warehouse, their conversation wasn't as private as they had thought. Outside, the Tyrantrum they had bumped into earlier had been eavesdropping through a window covered with a damaged shutter, his subordinates close behind him. Now that the conversation inside was done, the Dragon-Type turned towards his underlings, a glowering expression having fallen his face.

"… I knew it."

"Eh?" the Zangoose behind him piped up. "What'd you hear in there?"

"That accent was familiar," Tarquin growled. "Those ‘mons are Tromban."

"Wait, Tromba?" the Banette asked. "Wasn't that the island that you-?"

The Ghost-Type was answered by a low growl, which made the creature flinch and clamp his mouth shut. The Tyrantrum shook his head and gritted his teeth, the mention of the accursed border island stirring up unwelcome memories.

"I have some history with that island from my old job, yes. I don't need to be reminded, Cerny," he spat. "But more importantly, those Kecleon were leaving us out of the loop on that book."

Tarquin caught himself and paused for a moment. After an inquisitive sniff at the air, his maw began to open into a toothy, devious grin that his Flareon lackey was quick to notice.

"Captain, what's with that look in your eyes?" the Fire-Type wondered. "What are you thinking of?"

"I'm thinking that we have a prime business opportunity here, Kai," the Tyrantrum answered "One that allows me to get a little revenge on the side."

"Oh, that's easy!" Scian exclaimed. "We'll just ambush those 'mons as they make their way back to their ship-"

"No, too soon, and it'll tip off the other crews here," Tarquin interrupted. "Let's wait for them to hit the water and ambush them there."

His malevolent, toothy grin widened as his maw cracked open just so, light glinting off of his bared fangs.

"I'm not in a very charitable mood to those hicks," he sneered. "I say we take them for everything they've got!"



After setting off from Kenobi, the crew of the Siglo Swellow made a few attempts to try and fit Calino in with the crew. He didn't seem to get the hang of tending to the sails and rigging, and deck work similarly met premature ends thanks to his lack of sea legs.

Eventually, Calino made passing mention of having cooked for some friends in the past, which led to his assignment to accompany Pladur down in the space of the ship's steerage that served as the galley. There, the chameleon finally found his footing with the Fraxure, and soon enough the two were hard at work making a batch of poffins for the crew. Calino was set to work stirring batter, as his Dragon-Type partner monitored a tray of the pastries baking in a crude clay oven.

"How's that poffin batter coming along, Calino?" Pladur asked.

"Great!" the Kecleon answered. "If I'd known stirring would be easy enough to do with one claw, I'd have done started doing so earlier!"

Pladur whirled back at Calino's words, and saw that the Merchantry scribe had stirred the contents of his mixing bowl without holding it steady on the table. The Fraxure went wide-eyed and hastily cried out to his new teammate.

"Hey, hold on!" the Dragon-Type exclaimed. "Make sure to stabilize that bowl! We're on a ship!"

"Eh?!" Calino protested. "What are you going on abou-?"

A powerful wave sent the ship lurching, causing Calino to lose his footing. The chameleon stumbled back and in a frantic attempt to keep his balance, sent the contents of his mixing bowl flying. The batter sailed through the air, before splattering against Pladur's belly, coating the Dragon-Type in a layer of gooey, sugary glop.

"Er… oops?"

"At least we have time to make another batch…" Pladur sighed. Grimacing, he drew the flat side of a claw up his battered stomach, scraping some of the poffin goop off of his hide. After a moment's pause glancing at the batter dripping off his claw, he shrugged and popped it into his mouth for a taste. "Flavor's not bad for a first attempt, though. Just keep it in the bowl next time."

"How did you learn to cook anyways?" the Kecleon asked. "When I saw you the first time, I'd have never pegged you as the type to be a chef."

Pladur looked up from clearing off the last of the poffin batter, before giving a sheepish smile back at the chameleon.

"Well, working with fire does tend to come naturally to a dragon," he answered. "And it gives my mate and children something to look forward to whenever I'm home."

"Oh?" the Kecleon pried. "How many?"

"One and the other was still an egg during my last shore leave," the Dragon-Type answered, trailing off. The Fraxure started to have a wistful look creep across his eyes, his thoughts clearly not with Calino or the rest of the galley around him.

"... Sometimes I wonder if I'm spending too much time away from them," he sighed. "I mean, Beatrix's pay helps to cover for their needs, but I wonder sometimes if I'm not around for them when I really need to be."

"I dunno, hatchlings are adventurous types," Calino reassured. "So even if you can't be around them constantly, I'd think that being able to take some adventure back to them is a decent consolation."

"Eh?" Pladur asked, giving a quizzical tilt of his head. "What makes you say that?"

"Well, they need role models for getting out eventually, right? I think that they could do worse than having someone to learn from by example!" Calino chortled, only to be interrupted by a startled Unfezant's squawk from above deck.

"Gwark! There's a Company ship on the horizon coming straight for us!"

Pladur's jaw went slack, his eyes widening in panic. He paced nervously in place, his heart and mind racing at the alarming news.

"C-Come on, we need to get you-"

"Let's see what's going on up there," the Kecleon said. The chameleon turned and bolted down the corridor for the stairs leading up to the deck, leaving Pladur behind spluttering.

"Eh?! H-Hey! Calino!" he protested. "Wait up!"

Pladur stumbled out of the galley, hurrying down the passage after his hasty new teammate. He slowed somewhat as he neared the top of the stairs to the deck, feeling short of breath from his hurried pace.

"It's a galleon," Beatrix's Hitmontop first mate said. "Judging from the Gyarados in the water up front, looks like it's more heavily armed than normal."

At that revelation, Calino flushed a deep brown color, seemingly stricken by panic. Wide-eyed, he turned on his heels and bolted back towards the stair leading to the belly of the ship. In more normal times, the Kecleon's hasty retreat might have earned a jeer from one of the more braggadocious sailors of the Siglo Swellow, but with the Company ship prowling towards them, it was difficult for any of the Pokémon to muster a show of bravado.

"Captain Beatrix," a Golduck gulped. "Wh-What do we do now?"

"We... I..." she stammered a moment, struggling to come up with a solution for the new problem which loomed over them from the horizon. Despite her best efforts, every plan she came up with seemed likely upon second thought to cause twice as many problems as it'd have solved. Heaving a dissatisfied sigh, she offered the best plan she could come up with given their limited firepower.

"… Push the ledger into one of the hidden compartments and tell the crew to prepare to be boarded," the Illumise muttered. "We'll have to hope that whoever captains that ship doesn't figure out how to open them."

"Wait!"

A call came from below deck, accompanied by a crescendo of footsteps approaching the stairway. Bursting out onto the deck came Calino once more, this time holding a hardcover book bound in vivid red lacquer... the very ledger Beatrix had just ordered the crew to stow away!

"Huh?!" Philips exclaimed. "Qué estás haciendo?!"

"Yeah! Captain Beatrix said we needed to hide the journal!" Natrix cried. "Not give it to the Company on a silver platter!"

"I'm not giving the Company anything!" the Kecleon snapped. "I'm giving you a way out! There's some notes about secret sea routes around here in this thing!"

Calino set the tome on the deck of the ship, skimming through pages at a lightning-fast pace. Looking over his shoulder, Beatrix spied a blur of illustrations, visible only for a split second before the page was flipped to the next. Each page of illegible runes was fully illustrated - some displaying pictures of Pokemon, others detailing objects which must have been found in a dungeon, and others yet seeming nothing more than a simple landscape sketch.

"Come on, come on," Calino grumbled. "Their journeys took them here, so they had to have written something..."

He flipped through the pages ever faster, until after a tense moment he finally seemed to find something which caused him to double-take. Flipping backward a few pages towards the middle, he came to a page depicting a column of fog at sea obscuring a stony channel. The Kecleon looked up towards port, where he saw that there in front of him was a column of fog marking the presence of a Mystery Dungeon. At this, the chameleon leapt up and pointed out to the left.

"There!" Calino cried, pointing off towards a foggy column with his claw. "Towards that Mystery Dungeon!"

"Eh?!" Beatrix buzzed. "That'll take us straight into the Dead Zone!"

"It'll also take us into a detour we can shake that Company ship in!"

Beatrix looked skeptically at Calino and his tome before turning her attention off to the Mystery Dungeon he was gesturing at. His route was in there? She presumed that he meant for them to skirt the edges, but even so, that would take her crew through the Dead Zone! The patch of sea around Conntow where since its destruction ships that strayed too close to the island were sometimes never heard from again. The Illumise hesitated and looked back at the galleon rapidly closing on them, before shaking her head and buzzing an order out to her subordinates.

"Hard to port!"

The ship lurched left, and a cry went up among the escorts. The sea Pokémon accompanying the Siglo Swellow whipped up a wave as their aerial counterparts gave the ship a tailwind, sailing against the natural current of the sea and directly for the red buoys marking the edge of the Dead Zone's waters.

The sudden flurry of activity did not go unnoticed as the galleon also turned, with a few stray beams zipping past the white-sailed schooner. Beatrix watched as her ship neared the foggy expanse ahead, before looking back and watching the Company ship slip back further and further… Wait a minute!

They stopped chasing after them!

The crew watched as the lavender-sailed galleon started to fade with the fog at the edge of the Mystery Dungeon. The ship's escorts eased their current, discovering that the waters calmly trickled opposite the sea's course outside. Some of the escorts went up ahead to scout the way forward as the rest of the crew exhaled a sigh of relief, before turning curious eyes to Calino as he scooped up the ruddy tome.

"So... what is in that book anyway?" Natrix asked.

"Yeah," Philips chimed in. "How were you able to pull that shortcut out of your hat so easily?"

"Oh, it's nothing special," Calino shrugged and waved a claw dismissively, the barest hint of a sheepish grin showing on his face. "I knew that this journal had some bits about the old sea routes the Merchantry used around here, so it was just a matter of finding them."

"Eh? Just what kind of journal has that sort of stuff in there?" Beatrix asked.

"A log of the different journeys that the Merchantry's founders went on," the Kecleon explained. "All the way back to the days of Taloon the Explorer!"

The nearby sailors traded puzzled looks to each other. The Merchantry had hired pirates to raid their own warehouses, and offered them 200,000 Poké just to keep the Company from reading some musty old diary? Why go through all the trouble?

"But Bruna made it sound like it was something important!" Pat exclaimed. "Why would the Company be so interested in a bunch of old journal entries?"

"Because our founders gave the Merchantry some of its best trade secrets and recorded them in this book," the Normal-Type answered. "Ever since the Branch Manager in Giotto got a position in the Imperial Admiralty, the Company's been pushing to pre-emptively even the playing field."

"So... are those secrets the reason why the book has that strange writing?" Pladur asked. "Because you're using it as a code?"

"Er… I think you didn't quite follow me earlier. It's not just a book of our founders' secrets," the Kecleon re-iterated. "It was actually written by them all the way back when Pokémon were still using Footprint Runes to write."

"Footprint Runes?"

The chameleon gave a small smile and lifted the book closer up to the Fraxure's eyes. Now that Calino mentioned it… the writing really did look like a bunch of little footprints! The Dragon-Type gave a puzzled stare back at the Merchantry employee as a bemused smile crossed his maw.

"It's exactly what it sounds like. Back in the old days of the Cradle, it's how Pokémon wrote things," Calino explained. "Naturally, it was a bit hard to do that a lot of the time, so for travelers and bookkeepers like Taloon the Explorer and the founders, they would write out rough versions of those footprints."

The Kecleon's scales started to flush a proud, purple hue as the lizard ran a claw over a few lines of the footprint-shaped text in the tome for the gathered sailors to see.

"It's a little tough, but for a few of them, you can see what runes they wound up becoming in our modern writing. Take a look at this one here…" he said, pointing out a three-toed footprint with a pair of single-toed footprints oriented at angles underneath them.

"'Fire'?" the first mate asked. "I mean, I guess that one is obvious since it looks like a Fire Blast if you squint at it hard enough, but how's anyone supposed to make sense of the other ones?"

At the Hitmontop's question, Calino gave a shake of his head before proudly puffing out his chest.

"You'd either need to learn how to read Footprint Runes, or you'd need someone to write a transcription for you…" the Kecleon replied. "Like me!"

"Wait, you mean you can read this?" a Golduck asked.

"Well of course!" Calino chortled. "How else would I have told you about this route here?"

Some murmurs and nods of agreement floated about the gathered sailors. Satisfied with the aid that Calino's journal had given her crew, Beatrix gave a twitch of her antennae before buzzing to draw attention.

"Well, it looks like it's smooth sailing out from here," the Illumise chuckled. "So I guess we have you and your ability to read those dusty old runes to thank for that."

"Heh, who knows?" the Kecleon said. "If you make it worth my while, maybe I'll be able to teach you some of the basics before we all pull into port!"

A chorus of hearty chortles went about the crew as the Siglo Swellow continued its slow course along the rocky channel. Even as the fog thickened around them, the crew felt as if a weight had been lifted from their shoulders. After all, they had already gone through the eye of the storm in their journey to Giotto…

Right?



As the Siglo Swellow sailed away, Lyn's ship had come to a rest just behind the red buoys marking the edge of the sea patch the Siglo Swellow had sailed into. The Samurott leaned on the railing, a spyglass in one paw and blade in the other, twitching his whiskers irkedly as he watched the schooner's crew gather around the form of a Kecleon holding a hefty tome. Elsewhere along the deck, the Pokémon in the crew gave apprehensive gazes at the waters ahead, as if they were a massive patch of poison.

"So much for searching that ship," a Krokorok muttered.

"Yeah, they must be desperate if they're sailing off that way," a Fearow added.

"And of course they'd wind up making things difficult for me…" Lyn grumbled. The otter grit his teeth and lowered his scope from his eye, before giving a shake of his head and turning back to his crew on the deck.

"We're going in."

"C-Captain?! That's the Dead Zone!" an Absol with a Second-Rank scarf spluttered incredulously. "Nothing but disaster awaits you if you go there!"

"Yes, and that ship that just turned tail on us showed up in the registrar of recent dockings at Kenobi!" the Samurott growled, gesturing at the fading form of the Siglo Swellow with a seamitar. "To top it off, there's a Kecleon onboard prancing around with our prize-!"

"Hold it right there, Commissioner!"

Before Lyn could finish barking out his order, he was cut off by the sound of churning water as Zorn raised his head from the sea. The Gyarados gave an irritated twitch of his barbels, before shooting an unamused scowl over at his subordinate.

"Lyn, you're a Third-Rank," the sea serpent scolded. "You of all Pokémon ought to know better by now that the Dead Zone's waters are dangerous to navigate."

"Administrator Zorn, if I may, but wasn't it you that told me that this journal was of strategic importance to the Company?" Lyn prodded. "Surely that would be reason enough to head into those waters while we have that ship in our sights."

"You should learn to better manage your risks, Commissioner," Zorn chided. "The journal is important, but denying its utility to our rivals is an acceptable alternative outcome to the Board. I don't consider 'running up a score' worth risking an Administrator and a Third-Rank's crew."

Lyn scowled back at the Administrator, incredulous as to how the Gyarados could so casually accept losing his target like that. The Absol first mate, sensing the tension in the air, spoke up, hoping to help sway his superior's mind.

"Captain, there has to be another way we can catch up with them," the Dark-Type insisted. "Assuming they don't die in those waters, they have to come out somewhere, right?"

The Samurott gave a dismissive shake of his head before huffing back unconvinced. Just what were they supposed to do other than letting the schooner sail off?

"Well, do either of you two have any alternative proposals, then?"

"The current the smugglers' schooner took exits the Dead Zone at the rocks on the other side of the fog," Zorn offered. "Assuming they make the trip over without incident, we should be able to safely cut them off there."

"Hrmm..." Lyn paused, working over Zorn's suggestion in his head. After running through a number of possibilities, he realized that while the plan wasn't necessarily ideal, it seemed viable after all. And with the Chronicle as important and sensitive as it was, there was no sense in splitting hairs over a strategy that worked.

"… It'll be a stretch," the Samurott murmured, "but if we sail now, we might be able to make it."

With that, the two Company higher-ups had reached a consensus. Now that he had a destination in mind, Lyn felt ready to mobilize his crew. The Samurott sheathed his blade, before turning to his underlings and barking out an order.

"Turn us hard to port and take us south!"

A chorus of 'ayes' went up as the crew set about to turn the ship. The escorts stirred up the air and sea to force the Argent Aviso against the ocean's natural current. The Water-Type glared back at the Mystery Dungeon just past the edge of the Dead Zone before giving a harrumph. Detour or no detour, he would not allow those smugglers to elude him so easily.



Ahead of both the Argent Aviso and Siglo Swellow was a galleon with orange sails with white jawbone designs on it. The Tramontane Tyrant had been Tarquin's reliable partner since even before his days in piracy, and it allowed him to remain a force to be reckoned with after his transition to his newfound trade of raiding and plundering.

But out on the high seas, there was nary a companion but some feral Tentacool passing in the distance at sea, Wingull above, and the sound of trumpets being played by some more idle crewmembers. In spite of that, as the Tyrantrum spotted a rocky outcropping in front of a column of fog up ahead, he seemed as focused and battle-ready as ever. The Dragon-Type breaking the relative silence with a growling cry to his lackeys.

"Drop the anchor and pull up the sails!" Tarquin ordered. "This is it!"

A splash rang out as the ship's anchor slipped under the water's surface. The deck flew into a commotion as Pokémon hoisted the rigging to pull the sails up, and the fliers and sea escorts quickly set to work whipping up currents to slow the galleon. The ship's momentum soon came to a stop, leaving behind only the gentle rolling of the waves as the crew began to crowd around the stern's deck where Tarquin stood scanning the surroundings.

"Captain, why did we stop here?" a Meowstic asked. "I thought you said we were chasing after a mark you spotted back in port!"

"Yeah, we haven't seen a ship since we left Andaku!" a Cacturne added. "The only thing I see around here is a bunch of seawater and that Mystery Dungeon's fog on the starboard side."

"That's because our marks aren't here yet," Tarquin snapped. "Back in port, I overheard those lizards on the way out from delivering that book. It's apparently valuable enough that they went through all the trouble of using us as fall guys to steal it from the Company."

Tarquin looked over the railing and gestured at the stream in the seawater with his claw, tracing westward, opposite of the current's course.

"They contracted a crew as couriers back in Andaku to take it to Giotto by midnight tonight," the dinosaur explained. "Their only hope for being able to make that deadline would be to sail against the current and through this pass."

Uneasy murmurs circulated amongst the crew about how absurd this plan was. Going all the way out to the edge of the Dead Zone around Conntow to lie in wait over some book? That hardly seemed worth the trouble at all! Sensing the dissatisfaction in the air, Tarquin gave a low growl, quickly silencing the chatter as he continued on.

"That wasn't the only thing I was planning on shaking down from those Tromban hicks," the Dragon-Type added. "We'll be taking their cargo and ransoming their crew."

The Tyrantrum gave a thoughtful stroke of his beard, a toothy grin creeping over his maw as thoughts of the prestige his young crew would gain if their job turned out well. After all, expanding from one ship was the first step to being seriously considered to be in the higher ranks of Orleigh, and an expansion thanks to one's own skills as a pirate was all the more impressive.

"Who knows? If this all goes smoothly enough, maybe I'll hang my colors from their ship and turn us into the ‘Strongjaw Fleet!'"

The mention of loot and perhaps even a second ship to hang the Strongjaw Gang's sails from drew excited chatter among the crew. Even so, a few skeptics remained, including a Medicham who waved for attention and cleared her throat to speak.

"But how exactly does that happen, Captain?" the Fighting-Type demanded. "We can't get any of that stuff if those couriers spot us and give us the slip."

"Simple," Tarquin began. "We'll take our ship into the outskirts of the fog and keep Cuvier and his fliers on watch to tip us off when those couriers pass by-"

"Oh, you'll pay for that!"

"Bring it, snake!"

Tarquin turned his head as the sound of a commotion in the gathering broke out. The Tyrantrum looked up just in time to see the crowd scatter to avoid a Zangoose and Seviper locked in heated battle, the tangled pair coming to a rolling stop in front of the Dragon-Type. The two righted themselves from the deck, and prepared to lunge for each other only to feel the boat rock underfoot with the sound of a loud stomp and a bellowing roar.

"What is going on here?!"

The crew traded unimpressed looks with the feuding pair, prompting Scian's Flareon partner to throw a paw over his snout and his Banette teammate to grit his zippered mouth and freeze. The Zangoose and Seviper hastily separated from each other, and traded piercing glares before they launched into recriminations.

"She started it!" Scian exclaimed, pointing a claw at a visibly fuming Seviper.

"You clawed me while I was passing by, you miserable ferret!" the serpent hissed.

"Yeah, well maybe you shouldn't have done that tongue thing at me!"

"Sōna no?!" the Poison-Type seethed. "Then maybe I'll do my sword thing on you now-!"

"Knock it off, Akane!" Tarquin snapped.

The Seviper froze, blinking stunned before turning to her superior with an incredulous hiss. The Captain couldn't seriously be choosing the ferret's side over hers!

"E-Eh?!"

"You've been on my crew from the start," the Tyrantrum growled. "Try and act the part already!"

"But he-!"

"Nyeh!" Scian jeered, gleefully pulling his right eyelid down and sticking his tongue out at the Poison-Type. "Looks like you're in trouble-"

"And you…"

The Zangoose froze in place at the sound of the tyrannosaur's snarl. The Cat Ferret Pokémon looked up as a couple beads of sweat formed below his pelt, staring into a piercing glare from the Dragon-Type.

"Er… yeah?"

"On this ship, all our jobs require working as a team to pull off," Tarquin growled. "When things go south because some moron doesn't play ball, I get rid of him. Are we clear?"

Scian flattened out his ears and gave an aggravated hiss. The Normal-Type reflexively tensed his claws, only to feel a pair of presences tug on them from behind. Much to Scian's surprise, Kai and Cerny had darted up, the two visibly nervous as they tried to smooth things over.

"Scian gets it, and I'm sure this won't happen again. Isn't that right…?"

Scian gave an unamused frown at his Flareon companion, knowing full well that the Fire-Type had put him on the spot. Cerny for his part seemed to be confused, as he gave a quizzical tilt of his head at Kai's claim.

"Eh? Since when did he ever get along with a Sev- Ow!"

The Banette yelped and yanked his hand back after Kai bit down on it, shooting a glare that promptly silenced the Ghost-Type. Scian rolled his eyes, unamused by his teammates' insistence on always interfering with simple matters like these, and decided to take his response into his own paws.

"Fine. If the mission needs it, I'll play ball."

Scian's fur pricked up at the sound of a low growl. The Normal-Type looked up, and saw that Tarquin was leaning over him, giving a piercing glare with teeth bared directly in the Cat Ferret Pokémon's face.

"Er… I mean, ‘I'll play along?" the Zangoose hastily said. "Couldn't hurt, anyways."

The Tyrantrum pulled his maw back with an eye roll and an unimpressed huff. After giving a shake of his head to sufficiently clear his mind from the annoying distraction, Tarquin turned his attention to a Toucannon perched on some nearby rigging.

"Hrmph. Go on ahead and set up a lookout with your fliers, Cuvier," the Dragon-Type said to the Flying-Type. "Give us a shout when you see them, we'll be waiting in the fog."

The toucan gave a salute and took wing with a small entourage of fellow fliers, leaving Tarquin to turn back to his crew. At the bellowing orders of their Tyrantrum captain, the crew of the Tramontane Tyrant set about easing the ship into the foggy periphery of the nearby Mystery Dungeon, to lie patiently in wait for their mark. As the mist thickened around him, a smile began to creep over Tarquin's maw, the Dragon-Type relishing a chance to deal some revenge back to the accursed island that had made him stoop to this level in the first place.

"This'll be just like old times…"



The Siglo Swellow's course was plotted through a narrow, rocky pass. Beatrix and her Hitmontop first mate dutifully alternated between turns at the tiller and vigilantly watching from the bow, navigating carefully on the very border of the Mystery Dungeon's area of influence. The rest of the deck was near-empty, a majority of the crew having retreated down below for a brief break. Some passed the time playing cards, while others took the precious downtime off to scarf down some rations before they'd be called on for work once again. Even Calino managed to relax a bit, taking the downtime to give a crash course on Footprint Runes to a few curious onlookers in a red paperback journal he kept for transcribing notes.

Despite the relaxed atmosphere of the ship, something odd lingered in the air: an oppressive feeling which began to unnerve even the jubilant crew, given time. Their surroundings didn't help, either - a few Pokemon made note of a hazily visible cluster of what seemed to be Pokémon statues clustered on a sea rock about halfway through the passage, with reports following soon thereafter of a faint shriek, and a sighting by Pladur of a hazy reddish-black shape in the distance.

By the end of their voyage through the Mystery Dungeon zone, every crewmember seemed unnerved to some degree by the omens which seemed to follow them through the passage. Nevertheless, after what felt like ages, the ship finally pulled out of the craggy waterway and into the open waters. A collective sigh of relief could be felt as the dungeon's fog dispersed, giving way to azure-blue midday skies. The crew gathered back up on deck, reassured by the clear skies, and slowly the jolly mood began to wash over the ship's crew once more.

"Heh, that shortcut wasn't half bad," Pat chuckled. "Maybe we'll use it again sometime in the future!"

"I dunno, Pat… ever since we went down this route, I've had the feeling that we were being watched," Pladur muttered, chancing a nervous glance out at the horizon. "And then there was that red thing off in the distance."

"I mean, I'm aware that these aren't safe waters to navigate, but I didn't hear of any of the other crewmates seeing anything of the sort," Beatrix said. "Are you sure it wasn't just anxiety playing tricks on you, Pladur?"

The Fraxure anxiously shifted, looking back apprehensively at the fog. Calino, sensing that his new partner seemed rather on-edge, gave a shake of his head and tried to reassure the Dragon-Type.

"Well, regardless of if there was something out there, let's not sweat it," the Kecleon added, breathing a sigh of relief. "We're out of that sea route now, and it should be smooth sailing to Giotto from here-"

BLAM!

The crew of the Siglo Swellow flinched as a swarm of projectiles whistled over the top of the bow. A startled yelp went up as dead ahead, the form of an orange-sailed galleon broke out from the fog, a pair of cannons trained on the Siglo Swellow as Tarquin stood at its head.

"A-Ack! Pirates! Pirates!"

"Quick!" Beatrix buzzed. "Hard to starboard- !"

THUNK! THUNK!

Pladur and Pat looked over the railing where they saw three harpoons embedded in the hull of the Siglo Swellow. The sea escorts hastily cut through one, only to be driven off by cannonfire and a school of sea Pokémon in orange scarves. The crew of the Siglo Swellow was pulled closer and closer in as the cannons trained their targets on the deck itself, their blood running cold as Tarquin leapt the remaining gap and landed on deck with a snarl.

WHAM!

The Tyrantrum disgorged a searing beam along the deck, sending Pokémon diving out of the way in panic as a long, smoldering gouge was burnt into the timbers. As the crew of the Siglo Swellow tried to shake themselves from their stunned panic, a loud thunk resounded as a wide gangway dropped onto the deck, allowing a mob of pirates to cross over onto the smaller schooner. There was for example a sneering Seviper; a Zangoose flashing his claws, ready to pounce at any uncooperative sailors; and a Toucannon giving a withering glare at their trapped quarry. The crew's attention quickly centered back on Tarquin, as the tyrannosaur snarled, smoke still curling from his maw.

"Anyone tries any funny business, and the lot of you hicks will be getting swimming lessons right here and now!"

The cornered crew blanched. As paws were raised disarmingly, they all took a few slow steps back, putting some distance between themselves and the pirate captain. Seeing their victims so overtly shaken, some of Tarquin's lackies saw fit to have some fun with them: a Seviper slithered forth, hissing as she swiped at the air with her bladed tail, and a Raticate snarled menacingly, gnashing her teeth at the terrified sailors. Now that his boarding had went off without a hitch, Tarquin let his maw open just to flash his razor-sharp teeth, a delighted growl rumbling from his throat.

"I see you still haven't forgotten about me from my days back on your accursed island," the Tyrantrum sneered. "Good, it'll save me time having to remind you of what I'm capable of."

"What- What do you want from us?" Pat stammered.

"A little bird told me that the Merchantry contracted you to transport a book chock full of valuable secrets," Tarquin snorted. "I was already angling to clean you Tromban hicks out for everything you had, but I figured that we ought to start with the important stuff…"

The Tyrantrum craned his head down to Beatrix. The Bug-Type felt the former Company Commander's hot breath and saw embers flicker at the back of his throat as a toothy, predatory grin spread over Tarquin's face.

"You're their captain, aren't you?" the tyrannosaur demanded. "Where is that book?"

"What book?"

"Don't play games with me! The one I just talked about!" Tarquin roared. "I know you're carrying a journal those lizards gave to you!"

Beatrix looked side to side, and after a noticeable pause looking at the hole in the railing Tarquin and his lackeys had left, she shook her head and gave a begrudging sigh.

"Calino… I don't think we can get out of this one," the Illumise sighed. "Give them the book."

"E-Eh?!" the Kecleon protested. "But that's a-!"

"Give them your journal, Calino," she insisted. "The one they're looking for and you were just showing off earlier."

"Wait, you mean my journal?" Calino asked. "Are you sure?"

"That's right," Beatrix said, shaking her head. "I'm sure these ‘mons would like to get a chance to read for themselves-"

"Hurry it up!" Tarquin snapped.

"Alright…" Calino gulped. "Here goes nothing..."

The Kecleon rooted through his bag and passed a paperback journal in a ratty dust cover over to Beatrix. The Illumise held out the covered book in a tarsal, as the Tyrantrum reached with his stubby claws and snatched up the the book for himself. As the Dragon-Type gave a triumphant growl, his Seviper first mate licked the air and gave an askew look.

"Boss," the snake hissed. "Something smells fruity right now."

The Tyrantrum, too enamored with self-confidence from his easy victory, gave a dismissive shake of his claws.

"That's the smell of victory, Akane," he answered flippantly. "My favorite kind of smell."

"No really, something smells weird!" the Raticate insisted. "It smells like a meadow here at the middle of the sea!"

Tarquin paused and realized that now that they mentioned it, things did smell unusually sweet. As the pirates looked around, his first mate noticed that the Siglo Swellow’s crew seemed to have eased out of their initial petrified shock and were whispering to one another. Akane turned her head to Beatrix where she noticed that the Bug-Type was still holding her tarsus out, pointing in the direction of the hole in the railing behind the pirates.

"Hey!" the Seviper exclaimed. "That bug's signalin-!"

"Ack!" a Toucannon lackey interrupted. "There's a Company ship coming!"

"Huh?!"

Growling, Tarquin whirled around, eyes to the horizon. The gathered pirates followed his gaze in turn, the lot of them sharing their own shocked silence at the sight of another galleon flying the telltale Company sails.

"Wait, what-?!"

Back behind them, the crew of the Siglo Swellow watched as Tarquin and his underlings turned to the sea. Sensing the opportunity of a lifetime, Beatrix gave a loud buzz and motioned forward for the attack.

"Now!"



"That's the smugglers' ship up ahead," a Crobat said, pointing out the Siglo Swellow and the Tramontane Tyrant up ahead. "Looks like they're meeting their client."

Lyn spotted the hazy form of two ships, a larger one with orange sails and a smaller one with white sails. The Samurott decided to get a closer look, digging into a shoulder satchel for a scope that he raised to his eye. Through the looking glass, Lyn skimmed over the two seacraft, coming to the sight of a mob of orange-scarved Pokémon at the edge of the Siglo Swellow staring startledly back at him. There, towering above the rest was the heavy, lumbering gait of a Tyrantrum…

Wait a minute. A ship with orange sails, led by a Tyrantrum?

"That's no client!" Lyn exclaimed. "Those are the pirates who raided the compound in the first place!"

He continued watching intently, spyglass trained on the dumbfounded Tyrantrum and his cronies. Suddenly, Tarquin was shunted forward, flailing his arms in vain to keep his balance on the edge of the ship before being heaved - along with his subordinates - headlong into the water. The sea around the ship flew into a frenzy as a shoal of aquatic Pokemon struggled to haul their flailing leader and comrades back towards their own ship.

The smugglers' crew seemed aware that there was no time to celebrate, though. Even as their attackers flailed in the water, an Illumise among them began barking hurried orders to their own sea escorts, who began to scramble towards the back of the ship. The sea Pokémon alongside the schooner stirred up a mighty current, swiftly ferrying the Siglo Swellow away from its aggressors. Tarquin and his now-sopping boarding party were helped back aboard their own vessel just in time to catch the tail end of the opposing ship sail away from them.

The drenched Tyrantrum visibly seethed, his posture tightening and his stubby claws balled into fists. His Seviper subordinate raised her head to speak- perhaps to try to calm her irate superior- but fell down as Tarquin stamped his foot into the deck of his ship, sending a splinter of planks about the area. Lyn set down his spyglass with a condescending tsk, he'd seen quite enough of the Strongjaw Gang and their competence by now.

"Amateurs," he scoffed. The Water-Type turned around to give his crew fresh orders, only for his first mate to stammeringly interject.

"Um… Captain?” the Absol asked. “We should really turn the ship around right now."

"Are you daft?! They're making a break for it right now!" the Samurott bellowed. "Take us northwest, we'll cut them off-!"

BOOM!

A distant peal rang out as a hail of colorful projectiles zipped through the deck. While some managed to avoid the incoming shot like a Weavile who skillfully dodged a nutty pellet, other crewmembers weren't so lucky. Lyn watched his first mate get struck by a blue blur, dissolving into light and getting sucked into an Apricorn that came to a tumbling stop on the deck. Panicked shouts rang out on the ship as the same fate befell other crewmembers, prompting their compatriots to break ranks instinctively.

Lyn whirled back to the orange-sailed galleon and reflexively raised his spyglass. There, he saw the captain berating a hapless Shiinotic as startled, sinking expressions spread across the faces of his lackeys. By chance, the Samurott noticed upon a Zangoose picking up an item off the deck in the background, which on closer inspection was a soggy tome in a ratty dust jacket with a Merchantry logo emblazoned on it.

"Grr..."

Lyn shoved the spyglass back into his bag and grit his teeth as the sound of some crew members breaking out of their Apricorns sounded on the deck, before turning his attention to the still-intact blue Apricorn trapping his first mate. The otter brought his seamitar down on the blue nut, cleaving it in two under his blade as a white light shot out, coalescing into the form of a panting and wide-eyed Absol.

"Looks like our prize is right here!" the Samurott snarled. "Bring out the cannons and fire at will!"

The deck flew into a chaotic flurry as the crew assumed battle positions. While the cannons were wheeled out and fired at the pirate ship, the two galleons slowly began to close in on each other. As gap became close enough, Lyn spewed out a torrent of water while capable underlings similarly contributed beam attacks of their own.

The two vessels hastily shrouded themselves in arrays of Protect barriers, serving to imperfectly shield the ships, along with their crews. Under withering fire, Zorn and the sea escorts charged ahead to battle Tarquin's sea escorts. From his vantage point on the deck, Lyn could see the two sides rapidly stalemate after Zorn was separated from his underlings and got forced to fend off a ring of attackers.

At that, the Samurott drew a blade and hopped onto the railing, prompting a surprised yelp from his Absol first mate.

"Captain?!" the Dark-Typee exclaimed. "What are you doing?!"

"I'm going in with Administrator Zorn," Lyn answered. "Hold down the fort and keep suppressive fire on that galleon!"

The Water-Type dove into the sea and felt the waters close in overhead. Lyn looked ahead and saw that while his superior and his charges managed to push closer to Tarquin's ship, they continued to struggle against the enemy school of attackers, lobbing pressurized jets of water along with scattered electric currents. The otter dove down, and cut through the water underneath before diving up for the surface, ramming aside a Bruxish and a Wailmer along the way. The school, disturbed by suddenly having its lines pierced, broke off into disorganized groups that Zorn and the swimmers with him swiftly pursued, while others swam up to harry the pirates near the edge of the ship back.

Lyn swam forth, racing for the galleon as his eyes came upon a Zangoose, Banette, and Flareon overpowering and shoving a tottering lavender-scarved Poliwhirl overboard. There, still in the mongoose's claws, was his prize, the Taloons' Chronicle. Without missing a beat, the Samurott caught a wave, and launched himself into the air. The Water-Type sailed on through the air for the deck, coming to a stop in front of Cerny and Kai with a bellowing roar that made the pair flush pale before their ringleader hastily piped up.

"Wha-?! Don't just stand there, you two!" the Zangoose cried. "Get that Company rat!"

The Flareon lunged at the Samurott with fangs bared as his Banette partner ran over with his claws trailing a shadowy substance. Before either of the two could reach their target, Lyn reared up and brought his seamitars in a cross-shaped sweeping motion, catching the pair with agonized yelps.

Scian watched as Kai sailed headlong into a wall with a thud and slumped against the deck, while Cerny fell overboard with a splash. The Zangoose, acutely aware that it was now just him against the Commissioner, went wide-eyed and stammered out of fright.

"G-Gih! Get away from me, you sea ferret!"

The Zangoose turned and bolted for the entrance below deck, running as fast as his legs would allow. Halfway to the door, Scian heard a startled squawk and a loud crack as a burning beam zipped through the topmast of the nearby sails, prompting the Normal-Type to look up and see a crow's nest freefalling into his path.

He jumped out of the way as the structure came down and crashed into the doorway. The Cat Ferret Pokémon looked around frantically for another way to escape, only to see his Samurott assailant running at him with blades drawn.

"Y-You asked for it, ya overgrown weasel!" Scian cried. "Take this!"

The Zangoose tensed his free claw as whitish auras formed along its tips and leapt up. The Normal-Type swung his claw overhead and brought it down with the pull of gravity, aiming his desperate strike at Lyn's shoulder.

"Get out of my way!"

The Samurott parried Scian’s claw with a strike of his seamitar, making his foe wobble and lose his balance. His mind fully preoccupied with his desperate battle, Scian dropped the journal to free up his other claw to try and swipe again at Lyn. As the Normal-Type swung, his otter opponent balled up his paw around his blade's hilt and catch the Scian's chin with an uppercutting punch.

WHAM!

The Samurott's blow sent the Zangoose flying atop the ruined crow's nest, before tottering and tumbling over the other side. With his foe stunned and audibly groaning, Lyn turned his attention back to the journal as the din of surrounding battle hung in the air.

"Hrmph, they just don't know when to give up..."

With his last obstacle removed, the Samurott darted over to grab the journal, his paw falling on the cover just as he felt the ship rock with heavy footsteps. Before the otter could leave the pirate ship with his prize, he felt a crushing bite into his shoulder and hot breath on his hide.

Lyn bellowed out in pain and watched as a large, red, three-toed foot kicked away his prize. Reflexively, the Water-Type changed his grip on his other seamitar and jabbed backwards at the biting presence. The Commissioner felt the grip on his shoulder release with a pained roar and quickly rolled free, turning back to see that his assailant was none other than the glowering Tyrantrum captain of the ship.

"I'm the captain here, and I'll be taking that back!" Tarquin growled.

"Carrying illegal weapons on an unchartered ship and firing on a Company vessel," Lyn snarled. "Tell me, lizard. Just how much of a death wish do you have?"

"Hmph, I was with the Company for over a decade before they decided to throw that out the window," the Tyrantrum spat. "Your ship is nothing I can't handle!"

"We'll see about that!"

Green sparks began to trail off of Tarquin's right claw as the Tyrantrum brought a swipe down at the Samurott, only to hear a splutch and wrench his claw back as a sharp pain shot through it.

"Gyaaah!"

The Dragon-Type felt something wet dripping down his claw and reflexively pinned it against his body when he saw a seamitar coming for his face. Tarquin hastily jumped back, leaving his assailant to swing at air. The tyrannosaur then opened his maw and lunged at his foe.

Tarquin was stopped dead, however, as a biting cold gripped his lower body. With a cruel grin on his face, Lyn stared him down, targeting a beam from his mouth at the Tyrantrum's feet. Snarling, Tarquin struggled to free himself from the growing layer of frost on his legs, but it was no use; the icy weight grew heavier and heavier until finally he couldn't budge from where he stood.

"Stick around," the Samurott jeered. Lyn allowed himself to shoot a smug, victorious grin at Tarquin before turning on his heels and darted towards the tome, which laid open facedown on the deck a short distance away.

Tarquin struggled against the ice caked on his feet to no avail. Realizing that his foe was about to steal his prize, the Tyrantrum fished around his bags for items, anything to help tip the scales.

The Dragon-Type felt his claws run over a round, scaled object, which made his eyes light up upon realizing that it was none other than a Blast Seed. Reflexively, Tarquin grabbed the seed and wrenched it out, scattering the bag's contents as he threw an orange seed into his mouth…

And bit down.

Fwooooosh!

Tarquin winced as he felt fire singe his legs, and pulled his feet free of now thinned and fragile ice. The dinosaur darted forward, flinging water and ice fragments from his lower body as he ran forward with a bellowing roar.

As Lyn picked up the book, he heard the roar and loud footsteps behind him and saw Tarquin once again charging for him with his maw wide open. The Samurott attempted to slash the incoming Tyrantrum, but with a timely stop from the Dragon-Type and a step backwards, Lyn was left slashing at empty air, prompting Tarquin to hastily lunge at the book Lyn was holding in his paw.

The two wrenched the tome back and forth, Tarquin's maw occupied as he clamped down while Lyn's grasp with his paw undercut his balance to slash back at his foe. Tarquin's underlings hastily gathered around, each waiting uneasily for the other to make the first strike against the much stronger Samurott, only for his first mate to slither through with her sword-tail honed for a jab.

"Captain, hang in the- Argh!"

Akane felt a crushing blow at the back of her head and hit the deck stunned. As the Seviper attempted to regain her bearings, she saw a white, furry creature running off ahead for the squabbling captains.

"Butt out, péist!" Scian hissed. "I've got this!"

The Normal-Type ran towards the Samurott, preparing a swipe of his claws at Lyn's paw. Suddenly, the otter forced Tarquin off balance, yanking the book and tugging the Dragon-Type directly into Scian's path. The Zangoose hastily attempted to compensate, dragging his claws to the side and away from his captain…

Thwip

Directly over the spine of the book. The two captains fell away from each other as the damaged binding gave way under their tugs, scattering the tome's pages just as a sea wind picked up and carried them off the deck.

"AAGH!"

Both Lyn and Tarquin stared for a moment of stunned silence, jaws agape, as they watched the many pages of the journal float away on the sea breeze. Lyn grabbed out at the air, trying in vain to snatch a stray page as it fluttered by. The two began to quiver furiously almost in unison, words alone not enough to express one's rage to the other or the white furball that had caused this disaster.

"Grr! You-!"

Scowling, Lyn drew a seamitar and reared up to strike, only for Tarquin's tail to catch him first, slamming into the side of his gut with enough force to lift him off the ground and clear off of the ship. The seamitar flew out of his grasp, and he dropped unceremoniously into the waters below with a bellowing shout. Tarquin glanced around, realizing Lyn had been the last real threat standing in their way, and the path was now clear for them to escape without a hitch. He turned to his crew to give the order.

"Pull the wounded aboard and whip up a current!" Tarquin ordered. "We're getting out of here!"

Lyn managed to recover soon after hitting the water, the cold seawater shaking him from his punch-drunk stupor. He cut through the water, dodging and weaving around pot-shots taken by Tarquin's nearby sea escorts. With one last dive, he managed to snatch his seamitar and stow it into its sheath, after which he turned tail and darted back towards his own ship. His pride as bruised as his underbelly, he breached the water and landed on the deck of his ship, looking perhaps angrier than he had at any other time that day.

"After them!" Lyn bellowed. "I want that pirate hulk at the bottom of the sea even if we have to chase them into Garanza to do it-!"

"Hold it right there, Commissioner!"

The Samurott turned his head at the sound of Zorn's admonishment, just in time to see the Gyarados surface. The sea serpent slithered over, his face etched with an unamused frown all the while.

"Administrator Zorn, they're slipping away from us right now!" the Samurott seethed.

"I'm aware of that, Commissioner Lyn," Zorn answered. "But it doesn't matter, your mission is complete."

"It would be more complete if that Tarquin was in my brig in chains right now!" the mustelid spat.

"And risk getting your ship further damaged?" Zorn demanded. "Need I remind you that Imperial patrols regularly come into these waters? Do you think they'd pass on the chance to pounce on one of our ships if it was a tattered wreck?"

Lyn grumbled wordlessly. Once again, loath as he was to admit it, the Administrator had a point. The last thing he needed today was a skirmish with the Imps, no matter how badly he wanted that pirate in his brig. Defeated, he turned to his First Mate and gave the final order of the mission.

"... Turn around and set sail for Vollezee," Lyn said, shaking his head. "We've accomplished what we need to here."

"Aye, captain," the Absol responded.

The first mate passed the order along to the crew, and slowly the sails were lowered and the ship turned around with the current. As the Argent Aviso sailed off, Lyn shot one last glare at Tarquin's ship as it slipped over the horizon before giving a dissatisfied huff. The Board did say that destroying the journal was an acceptable outcome, so that was the end of that…

So why was there a nagging feeling that this matter hadn't been settled?



"You blithering idiot! What on earth made you think it was a good idea to interfere like that?!"

Tarquin's bellowing shout rang out on a crowded deck, the dinosaur stomping against the timbers underfoot. The captain shot a piercing, hateful glare at the object of his fury directly in front of his snout: a visibly defensive Zangoose looking around uneasily at a now glaring sea of orange-scarved pirates ringing him.

"Hey, excuse me for trying to help!" Scian snapped back. The Tyrantrum spluttered angrily and dug his toeclaws into the deck. This impudent cat had wrecked his journal, and now had the gall to backtalk him after everything that had happened?!

"Grr…"

As the Dragon-Type glowered and growled, a Flareon and a Banette at the front of the crowd hastily rushed up to try to calm their superior down and prevent him from attacking their big-mouthed companion.

"H-Hey, it's not all bad Captain!" Kai interjected, his Banette companion swiftly chiming in with a reassurance of his own.

"Yeah, thanks to Scian, you were able to punt that square-neck off so we could get away!"

Although still visibly seething, the Flareon and Banette's words seemed to have their desired effect. The huffing tyrannosaur began to calm down and reflect on how perhaps there truly was a silver lining to his predicament… only for the white furball to abruptly pipe up.

"And it's not like I came away totally empty-clawed!" Scian exclaimed, before presenting a pawful of loose pages in his right claw. "Chill out, Whitebeard."

GRAAAAAAAAAWR!

Tarquin roared and slammed the deck, before charging at the wide-eyed and petrified Zangoose. Before the Cat Ferret Pokémon could brace himself, he felt a heavy kick in his stomach and tumbled against the deck. Scian yowled in pain as a heavy foot grounded him against the timbers. The Normal-Type looked up, still panting for breath as a Bibarel gathered up his dropped pages. Tarquin pulled his foot back, glaring at Scian's Flareon and Banette companions as they gulped and traded visibly apprehensive looks with each other.

"Grab these three idiots and bring them to the railing!" the Tyrantrum snarled. "I want to see the lot of them walk the plank!"

At the Dragon-Type's words, the deck flew into a frenzy as Scian, Kai, and Cerny were seized and drug along yelping and struggling towards a railing. There, a Passimian lowered a plank and pinned it under a stack of crates as the three pirates were forced out onto it to a chorus of jeers, Akane taking a particular relish in the trio's plight with a taunting wave of her tail and flick of her tongue.

"Have a nice fall, ferret!" the serpent jeered.

The three stumbled onto the plank, the lot of them struggling to keep their balance on the thin and sagging strip of wood. The Flareon in particular grew alarmed at the sight of the churning waves below, shooting a desperate look back at his Zangoose teammate.

"S-Scian!" the Fire-Type pleaded. "Do something!"

Scian looked back frantically at the glaring Tyrantrum back on the galleon's deck, and at the churning waves underneath. The Zangoose fought to keep his footing, the thought of drowning at sea motivating him to try his claw at sweet-talking Tarquin into calming down.

"Er… h-hey! Aren't you being a bit hasty here?" Scian insisted. "Any captain worth their salt wouldn't throw us out after one mistake-"

"Shut your face and get off my ship, you useless cat!"

THWACK!

"GYAH!"

With one swipe of his tail, Tarquin sent the three of them sailing off of the ship. The pirates pinwheeled in a high arc through the air, their shouts and screams fading with distance. The Tyrantrum watched as they plunked into the water one by one with the sound of faintly audible splashes, before turning to his crew to bark out more orders.

"Serves them right," he growled. "Now let's get moving, already!"

The Tramontane Tyrant changed course with a lurch and sailed along with the current, the crew going back to work tending to the damage Lyn and his cronies had left on their ship and crew. Tarquin took out his scope to catch a quick peek back in the direction where he had knocked his victims into the water, and frowned as he saw Scian and Cerny swimming in the water, with Kai stubbornly latched onto the Banette's head. One after the other, the three stumbled onto the sea rocks, the wind changing course just enough for the Tyrantrum to faintly hear them cough up sea water and launch into recriminations against each other.

"Nice going Scian," Kai spat.

"What? This wasn't my fault!" The Zangoose insisted, to an exasperated sigh from his Banette teammate.

"We're gonna be stuck on these rocks awhile, aren't we?"

The Tyrantrum put his scope away and scowled. He had hoped he could have made examples of the three, but with them stranded on rocks in the middle of the sea without food or water, what were the odds they'd make it back to shore anyways?

Tarquin gave a satisfied harrumph before turning to the Bibarel from earlier to take the pages Scian had recovered in his claws. It wasn't an ideal outcome, but the journal was valuable, so even a few scraps of the Footprint Rune text might be worth something!

"Hrmph, it wasn't as good of a haul as I'd hoped," the Dragon-Type grunted. "But at least we got one over those Tromban hicks- Huh?!"

The Tyrantrum raised the pages back up to his snout in a start. Barely any of these runes looked remotely footprint-like like he'd overheard. This wasn't some collection of secrets and maps to treasure, this was a glorified vocabulary primer written in some clerk's Torchic scratch!

"Captain, what's wrong?" Akane asked, the Seviper's tongue flicking anxiously at the captain's sudden darkening of his demeanor.

"This is all a bunch of useless clutter that some pencil-pusher wrote!" the Tyrantrum exclaimed, angrily crumpling up the pages. "Then... that means that the real journal's with-!"



Underneath a bright blue sky, the Siglo Swellow sailed peacefully off on its course towards Giotto, far ahead of the Argent Aviso, the Tramontane Tyrant, and the other trials they had left behind. On the deck, Calino triumphantly flashed the Taloons' Chronicle before a gathered crowd of crewmates on the deck and in the surrounding waters, trading cheers and congratulations over their victory snatched from the jaws of defeat.

"Whew, I haven't had to test my acting skills like that since the last time I had to ask Bruna for a raise!" the Kecleon chortled. "Looks like I've still got it!"

"I'll say!" Pat cheered. "Good job there, Calino!"

"Yeah, you really pulled through for us there!" Philips added.

"Well, as flattered as I am, I'd have to give some credit to your captain," Calino said, pawing some dust off of his scales. "If it wasn't for that idea, who knows what those thugs would be doing to us right now?"

Beatrix gave a small chuckle at the Kecleon's flattery After a few moments to suck in her subordinates' cheers, the firefly gave a dismissive wave of her tarsal to try and downplay the matter.

"Oh really now, Calino, we just got lucky this time," the Illumise corrected. "That said, I think that if we stay careful, we should be in the clear here."

The Illumise flitted up above her crew and gave a buzz to quiet down her subordinates. It had been a great reversal of their fortune, yes, but there was still work to be done for their mission.

"But we can sweat the details over pay and shore leave," she buzzed, giving a playful smirk. "Onto Giotto!"

The jovial atmosphere lingered as the Siglo Swellow's crew sailed towards the horizon. They had been graced with another lucky break, one which would hopefully last this time. There was still a tight schedule to make, but when they reached port it would afford them some much-appreciated and long-overdue rest and relaxation in Giotto.



Much to the crew's relief, the rest of the journey went by without incident, the only interruptions to the sea waves being an occasional ship, flotilla of swimming Pokémon, or school of ferals. A couple hours after midnight, the first lights on the horizon were spotted, which when followed led the Siglo Swellow past a bay plastered with fortifications and into the harbor of Tidemill City.

Although its denizens weren't as unseemly, just like Andaku in Mossaisle Town, Tidemill City's open-port provided a place for any Pokémon to come and trade as they pleased regardless of their colors or affiliation, if at the expense of freedom of movement beyond the district. Fortunately for the crew, their receiving port was a far friendlier place than the pirate-infested hive that they set off from. There was a seaside market, and shipyards that hummed with activity despite the early hours. There were even a few of Tidemill's famous theaters that catered to the sailors that came and went through the district.

The ward with its squarish courtyard buildings and long, thin islands divided by canals was a colorful microcosm of the greater city. The fineries and new monuments that had been erected in Tidemill's expansion since the Empire made it its new capital just barely peeking over walls staffed with fierce guards and even more odious red tape to penetrate. Fortunately for the crew, the Merchantry, in keeping with its freeporter sensibilities, maintained its Tidemill offices directly in the harbor, which Beatrix, Pladur, Pat, and Calino were summarily summoned to by a messenger in Merchantry colors.

After a short walk through the canal-ridden streets, the four entered a blocky stone building where there inside was an elderly Kecleon waiting for them. The chameleon, donning a red silk scarf with his organization's sigil in gold thread, led the group up four flights of stairs to a windowed hallway overlooking the harbor. The party eventually reached a grand office at the end with ornately-carved push doors which their Kecleon guide led them in to. As the doors shut behind them, the Pokémon of the Siglo Swellow cast furtive glances out the window.

"You know, I was kinda expecting that we'd be meeting someplace a bit more cloak and dagger," Beatrix murmured.

"Hardly," the aged Kecleon answered. "In a place like Tidemill City, the best places for someone like me to conduct their business are often hiding in plain sight.".

"What is this place anyways?" Pat asked.

"It's a Regional Office," Calino explained. "Pokémon in our organization like Branch Chief Walpole here have used it through the years to conduct business."

"Well, I think that this meeting certainly falls into that category," the elder Kecleon added. "I'd been getting a lot of anxious letters from my counterparts in the other branches, and having this around should be able to quiet them down a bit."

Walpole flipped the ledger open to no page in particular, glancing at a few different images in the book as he leafed through them. With a satisfied nod, he shut the mighty tome and slipped it into a nearby drawer.

"Eh?" Pladur wondered. "What do you mean?"

"This journal contains trade secrets that could be devastating to the Merchantry if a strong rival discovered them," Walpole explained. "Hence why we've had to move it around from time to time to keep it in safe hands."

"Huh? But just what does this journal have that it could be so damaging?" Pat pressed.

"Our predecessors found that there were a few things that simply couldn't be found without breaching the Veil around the Cradle and going into the Wastes," Calino explained. "Why, if it weren't for what's in that journal, our outfit probably wouldn't have enough raw materials to make Poké-"

"Yes, yes, well done Calino, well done Calino!" Walpole interrupted with an exasperated sigh. "However, this isn't the right time to be discussing our little free-trade experiment here, and I believe you had something that was meant to accompany the Taloons' Chronicle…"

Calino blanched and started to flush pale. Yes, he'd helped the Chronicle get to Tidemill safely, but it was at the expense of his notes that kept the thing readable in the first place!

The Kecleon gulped and steeled himself. Walpole would surely understand, wouldn't he?

"Erm… about that, I was thinking… maybe there didn't need to be a transcription for the Chronicle?" Calino proposed. "After all, we've survived all this time without it!"

Walpole's extremities started to flush red as a scowl came over the chameleon's face, his eyes hardening into a piercing glare at Calino.

"Calino, we've survived all this time without it thanks to a bunch of patchwork notes various readers put together," the Branch Chief snapped. "That was the entire point why we commissioned you two years ago to put this transcription together! Where, is it?"

"Uh… it might be in a shredded pulp with some pirates right now?" Calino sheepishly replied. "B-But that's fine, right? All part of the cost of adventure, and we were able to get the real prize delivered safely!"

"Calino, that cost of adventure destroyed two years of work that this organization has been counting on!" the senior Kecleon shouted. "How on earth did you even lose it to pirates in the first place? You did your transcriptions inside a diary for crying out loud!"

"Uh… I used it as a distraction during a raid?" Calino answered, forcing an uneasy smile onto his mouth. His superior was having none of Calino's comments, as all of Walpole´s scales now flourished a red color.

"Now hold on a minute here," Beatrix protested. "I was the one who suggested that Calino use his journal as bait!"

Walpole's scales darkened to a seething scarlet as he scowled at the Bug-Type, before turning a furious glare at Calino that practically bored through the hapless archivist.

"And you listened to her?" Walpole demanded.

"Er... well you see-" Calino stammered, only to be cut off by the sound of a fist pounding against his desk.

"Well if you like listening to them so much," Walpole snapped. "Maybe you should ask your new friends for a ride to your new job."

"Wait, what?!" Calino exclaimed.

"We've been looking for someone to set up a new Merchantry outpost on Tromba ever since their revolt happened," the Branch Chief said. "Since you seem to have an ear for Tromban sensibilities I'm sure you're perfect for the job."

Calino blinked as his scales turned gray with shock and stared at Walpole with open mouth. He was getting reassigned all the way to Tromba?!

"But- but-"

"Er… so are we still getting paid?" Pladur asked. "I mean, our contract did just say to bring the journal here…"

Walpole fumed and rooted through a drawer before digging out a pair of large pouches. The chameleon tossed them onto the table with an unceremonious thud before glaring at Beatrix and her subordinates.

"Just take it and get out," the Kecleon huffed.

The Siglo Swellow's crew, collectively feeling the sense of gloom radiating from Calino, snatched their pay from the Branch Chief's desk and made themselves scarce posthaste. Calino cast a hopeful, pleading glance at his superior, hoping for some change of heart, but all he found on the other Kecleon's ruddy-red face was the same displeased scowl he'd been wearing the entire time. Drooping with a disheartened sigh, Calino moped as he dragged himself out of the office, catching sight of his scales turning a melancholy blue as he reached out to open the door.

He stepped out into a long hallway, lined with windows giving a great view of Tidemill City's canal-lined harbor outside. Although on a good day it would be a sight for sore eyes, Calino felt no desire to tear his gaze away from the floor. A maelstrom of thought stormed in his mind as he tried to make sense of the events of the day, his world being so harshly pulled out from under his feet. Before he could fully process his despair, though, a chirping voice snapped him out of his thoughts.

"Hey, Calino! Aren't you coming?"

"Wha-?" For a moment, Calino had forgotten there was anyone else around. Straightening his defeated posture, if only slightly, he glanced up towards the source of the voice.

Despite their hasty egress from Walpole's office, it seemed the Siglo Swellow's crew had waited around for him in the end. Pat and Pladur headed towards the chameleon, extending a helping wing and claw towards Calino.

"You're going to be stuck on our island for a while anyways, right?" Pat asked "We'll give you a lift over."

"And look on the bright side!" Pladur offered. "The weather's balmy, the beach is not too crowded, and Bluewhorl Town's a friendly place."

The sight of the supportive trio managed to warm Calino's dour mood, his deep blue scales slowly fading back to their neutral green color. A weak smile shining through on his face, he chuckled and accepted Pladur's generous offer.

"Heh… well, I don't think I can say no to that…" Calino replied.

"Then come on!" Beatrix cried. "We'll hash out the details on the way back to the ship!"

Calino joined Pladur and his shipmates, the four slipping into a new equilibrium of playful chatter about Tromba and how Bluewhorl would soon feel like home away from home. As implausible as it would have sounded to him just yesterday, Calino could tell that in spite of the dead-end position, he would get along with Pokémon like these just fine.



Author's Notes:

- Strandmeer Arena - Dutch: "Lagoon Arena"
- De Kust - Dutch: "The Coast", used here as a place name.
- Tranquilo - Spanish: "Relax" (interjection)
- (¡¿)Qué estás haciendo?! - Spanish: "What are you doing?!"
- Sōna no?! (そうなの?!) - Japanese: "Is that so?!" (Hepburn Romanization)
 
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Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
Spoil-tagging for extremely future chapters. ;P

Spiteful Murkrow said:
The Beedrill's answer was met by an enthusiastic squeal, the wizened old shrimp waving her claws happily before peering back up to her first mate.

"I've waited so long for this day!" Nagant burbled. "Oh, what's the first thing to do to break it in? Maybe I'll take her around the island! Or to Haipheh! Or-"
Oh my god, seeing Nagant actually happy about something--and not just happy, giddy--is not something I ever expected to see. xD (And hey, she kinda needed this after what she's been through recently.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Because, as we agreed in our partnership, I have need of your aid, Administrator Darzin," the Clawitzer retorted, before moving her large claw about the surrounding ship.
Oh snap. I can't remember if it already got revealed before that they're working together. Man, there's been treachery and double agents around every corner so far, but Company-Empire collusion is the one thing that wouldn't have seemed possible. Makes me wonder if one of them is planning to eventually betray the other or if they actually have some kind of deal that could benefit both of them (but then who'd get to keep the Protector...?)

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Well, we have other matters to tend to," the shrimp insisted, barely stifling a snicker through her mandibles. "But good luck with the deck, sailor!"

Darzin glared and bared his fangs, only for a sharp jab at his stomach to prompt him to look down at the Avalugg, leaving him to begrudgingly grab a bucket and mop as he slipped out of view while Nagant and her first mate reached the gangplank.
Lmao, and now he's stuck doing gruntwork on an Empire ship of all places. Amazing.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
Pleo, Nida, Crom, and Dimitri tilted their heads and squinted as they noticed movement towards the back of the room, where a strange green Pokémon hopped forward balanced on his tail. The creature bore a single eye, with a red, hexagonal marking on his belly, Team Traveller's eyes widening as they realized that this must've been none other than the Pokémon Opdahl encountered. The serpent narrowed his eye, peering up sternly at the young Lugia in front of him.
Oh hey! I was wondering when we'd run into the other Zygarde core! (iirc, the other Zygarde core was already shown held captive, right?)

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Wait! But that's great!" the Lugia cried. "If you're a Protector, then you can help me with-"

"No."
Damn, talk about harsh. So much for getting help from the actual Legendary here. :V

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"What? How could we have done anything wrong there?" Dimitri demanded. "We were being chased by a city of guards, a Company Commissioner, and a pirate crew!"

"You seem to be forgetting the part where you disgraced Admiral Coil on your way out and threw the city into turmoil," Kline huffed.
Excuse me is that supposed to be a bad thing? That guy definitely had it coming, especially from the perspective of the Empire.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"I have nothing else to say. Just try not to cause any more problems during the rest of your journey," Kline finished. "Good luck with your travels home."
Well that was completely unhelpful. :V Call them there for mysterious reasons only to give a generic warning that doesn't tell them anything they didn't already know.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"It's 'Ellsberg'," the Mothim growled. "Not 'Elmer', not 'fuzz brain', or whatever inane name is on the tip of your tongue. Ellsberg. Got it?"
Hell yeah, I am all here for Ellsberg finally standing up to Ketu. xD (Hit him with an SE Bug Buzz!) And hey, Ketu turns out to actually kind of respect him for it! \o/

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Before we ran into Ketu, we encountered him outside our guild as a member of an inexperienced-looking Rescue Team called 'Team Traveller'," Aldrich explained. "We noticed he was a strange Pokémon from the looks, but there was a Marked with him who seemed perfectly calm, so we figured it was probably just some sort of subspecies from elsewhere in the Cradle."
Huh! It hadn't occurred to me that Ander being... mostly kind of used to Pleo by now (at least moreso than he'd be around most legends) would be a point in their favor for Pleo not being read as a Protector.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"He wouldn't. No Protector on record that's ever awakened has grown as large as him yet, and I'm sure if we got a chance to look closer, we'd probably notice more things wrong with that 'Protector' prancing around," Sorge answered. "If anything, he and his buddies probably tried to cobble together that disguise from a bunch of drawings and the like and fill in the rest with other Pokémon they saw, hence the eyes."
Ahh, okay, a Ditto. Up until this point, I think I'd been imagining literally a painted/bedazzled Deerling. So a Ditto making a poor attempt at transforming would at least look a little less cheesy than that. xD

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Uhm… yeah, about that surrender… er…" the Aggron began. "I've put some thought into it and I think the only logical thing to do is-"
--RUN LIKE HELL

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"We just spent over a day cleaning out the harbor from last time!" the Simisear snapped. "Don't dump that here! Get some bellows instead for when they pass the walls!"
I like that for how OP as seafire is, dumping it in your own harbor has some pretty nasty side effects to where you wouldn't just want to use it every single time there's a kerfluffle.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
The Mistral Marauder moved along, clearing the walls and hitting the deepening blue of the open sea. The crew looked back, seeing smoke trailing up from the harbor gate as Pokémon all about the ship flopped to the deck breathing sighs of relief, leaving Hess to fish a round silvery, marbled stone from under his scarf and give it a relieved rub between his claws before turning to Kichiro and Rodion.
Aaaaand once again Hess's crew has bungled their way into narrowly eluding capture. :P

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"… Who is this joker supposed to be?" she demanded.

Nagant glared back, before shooting a pressurized pulse of water at the Combusken's stomach, sending her pitching back with a pained squawk. Cardino and his companions jumped back as the wet hen spluttered and gagged on the ground, Eric and Hanuna backpedaling with a blanch and audibly nervous stuttering.
Every time someone says something like this, I guarantee they're saying it to the one mon in the viscinity who is ready and willing to kick their ass. :p

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"You're coming too, Detective," Nagant barked, prompting Cardino to perk his ears up and stare back in shock.

"C-Come again?!" he cried. "You must be joking, pal! I'm a detective, not a sailor! The only boats I've ever set foot on just took me across the harbor!"
Lmaooo, I was not expecting Cardino to get dragged into the next arc like this. Nagant much be pretty desperate if she's grabbing mons who've never even set sail.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"It's just what Kline said about how we're making things worse… I already felt awful about Rasp and Bech… but now I can't even escape without messing something up?" he murmured. "I didn't know that just running away would make the Company stronger! If that's already going on, then what's going to happen if I get home? Is something terrible going to happen there too?"
Man, this is such an "Aang running from the Fire Nation" mood. Can't go anywhere or get helped by anyone without inviting the fury of the forces chasing you. It's not his fault! ;-;

Spiteful Murkrow said:
Crom shuffled over, stretching his arms and wings with a yawn before he laid down on the straw. Crom arced his body, curling up beside his father as he shifted his wings to find a comfortable resting experience until he settled down, letting the sound of distant chatter and waves carry on as his eyelids drooped and the Dragon-Types drifted off into slumber.
D'aww, this was a cute moment. Good to see Crom get some quality time with dad.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
The four at once jumped up with a start at the sound of an unknown voice, whirling around as they realized it was coming from the front door to the villa. There, the lot saw the form of a Weavile leaning against the wall, picking at his claws in seeming disinterest of the four's visible alarm.
Oh my god, as if their cavorting wasn't already just asking to get eavesdropped on, of course it had to be him.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
The Weavile felt his claws brush up against something soft and light, prompting him to fish out a brilliant red-and white feather with a green bottom. The Dark-Type paused, giving a raise of his brow as he inspected the feather closely, only to notice that there were uneven patches of white showing all along the feather's quill much like the edge of a stain on a cloth, prompting him to shoot a mocking gaze at David and his companions.
Bwaha, so one of their possible scams would have involved Ho-oh. Wonder what sort of Pokemon they'd have based that transformation on.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Just think of all those poor, innocent Pokémon that you swindled!" Zelle exclaimed as she moved a feeler to her forehead with a swooning motion.
This is positively dripping with BS, lmao.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Tch, do you honestly think that we don't have a way of helping him escape?" Ketu scoffed. "Just do as you're instructed and everything will work out fine… unless you prefer the alternative…"

"No! No! That's fine! I just need to hang tight and you'll spring me!" David insisted. "I can deal with that!"
There is absolutely no way that everything will work out fine for him. :p

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"Just stay here awhile and put a smile on your old dyado's face," he replied. "It's taking a while, but everything's finally starting to work out the way that we need it to."
Ah heck, now we've got Inler as a family man. Welp. He hasn't really been one of the antagonists at the forefront--mostly just running things in the background. Though I do wonder if any of these Company higher-ups will ever have to get their claws dirty themselves...

Spiteful Murkrow said:
Nida started to follow along after him, when she looked down and widened her eyes out of excitement after poison dribbling down her right forepaw, the one part of her attempts to learn Poison Jab that had eluded her again and again the day before.
Nice! Nida was really needing a new move to rely on other than Poison Sting. Between that and Elty learning Will-O-Wisp, they're leveling up!

Spiteful Murkrow said:
The Nidoran hurried off in Elty's direction, followed by Crom, Pleo, and Dimitri as the four took a more circuitous path away from the burning lava. All the while, a lingering unease clung about them, each of the lot wondering whether Xerneas really did have some manner of unpleasant surprise for them…
Hoo boy. Time for another showdown with Ketu. Here's hoping those new moves help give them an edge...

'Til next time!
 

Shadow of Antioch

Viaggiatore
Location
Messina, Italy
Pronouns
he/his
Partners
  1. charmeleon
Chapter 34 Review:

"The Lugia the Board sent Lyn after!" Ellsberg buzzed. "I found one of his feathers in the middle of the square by the guild earlier!"

Suddenly, Pleo’s voice blared from outside the window: “Th-the wind could have just carried it here from Kenobi!” >.<

The immobilized dragon was able to do little more than twitch the unfrozen tip of his tail and digits of his right claw. Zorn pulled his head back and spat up a few scales as the ice block began to give some stifled, angry growls of protest in the background.

Ouch, poor Darzin ;(. Losing scales is customary for him at this point.

Adrian: “From one inept Dragonite to the another, I’m rooting for you, Darzin!”

"could he get any fatter?"

Elty’s shout came next from outside the window: “I keep telling you, it’s just unkempt fu—oh, you weren’t talking about me? Heheh… heh…”

Also, Dragonite aren’t fat! They’re… soft! :sevicry:

depicting a Nidoran, a Growlithe, a Nidorina, and a Hydreigon.

Eh? One of these things is not like the oth—oooh, HER! Fair enough. I’m really curious to see where she and Daraen decide to settle. They were lovely characters.

Also, wait—a Nidorina? Is that supposed to be Marley? Why? And why isn’t Pleo’s wanted poster in there?

"W-What?! But how can that be?!" he cried. "The Protector here on Mengir got shipped off-island before the Petrification of Conntow!

OOOOH! Lore! Does that mean that the Company’s gathering up the various Protectors to be raised and trained up as weapons of mass destruction against the Empire? If so, it means we’ll have epic battles with weaponised legendaries later down the line! That’s SO cool!

"I'll brief you on the details in a bit," Zorn added. "But my understanding is that it should look something akin to a long-necked Wingull."

Pleo, from outside the window: “Hey! I’m much prettier than those ugly birds!”
Nida: “Shut UP, Pleo! Elty! It’s a miracle no one inside seems to have heard you two!” >.>

"The gods tread among us on this island," the Gyarados replied. At once, the Rock-Type hopped back with a start. Zorn didn't honestly mean…?

I’d make the second sentence its own paragraph, as the subject of the action changes.

"Well now, that strategy's been working out rather well for Commissioner Lyn, hasn't it?" the Administrator scoffed. "Chase around the Protector while he's healthy and capable, only for him to slip from your grasp again. No, I think that it's nigh time for a change of strategy."

Oooh, exciting! Also shows a good degree of tactical intelligence from at least SOME of the Company’s higher ranks, hehehe.

"This island's ferals, particularly the ones in our Mystery Dungeon, have been unsettled ever since the local Protector's egg was transported all those years ago," the Water-Type said. "As you may already know, they have a habit of ambushing villagers travelling alone in the island's interior at night."

Ouch. Sounds like a nasty insurgency on their hands.

"That's right, and I think it's something we can use," Zorn remarked. "I suggest that we let Commander Briggs have a few of his subordinates lead these 'pirates' of yours into one of those less… accommodating stable zones through a bait mission."

Nida’s muffled voice through the window: “Gasp! That’s such a good strategy! They were predicting what we’d have done perf—ah, damn it, now I’m doing it too…” ‘^_^

"All I ask in return is that we follow my plan here."

I don’t think he was asking, Ellsberg…

"Oh, hey, Salvini," the Ariados said. "Captain Hertsog wanted you to come too, huh?"

Oh, NO. You did not xD. Now I can’t help but picture a Grovyle with a Matteo Salvini head speaking out against immigrants in Italian!

Briggs hissed. "I'm your superior in that department, and I say that fox isn't well-suited to this mission!"

Is Leafeon considered a fox? I thought the Eeveelution line were a canine/feline hybrid.

Phyllis bristled and growled at Briggs' accusatory tone, only for Salvini to up beside her and pat at her shoulder.

"Don't let it get to you," she whispered. "After all, you're still on the case right?"

Salvini: “Questi dannati immigrati provano ad invadere la nostra isola, ma noi li rispediremo a—ah, s-sorry. Force of habit. I meant… you’re great at your job! Together we’ll catch these enemies of the Company together. By the way, does anyone have any idea what they look like? I myself have zero clue.”

"Well, leadership has had a bit of a pirate problem lately," Briggs answered as he moved a claw through some papers at his end of the table. "Do any of these Pokémon seem familiar?"

“Hey!” Pleo shouted in a muffled voice from outside the window. “Only Elty is a pirate! The other three of us would never do something so mean to—OW!”

Nida: “HUSH! What are we still doing outside their headquarters, anyway?”

But that was no matter, the opportunity was here, and with his time as an Administrator drawing to a close, one could be forgiven for resorting to desperate measures.

Fair enough. It’s not as if he has anything to lose. Maybe he’s a good candidate for turning over to the good guys’ side later!

Darzin: “And face THAT Nidorina again? No thanks.” O_O’

"Crom! Ojo!”

Crom: “Dad! No Spanish, remember?”

Vigoroth: _Squints._ “You two seem to speak an awful lot of Tromban…”

The sloth was beelining straight for the form of a misshapen Nidorina slouched over, the helpless form of his now undefended Substitute!

Any particular reason for the shape, Crom? xD

All around him, the local grunts eagerly traded gossip with one another, just as Marley and Osmund had predicted. The young Dragon-Type picked up conversations about friends, family, tips for how to court a crush… along with chatter about a suspicious ship that pulled in overnight with "white sails with red saltires" from some passing grunts.

Crom: “Hey, this place is pretty cool! Why, now I’m tempted to join the Company myself and train… oh… right. The Protector.” >.<

Crom came to the retaining wall of the battlefield, where a number of bags from the Siglo Swellow's crewmates who had come to poke around for information at the fort were piled up against each other.

The Company needs much better security! If a scarf is all that’s needed, then false flag and infiltration operations must be a near daily occurrence between them and the Empire. Maybe some sort of passphrase, or behaviour that Company recruits are expected to exhibit?

From the side, Crom could see a boxy shape through a gap in the cover. The dragon nosed at the cover, and after letting his curiosity get the better of him, moved a claw for the bag's opening.

Hmmm, I suspect Ander brought meat over, hehehe.

"It's almost as if he added them to deliberately make them seem more danger-"

Huh, good point—that’s actually pretty smart.

The conversation quickly turned to a congenial exchange of introductions, and the ice between the Aerodactyl and these 'strangers from the Capital' quickly began to thaw. The chatter among the lavender-scarved Pokémon carried on amiably, until Ander chanced to bring up a question...

Kellner: “Must be real nice up in not!Ven—erm, the Capital, eh?”

Pladur, chuckling nervously. “Y-yup!”

Kellner: “Say, what’s the Palazzo Ducale like inside? Surely you’ve been there! Come ooon, gimme a rundown!”

Pladur: “It’s… p-pretty?”

Kellner: “Tsk, I know what’s going on! The tourism board told you to stay quiet so that we’ll have to go visit and pay the entry fee. Bah, you people from the Capital only think about money…”

Across the stream in Fensedge Village, Team Traveller slept soundly at the 'Cromlech Inn' after a hasty supper the night before.

Guardia: “Say, why did we choose to come back here after we eavesdropped and learnt the enemy’s plans?”

Nida: “That was non-canon, you dolt!”

Pleo: “Cannon? Like one of those on the ships? Ooooh, I want to fire one!”

Guardia: “Tsk, you ‘civils’ have such strange customs…”

Each of the holes served as an unintended skylight, letting sunlight filter down on a room filled with nothing but the sounds of silent snoring...

Surely they have something to cover it with in case of rain, right?

"Wait, what?" Guardia asked. "You mean you don't have anyone come by to poke you awake for the start of the day?"

Nida: “Gee, I thought ferals would be MORE responsible about rising early and being productive.” >.<

Elty: “Hey, I’m not complaining! We’ve just come off of a long flight, a close trial, and generally multiple close brushes with death! I think we DESERVE to rest!”

"How is there nothing left for us?"

Ellsberg: “Oh, no! How did they see rigth through our plan?! Gah, these scoundrels must have a tactical genius that rivals the Director’s!”

The four passed by a Kabutops hoping aloud that 'that berry mission to the Subway's still up'

*Squint*

"Hmm… let's think. Where would I go if I was a pirate stocking up for heading out into the interior?"

Ouch, I guess the cover story might end up hurting the mission itself.

Salvini: “Grrr, questi stranieri pensano davvero di sgattaiolare sull’isola senza permesso di soggiorno? Erm, I meant—think, Salvini, think!”

Deciding to act before they could give her the slip again, Salvini walked over to accost the group of brigands as they pocketed their sphere.

Hmmm, I’m not sure that disobeying orders is the smartest move here, Matteo…

"Oh, it's you again! Just got through picking a mission, I take it?" she asked.

Yeah, now I’m sure they won’t suspect anything xD

The Grovyle dug through a satchel slung across her shoulder and pulled out the fake listing that Hertsog had prepared. As soon as she set the paper on the ground, the members of Team Traveller crowded around, eagerly scanning its details.

Ooooh, so she’s not disobeying orders! Then the mission board being empty might have been part of the plan, too. Smart.

Well, Briggs would sort it out. He couldn't possibly go that hard on a bunch of kids, right?

Already underestimating them, eh? Tsk tsk.

"Think about the times when your power came out before," Elty explained. "The day you blew Captain Hess across the island was just a few days after a storm. That night we crawled through Lyn's ship was the night of a storm…"

Ooooh that makes so much sense! I completely neglected to consider the storm might have held significance in both of those occasions!

The Ground-Type paused and blinked incredulously, tilting her head puzzledly at the white bird. Were the gods supposed to be this way?

Heck, I’m surprised she isn’t acting more revering toward Pleo already.

With that, the former feral joined her peers, continuing the process of lugging up wet sand and molding it into a fort that with enough time and a little imagination, would outshine even the one looming over the town to the east.

Poetic! I like it. It’s also good to remind the audience about salient landmarks like that more than once, just to leave a good impression of the landscape around them.

Aaaand, that’s another chapter down! I wanted to do a double review, but this chapter was seriously long. You’ll have to wait until tomorrow! In the meantime, I really enjoyed myself. That final scene was really needed to let our poor protagonists unwind and contemplate a little.
 

Virgil134

PMD Writer
Partners
  1. sylveon
  2. weavile
  3. kommo-o
  4. noivern
  5. mothim
Surprise! You were probably expecting @Spiteful Murkrow to post, but instead it’s me!

Starting this year the two of us will be rotating who writes up the review responses each update. Sometimes it will be me, while during other weeks it will be Spiteful Murkrow.

@Shadow of Antioch:
Eh? One of these things is not like the oth—oooh, HER! Fair enough. I’m really curious to see where she and Daraen decide to settle. They were lovely characters.

Also, wait—a Nidorina? Is that supposed to be Marley? Why? And why isn’t Pleo’s wanted poster in there?

Well, it will be a while before you see them again, but you’ll find out eventually. ^^

And yes, that’s indeed meant to be Marley! If the Company is gonna try to make Team Traveller look more dangerous than they really are it makes sense to base it on some truths. As for why Pleo doesn’t have a poster, the reason is that the Company doesn’t want everyone to know that they’re looking for a Protector. The current idea behind the posters is to find him by having others capture his friends.

OOOOH! Lore! Does that mean that the Company’s gathering up the various Protectors to be raised and trained up as weapons of mass destruction against the Empire? If so, it means we’ll have epic battles with weaponised legendaries later down the line! That’s SO cool!

Well, it’s their plan at least! The Petrification of Conntow was before the Company separated from the Empire, so despite having shipped off this Protector’s egg, they no longer have him.

That doesn’t exclude the possibilities of those battles happening later down the line though.

I’d make the second sentence its own paragraph, as the subject of the action changes.

Ah, good point. We went back and changed this.

Is Leafeon considered a fox? I thought the Eeveelution line were a canine/feline hybrid.

Well, the Eeveelution line seems to combine different aspects from different mammals, so it’s hard to say for sure. In this case it’s all said from the perspective of an Armaldo who doesn’t like or care about Phyllis, so even if Leafeon aren’t foxes, Briggs sure is waving her off as one.

Salvini: “Questi dannati immigrati provano ad invadere la nostra isola, ma noi li rispediremo a—ah, s-sorry. Force of habit. I meant… you’re great at your job! Together we’ll catch these enemies of the Company together. By the way, does anyone have any idea what they look like? I myself have zero clue.”

Not really sure what that means, but Salvini was actually born on a Dutch speaking island, so you won’t be hearing any Italian from her.

“Hey!” Pleo shouted in a muffled voice from outside the window. “Only Elty is a pirate! The other three of us would never do something so mean to—OW!”

Nida: “HUSH! What are we still doing outside their headquarters, anyway?”

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Any particular reason for the shape, Crom? xD

Oh that choice ain’t Crom’s, that’s the Company. Both they and the Empire like making substitutes in the form of prominent Pokémon that they consider their enemy. Given the large role Marley played in kicking Darzin off of Tromba, she’s certainly considered one to the Company

The Company needs much better security! If a scarf is all that’s needed, then false flag and infiltration operations must be a near daily occurrence between them and the Empire. Maybe some sort of passphrase, or behaviour that Company recruits are expected to exhibit?

Security is a bit laxer than what most factions would prefer in reality, since there are some infiltrations in the story that happen in much the manner you describe. That said, the locals still have some tells that would give them a leg up at fishing out spies and infiltrators, which is why the crew of the Siglo Swellow isn’t getting in the habit of hanging around at their ports of call for very long. Like if you go around saying you’re from the Company’s capital and have an accent that obviously mismatches your claimed background or are of a species that’s uncommon there… yeah, you’re gonna attract scrutiny really quickly.

Kellner: “Must be real nice up in not!Ven—erm, the Capital, eh?”

Pladur, chuckling nervously. “Y-yup!”

Kellner: “Say, what’s the Palazzo Ducale like inside? Surely you’ve been there! Come ooon, gimme a rundown!”

Wrong capital actually! Poké!Venice is not in Company territory.

Surely they have something to cover it with in case of rain, right?

Yeah, they got wooden shutters for those.

Aaaand, that’s another chapter down! I wanted to do a double review, but this chapter was seriously long. You’ll have to wait until tomorrow! In the meantime, I really enjoyed myself. That final scene was really needed to let our poor protagonists unwind and contemplate a little.

I’m glad you enjoyed it! Sometimes it can be pretty fun to just write Team Traveller unwind a bit and take a break from the plot. Either way, me and Spiteful Murkrow certainly look forward to your next review!

@Chibi Pika since you crossposted your review I’ll be sure to reply to it on Serebii later once we update there later!

Finally, we have an important announcement for all readers.

Some of you might have already read about it on Discord, but we recently did a subtle but significant setting retcon across several chapters. Namely that while uncommon, body armor now exists for more important guards on land. This is something that we probably should have written in from the start, and the only reason that we didn’t is that for a while we simply didn’t know about cloth-based armor like linothorax existing in history.

It’s mostly a background detail for now and the individual retcons are very minor, but body armor will get more focus later on in the story, so we thought it was important to let everyone know about this change. The first retcon was made to chapter 22, where in the beginning of the very first scene the concept is briefly explained to Team Traveller. If you’re curious I’d definitely recommend you’d check it out.

And with that out of the way, I’ll give the word to my co-author for this week’s chapter:
 
Chapter 44: In Harm's Way

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
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He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
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After taking a circuitous route off the Nektar Weide to avoid being spotted, Ketu and Ellsberg journeyed back to the wood-and-stone fort across the stream from Fensedge Village. There, Ketu led Ellsberg deep into the bowels of the building in Mengir's fort where Zorn's haunt was, weaving up stairwells and through corridors. The Dark-Type's guidance led him and the following Mothim to a stop in front of an engraved hardwood door with a metalworked push latch. The Weavile gave a look about his surroundings, before leaning up against the door and giving it a sharp, rhythmical series of thumps with his claws.

The two heard the sound of movement from inside, and paces drawing nearer and nearer. The door opened with a creak, as a Zoroark glanced out from the gap, an impatient frown etched on his muzzle.

"You're late, Ketu," the Dark-Type said.

"Sorry about that," the Weavile replied. "It was a little tricky to get Buzzy here out without anyone asking too many questions."

"Hrmph, I'll take your word for it," Elilan answered. "Hurry up and come inside, we have business to tend to with Ellsberg."

As Ketu and Ellsberg made their way through the doorway, they looked around and saw they had entered a timbered office lined with bookshelves and sunlight peeking in through glass windows. Paintings of seascapes and of the Company's Directors from past ages adorned the walls, along with a map of Anyilla that had been dutifully divided up into sectors reflecting the Company's de jure and de facto holdings.

The Zoroark led the two to a low table with a weathered red-and-white sphere of some strange material sitting on it, surrounded by short ottomans. On his way over, Elilan stopped to grab a thick, well-read tome off the desk before sitting down and beginning to lazily leaf through its contents.

"So Ellsberg, how has adjusting to your new position been going?" the Dark-Type asked, peering up from his tome. The Administrator was answered with a reflexive buzz from his Mothim guest, an exasperated frown firmly coloring Ellsberg's expression.

"That well, hm?"

The Mothim hesitated and flitted up from his seat uneasily. Administrator Elilan didn't call him all the way out here just to make light of his circumstances… had he?

"Administrator, why did you call me here, anyways?" Ellsberg asked. "Commissioner Lyn left me swamped in work and I shouldn't be away from it for too long."

"It's simple," Elilan replied. "I called you here to offer you a proposal."

Ellsberg reflexively batted his wings before standing up on his cushion and giving a puzzled tilt of his head. Administrator Elilan was clearly driving at something… but what?

"A proposal? Just what have you got in mind?"

"As I'm sure you already know from personal experience, Lyn is a bit of a troublesome colleague to work with," the Zoroark began.

"That's an understatement if I ever heard one," Ellsberg scoffed.

"Then surely you'd agree with me that his temperament is an ill fit for the Board," Elilan answered. "And if he were to join, he would potentially endanger the Company's long-term future."

The fox shrugged his shoulders and gave a knowing smirk. The Administrator set aside his book on the table, turning his attention fully to the flitting Mothim before him.

"That's why I wanted to do something about that," the Zoroark said, before pointing a claw at his moth guest. "And I want you to be a part of it."

Ellsberg jumped up with a buzzing shock. Did- Did Administrator Elilan really just say that? And Ketu, he was in on this?! What was going on here?

"Eh?! But Lyn is Director Inler's pick for this mission!" Ellsberg exclaimed. "There's no way that he'd give approval for something like that!"

"You're right, he wouldn't," Ketu remarked. "But that doesn't mean that we can't do something about it anyways."

"Office politics has a way of hamstringing the best decisions from time to time, since he certainly wasn't my pick for the job," the Zoroark harrumphed. "That's why I've felt the need to sidestep protocol for a bit in this situation. I'm sure Lyn has promised you something to keep you so close around him, but would it really be worth letting the Pokémon currently in charge of your ship climb the ranks to greater power?"

Ellsberg caught himself and paused. Commissioner Lyn was already exasperating enough at times to deal with as a Second-Rank. Even if Lyn made good on his word and gave him his Commissionership, he would still be in the rank above to boss him around, and with even more power at his disposal...

"… You know how to make a compelling argument," Ellsberg admitted. "But what is it that you would need me to do? And what would I get in return for going against the Director's orders?"

A small smile began to creep over the fox's face. Pleased to see that the Bug-Type seemed to be amenable to his argument, the Zoroark continued on and gave a calming wave of his right claw.

"Don't worry, it's just a little errand that I'll see that you're amply rewarded for," Elilan reassured. "All I need is for Lyn's incompetence to be demonstrated in front of the rest of the Board. When the topic of replacing Lyn comes up, my preferred candidate would be in a much better position to be selected."

"But how is that something that I'm supposed to do?" Ellsberg asked.

"Simple. We wait for Lyn to grab the bird, and then snatch him out from underneath and send him off to the Administrator here," Ketu said, pointing a claw at his chest. "Just follow your orders from me, and we'll complete this mission sooner than you kno-"

"Actually, Ketu," Elilan interrupted. "I think that you'd be better off working in tandem with Ellsberg here."

At once, Ketu's normal confident and lackadaisical air evaporated, replaced with a stunned blanch. The Weavile gave a shake of his head feathers before launching into a swift protest towards his superior.

"H-Huh?! Administrator, what do you mean?!" Ketu exclaimed. "I'm the Pokémon who's been working this mission for you for almost three years now! Why would bringing a complete newcomer as my partner be a better option?!"

"Because, unlike you, Ellsberg here knows the ins-and-outs of our more bureaucratic divisions," the fox countered. "Besides, the Sea Guardian already eluded you once when he escaped Lyn's ship. I think it would be wise not to turn down extra help."

"Administrator, the Lugia escaping was something that was completely out of my control!" the Weavile spluttered back. "It's not a matter of my target eluding me if it's not even there when I was supposed to-"

The Weavile was cut off by a raised claw from the Zoroark, along with a stern glare that quickly prompted the Sharp Claw Pokémon to drop his protest. After watching Ketu shift his gaze to the ground and grudgingly table his objections, the Administrator turned his attention back to Ellsberg.

"Anyhow, I'm aware that there is a good deal of risk to this mission, but there's also reward, which I will leave you to choose from, Ellsberg," Elilan answered. "Would you rather be known as Commissioner Ellsberg...?"

Whap!

The Zoroark clamped the book in his claws shut, nonchalantly tossing his tome back onto the table. The Dark-Type rose up and leaned over the table, peering directly into Ellsberg's eyes with a piercing gaze.

"Or Elmer, the notary whose name Pokémon can't even remember properly?"

The Mothim paused and thought over Elilan's offer. It was undoubtedly risky, and he couldn't really expect the Administrator to come to his aid were the scheme to fall through...

"Elmer, hurry up and make a decision already-!" Ketu hissed.

The Weavile was quickly met with mutual glares: one from his irked superior, and one from a Mothim with wounded pride. If nothing else, Elilan's offer did hold the cachet of finally being able to end this blasted 'Elmer' nonsense once and for all as a Commission- Wait a minute.

Lyn too had offered him Commissionership for help in getting the Sea Guardian under his control. So then, regardless of whose side he ultimately took, he would be sure to get his desired position in the ranks. Then... for now, there would surely be no harm in taking advantage of this opportunity.

"I think the choice is obvious there, Administrator Elilan," Ellsberg answered. "Count me in."

"Urgh… yeah, yeah, that's great," Ketu grumbled. "Can we go back to the ship now?"

The Weavile gave a disgusted scoff and furrowed his brow, turning on one heel in the direction of the door, only for Elilan's voice to call out after him.

"One more thing."

"Eh?" Ellsberg asked.

"Based off prior experience, it is possible that the past Protectors we and our rivals have encountered may emerge from the shadows," the Zoroark explained. "Most notably one you should be familiar with, Ketu."

"Hrmph."

The Weavile rolled his eyes and harrumphed quietly before looking the other direction. Administrator Elilan frowned and shot a stern glare, before deciding to wave the matter off and continue with his explanation.

"If you happen to stumble across one of them, by all means feel free to improvise," the Zoroark offered. "After all, there are more things in the Company's best interest than simply keeping Lyn off the Board."

"We'll be mindful of it," Ellsberg replied. "Come on, Ketu, we should be getting back to the ship."

Ellsberg flitted up from his seat and began to make his way for the door, Ketu begrudgingly following after him. The Mothim's conversation with Elilan had served to lift his spirits tremendously, with his earlier troubles on the Nektar Weide now feeling as if they were in a bygone era. As the Bug-Type made his way back into the hall, dormant daydreams from when he first stuck his alliance with Lyn came back into mind: of being Commissioner Ellsberg, of having respect, and most importantly, getting his newfound power on his own terms…

No more getting yelled at… No more getting his ship trashed or commandeered… No more getting bullied by underlings…

Everything would finally stay the way things were meant to, and he'd finally get the respect he'd worked so hard for in the Company's ranks.



As Ellsberg daydreamed about his future, the Company's quarry continued their arduous trek through the Mystery Dungeon they fell into. Nida and her companions quickly discovered that the direction of the dungeon went downwards, forcing the four to search out stable zones and trace passages in the fog between floors of watery expanses with tight bubble-covered paths…

"Huh?!"

Though much to Pleo's surprise, the floor coming into view after exiting the foggy periphery of their latest shortcut was far more terrestrial. The space consisted of tightly-packed trees and undergrowth studded with colorful gems, flanking sides of marshy ground that formed the chambers and paths of the floor. Above them, past the shade of the overshadowing tree litter, was the vague brightness of the sun peering through the mist, its orientation at an unnaturally low angle for this time of the day.

"Where did all these trees come from?!" the young Lugia squawked.

"Gardie, do you know what's going on here?" Guardia pressed. "We obviously haven't left the dungeon since I can still see fog and those crystals everywhere, but dungeons don't change this much."

"Actually, they do sometimes," the Growlithe said, much to Guardia's stunned befuddlement.

"... What?"

"Some Mystery Dungeons have different areas depending on the places the Distortion touches," he explained. "We came in via the sea, and have been working our way up. This obviously doesn't look a lot like the sea, so it's a fair bet that normally Pokémon come through here from land to go to the sea."

Nida nodded, her mind turning back to the dungeon back on Tromba which the stronger members of the guild similarly said linked land and sea. Pleo and Guardia on the other hand stared blankly, as if the Growlithe had just told them about a flying hilltop. The Fire-Type shrugged off the pair's puzzlement, giving an impatient shake of his head.

"Whatever," Elty grumbled. "The important part is that we're on our way outta here."

The fire-dog turned tail and led the group into the corridor, his companions following closely on his heels. Along the way, Nida realized that something was strange about how naturally Elty was able to discern how this dungeon went from the sea to land…

"You seem to be pretty familiar with this place, Elty," Nida murmured.

"Eh, it's nothing," Elty insisted as he turned his back towards the Nidoran. "When you've gone to as many places as I do, some dungeons are just easier than others to get the hang of- Oof!"

Lost in his line of thought, Elty had failed to notice a small avian Pokemon covered in downy pink feathers round a nearby corner. The bird flew directly into his path and bumped into the Fire-Type, the two knocking each other back. The Spritzee ruffled her feathers, eyes narrowing as she shot a glare down the length of her beak at the inattentive pup.

"Hey! Watch where you're going, you village runt!" the bird squawked.

"Er… sorry?" Elty gulped, folding his ears and tail back. "We were just passing through and-"

"GET OUT!"

The Spritzee gave a great shout, enough to cause visible reverberations in the air and knock Elty back into his teammates.

"AGH!"

Any hope at reconciliation lost, Team Traveler instead scrambled back along the corridor away from the furious Spritzee, who followed them in hot pursuit into a chamber hemmed in by a pond. Guardia, having been knocked from her perch atop Pleo's back, was the first one into the room. The Cubone nearly tripped on a wayward Gravelerock as she ran, stumbling forward and casting a glance back towards the stone. A spark of realization shot through the Cubone's mind, the lizard realizing the rock's helpfulness in her situation, she lunged over and grabbed it before continuing on her way.

"Hey bird, heads up!"

The Ground-Type dug her feet into the ground and lobbed the stone forward at the Spritzee, catching her in between the eyes with a loud squawk. The bird tumbled towards the ground, hastily righting herself and pulling up. As the Fairy-Type climbed back into the air, she dove for Guardia with a glare and her beak thrown open wide for what seemed to be a nip.

"Ow! Oh, you're finished, laghairt!"

Her stony missile spent, Guardia moved to grab her trusty weapon - her old familiar club - which she... had thrown away earlier that day. Dread set in as that old feeling of total helplessness took hold of her, and she found herself at a loss, frozen in a panic.

"Leave her alone!"

Before the Spritzee could reach her, Guardia looked up and saw Pleo running in with a sharp cry, plumes of blue aura trailing on his lower body and wisps forming around his head. The Lugia charged ahead and knocked the Fairy-Type back with a startled squawk, leaving Pleo to hastily flit back as his Cubone teammate stared dumbfounded at him.

"P-Pleo?! What was that?!" Guardia exclaimed. "You had blue lights all over your body!"

"I… did?" Pleo asked.

"Grr… you call that an attack?" the Spritzee spat. "That barely did anything to me-EEEK!"

The Fairy-Type squawked as a toxic needle from Nida dug into her side, followed swiftly by a gout of fire from Elty. The sudden onset of attacks dashed her tough facade somewhat, sending her crashing to earth with a pained grimace.

"Nrgh…"

The Spritzee weakly struggled up, her legs tottering from the effects of the burn and the poisoned barb, flapping her wings to try to get back into the air. Before the bird could properly raise her head, Nida caught the bird's face with a pair of spinning kicks, sending the assailing fairy tumbling backwards into a wall with a squawking thud, followed by weak groaning.

"Some dungeons are easier to get the hang of, huh?" Nida asked. The Poison-Type gave an unamused look at her guide, the Growlithe reciprocating with a glare.

"Oh shut up, spike ball," he snapped. "You know what I meant."

"But is this a good idea, Elty? We're getting worn out pretty fast here…" Pleo murmured. "Maybe we'd be better off waiting for help?"

"And hanging around here is safer than traveling around defenseless like this…" Guardia added. "And it would let me get to know this place better so I can pass it down onto my colony's lore…"

"No."

Elty simply couldn't let this chance slip. He was so close to Rosequartz Town now, his old haunt - his home! He couldn't stand to have come so far only for his 'teammates' to screw it all up now.

"I know what I'm doing, okay?" the Fire-Type growled. "This dungeon isn't as bad as Mengir and we've been doing fine so far! Besides, don't you think that those two fish aren't looking for us too?"

"Ya, ya, entiendo," Nida sighed. "Just… let us know if something's going on, alright?"

Elty gave an indifferent grunt and continued steadily down the passage. The day's events had worn heavily on the party's morale, and they felt it now more than ever. A spell of tense silence fell over the group for some time, before Nida piped up.

"I hope that Dimitri isn't too worried about us…"



Back on the outskirts of Braveshoal, the resting grounds of the Khranitel Rod were awash with activity. All about the patch of reef, the clan's Pokémon swam here and there, busy loading little finfuls of sundry objects into bags of sea netting. Happy chatter among the Pokémon circulated in the waters, punctuated by orders barked out by a Dragalge's voice.

"Sergei, put the durables in before the delicates!

"Irena, make sure the kids to put on their best doll-eyes for the buyers today!"

"Nikolai, for the stars' sake, stop playing with that vodka bottle and get your fins moving already!"

Viktor's sharp barking was quickly followed by a short visit by the Khranitel Rod's leader, which was more than enough to rectify whatever caught the seahorse's eye. The Golisopod loading crates atop Wonder Orbs in his netting swiftly emptied his bag to repack. The Milotic was off and quickly calling a small school of various young Water Pokémon about her. Even that lackadaisical Whiscash he'd caught toying with a discarded glass bottle hastily made an attempt to look busy.

"I want to see cargo nets on backs and our haul at the main square in ten minutes!" Viktor barked. "If we don't move this stuff today, we're swimming the next leg of our circuit with basic rations!"

Such was the routine the Khranitel Rod went through when it came time to bring the fruits of their school's wanderings about the Cradle's sea to market in Braveshoal. A place where Pokémon of all stripes from sea and land gathered to trade with one another, and a mainstay for the sea clans of the Cradle, including Viktor's. Even so, there was still time to be found for levity in the midst of the clan's preparations, which prompted Kuda to swim up and greet his superior after finishing up overseeing some Pokémon pushing knots of seaweed into a net on their back.

"You're certainly chipper today, Ataman," the Kingdra said.

"We've got a bigger Market Day to look forward to thanks to that small haul you got us from those golden-scarved losers," Viktor replied. "And we finally managed to put Dimitri's landlubbing to good use to get those kids out of our scales and off to safety…"

The Dragalge gave a contented bob of his head. Yes, there were the customary annoyances here and there, but with the way things were shaping up in the clan's affairs, there only seemed to be one logical conclusion.

"That sounds like a pretty good day to me, don't you think?"

"Ataman! Ataman!"

The distressed burbling promptly pierced through the Poison-Type's relaxed demeanor. That chittering voice… Wait a minute, that was-

"Dimitri?!"

The Dragalge whirled around as the work at the reef ground to a halt. Sure enough, it was the form of none other than the Kabutops guide he had posted to lead Team Traveller to Sormus. Except, here he was back a full day early with neither hide nor hair of his charges to be seen, wincing from a large number of scrapes and dents covering his chitinous body.

"Oi, hurry up and get the medics in here!" the Dragalge cried. "He's injured!"

At once, a trio of Luvdisc swam over to begin inspecting the Kabutops' wounds. News travelled fast among the rest of the clan, as a gathering of Pokémon young and old quickly formed about the battered crab. Throughout the seawater, uneasy murmuring floated about what could have befallen the Rock-Type to make him return so suddenly.

"Dimitri, what happened?" Viktor asked. "And where are the deti?"

"A pair of Imperials ambushed us as we came out from Spirit Trench! I tried to outswim them, but they forced us into a Subway tunnel and collapsed it with a landslide," the Kabutops explained, nervously rubbing the edges of his scythes against each other. "The last I was able to see was that they chased Team Traveller into the Crystal Mangroves."

The Fossil Pokémon's explanation drew shocked gasps and cries of dismay from the gathered Pokémon. The Empire had already found out about the children? But all of them had expected that they were still in the dark about Team Traveller! And if the team was all the way in the Crystal Mangroves and Dimitri was here...

"Dimitri, I told you not to go too far east on the way over!" Viktor snapped.

"And you just let the Imperials go after them?!" Kuda demanded.

"Those Imperials chased me off my original path! And they turned tail, Kuda," Dimitri snapped. "They must have been just as unprepared to head in as I was, since they turned and swam off after they lost the kids."

"… Then that means we still have time to find them," Viktor said.

Puzzled burbles floated about the gathered sea creatures. Their gazes shot between each other before settling on their leader, hoping for some clarification.

"Eh? Ataman, what do you mean by that?" a Lumineon asked.

"What I mean is that those Imperials gave Pleo and his friends a head start for getting away," the Dragalge explained. "If they had to prepare, it means they'll have to go back in order to get prepared, which we can use as a chance to find the deti before they do."

"Eh?!" the Whiscash burbled in protest. "But what about the Market Day-?"

"Keep your priorities in order!" Viktor snapped. "There will be other Market Days, there won't be another shot at getting that chayka back!"

The Dragalge's outburst quickly quieted down any would-be protesters, but even so, skeptical looks floated here and there among the gathered Pokémon. After a tense silence, one of the Luvdisc healers grew emboldened enough to raise an objection.

"But Ataman, surely you don't mean for all of us to go along!" the Rendezvous Pokémon insisted.

"Yeah, our own kids aren't all 'hunter' material!" the Milotic objected. "And we'll lose our spot at the grounds if we all leave!"

"For crying out loud, use a little common sense!" Viktor groaned. "Everyone who is able to make it into that dungeon is coming. I'll expect the rest of you to hold down the fort and try and salvage what you can from Market Day."

"Should we tell the other Atamanov about this?" a Relicanth offered. "If they knew what was going on, I'm sure they'd help with this Protector, too."

"No. Before today, I thought that it was only the Company that we had to worry about," the Dragalge rebutted. "Clearly, the Empire also knows about this Protector, and they've been watching this town. If we keep things to our rod, it will be a lot easier to disguise."

A chorus of affirmations rose up in response to the Dragalge, though before they could drag on, they were cut short by a huff and a motion of the seahorse's fins for silence.

"Now, hurry up and get moving!"

Once again the resting grounds of the Khranitel Rod flew into a whirlwind of activity, if of a sort entirely different from the one just moments before. The goods for Market Day were largely sidelined and stowed away. In its place, seeds, orbs, and other tools for the arduous work of prowling through Mystery Dungeons were dug out in preparation for a visit to the distant dungeon. Even Dimitri, still stinging from his wounds set about preparing, bothered all the while by a nagging dread that he shared with the clan's Dragalge leader as he started to swim away.

"Ataman, will this really work?" the Kabutops asked. "I mean, we all know what lies at the other end of that place…"

Viktor twitched his fins uneasily, a grim look coming over his eyes. After a pregnant pause, the sea dragon shook his head, giving a resigned sigh.

"Let's just hope they haven't reached land yet."



High above the Khranitel Rod's grounds on the seabed, at that time, a flotilla of swimming Pokémon and their passengers in white scarves with red saltires made their way into the atoll. The group was waved along by a group of guards posted at an inlet, who allowed the group into the lagoon. There, an elderly Clawitzer swam out ahead, making a beeline for a frigate tied up against a simple wooden dock.

As Nagant neared, she noticed that the ship seemed uncannily empty above the waterline… only for the sound of shouts to draw her attention to the beach. The shrimp turned her head and saw her crew cavorting on the beach: sunbathing, digging up the sand, playing games with one another. Every manner of childish pursuits one could imagine, all of which swiftly came to a blanching end as Nagant and her flotilla passed, prompting the crew to take a hasty turn to made-up busywork on the dock and frigate.

"… Looks like the others were hard at work while we were out," Berecien sighed. Nagant gave an annoyed twitch of her feelers followed with an aggravated groan.

"Ugh… the things I have to put up with from this crew…"

The Clawitzer shook her head and clambered up some netting dangling over the side of her ship onto the deck. There, she propped herself up onto her tail, and gave a skeptical scowl as her Beedrill first mate flitted over to check on her.

"Jun, what is going on here?" Nagant demanded. "I'm leading an expedition to snag a god, not a pleasure cruise!"

"In their defense, we started running out of things to do for the members of the crew who couldn't swim after the second day," the Beedrill buzzed. "There's only so much intel that can be gathered from the nearby ferals."

The Clawitzer twitched her feelers before giving a begrudging sigh. Jun did have a point, and it sounded like in spite of the poor first impression, perhaps he and the crew had discovered something of value.

"So you have learned something, then?" she asked.

"Well, we've restocked the ship in case we need to make a longer leg," the Bug-Type said. "And we sent some of our own around the atoll and into Braveshoal to try and get a feel for what's been going on…"

"And…?"

"Erm… well, we didn't really pick up anything consistent with a 'flying sea god'," he admitted. "The closest we picked up was that a 'Blue Fairy' apparently passed through lately. She's apparently some manner of mystic that these sea Pokémon revere."

"That's hardly a new development," Nagant scoffed. "Talk of this 'Blue Fairy' has been going on for years."

"Well, we also got a couple reports of Commissioner Lyn being sighted in town earlier this morning..." Jun began.

Nagant waited for her first mate to continue when the sound of ruffling feathers and whispers reached her ears. There, up in the rigging were a Pidgeotto and a Togetic, whispering to a Drifblim latched onto the ropes about what happened on Mengir and if 'Captain Nugget's' talk with Jun was leaving anything out. The Clawitzer huffed and shot out a pressurized pulse of water, narrowly missing the three with startled cries and drawing their attention back down to the deck.

"Some tact with your mouths would be appreciated," Nagant growled. "'Loose lips sink ships', and there will be a special place in the afterlife for the idiot whose lips sink mine."

The three yelped apologies and hastily flew off from the rigging, retreating to a safe distance outside of earshot. Even so, the three's curiosity continued to linger, as the trio continued to sneak glances at Nagant as she carried on with Jun.

"And just how do you know that, Jun?" Nagant prodded. "It's not as if Lyn would swim in here with his Company Lavenders."

"We heard the name being thrown around, and there was apparently a Samurott that swam in from the outside today," the hornet explained. "It just seemed to logically be intertwined."

The shrimp captain paused and curled her mouth into a frown. Jun's logic admittedly wasn't ironclad proof, but even so there was reason to think that the Beedrill was onto something.

"Hrm... That would match up with what we found out from our end..."

"How so?"

"The Board arrived in port shortly after we made landfall on Mengir, and Lyn set off on his own in the direction of Braveshoal afterwards to meet up with a contact," she answered. "Berecien and his friends helped me track them into the village fort, where we were able to listen in on their meeting after some guards 'loaned' us their scarves."

"Eh? The entire Board meeting in that little hamlet?" Jun asked. "What on earth was going on there?"

"They apparently had just missed capturing the Protector. Based off what I overheard, it sounds like he slipped away with an injured wing," Nagant said, moving a claw pensively under her mandibles. "I'm not sure if the Admiralty already knows about it or not, but there's also some degree of friction going on within the Board itself."

"What do you mean by that?"

"Administrator Darzin apparently had a falling out with his peers some time ago," the Clawitzer explained. "He accosted us while we attempted to follow Commissioner Lyn out of port, and strong-armed us into working with him to retrieve the Protector."

Jun gave a startled buzz, and even a couple nearby sailors paused from their work to stare blankly at their captain. She'd done what with a Company Administrator?!

"Bzzt! Mwo?!" the Beedrill cried. "But Captain Nagant, that's-!"

"Something that will stay a matter of this crew and our crew alone until I see a need to change that," Nagant chittered. "I don't trust that Dragonite further than I can throw him, but he's ready to defect from his position, if he has the right incentive."

With her smaller claw, Nagant retrieved Darzin's shed scale and held it up to her crew, the shining orange tarnished by a streak of dull red: their safety net, in case the deal went south. After it'd been acknowledged, she stowed it back in her bag for safekeeping.

"More importantly, we learned from that meeting that the Sea Guardian's escape route leads through here," Nagant said. "Which is why you were hearing reports of Commissioner Lyn's presence here."

"The sea god must have gone another way," Jun murmured. "None of the crew have reported seeing any sign of him."

"I know what I heard, Jun," the Clawitzer harrumphed. "And what you're telling me just isn't adding up…"

She twitched her feelers tentatively, moving her little claw near her mandibles deep in thought.

"We must be overlooking something…"

As Nagant mulled, she overheard some surprised cries coming from the water. The crustacean turned and watched as Cyanea and Katyusha limped along in the water for the frigate, covered in cuts and scuffs.

"Gah… that crab hit harder than I thought."

"And just what happened to you two?" their Clawitzer captain demanded.

The Tentacruel and Sharpedo froze, watching as their peers turned curious glances at them. The pair quietly fumbled for explanations as chatter started to swirl and Nagant's gaze hardened more and more into a fixed glare.

"Er… just a little scrap with a school of ferals," Cyanea answered, giving a sheepish wave of her tentacles. "It's nothing major."

Nagant leveled her firing claw at the two escorts. The chitinous flaps at the end opened, ready to accommodate the backblast from a pressurized shot of water, evidencing the thinness of their owner's patience.

"I distinctly heard you two mention a 'crab' earlier," she hissed. "I'm not in the mood for games right now, so I'll ask again: what happened to you two?"

The duo glanced at one another nervously. It seemed they'd been cornered... Katyusha looked at her partner expectantly grudgingly, coming to a sinking realization that they had no choice now but to tell the truth. Tensing herself in preparation for the backlash she'd receive, Cyanea corrected herself:

"... We found the god you were looking for and went after him on our own," the Tentacruel admitted.

"What?!"

On deck, in the sea, and in the air, Cyanea's admission drew an outpouring of startled cries and questions. Even Nagant was taken aback for a moment, the shrimp having to take a moment to shake her head and compose herself to return to her normal, cantankerous demeanor.

"Cyanea, I want an explanation for this, now."

"W-We saw him and his friends leaving town while we were at Soapy's!" Cyanea interjected, only to be met with a prodding correction from her partner.

"Sophie's…"

"Whatever!"

While the Tentacruel and Sharpedo continued arguing about the name, their admission made Jun fly up with a start. All this time, they'd been so close to the Protector they were searching for and these two had kept quiet about it?!

"Cyanea, why didn't you tell us about this?!" the Beedrill buzzed.

"It was then or never!" the Tentacruel exclaimed. "If we had gone back to the ship and alerted the crew he would have slipped away for sure!"

"Well, you don't have the Lugia with you," Nagant scoffed. "So I don't think it made much of a difference."

"Captain," Katyusha began. "That's-"

The shark was interrupted with the sound of a splash and a moving, angry presence in the water. Captain Nagant had leapt into the water and was now directly in front of her, the Clawitzer glaring into the Sharpedo's eyes.

"Quite enough from both of you," Nagant interrupted. "I don't believe everything in that little story you just gave me, but I'm feeling gracious, so I'll cut to the chase. Where did you lose him?"

"Just outside the Crystal Mangroves, he swam into the fog from the side," Katyusha explained. "So he's somewhere in there now."

The uproar from the nearby crewmates swiftly returned at the mention of the 'Crystal Mangroves'. Cyanea and Katyusha had lost the sea god there? Eager to bring thing back under control, Nagant suddenly braced her shooting claw and aimed it skyward, firing a shot of water into the air with a resounding crack which echoed off of the ship's timbers. As the crew's other conversations came to an immediate halt and their peers from the dock were drawn to the gathering, she turned to address her newly-captivated audience.

"Alright, listen up everybody," the crustacean barked. "I need you all to double back into town and pick up any items you can use for battle. We leave port as soon as they're on the ship!"

"Eh?" a Salandit asked. "But we already loaded up this ship!"

"Yeah, why do we suddenly need even more?" a Vespiquen added.

"Because the area around the Crystal Mangroves isn't some quiet beach you can sunbathe on!" the wizened shrimp spat. "There's good odds we're going to have to fight, and you'd better be prepared for it!"

A sober silence settled over the gathered crew, as the gravity of the situation became apparent. Without further prompting, the Pokémon set off: some to the sea, others to the town beneath the waves, some back aboard to clear space for the extra cargo, and still others to the docks to hurry aboard the last of the frigate's cargo. As the Imperial ship slipped back into the normal hubbub of a hasty departure, Nagant's first mate turned to his grizzled captain, something about her mannerisms striking the Beedrill as odd.

"Just how much firepower are you expecting us to need, Captain?" Jun asked. Nagant paused and cast a look over the horizon, before giving a grunting shake of her head.

"Knowing that accursed island the dungeon's attached to, the more the better."



Back in the Crystal Mangroves, Team Traveller's climb had taken them to a floor where the paths and surroundings jutted off through foggy space at odd angles. In spite of going up, around, and even upside down, the pull of gravity always seemed to be bound to the ground underfoot. More concerningly, the team also found that a number of the paths seemed to loop in onto themselves, which started to stir up uneasy whispers about their Growlithe guide's directions.

"Elty?" Pleo murmured. "Are we lost?"

"No, we're not lost," the Growlithe huffed back.

"But we passed by that branch thirty minutes ago!" Nida exclaimed.

"Some things just look similar around here, okay?" Elty sighed. "Just trust me, I know what I'm doing."

"Gardie, if you don't tell us what's going on, how are we supposed to help get out of here?" Guardia hissed.

"Oi, I'm the one who got us this far," Elty growled. "So just butt out and let me lead the way, unless you fancy bumbling around this place for who knows how much longer!"

The Cubone gritted her teeth and stamped her feet irately. After everything they'd been through, this mutt had the gall to lead them along on what for all anyone knew was just a wild goose chase?!

"Grr! Butt out of this!"

Guardia lowered her head and charged the Growlithe, striking him in the face with a loud yelp. The Fire-Type flopped backwards onto the marshy ground, before wobbling back up to his feet and lowering his body to lunge back-

Click

"Hey what the-"

Elty suddenly dropped out of view, a series of pained yips and the sound of something thunking onto the ground sounding throughout the dungeon. The racket echoed around the area before fading out, leaving the rest of Team Traveller staring blankly in shock.

"Elty!"

The three quickly darted over to the hole and peered down it. There, they saw their Growlithe teammate uneasily righting himself at the end of a stony flight of stairs, still wobbling from his sudden fall.

"Eh?! He fell down the stairs!" Pleo exclaimed. "Quick, this way!"

The rest of Team Traveller hurried down the newly-revealed staircase after their fallen companion. As they rushed to the floor below, something clicked in Nida's head, slowing her pace somewhat as she realized that something was amiss.

"… Hey, wait a minute," Nida murmured. "The stairs between floors aren't hidden like this..."

The Nidoran crept down the steps, her Lugia and Cubone companions following close by. There, much to their surprise, they discovered that just behind Elty was a patch of thick fog. The Growlithe, still shaking sense back into his head, also seemed to grasp the enormity of his accidental discovery.

"Gah… Like I was saying, bonehead. I've got this," Elty groaned. "So are you going to let me lead or what?"

"… Urgh. Fine," Guardia huffed. "But something feels weird about this place."

Team Traveller gathered around behind Elty and began to march into the fog, the sounds and the sensations of their floor quickly vanishing into the ever-thickening haze. The visibility whittled down until- as usual for passages from the Distortion to stable areas- it began to clear along with the filtering of sounds and smells of the next area. A sniff revealed the faint whiff of food, as well as the sound of voices up ahead. The four children tensed themselves as they saw a ring-like shape floating off up ahead, bracing themselves for sudden battle.

"Good afternoon, and congratulations! You've found the Crystal Mangroves' Secret Bazaar!"

The four Pokémon traded confused looks and darted out ahead, where there waiting for them was a Klefki hovering over a pink cloth mat spread over the marshy ground of a forest clearing. A quick look about the clearing revealed a Happiny on a green mat with potted berry bushes and a bowl set out on a stump table, and to the side a Snorlax dozing on a red mat ringed by burlap sacks. Wait a minute! Were these-?

"Wait, are those shops?" Guardia asked. "What are they doing here in a dungeon's stable zone?"

"Since when did being in a dungeon ever stop shops? The Merchantry gouges Pokémon in them all the time," Elty countered.

"But that's in the dungeon," the Cubone insisted. "And there's always one of those green lizards who will knock you into next week for taking something off their mat!"

"Well it would be hard to do the work we do if we had to tear down and rebuild our shops every few hours," the Klefki chuckled. "It makes it well worth being a little out of the way for both us and our more adventurous customers!"

The Klefki waved an arm and bade the youngsters to follow after him. The Key Ring Pokémon led Team Traveller into the center of the chamber, where they saw that there were two additional mats in the room, colored blue and yellow respectively. The lot were staffed by shopkeepers who gave cheerful greetings and invitations to the wayward wanderers to come and pay their mats a closer look.

"I heard back home that there were places like these hidden in dungeons. But this is the first time I've ever been to one myself!" Nida exclaimed. "That said… what exactly do you sell here?"

"All kinds of things! For example the Happiny at the green mat over there sells food to either fill your belly or heal you up," the Klefki explained. "Or, on the blue mat over there, the Minccino there can get any of your items cleaned that were affected by Sticky Traps."

"Uhm… Is there anything that would help us to get an Escape Orb working?" Pleo wondered. "We came into the dungeon the wrong way and I think we broke it."

"Oh, so you're looking for a way out?" the Klefki guide asked. "Try talking with Bech. He's the Ribombee on the yellow mat with the red panel over there."

The Klefki jangled his keys in the direction of the yellow mat with the Ribombee. Nida scrutinized the makeshift shop, which beyond a seat and a red cloth screen along one of the earthen chamber walls seemed to be completely bereft of anything to sell, much less help a team escape a dungeon. Still, the guide had insisted this "Bech" could help... perhaps it was best to give him the benefit of the doubt?

"Thanks for the tip," Nida said, giving a thankful bow of her head. "We'll visit him right away-"

"Oi, spike ball, hurry up!" a yipping voice cried. "Some of us want to get out of here!"

Nida turned her head and saw Elty sitting in front of a flustered-looking Ribombee, wagging his tail impatiently. The Nidoran traded glances with her teammates before they too made their way over to the yellow mat as the Ribombee sized them up.

"Conas atá sibh, young ones?" the Fairy-Type buzzed. "Had enough exploring for a day today, huh?"

"Oh?" Pleo began. "Well, we actually haven't spent all that much time ex-"

"Yes."

"Well in that case, I can take you through my trademark secret passage and back out onto terra firma," Bech said, starting to trail off before straightening up and clearing his throat. "For a price, that is."

Each team member's face soured at the mention of money. Desperate as they were, they only had so much Poké to spend… Would they even be able to afford this mysterious Pokemon's services?

"How much are we talking about here?" Nida asked.

"Well it varies from case to case," the dungeon guide replied. "But for you… I'd say… 100 Poké."

The entire team paused, unsure if they'd heard the Bug-Type correctly. Only a hundred Poké? Could he really offer a measly price like that for such an invaluable service?

"… I may not know a whole lot about pricing, but isn't that supposed to be not that big of a number for those coins of yours, Nidoran?" Guardia questioned.

"It isn't..." Nida answered, before turning back to the Ribombee proprietor. "Why are you charging so little for this, Bech?"

"Well, my job is to help out Pokémon who would normally be stuck in here, so if my customers need a little slack, I'll try to give it when I can," the Fairy-Type explained. "It's a rough world out there at times, and I figured that a bunch of worn-out kids like you could use a break from it."

"Sounds good enough for me," Elty grunted. "Give him the money, spike ball. I could go for seeing some proper sunshine right about now."

Nida rooted through her shoulder bag and set down a pair of misshapen coins onto the mat. The Ribombee snatched up the glinting baubles and stuffed them into a small pouch tucked under the corner of the mat before coming to a stop in front of the rounded panel at his shop's end. The Fairy-Type gave the display a firm knock, sending it tumbling down, and revealing the arch of a stony tunnel behind it.

"And there we go," the Ribombee said. "Follow me, we'll be out before you know it."

"Hey wait a minute, you charged us 100 Poké to go through a tunnel that was right in front of us?!" Elty exclaimed. "What sort of rip-off is- Ow!"

Elty yelped in pain as he felt something wrench his right ear. The Growlithe pulled his head back, and saw that a fuming Guardia had latched onto it with her claws.

"Enough Gardie," she snapped. "Let's just follow the nice bee and replace my bone already."

Not needing a further hint, Elty pulled his head back and begrudgingly decided to table his objections to Bech's fee, leaving Nida to fold her ears back with a frustrated shake of her head. The bee gave a puzzled look before shrugging his shoulders and bidding the four youngsters to follow after him, leading the party deeper into the earthen tunnel and off towards what they hoped would be the end of their ordeal.



"See anything you like, Crom?"

After leaving Mengir's green-sanded beaches, Crom and his companions' search for work to do around town took them to the domed Guild Hall of Fensedge Village. There, under the central chamber's dome, Crom scanned a message board sparsely flecked with illustrated papers with mission descriptions on them. The morning rush had evidently left the board bare, and one constant seemed to characterize the still-unclaimed missions.

"Uh… well, a lot of these look kinda tough…"

"Searching for some ferals accused of battery… Crate hunting on the thirtieth floor…" Kiran muttered, before giving an exasperated shake of his head. "Everything here that will get us as much money as we need is stuff that's way outside our rank."

"What about that one with the apple over there?" Pladur offered, gesturing with his claw at a mission notice for an all-too-familiar mission of gathering apples.

The suggestion immediately drew a chorus of groans and exasperated looks. Even out here, was it really that impossible to avoid apple-picking?

"Uhm… I mean, I suppose apple-gathering is something any Pokémon could do," Ander sighed. "But with a reward like that, we could work until our grandchildren are in their autumn years, and we still wouldn't have the money we need."

"But there must be something we can do…" Crom murmured.

"But Guildmaster Stewart, this is important!" a slightly agitated voice protested. "What do you mean you can't list my mission?"

"Huh?"

The little Druddigon turned around, where he saw in the neighboring hallway, a Mienshao in the garb of a First-Rank Company grunt trying to sway an elderly Sawsbuck.

"I'm sorry, Hertsog. But guild policy is guild policy," the Sawsbuck replied. "You know how we feel about bending our rules, especially if it's not for a good reason."

"Stewart, this is my last opportunity to ask for help!" the Fighting-Type pleaded. "Surely that's grounds for shifting the guild's rules a little?"

Crom peered at the Mienshao as he continued to try and persuade the Sawsbuck guildmaster. The Druddigon initially thought to turn away and leave the Company Pokémon's problems remain his own. But… the weasel seemed to be particularly affected by whatever he needed help with. As member of a Rescue Team, wasn't it his job to help Pokémon in the Fighting-Type's place?

"Eh? What's the mission that you're trying to post?" Crom called out.

Hertsog and Stewart exchanged glances. The Sawsbuck's stern expression softened as he saw this issue begin to resolve itself, and he bowed his head in salutation before turning to leave.

"I'll leave you be for now," the Guildmaster said. "It looks like you won't need my help after all, Hertsog."

The Sawsbuck trotted off, leaving Crom and his companions to make their way over to the Mienshao. The Fighting-Type sized up his audience, and upon noticing their fellow First-Rank scarves, started to develop a skeptical glimmer in his eyes.

"Eh?" the weasel asked. "Shouldn't you all be at work?"

The four Pokémon all began to stammer a different excuse before catching themselves and trailing off awkwardly. After some clumsy glances to one another, Pladur cleared his throat and tried to offer a suitable explanation.

"Uh… we're from a crew that's just passing through?" Pladur answered sheepishly. "You don't have to worry about us shirking from work if that's what you're talking about."

"Fair enough, and I don't believe I'm in much of a position to be picky about my help…" Hertsog sighed. "Who are you all anyways?"

"Well, I'm Pladur," the Fraxure said, before pawing at the Druddigon beside him. "And this is my son Crom."

"I'm Kiran," the Swellow added, raising a wing in greeting.

"And I'm Ander," the team's Scyther buzzed, giving a flicker of his wings. "We had a bit of ship trouble and had to cover some repairs out of our own pocket."

Hertsog brought one paw to his chin, regarding the party dubiously. It seemed to be almost too convenient that they should show up right when they did... but - he reasoned - there was no point being so suspicious when they were essentially his only hope here.

"Razbiram. Anyhow, I'm Hertsog," the Mienshao said. "Until recently, I was the Captain of the Guard in this town, but there's been a bit of an incident that led to my reassignment. As such, I wanted to give back to this town before I got sent to Vollezee for my new assignment."

"Eh?" Crom asked. "But then why didn't that Sawsbuck want you to post your mission here?"

"Well, it's because it's not exactly a request for something to be done in the dungeon," Hertsog answered. "I wanted to get some help to repair something that I and a lot of folks around here have been putting off."

"Hrm?" Kiran murmured. "And what would that be?"

"The shrine to our local Protector. It's up on the path going up to the Mystery Dungeon and badly needs renovation," the Fighting-Type explained. "I'd be willing to offer 4000 Poké if you can get the job done before I leave."

Crom, Kiran, and Pladur's eyes lit up at the mention of the reward. This Mienshao was offering so much just for a little construction work?

"4000 Poké?" Pladur asked. "Why, for that much, of course we'd be-"

"No! Absolutely not!"

The three turned and stared at Ander with stunned silence. The Scyther reeled back, and shot a glare back at the lippy Fraxure.

"I'm not dipping my scythes into this matter," the mantis hissed. "You know what those shrines mean to Marked like me, Pladur. We can get that 4000 Poké in the dungeon like a normal team-"

The Scyther's rant was abruptly cut off by a pained squawk from the main chamber. The group turned its attention to the room, where in the center, a haggard looking Pipikek and Pidgey were helping up a Fletchling after tumbling onto the floor. The three were covered in scuffs from battle, and all were evidently too exhausted to take wing.

"I told you that you shouldn't have gone off on your own," the Pipikek said.

"Hey, it still- Ow!" the Fletchling winced. "It still worked out, right?"

Ander looked uneasily at the young team of Pokémon. While it was surely just coincidence, that was not a promising omen for going into the dungeon. The mantis turned his gaze back to Hertsog, where he noticed the Fighting-Type giving a shake of his head

"… I can understand if you don't want to take my mission, Scyther," Hertsog responded. "But you weren't seriously thinking about going into the dungeon with your team in your present condition, were you?"

"Hrmph. And why not?" Ander demanded.

"The ferals here have been more aggressive since even before the Empire's collapse, and they have a tendency to bend the rules with regard to the Pact's protections," the Mienshao explained. "I couldn't in good conscience recommend a team in your condition head in there."

A sinking realization began to settle over the four Pokémon as Ander hesitantly racked his brain for an alternative. Regardless of whether or not they turned down Hertsog, his mission was the safest and most plausible opportunity they had to help scrape together the funds they needed to get the Siglo Swellow seaworthy again in time. The longer they waited, the more likely it was that Lyn and the Company would beat them to the punch for finding Pleo.

"… Is there really nothing at all that would convince you to take this mission, Ander?" Kiran murmured.

"I- I mean, this really isn't something that I'm taking glibly, Kiran," the Bug-Type buzzed.

"But- But you said you'd help us out back at the ship!" Crom insisted. "Please, Ander, we really need your help!"

The Bug-Type paused and looked away. After an uneasy moment of silence and tapping his blades together, the Scyther sighed and reluctantly looked back at his teammates.

"… Fine. Given our circumstances, it doesn't look like we have many realistic alternatives," the Scyther begrudgingly replied. "I'll make the materials you need, but I will not stick my scythes deeper into this matter. What you do with them afterwards is none of my business."

"It looks like we're in, Hertsog," Kiran chirped. "We'll head out right now-"

"Hold on a minute," the Mienshao interrupted. "I admire your sense of punctuality, but there are a couple of important matters that I feel need to be cleared up first."

"Huh, what do you mean?" Pladur asked.

"The first is that I unfortunately don't have materials for you to work with," the Fighting-Type explained. "I gave a larger reward than normal since I anticipated that whoever fixed the shrine might need to get some on their own… It's admittedly a bit of a squeeze if you're trying to stretch your reward money."

"I'm sure we'll manage, we've been stretching our money just to patch up our ship," the Fraxure answered. "Though what was the other thing you were going to mention?"

"Namely, that I'm going to be swamped with work from preparing for my reassignment which comes in two days," the weasel explained. "I'll still try to make it up to the shrine to help, but if you don't see me there, that's the reason."

The four stated back at Hertsog blankly. While it was never wise for a Rescue Team to harangue its client with questions... just how were they supposed to fix up the shrine without someone who was familiar with it helping?

"Er… that could be a bit of a problem," Kiran groaned. "You're the one who knows about the shrine better than any of us here. Do you at least have something we could use in your absence."

"I'll try and see if a few of my old subordinates can help, but in the meantime, take these."

The Mienshao rooted through a shoulder satchel, and pulled out a small stack of dog-eared papers. On them were drawings of a monolith with a pair of nearby pavilions, sporting motifs of trees and a blue stag with rainbow horns.

"It's admittedly not a whole lot, but surely a visual reference is better than nothing," Hertsog sighed.

"I think we can work with that," Kiran chirped. "We'll head out to the site now to get an idea of what's needed."

"Yeah, we'll get that shrine looking as good as new before you know it!" Crom cheered.

Hertsog opened his mouth to reply, but faltered before he found the words. The task he'd laid out for his new allies was already such a longshot; perhaps it was best not to get their hopes up on the matter...? On the other paw, their hearts were in the right place. With the zeal they'd already showed for the job, it would be downright counterproductive to shoot them down before they'd even taken off.

"I'm sure that you will," Hertsog said, a small smile creeping over his muzzle. "Thank you, and good luck."

The Mienshao crossed his arms, retaining his supportive smile as he watched Crom and his party fade into the distance. As they rounded a corner out of his sight, his expression deflated, shaking his head to himself with a heavy sigh.

"You'll need it."



As Crom and his teammates started their journey off into Mengir's interior, Team Traveller's journey out of the Crystal Mangroves wound down under Bech's guidance. The Ribombee took the four through a winding path in the dungeon's fog, which at the end cleared to reveal a forest of deciduous trees with their leaves all stained shades of red and orange. Nida, Guardia, and Pleo nosed around, looking about curiously at the wooded surroundings.

"Where are we?" Nida asked.

"Eh? You didn't know? You're on Orleigh," their guide explained. "The town here's a bit scruffy, but it's certainly a place that would scratch your adventuring itch."

Nida blinked and gave a puzzled tilt of her head at the bee's statement. Meanwhile, her partners traded tired looks with one another, their own thoughts more preoccupied with much-needed rest.

"Eh, I personally could use a rest before any more adventures," Elty said. "What do you all think?"

"It would be nice to give my wing a rest..." Pleo added.

"Well, I still want to learn the local lore," Guardia insisted. "But I kinda need a new bone for, well- living."

The group turned to Nida so she could weigh in on the matter, but she seemed hesitant. She stared at the ground, apparently lost in thought, mouth partway open as if her answer was on the very tip of her tongue, but she remained silent.

"Something the matter, Nidoran?" Bech wondered.

"Oh, no es nada," Nida said. "It's just that I thought this island's name sounded familiar for some reason."

Elty abruptly went rigid at the Poison-Type's words, his fur pricking up. Bech for his part found the Nidoran's words to be similarly disconcerting, as he traded a wary look back to the little rabbit.

"Eh? Would you four need a guide around town?" the Ribombee asked. "It would help you get the lay of the land a bit better."

"Well…" Nida began.

"We'll be fine, I'm sure," Elty hastily interrupted. "Come on, let's get going."

The Fire-Type turned and set off down a dirt path snaking down a hill. The other members of Team Traveller faltered, before relenting and following after. It would be best not to stumble onto a new island with the team scattered, but even so, just what was giving Elty this confidence?

"Elty, what was that all about?!" Nida exclaimed. "This isn't a place we've been before!"

"Yeah, I'd be able to learn about this place faster if I had someone to learn lore from!" Guardia grumbled.

"Considering how hit-or-miss our past guides have been, do we really want to take the chance when at least two different groups of Pokémon are chasing after us?" the Fire-Type demanded.

The three Pokémon paused at Elty's words. Pleo and Nida's minds turned back to their time in Seahive. There, their guides from Team Chasseur had shown them around the town, and even saved their necks on more than one occasion. By the same token though, the team's blind trust in Salvini's guidance had almost led to disaster, even if she ultimately came around in the end. And the less said about their stint with Team Taxonomy, the better...

"I guess that's a good point…" Pleo answered.

"Then let's keep moving-" Elty began, only for the sound of a feline voice to carry along the winds.

"That's it, one at a time, there's plenty of food for everyone."

"Huh?" Guardia asked.

The four turned and crept through a cluster of bushes, where they saw that a large number of scarfless Pokémon had gathered in a clearing. In the middle of the crowd were a Cacturne and a Meowstic bearing orange scarves with a white jawbone design on it, who were freely handing out donuts from a basket.

"See, we take care of the 'mons around our town," the Cacturne reassured.

"Yeah, and we take care of 'mons with our colors even better," his Meowstic partner added. "Join us, and you'll never have to worry about finding food again!"

Team Traveller watched silently as the pair handed out donuts, their stomachs giving envious growls. Guardia in particular seemed particularly enticed, the ring-shaped pastries making the Ground-Type's mouth water and her worries about her bone melt away (if only for a moment).

"If they're just handing that food out, maybe we could get some?" Guardia asked.

"Um. Guardia," Nida answered, flattening her ears out. "I think those are meant for ferals."

"Oi, I was one of your 'ferals' just a week ago!" the Ground-Type shot back. "That has to count for something!"

The Cubone, having been given newfound confidence by her stomach, crept along and slipped into the back of the gathering. A few of the ferals noticed her, and traded puzzled looks, but didn't question the matter as donuts continued to be passed around.

"Bonehead!" Elty whispered. "Dość tego!"

"But it's free food-"

The lizard's protest was cut off by the sound of a loud snarl, which made her tumble back with a start. Guardia, now once again aware of her defenselessness, yelped and bolted back to the safety of Pleo's back, as the two orange-scarved Pokémon trained harsh glares on the quartet.

"Hey! Take a hike, you lousy brats!" the Cacturne growled.

"Yeah, this is our group," the Meowstic spat. "Go get your own!"

"Alright, alright, we're going!" Elty yipped.

The Growlithe hastily lead his teammates back to the forest path, and then turned off running. After the four could no longer see the pair from the clearing, Team Traveller took a moment to pause and catch their breath, the shock of their encounter giving way to puzzlement and sour grapes.

"… Clearly the hut-dwellers on this island are very possessive about the alliances they strike with Pokémon that don't wear scarves like them," Guardia growled.

"Eh? But why?" Pleo asked. "Weren't they just trying to be helpful?"

"Sounded more like they were trying to bribe them into joining their team," Nida grumbled, flattening her ears out with an unamused stare. "But if that's so, why were they trying to do that with such a large group?"

"Eh, their team, their rules," Elty said, shaking his head. "No need to worry your prickly head about it."

"But-"

"Let's just keep moving towards town okay?" the Growlithe pressed. "We could all use some rest anyway."

After a look back in the direction of the clearing, the four shook their heads and continued on. The forest was starting to look less and less wild now. The undergrowth grew thinner by the step, and the nests in the trees and burrows on the ground were joined with fields of crops, reed mats, and mailboxes. All signs of an impending approach to a town…

Team Traveller's ears perked up at the sound of a hiccuping voice, which drew their attention towards a lean-to nestled among the trees. Pleo gave a puzzled tilt of his head before waddling forward. What was this shack doing here by itself?

"Shooo… where do we stash the goods?"

Hey wait a minute, that shack wasn't alone! There were a pawful of shops, some attached to residences, including what looked to be a Juice Bar.

"I say we bury our loot on the beach," a Hippopotas said. Its companion, a similarly inebriated-looking Weepinbell took umbrage and countered the creature's assertion.

"No, the woods! Beaches are too cliche!"

An unusually active one for the time of day. But, was this really this island's town? A quick count revealed there were a mere eight structures in the cluster, without any of the expected features of a town attached to it. There was no Guild, no guard outpost, not even a Post Office!

"These eight huts are the entire town for this island?" the Cubone asked, giving a skeptical raise of her brow.

"What? No, this is just a trading post on the outskirts," a Tsareena from behind the bar answered. "A lot of Pokémon around here don't like bothering to go all the way into town for a drink, so some of us brought our businesses out to our customers."

"That certainly isn't how the town on my island worked," Guardia countered. "What's so special about yours that it needs all of this?"

"Eh, sometimes a little more peace and quiet's better for business with the visiting ships in town," the Grass-Type replied. "They can be a bit of a handful to do business with."

"But then where is the town?" Pleo wondered.

"Just keep following the path on the right," she said, motioning at a dirt path continuing under the canopy. "It'll take you to the ridge overlooking the eastern side of Rosequartz Town."

The mention of 'Rosequartz Town' brightened up Elty's eyes, prompting the Fire-Type to give a brief wag of his tail. As soon as Nida noticed her partner's demeanor, the Growlithe stiffened up and became more businesslike before speaking back to the Grass-type bartender.

"Oh trust us," he said. "I'm sure we can't miss it."

Once again, the members of Team Traveller set off, Elty taking the lead with humming as his teammates followed after. All the while, the trip drew uneasy twitches of Nida's whiskers. They were on a new island, knowing nothing about who controlled the place, and here Elty was even more comfortable and at ease than he'd been back in Bluewhorl!

"Hey, Elty? Didn't you say you were tired earlier?" the Nidoran asked.

"And what's your point?" the Fire-Type demanded

"You seemed awfully… energetic for someone who was in a hurry to get some rest," she pressed. "What's going on?"

"We almost got killed by bugs, then almost got forced to pick Apricorns for the rest of our lives, and then got stuck at the bottom of the sea over the last couple days," Elty answered. "I think there's nothing wrong about looking forward to some proper rest."

"But, the way you were talking earlier," Pleo murmured, "do you know this place, Elty-?"

Before the little Lugia could finish his question, Guardia shot to attention, calling out to her teammates as she gestured off into the distance with a claw.

"Oh, I think I see it!" she exclaimed.

Nida, Pleo, and Elty turned their heads to the right, where the sight of a seaside town at sunset caught their eye. The settlement seemed to be a little larger than Bluewhorl, though its buildings were primarily composed of dark stone with slate roofs, punctuated by the occasional painted structure in the shape of a Pokémon's head. Smoke curled up from alleyways and ventilation holes, while a number of larger structures flew colorful banners… Perhaps flags of the local rescue teams? Off in the distance, there was the faint sight of a harbor, along with ships shuffling in.

"Whew... looks like we finally made it," Nida sighed.

"Nida! Nida!" Pleo exclaimed. "Look at all those ships in the harbor!"

"Huh?"

"Go, jū, jū-go, ni-jū...… Hey, wait a minute, there's almost as many ships as in Mossaisle down here!" Guardia exclaimed. "Why does a smaller town like this need so many?"

Nida blinked and peered off into the distance at the harbor. Although the vista was muddy for the Nidoran's eyes from that distance, she could see that there were indeed far more shapes in the harbor than back in Bluewhorl. But… it's not as if it would be that surprising, would it? The town seemed bigger when they came in...

"… I can't really see them from here, but it's not like there wouldn't ever be reasons for a lot of ships in a small harbor," Nida offered. "Maybe they're here for all those crystals we saw on the way over-?"

"Tch."

"Huh?" the Nidoran murmured. The Poison-Type looked down next to a colorful gambling hall with simple roulette wheels and card tables under a slate roof, where she saw a Floette and Dewpider duo prattling with each other as they passed below..

"I can't believe we have to walk all the way out to the edge of town for the new hangout," the Floette grumbled. "What was wrong with our old one by the seaside?"

"Eh, the captain had to use his share of the booty for something," the Dewpider countered. "Besides, you can't go wrong with a bit more space, right?"

"I dunno, I for one don't like being made to drag my share of the loot halfway across town just to be able to kick back and unwind," the Fairy-Type said, rolling his eyes.

"Eh?!"

Nida froze and a sinking feeling began to churn in her stomach. She suddenly realized why Orleigh had seemed so familiar to her: Valatos and his friends had marked it as a hangout on their map! With the conversation between the drunks back at the cluster of huts, the ships in the harbor, and with everything they'd seen from this town so far...

There was only one logical conclusion to be drawn.

"This entire town is a pirates' den!"



Author's Notes:

- laghairt - Irish: "lizard"
- Atamanov (Атаманов) - Russian: Plural of "Ataman", used here as title of a "clan leader/chieftain" (BGN/PCGN Romanization)
- Conas atá sibh - Irish: "How are you"
- Razbiram (Разбирам) - Bulgarian: "I understand" (BGN/PCGN Romanization)
- no es nada - Spanish: "it's nothing"
- Dość tego - Polish: "Knock it off!"
- Go, jū, jū-go, ni-jū... (五,十,十五,二十...) - Japanese: "Five, ten, fifteen, twenty..." (Hepburn Romanization)
 
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Posting this on TR even though this chapter won’t be here for two more years. :V

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-It’s hilarious to see Kiran lecturing about picking and choosing battles when the entirety of this fic has had very little picking and choosing of battles from his team. Hooray for broken Aesops!
-It’s been so long that I confess that I don’t remember Opdah whatsoever or what his previous interaction with Team Traveler was like. Might have wanted to slip in more of a reminder since Pleo brought it up anyway.
-Uh, myth references. Warriors of Light = Final Fantasy 1/3/5, Magical Kingdoms = Disney. Only one I’m not sure of is the Thousand Enemies. Forty Thieves, perhaps?
-Hi, Salvini. Bye, Salvini. I can’t imagine she’s being brought up here for no reason other than a reminder she exists. Something about her second and last chance leaves me feeling lie something bad will happen to her when Team Traveler is inevitably scrambling for the exit.
-I’m… not really sure what the point of the scene with Percy here really is. I liken it to when a TV show does a backdoor pilot for a spin-off series. That’s how it read to me. Kline and Percy discussing several “as you know” facts, except neither of them have had a tremendous amount of development (especially the latter), nor was there much in the way of foreshadowing and/or references in previous chapters to suggest this was a big enough deal for Percy to risk messing everything up for. I’m afraid it does come off a bit as padding for me. ^^;
-I said my piece on the coincidences stuff last time. Both bits with the goggles — which I didn’t even remember Pleo getting at this point — felt too coincidental for my liking. I’d overlook Zelle just so happening to show up at the academy, except I feel like she’s holding the Idiot Ball. I know the characters and narration try to hammer in this is some sort of gambit on her part, but it doesn’t feel that way when one would think she’d have the authority to find them out or at least would immediately go to Elilian and say they’re fraternizing with her daughter. And if it is a gambit, then it really seems silly Team Traveler isn’t hightailing it out of there as was suggested. I dunno, it just feels like this particular episode has a conclusion that needs to happen — probably the heroes getting captured by one or more parties — but the means of getting there don’t make the most sense.
 

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Hi Fobbie and Virgil. This is my side of a review exchange. I'll be covering chapters 26-32 here. Please be advised that I am using speech to text and as such there may be some weirdness that I missed when fixing the review up, so I apologize in advance.

In the Dark opens up with our protagonists needing a place to rest after their daring escape. This chapter more or less serves as a way to calm the tensions be before we get into the next misadventure. I think these moments of downtime work well for a story with this type of structure because its episodic format. It makes a lot of sense to have this moment of respite before we get into the meat of this arc.

This chapter also serves as the introduction to our good old ~~three stooges~~. They continue to be an antagonistic force that's dealt with throughout the entirety of this episode, so I'm going to discuss them in more detail later.

I keep going back and forth on whether it's a good thing or a bad thing that the characters are mistaken for pirates here. On one hand, it's an easy way to lay low in an area that's already got a bunch of pirates. On the other, it makes it a lot more palatable for the company to get away with claiming that they're pirates. They got a perfect excuse that they were seen hanging around in the pirate section of town. But you do the best you can to blend in when you have a baby god with you.

The scene checking back in with Lyn and Elsberg works well as a quick introduction to some of the company politics before we start properly getting into the weeds. It also serves as a good establishing spot for Elsburg getting pushed around by Lyn which will be relevant to his character arc later.

We also get Elty's first attempt at reuniting with his old crew here. Maybe if he had thought things out a little better it would have worked out for him. But nope. He just had to rack up a bill.

Moving on to chapter 27, the first half of this chapter mainly focuses on the aftermath of Lyn's failed attempt at catching Pleo, and it starts to foreshadow some things that become relevant a good ways down the line. It makes it very clear what Lyn's goals are, who his allies and enemies are in the Company, and how poorly things could go for him should he fail again.

Also, Ellian knows how to make an entrance. If they cared about superiors pushing around subordinates, disguising as a lower rank could make for an easy test.

The scene back with Crom is the start of a sequence of events that I will go over when we get to the resolution.

The remainder of this chapter mostly deals with Elty getting everyone in trouble. at the same time, I don't know what Nida expected. Elty hasn't been the worst person, but he's certainly made it pretty clear that he doesn't always make well-thought out decisions. His ideas tend to not work out the best, especially when they have to do with assumptions. That's how he gets into trouble here,all because he was so desperate to get back to his crew.

On chapter 28 now, I can talk about the situation regarding Crom. I am glad this misunderstanding sequence of events only lasted for two scenes. As a result, it did not end up feeling aggravating. I feel like if it had gone much longer I might have had an issue, but since it resolves quickly it feels like a form of dramatic irony..

I wish I could remember whether Team Taxonomy shows up later, but right now it's slipping my mind. Still, they are a fun quirky group and I feel like they could have some use further down the line. They have a lot of information and there are certain bits of information that the main characters are looking for later if I remember correctly. Whether any of that information would actually be useful though is a different matter entirely.

And now we get into the plans of the villain of the episode. Sure, there are other baddies around that could cause trouble, but our primary focus is on Valitos, Nori, and Alvise. I'll get into my thoughts about that more once I get to the next chapter and where they talk about their plans.

Several plot threads happen in chapter 29 and some of them are intermixed so I'm going to focus on them in a specific order.

I'll start with the Crom section. Part of it is just light-hearted fun like when we get to see a little bit of world building in a child's frightened reaction. The other half is our introduction to good old Captain Nugget. Of course, we don't know her role yet, but the amount of focus she gets makes it clear that this is an important scene. That said, I do feel a little bit like the description while describing her initial appearance is a little bit dense and makes the paragraph a little difficult to absorb as a result. I wonder if some of the details could have been spared until she actually approaches the group. Such as her scarf color, for example.

Next we get into the stooges and their plan. And I have to say it is actually quite cunning. They just overestimate themselves a little bit. It's that hubris that gets them in trouble, but the plan itself is well executed using a combination of prior knowledge and blackmail along with just general strategies of how things work around here to get things set up for what they want done. In a different type of story they might would have been a successful.

Finally let's talk about the main plot thread. I actually don't find myself having much to say about it. It's fairly straightforward; it shows a bit of world building about how Pokemon living in the mystery dungeons behave and ally with each other - at least here - and just progresses pretty normally.

Continuing to talk about the main plot thread into chapter 30, I feel like there is a lot of really neat world building in this section. A lot of lore about the Cubone colony is fleshed out here and in all honesty I could easily see it being something that was originally its own short story but was rolled into this. There's so much there that I'm honestly kind of surprised we don't see more of them. And it kind of makes sense as to why Guardia ends up joining there's so much already built around her. It's honestly pretty fun to see all these different little things. It's another one of those things that works well with your episode structure. If this was a more typical pmd story, I feel like this could have been a bit much. It would feel over focused. But because fledglings is already built around the episodic structure like a TV show it makes it feel just like the focus of the week.

Now back to the Crom section. I really like this follow-up on Margie to see how she's doing. I can't blame her for being afraid. I'd get out of there too. But I also love seeing how tight-knit the community is and how willing they are to help her out. I think one of the strengths of the marked is their sense of community. Sure it can be a weakness at times - it can make their groups feel very single-minded and almost cult-like at times - but on the other hand it's great to see them looking out for each other. I also like that the town - or at least the leader - tries to look out for them too. It's also a nice little character moment for Ander having him see all this and it makes some stuff that happens later hurt a little bit. But I'll talk about that whenever I eventually get to more recent material.

Moving on to chapter 31.

I don't have a lot to say. The majority of this chapter was the big fight scene which I would I suppose is the action climax of the episode. I tend to struggle to say things about fight scenes, but I did have a couple of stylistic notes that I wanted to point out

I noticed some prose that felt very slow for what was meant to be a fight scene. I think it might be some use of to be verbs, repetitive sentences, and adverbs that felt extraneous and slowed the action down. That's something you may want to look into if you do any further edits. If you want me to break it down further, give me a shout in a week or two when my hand is a bit better.

Comparatively chapter 32 is a little bit shorter I think. At least, it felt shorter. And I think that's because it only had a couple of scene breaks and I think that worked out well. It was more or less tying up the loose ends of the episode. We see the fallout of the fight and how are heroes are going to have to make a sneaky escape.

We see the consequences for the losers. They're lucky it doesn't get worse. I actually like that Nori is so freaked out. First of all it hints a little bit at his backstory. It also gives this vibe of a tight-knit community even when cubone and marowak leave.

Additionally, we get to find out more about Nagant and get our first look at the opposing faction to the Company - the Empire. Right now we've just gotten a brief introduction. I figure I'll have more to say later when they really start to get involved in the main plot.

A stray thought before I wrap up. Speaking as someone who has read later chapters, every interaction where Elty talks about relationships between townies and ferals hits differently on a reread. Can’t wait to get to that stuff. I do wonder if it could have been hinted at a tad more, though.

All in all, this was an enjoyable episode. It does a good job of fleshing out the world further, even though we only saw a small part of it. It also foreshadows some of the wrenches in the story later on, and sets up another faction with the appearance of Nagant. The worldbuilding was spot on and works well as a “story of the week.” It was an enjoyable read, and I look forward to going through another episode sometime in the (hopefully) near future. Until then.
 

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Chapter 66

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
"It's the same Empire that takes three days to send a letter across its own waters," Aldrich remarked. "Would you really expect their message to not get bogged down for some asinine reason?"
If there's one thing that's universal across worlds, it's complaining about the postal service taking too long. :P

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
The Kommo-o shook his head, about to brush the matter off when the Gliscor faltered a moment and the bag on his shoulder suddenly slipped and shook, with a brief glimpse of a rounded green head passing through the opening of a frontal pouch that made the dragon's eyes shoot wide open.
ohhh my god, just like that their cover is blown. xD It really is a small world.

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Aldrich swiftly flew up to the rooftops, slipping along the opposite side of the eaves as he caught up with the passing party where he turned his ears and heard a familiar, squeaky voice.

"Just hurry up!" Kline piped. "Once we're outside of town I can change Forme without attracting too much attention!"
Okay, I can't really give them too much flack for letting themselves be overheard, considering it's a Noivern doing the eavesdropping.

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Sorge paused and brought a claw to his chin in thought. On the one claw, not intercepting the messenger would likely mean that Ketu would have to fight his way back to Lyn's ship after capturing that Lugia. But on the other claw… they had managed dicier escapes before by working together, and if it would mean being able to finally bring Kline to Administrator Elilan on top of Pleo…
It has been decided, we will make life more difficult for Ketu (I'm ok with this lmao).

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
"I… suppose we need to know when we're beat," the Swellow sighed, prompting Pleo to turn to him wild-eyed with a frightened stammer.
Immediately suspicion that Kiran has some kind of gambit here.

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
"Why it's almost as pathetic as pretending to say goodbye to your teammate in order to rub up an Escape Orb."
ah shit. It really did seem like a good plan! Unfortunately Ketu is too genre savvy.

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Kiran took wing and flew after the Escape Orb, only for it to suddenly take on a purplish glow and be flung off towards the lava, a quick glance back revealing that Ellsberg had cast it aside with Psychic. The orb struck the surface of the lava, failing to shatter as it deformed and the light within abruptly dissipated, the sphere melting into a lump of glassy slag much to Team Traveller's horror.
Ah geez. It's pretty easy to forget that Ellsberg actually has a decent array of tricks. Their follow up combo attacks are pretty brutal, and the two really do make a good team now that they're finally on the same page. Also, I have just realized that almost all of the protags are weak to ice here. Ack. Uhh... go Elty?

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Nida watched as Ellsberg got blown back and struggled to stay airborne. Sensing an open opportunity to attack, the Nidoran dashed forward as poison began to dribble along her forearms. She leapt up at Ellsberg as he finally stopped himself, throwing her right arm back for a Poison Jab to the Mothim's head, only to feel her body abruptly jolt and stop in midair, and see Ellsberg looking at her with an outstretched arm and his eyes lit up in a violet sheen.
Man, Ellsberg having such a strong Psychic makes him hard to fight. He's honeslty as hard an opponent as Ketu! He really could stand to throw his weight around some more...

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
The Weavile's budding attack was cut off by a green, dog-like Pokémon suddenly lunging in and tackling him to the ground. The strange dog cracked open a maw lined with sharp fangs, throwing it at Ketu's neck as the Weavile hastily threw his claws up to try and fight the strange creature's jaws. Up in the air, Ellsberg stared stunned as his teammate thrashed about on the ground below, recoiling in shock at the strange intruder.
Eyy, Zygarde is here! Although, another 4x Ice weakness might not be the biggest help! (I know his team isn't too far behind lol).

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Ketu looked around, realizing that Ellsberg was sprawled out on the ground between the groups Team Traveller and their new allies had divided into, with the lot of them shooting harsh, newly invigorated glares at him. The Weavile set his teeth on edge and scowled back as his freshly disadvantaged circumstances settled in on him. Sensing that their foe had met his match, a smug smirk settled over Guardia's face, as she gave a rap of her club against an open palm.
Always nice to see Ketu knocked off his high horse a little ;P (though I'm sure he still has more tricks in store).

Nice job Alice with that quick Embargo!

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Crom set his teeth on edge at the Weavile's taunt, his yellow eyes burning with hate as he flashed his claws with a fierce roar from his young throat.

"Cállate!"
I remember just enough from spanish class for this to be incredibly satisfying lmao

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
At once, Pleo stammered and shrank back frightenedly. These were Rescue Team members, so why were they helping Pokémon from the Company?!
It's everyone's weakness! Empire-Company collusion!

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Kline's body hit the ground limply, green light enveloping him as little orbs of light shot away from his body through the fog, shrinking his body down into an amorphous mass until all that remained was the now-unconscious form of the tiny serpent that Team Traveller had encountered the day before.
Aha, I guess that answers my question of if he needs to gather nearby cells in order to maintain that form.

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
The Lugia got up, beating his wings together determinedly as he felt newfound vigor from the wishing voices as light suddenly erupted along his plates, bathing the chamber in a silvery glow that caught everyone's attention.
It's a classic trope, but "divine beings literally strengthened by the hopes of their people" always gets me. Shame it got shut down so easily though. I wanted to see pleo smash! :screm:

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
"You hut-dwellers have got some nerve to just barge in here like-!"

… only for the group to just push the feral aside and keep running, prompting the lizard to get up in spluttering surprise before snarling and giving chase.
I love how they just have absolutely no time to deal with her, there are more important concerns. xD

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
Zelle readied another Shadow Ball to lob at the stricken falcon, turning her eyes away from the rest of the fleeing party. Sensing an opportunity at paw, Nida dashed up, driving her paw hard into the Sylveon's chest with a Poison Jab.
Eyy, finally Nida gets to land a good hit with her newest move, and on the target most weak to it, too. (And the most annoying target lol)

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
"The Company with Zygarde?" Ander shuddered. "How could this have become any more of a disaster?"

"I wouldn't be too worried about it," Alice insisted. "Things aren't as bad as they look."

"H-Huh?! How can you say that?!" Pleo squawked. "The Company stole your friend! And now they're gonna try to keep him away from everyone!"

"For crying out loud, I'm right here!"
The company with TWO zygarde, thus being able to achieve 100% completion. :unquag:

Nah, but seriously, kudos to Kline on the bait-and-switch, that was clever. Genuinely unsure how he managed to pull it off!

“Spiteful Murkrow” said:
"You should save your strength while you can," the Weavile jeered. "Sorge already handed over your stuff to the guards and tipped them off about you, so you'll probably need it if you don't want a one-way trip to the Wastes."
lmao of course a deal with them would go south. As if there was any doubt.

Spiteful Murkrow said:
"We noticed you going through town with that bird earlier," he barked. "We've got some questions for you about him, and you're going to answer them."

The gathered Pokémon tensed up, as a sinking suspicion of what the questions would be about came upon them. Even so, for now, it was perhaps for the best to just play along…
Juuust when it seemed like they'd get out without trouble for once. xD

But in all seriousness, this was a decent step forward for Team Traveller! Escaped capture and got some pretty significant new allies! Here's hoping that having Kline on their side ends up helping them make headway from here on out.
 

K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
Alright, preferences noted.

Here we go then.... Fledglings chapter 2, fo the review tag progression...



I like how you thread the storm which was the main action of the last chapter, beyond intros/some setting establishment, so neatly in the beginning of the chapter. torm, muddy paths, which slow down a small bouncy protagonist. It all fits well and you tie it well into the buildup the setting as Nida runs along.

Since you've established the cast are 'mon I think you could drop the part where she's saying she had to dodge mon, the footsteps and large forms really couldn't be anything else, right?

Seriously Calino is very annoying. I'm not feeling for him much.

I'm surprised she didn't waggle her legs ass she was entering, doing a hopping wiggle heavy clean up with every step, or on the "welcome" mat as it were. On a sliding scale of consideration/manners, cleaning while on route towards the others might have been ok, and given some interactions between Nida and a few of the other clan members.

Doing it in front of her leader/mentor smacks of a certain lack of forethought or respect, something I don't think is deliberate but it's something I noted.

I think if Kiran said no there'd of been sulky Nida up his tail feathers... a screaming sulky Nida, she's not biting at the bit she's chewed through it and going to go solo at some point.

I'd be more worried about the apples being pureed. With the weather changes possibly being reflected in the dungeon... or perhaps as apple juice...

It's been hinted the changes in the dungeon bled out beyond it;s borders and considering the effects of rain/monsoon in the wrong clime it's not unreasonable to assume everything flooded and shook up inside and apples... well they are only fruit after all...

I wonder at Scot and Crom's minor friction, sounds like there's a side story there a bit more than personality conflict...

And Nida's playing the guilt card... and it's super effective...

I know you like using 'mon names, but beyond bird, or very base descriptions (squirrelly for the sentret for example) you tend to avoid going too in-depth. When Crom "adopts" a bit of a "pleading expression" what does that look like. The tip of his snout, his dark eyes going wet, it's a good way to elaborate on the physical aspects of the cast.

How does arachnophobia work in the 'mon verse... would it be prejudice against bug types... anyways Crom appears to have a problem.


"Eeek!"

The Spinarak promptly flew into a state of panic at the sight of the swift-winged bird before him.

"Monster! Monster!"
Alright, so I'm guessing mind that the "eek" and the "monster" is the spinarak.

It's a bit confusing because Croms already having a bit of a fit before this point. Because the scream has no descriptive tag at the end saying who was doing what and you launch into the description of the Spin' (sorry my auto correct hate ALL the names) freaking out, then you have him screaming monster... It's where I got lost.

Wasn't long, or deep, but this was a bit of a trouble spot.

As a suggestion, you could either indicate who was screaming by saying who did it, drop the scream, or just say in the descriptive text that the Spin was screaming in panic...(and it might be a better fit than his "flight of panic" considering a bird's scaring the whey out of him) Any of these would help clear things up.

And thus we are introduced to the complicated morals of... hey they look just like us and act sorta like us and can talk.. .but we call them ferals. Not to the depth I'd of appreciated but I'm hoping it'll be a returning theme...

anima of foreshadowing I see. I'm curious how the art form what seems the trailer art of the human-centric trainer verse popped up in the dungeon verse... but I'll leave that wondering at the back door and call it a shout-out.

Kiran is such a soccer mom.. I can see him gently nudging packs open and doing inventories, slowly, "just to be sure", right before they go anywhere. Even out supply running in town.

And I can imagine Nida's screams, internal and external because she wants to GO already.

I'm both amused because Crom is so counting his chickens before they hatch and amused by the hunch that there are going to be flying apples, perhaps at Kirin, for "aiming practice" at some point soon.

It's interesting how you're easing into the game mechanics and tying them practically to the moment.
How do you decide what goes in and what doesn't?

I kinda can't imagine Crom throwing a fit and bucking her in the mist as a no. Or flat out refusing her really. Seems too dangerous and reckless/thoughtless to be in his character. Maybe the first dungeon in when neither of them had thought of the idea but after... I can't see him being in that type of mood..

The only "fun" dungeons that are "fun/deadly" on the first floor are the end-game ones. So no worries here, yet.

Oh come on guys, someone throw a rock up and see if gravity reverses on its way up making it "land" on the floor above. Play with the physics of the impossibility before you move on... Once you rehinge your jaws that is.

I think I would be very dead if mystery dungeons were a thing...

Poor Nida she's going to get seawater up the nose if she has to snuff too hard for apples. Though I'm surprised that Kirin isn't getting as much altitude as possible to give them a better ariel view... I remember that in canon/game the dungeons were mainly halls/tunnels but your description is a mite vague about what up looks like (besides something not out of alien geometrics) and with a bird on the team that feels a little... off?

Ah salty apple juice in the making, does it count towards their count if it's been.. processed?

If something grabbed crom's wings wouldn't he have pitched to the side? Grabbing his neck, nose, chest would haul him forwards but aren't his wings over his shoulder? Now if he tripped in response to the grab but he was dog paddling his way out... It's not a big quibble but I did stop to think it over. Perhaps overmuch.

I thought they were all on the water's edge just watching Crom swim out... and I'm surprised the Krab isn't punching with its weaker claw if there's nothing else to smack Crom with... Granted that might be a bit too slapstick. Can't blame them for their hostility, how'd you feel if someone just swam through the roof of your house and kicked up all the silt/disturbed the houseplants/kelp or clonked you with a giant foot/paw while they were moseying around above your head?

I'm seeing Nida at least making more time at the firing range considering a)lack of quills is really bad b) lack of aim is infinitely worse.

instead of the whole singularity barb I'd recommend simplifying that section a little. It's an action scene at this point and the longer sentence length seems in contrast with the small quick actions that encompass a fight.

huh, so that's how a bubble feels, nice description of the attacks and why something so simple could be a problem.

At least it didn't land in the water. Though I suppose it'd of been funnier if he really missed and clonked Nida's assailant with the bad. probably instant KO that.

Why did the guild not offer compartments for their bags so you can put the rocks in one spot and not have to sift through the apples, though if things are tight enough why not throw an apple?

With her paw being pinched and the dragging, I'm surprised she kicked I'd think a scratch/fury swipes would be more fitting. Or tackle, get your catharsis/licks where you can I guess...

I don't know if you've seen "uncle" from the old series Jackie chan adventures but he has a common smack animation, sort of a pointed dope slap, I'm imagining that's how Kirin's last attack went down...

I like the attention to detail for how healing works in this fic.

IN which Nida pulls another roundabout guilt trip.. do you really want to muck here another day when there's so much to do outside? She's benignly sneaky like that.

Since she already realizes it's a trap, the floor pattern, the click, etc, I think her calling out "trap" seems a bit over the top, we're shown it's a trap and it's going off... You could very easily just let it go off.

Anywho that was my reaction line by line, hope it helps and that you enjoy it. Thanks for sharing.
 

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
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Heya, opening up with a set of review responses. If you’re not seeing yours replied to here, never fear. It just means we’re replying to it on Serebii where your feedback is a bit more current with the posted content. ^^

@windskull
In the Dark opens up with our protagonists needing a place to rest after their daring escape. This chapter more or less serves as a way to calm the tensions be before we get into the next misadventure. I think these moments of downtime work well for a story with this type of structure because its episodic format. It makes a lot of sense to have this moment of respite before we get into the meat of this arc.

Yeah, part of being a story where you’re jumping locations on a regular basis is that you need to show off where you came to to some extent. Granted, that occasionally gets in the way of making things as taut as they could be, but hey. We have fun letting our inner worldbuilders go wild, and the format lends itself well to it.

I keep going back and forth on whether it's a good thing or a bad thing that the characters are mistaken for pirates here. On one hand, it's an easy way to lay low in an area that's already got a bunch of pirates. On the other, it makes it a lot more palatable for the company to get away with claiming that they're pirates. They got a perfect excuse that they were seen hanging around in the pirate section of town. But you do the best you can to blend in when you have a baby god with you.

Also having one of your teammates steer you towards there in bad faith “helps” a bit with that.

The scene checking back in with Lyn and Elsberg works well as a quick introduction to some of the company politics before we start properly getting into the weeds. It also serves as a good establishing spot for Elsburg getting pushed around by Lyn which will be relevant to his character arc later.

Yeah, while not everything in this story was pre-planned, there was a lot in these earlier chapters that wound up becoming the foundation to stuff we went with later on.

We also get Elty's first attempt at reuniting with his old crew here. Maybe if he had thought things out a little better it would have worked out for him. But nope. He just had to rack up a bill.

I mean, not to be mean to the pupper, but a lot of pirates aren’t a terribly bright bunch. Otherwise they’d be in a profession with better life prospects.
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Moving on to chapter 27, the first half of this chapter mainly focuses on the aftermath of Lyn's failed attempt at catching Pleo, and it starts to foreshadow some things that become relevant a good ways down the line. It makes it very clear what Lyn's goals are, who his allies and enemies are in the Company, and how poorly things could go for him should he fail again.

We’re glad those caught your eye, since yeah. Even if Fledglings is a bit of a slow-burner, we do try to work our way up to those sorts of build-ups.

Also, Ellian knows how to make an entrance. If they cared about superiors pushing around subordinates, disguising as a lower rank could make for an easy test.

Fortunately for Lyn, that’s not that big of a priority. After all, the Company might have some faces in it that are sympathetic, but the overall organization is very much intended not to be, and that reflects in its internal culture.

The remainder of this chapter mostly deals with Elty getting everyone in trouble. at the same time, I don't know what Nida expected. Elty hasn't been the worst person, but he's certainly made it pretty clear that he doesn't always make well-thought out decisions. His ideas tend to not work out the best, especially when they have to do with assumptions. That's how he gets into trouble here,all because he was so desperate to get back to his crew.

To be fair, she’s known him for all of two weeks, so she hasn’t gotten that firm a bead on his weaknesses with planning. :V

On chapter 28 now, I can talk about the situation regarding Crom. I am glad this misunderstanding sequence of events only lasted for two scenes. As a result, it did not end up feeling aggravating. I feel like if it had gone much longer I might have had an issue, but since it resolves quickly it feels like a form of dramatic irony..

Yeah, part of that was from us not wanting the sequence with Maranda to drag on too much, but glad to hear it worked out.

Next we get into the stooges and their plan. And I have to say it is actually quite cunning. They just overestimate themselves a little bit. It's that hubris that gets them in trouble, but the plan itself is well executed using a combination of prior knowledge and blackmail along with just general strategies of how things work around here to get things set up for what they want done. In a different type of story they might would have been a successful.

I’d think they’d also need a bit more competence to boot. Since while those three have flashes of brilliance at time… yeah, they have a habit of tripping up over themselves.
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Continuing to talk about the main plot thread into chapter 30, I feel like there is a lot of really neat world building in this section. A lot of lore about the Cubone colony is fleshed out here and in all honesty I could easily see it being something that was originally its own short story but was rolled into this. There's so much there that I'm honestly kind of surprised we don't see more of them. And it kind of makes sense as to why Guardia ends up joining there's so much already built around her. It's honestly pretty fun to see all these different little things. It's another one of those things that works well with your episode structure. If this was a more typical pmd story, I feel like this could have been a bit much. It would feel over focused. But because fledglings is already built around the episodic structure like a TV show it makes it feel just like the focus of the week.

I mean, it was genuinely fun to build that out. And the general structure of Guardia’s colony is something that I’d like to do more with in the future. I dunno if it’ll be within a story set in the Cradle (even if it wouldn’t hurt to write another gaiden story or two down the road), but it’s definitely a plot bunny that I’ve been holding onto.

Now back to the Crom section. I really like this follow-up on Margie to see how she's doing. I can't blame her for being afraid. I'd get out of there too. But I also love seeing how tight-knit the community is and how willing they are to help her out. I think one of the strengths of the marked is their sense of community. Sure it can be a weakness at times - it can make their groups feel very single-minded and almost cult-like at times - but on the other hand it's great to see them looking out for each other. I also like that the town - or at least the leader - tries to look out for them too. It's also a nice little character moment for Ander having him see all this and it makes some stuff that happens later hurt a little bit. But I'll talk about that whenever I eventually get to more recent material.

Yeah, it just felt like something that would be logical for a social outgroup. When you’re used to not having many friends, you go the extra mile for the ones you do have to work with.

I don't have a lot to say. The majority of this chapter was the big fight scene which I would I suppose is the action climax of the episode. I tend to struggle to say things about fight scenes, but I did have a couple of stylistic notes that I wanted to point out

I noticed some prose that felt very slow for what was meant to be a fight scene. I think it might be some use of to be verbs, repetitive sentences, and adverbs that felt extraneous and slowed the action down. That's something you may want to look into if you do any further edits. If you want me to break it down further, give me a shout in a week or two when my hand is a bit better.

We’ll take you up on that, actually. Feel free to shoot us a DM or the like giving a more thorough breakdown of these issues you saw. Since it sounds like it wouldn’t take that much to tighten things up further, and probably be worth it.

We see the consequences for the losers. They're lucky it doesn't get worse. I actually like that Nori is so freaked out. First of all it hints a little bit at his backstory. It also gives this vibe of a tight-knit community even when cubone and marowak leave.

Yeeeah, those three are really fortunate they live in a more lighthearted setting. And it just seems like it’d make sense that some Pokémon that leave behind a lifestyle in the wilds would still have lingering connections out there that they’d value. Whether in this world or another.

A stray thought before I wrap up. Speaking as someone who has read later chapters, every interaction where Elty talks about relationships between townies and ferals hits differently on a reread. Can’t wait to get to that stuff. I do wonder if it could have been hinted at a tad more, though.

If you see points where you feel it might have made sense to drop in an extra hint here or there, feel free to point them out. After all, part of the reason why this story is being syndicated on TR is to help tighten up some things we noticed about the earlier story that were a little wobbly.

All in all, this was an enjoyable episode. It does a good job of fleshing out the world further, even though we only saw a small part of it. It also foreshadows some of the wrenches in the story later on, and sets up another faction with the appearance of Nagant. The worldbuilding was spot on and works well as a “story of the week.” It was an enjoyable read, and I look forward to going through another episode sometime in the (hopefully) near future. Until then.

We’re glad to hear you had fun with it! And we’re looking forward to getting your feedback again in the future.
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@K_S
Admittedly, it was a little hard for me to follow some bits of your review without seeing quotes of the bits they were referring to, but I’ll try and throw in some responses here. With some more via PMs if you wish to talk further.

I like how you thread the storm which was the main action of the last chapter, beyond intros/some setting establishment, so neatly in the beginning of the chapter. torm, muddy paths, which slow down a small bouncy protagonist. It all fits well and you tie it well into the buildup the setting as Nida runs along.

Glad to hear the setting effects worked so well for you there.

Seriously Calino is very annoying. I'm not feeling for him much.

Are you telling me miserly shopkeeps aren’t endearing?
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I'm surprised she didn't waggle her legs ass she was entering, doing a hopping wiggle heavy clean up with every step, or on the "welcome" mat as it were. On a sliding scale of consideration/manners, cleaning while on route towards the others might have been ok, and given some interactions between Nida and a few of the other clan members.

Doing it in front of her leader/mentor smacks of a certain lack of forethought or respect, something I don't think is deliberate but it's something I noted.

It wasn’t conscious, but neither Nida or Kiran would really look at things this way anyway.

It's been hinted the changes in the dungeon bled out beyond it;s borders and considering the effects of rain/monsoon in the wrong clime it's not unreasonable to assume everything flooded and shook up inside and apples... well they are only fruit after all…

Fortunately, Mystery Dungeons are a bit of a weird space, so that helped dampen and undo those effects a bit.

How does arachnophobia work in the 'mon verse... would it be prejudice against bug types... anyways Crom appears to have a problem.

He was more caught off-guard by a surprise hostile Pokémon behind him.

As a suggestion, you could either indicate who was screaming by saying who did it, drop the scream, or just say in the descriptive text that the Spin was screaming in panic...(and it might be a better fit than his "flight of panic" considering a bird's scaring the whey out of him) Any of these would help clear things up.

We’ll give it another look, though we didn’t recall that part being particularly ambiguous.

And thus we are introduced to the complicated morals of... hey they look just like us and act sorta like us and can talk.. .but we call them ferals. Not to the depth I'd of appreciated but I'm hoping it'll be a returning theme…

It is an on-and-off recurring theme, yes. Ferals in this setting are just as sapient as townies. They just choose to live in a very different fashion than their townie counterparts.

Kiran is such a soccer mom.. I can see him gently nudging packs open and doing inventories, slowly, "just to be sure", right before they go anywhere. Even out supply running in town.

Soccer coach, good sir. :V

It's interesting how you're easing into the game mechanics and tying them practically to the moment.
How do you decide what goes in and what doesn't?

Whatever makes for a good story, of course. ^^

I kinda can't imagine Crom throwing a fit and bucking her in the mist as a no. Or flat out refusing her really. Seems too dangerous and reckless/thoughtless to be in his character. Maybe the first dungeon in when neither of them had thought of the idea but after... I can't see him being in that type of mood..

I’m… admittedly not sure how that sentiment came through, since there wasn’t any acknowledgement of Nida potentially having problems holding onto Crom. And I thought we did a pretty good job of establishing by that part of the story that Crom and Nida’s relationship is such that he’d literally never think of deliberately throwing her off of him, so…

Oh come on guys, someone throw a rock up and see if gravity reverses on its way up making it "land" on the floor above. Play with the physics of the impossibility before you move on... Once you rehinge your jaws that is.

Bold of you to assume they can throw that far. But yeah. Trippy scenery is trippy scenery. :V

If something grabbed crom's wings wouldn't he have pitched to the side? Grabbing his neck, nose, chest would haul him forwards but aren't his wings over his shoulder? Now if he tripped in response to the grab but he was dog paddling his way out... It's not a big quibble but I did stop to think it over. Perhaps overmuch.

I think the idea was more that he jerked forward by reflex. We’ll give the section in question a second look though.

I thought they were all on the water's edge just watching Crom swim out... and I'm surprised the Krab isn't punching with its weaker claw if there's nothing else to smack Crom with... Granted that might be a bit too slapstick. Can't blame them for their hostility, how'd you feel if someone just swam through the roof of your house and kicked up all the silt/disturbed the houseplants/kelp or clonked you with a giant foot/paw while they were moseying around above your head?

Such is the nature of random encounters. ^^;

huh, so that's how a bubble feels, nice description of the attacks and why something so simple could be a problem.

Yeah, it’d be pretty lame and non-threatening if they just felt like big soap bubbles bursting against you.

Anywho that was my reaction line by line, hope it helps and that you enjoy it. Thanks for sharing.

And thanks for the review! Though admittedly, it might be a bit easier to decipher your thoughts if there were more context provided by quoteblocks in the future. ^^

We’re a bit late this time around thanks to a bit of meta chaos with scheduling, but we’re finally here with the next chapter of Fledglings, picking up right where we left off of on that bluff overlooking Rosequartz Town:
 
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Chapter 45: Do-Gooders

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
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  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
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"Eh?! This entire town is a pirates' den!"

As Nida's squeaks lingered in the air, the Nidoran looked back at her teammates, and saw that Pleo and Guardia's faces were etched with the same blank, helpless expression that she had when the realization of everything had set in. They had left that death-trap of a dungeon, only to stumble across a haunt of thieves instead of the restful shelter they had expected. Their last stint with such a hive in Andaku was already bad enough… would they be able to deal with an entire town like that horrid port district?

The Nidoran stared ahead blankly for a moment, realizing that she and her team were on their last legs, and they would be in far worse shape to fend off an ambush. Then there was only one seemingly rational thing to do…

"We need to get out of here," Nida muttered. "There's no way that we'd be able to-"

The Nidoran chanced to move her eyes over towards Elty, and saw that the Fire-type wore an excited grin. A wave of shock crested onto Nida, which Pleo and Guardia quickly picked up on and similarly drew their attention to their canine teammate. The Growlithe's expression quickly melted away into nervous unease after finding himself in the crosshairs of piercing glares.

"Er… why are you looking at me like that?" he gulped.

"You knew about this?!" Nida exclaimed.

"Now h-hold on," Elty stammered, starting to backpedal nervously. "Let's talk this-! Ack!"

The dog was cut off by a tackle from the team's Nidoran leader, sending him tumbling to the ground. Elty yelped as he felt a sharp pinch of his left ear, and stumbled along as the blue rabbit dragged him along into a bush. After the town slipped from sight under the cover of a layer of undergrowth, the Fire-Type felt the grip on his ear release, and wrenched his head away with a vigorous shake and a paw at his now-throbbing ear.

"Agh! Yeesh!" he snapped. "What is your problem?!"

"What is our problem?!" Nida hissed. "You were going to lead us into a town full of pirates! What in your right mind made you think that that was okay?!"

"Because this is where all my friends are?" the Growlithe harrumphed. "Honestly, I held up my end of the deal and kept you in one piece this far. Now I'm back. Why shouldn't I head off?"

"S-So you're just going to leave us?!" Pleo cried. "We don't know anything about this place!"

Elty crouched and pinned his ears back with a sharp scowl. He ought to have spat out "Of course I am" in reply, but his words were caught in his throat as he tried to speak. While it was true that he wanted nothing more than to finally return home after this giant mess he'd gotten himself into, he found at least some small part of him doubtful. When he imagined leaving his team in the dust here, he felt… bad. Even if his new companions grated on his nerves sometimes, could he really do that to them?

"It's- It's not like you can't find some other way back in town," he began begrudgingly. "You could join a crew, and-"

The Growlithe trailed off, seeing that his suggestion was drawing nothing other than angry glares and scowls. The Fire-Type cleared his throat, hoping to try and change the subject, only for Guardia to stomp over with her claws balled up into fists.

"I oughta replace my club with one of your bones right here and now!" she snarled. Elty saw no reason to dismiss Guardia's threat as empty or exaggerated. Growling, he hopped back, lowering himself into a battle-ready stance.

"Well excuse me if I'm trying to give you tips!" Elty spat. "If you're going to be like that I'll take my bag back and head off and we can pretend that we never met each other!"

Nida's eyes narrowed, the Nidoran gritting her teeth and twisting her face into a challenging scowl.

"No."

"Say what?" Elty demanded. The dog crept forward and lunged for the bag, only to spring and pounce on air as Nida hopped back and yank the satchel safely away.

"This bag is staying with us," the Nidoran snapped. "If you want it so bad, you can suck it up and stay on the team until we're home."

"But- But I've had that since I got my first scarf!" Elty yelped. "You- You can't just walk off with that like it's some cheap trinket!"

"I can do it as easily as you can leave us behind right here," the Poison-Type hissed. "If you want to try and fight us for it, I'll remind you that we've beaten the tar out of you just fine in the past. So what's it going to be, Elty?"

Elty paused and poked his head out of the bush to look at the town in the distance, before turning his attention back to the singed bag on Nida's shoulder. The Growlithe's expression drooped even further, before he finally offered up a response.

"… I'll stay?"

"Could you say that again?" Nida asked. "I didn't hear you."

"Grr… I'll stay," the Growlithe spat. "For now."

"Great. Then let's hurry up and get out of here," Nida grumbled. "Pleo, is your wing feeling any better?"

The Lugia looked down at his bandaged wing, giving a skeptical tilt of his head. It had been a few days… perhaps it had healed by now? In response, Pleo gave an experimental beat of his wings, only to wince harshly and draw his wing back with a pained whimper.

"A-Ack!"

"It's alright! It's alright!" Nida reassured. "We can think of some other way-!"

"How, spike ball?" Guardia demanded. "Even if I had a club right now, if we tried to swim off this island, we'd be easy pickings for any 'mon out in the water who wanted us."

Nida's ears drooped and her expression started to sink at the ex-feral's words. As much as she hated to admit it, the Cubone had raised a good point. Cyanea and Katyusha were both creatures of the sea and both were looking for them. Lyn and his entire crew moved aboard the sea on their ship, and so did the pirates in the port below. If Pleo could still fly, they had some chance of outmaneuvering them, but trying to outrun them on the sea surface…?

It was an impossible task, one that Elty was all too aware of as a smug grin began to creep over his muzzle. After all, if escape right now wasn't a feasible option…

"Looks like we're going into town after all," he crowed.

Nida, Guardia and Pleo shared an apprehensive glance at one another. To spend the night in a den of thieves was almost as bad as roughing it in a dungeon! It was far from an ideal solution, about as far from ideal as Nida could think of, but… did they really have a choice?

"Fine, we'll look for a hostel to lie low in," Nida growled. "But the bag is still staying with me, and don't you forget that!"

"Hrmph, whatever."

Elty and his teammates traded lingering glares with one another. After a pause, the Nidoran set off down the path, followed by the rest of Team Traveller as they began the descent into the foreboding stony town below.



Elsewhere in Rosequartz Town, Rodion led Hess and the rest of the Iron Fleet along a back alley, ending a five minute-long trek from the docks in front of a skeletal, half-completed building with a thatched roof. It was an unsatisfying structure, located on an unsatisfying plot of land that was unsatisfyingly far from the docks to be convenient, and not nearly mountainous enough to truly make its owner feel at home.

"Well, we're back," the Floatzel said.

But even so, it was still the home of the Iron Fleet. The crew's first mate pushed the door open, leading a batch of impatient pirates into a rounded space lined with still-scaffolded walls. There were mats spread out for the crew to sleep on one end, a central area lined with tables next to a small rock garden, and steps down to a padlocked - if ever-bare - basement that was guarded by a dutiful Watchog.

"Omigosh! We have a base?!" a Hoppip with a still-fresh Iron Fleet scarf exclaimed, giddily flitting to and fro. "Just look at this place! There's card tables, and a rock garden, and-!"

"Oh for crying out loud, it's not that great!" Hess spat. "It's still under construction!"

The Aggron buried his head into an open claw, giving it a bitter shake. In normal times, a return to the Iron Fleet's perennially half-completed base would have been welcoming, but after the recent series of debacles, the half-finished walls and unmanned construction scaffolding were cold comfort to the Steel-Type's conviction that fame and fortune were just over the horizon.

"Urgh… I need a drink," he muttered. At once, the eyes of his underlings lit up, and excited chatter floated about the space under the high thatched roof.

"Alright! Now you're speaking my language!" a Litten cheered.

"Just the thing we needed to come back from after a hard mission like that!" a Cherrim added.

Hess firmly pinched his brow. A damaged ship, an incomplete base, and underlings who cared more about their next swig of rum than actually maintaining their public image. Just the thing he needed to really drive home the feelings of complete and utter incompetence he'd felt as of late…

"Urgh… Claire, get a keg from the vault," Hess groaned, gesturing towards a crude bar fashioned from wooden planks. "I'll be at my usual spot."

There, a waiting yellow-feathered bird with puffy plumes at her wingtips gave a firm salute and headed off to the padlock on the basement door. Hess turned and shuffled off in search of his seat as the Oricorio carried on, followed by some more impatient underlings in their search for a keg of rum. Elsewhere, other pirates had taken seats under the thatched roof, whiling away their time with idle chatter and card games with each other.

The Aggron carried along for his favorite seat perched right beside the rock garden, only for Valatos to swoop in with a buzzing blur settle down right on his seat. Hess' blood boiled, and the Aggron stomped along, ready to paste the Yanmega into the wall for stealing his spot. The Steel-Type neared, only for the bug's Manectric friend to come and claim the seat beside him, followed shortly thereafter by his Marowak partner.

Hess froze, his yearning for his seat having ebbed away when he realized that the only way to get it would be to fight through that bone-headed monster with them, a fight that past run-ins with his kind indicated would only end in a good deal of excruciating agony. The Aggron moved along, his tail pulled tight against his legs as the crew's Ledian head flier passed by with a taunting smirk.

"Looks like I picked a real winner, didn't I?" Kichiro asked smugly. Hess glared and growled back at the Ledian, before coming to a stop at another table in a more secluded corner. The Aggron slumped onto one of the stump-stools and pinched his brow with a deflated sigh, only to feel a shorter creature pawing at his shoulder.

"Mind if I take a seat, Captain?"

Hess looked down, and saw that beside him, his Floatzel first mate was waiting. A hint of concern seemed to flicker over the mustelid's face, which prompted Hess to accept his partner's request.

"Go ahead, Rodion," the Steel-Type sighed.

"Why the long face? I mean, we've had some obvious… difficulties in the past few weeks with ship damage and an unwanted run-in or two, but the crew's the most motivated I've seen in years!" the Floatzel reassured. "Sure, we left in rougher shape than we ought to have, but our raid on Tromba still got us one of our biggest hauls to date, and we even got to have the last laugh over that crew that gave us the slip in Andaku."

"Rodion, I came out of Andaku in debt and didn't even get to use my share of the loot on anything for myself," Hess grumbled back. "We're still operating at a net loss of deck hands, and that thing that Kichiro stuck me with doesn't make things any better!"

Hess hung his head and slumped them into his arms on the table, giving a grumbling sigh as his mind turned to ever more negative assessments of his current situation.

"There's not a whole lot of ways that things could be worse right now," the Aggron grunted.

"Oi!" a voice from the front called. "Is Hess here?"

"Huh?"

The Aggron looked back at the door to the Iron Fleet's hangout, where a Conkeldurr was waiting. The creature carried a stern, serious expression, much as a bouncer or a loan shark would.

"I've got a summons from the Council for him," the Fighting-Type said. "They say they need to see him in person."

Hess froze. The Council wanted him? The four head pirates who dictated the workings of Rosequartz Town? Among the locals, a summons before the Council was sometimes a sign of great fortune, meaning that they had found favor with a particularly promising captain and wished to reward or start up a collaboration.

The other reason was that the Council wished to punish a captain that had fallen afoul of them. There were any number of fates that could befall such an unlucky soul, many of which Hess had heard of in whispers and dreadful rumors. And the Aggron knew all too well which of the two reasons the council most likely had for calling him.

"Ulp…" he squeaked. "Me and my big mouth."



"Hup!"

Out on the path leading to Mengir's shrine, the four Pokémon from the Siglo Swellow had been following the trail up deeper and deeper into the woods. Along the way, Crom had been gliding between trees, coming to a perch on their sturdier branches much as he had just a few moments ago. The Druddigon leapt and sailed back down towards the ground, giving a cheery beat of his wings and attracting a scolding chirp from his Swellow team captain.

"Tsk. You ought to be more mindful of your surroundings, Crom," Kiran admonished. "You're 100% more likely to disturb someone's home by clambering up stuff willy-nilly like that."

"Eh? But I haven't seen a mailbox in the last fifteen minutes!" the little Druddigon mentioned. "I don't think any Pokémon from town live here."

The other Pokémon looked around their surroundings and blinked. Now that Crom had mentioned it, it had been a while since they saw a mailbox, the telltale marker of a town-dweller living in the fringes. Was there something special about the path that they were traveling?

"That's strange," Ander murmured. "There's usually still places claimed this far out back home…"

"Maybe it has something to do with the Protector the town has?" Pladur mulled.

"Hrm?" Kiran chirped. "What makes you say that, Pladur?"

"Well, back home, our Protector is a sea god, and our town's main square is right by the sea," the Fraxure answered. "Here, the square is inland. Maybe whatever the local Protector is influenced the way they built their town?"

Ander paused his steady stride to prod at a bit of something on the trail, scowling slightly at whatever was at the tip of his blade. The others gathered around to inspect his find, only to stumble back in shock as they were able to see it: a smooth, brightly-colored fragment of some small shell.

"A-Ander, that's an Apricorn shell!" Pladur cried. "Cuidado!"

The Scyther hesitated and looked back at the worried Fraxure for a moment, before digging the tip of his blade under the shell and revealing it to be a partial fragment that had been broken off the original. The mantis shook his head and gave a low buzz back in reply.

"Hrmph. I would think there's some more down-to-earth explanations for where Pokémon live around here," he countered, before flicking away the nut fragment. "It's a stormy island, and Pokémon obviously bring apricorns through here."

"But these Pokémon have had years to change their surroundings… Perhaps the real answer is something in between?" Kiran insisted. "That said, if the Protector did play a role in all of this, I wonder what it's like if the Pokémon settled away from the sea, but also not too far inland."

"Not anything good if even common Pokémon don't want to get too close if you ask me," Ander muttered under his breath.

"Oh, I think I see something!" Crom cried.

Rounding the crest of a hill, a structure finally came into view of the Siglo Swellow's crew. However, the sorry sight before them hardly seemed like it could be the shrine they'd been instructed to find. Barely any of the ruin seemed recognizable as a shrine; it was more like a pile of painted rubble. As the four neared the site, the only signs of a Protector they could find were bits and pieces of some carving depicting some antlered creature. An altar in the middle of a rotting wooden pavilion nearby seemed to have been a spot for Pokemon to leave offerings for the local ferals, but the offering altar was totally caked in dust and mold, like it hadn't seen any donations in years!

"Is… this it?" Crom murmured.

"It is in the spot that Hertsog told us…" Kiran answered.

"B-But this place is a ruin!" the Druddigon exclaimed. "Why would any town let their shrine get like this?"

Pladur and Ander traded a blank stare, totally befuddled by the state of this island's shrine. Pladur had never seen a Protector's shrine in such a sorry state of disrepair - not ever, in all his travels with the Siglo Swellow! And Ander apparently had also found the shrine's state to be unexpected. Just what could possibly have been the cause of its ruin?

Shhk-Shhk-Shhk

"… What was that?" Ander asked.

Flitting out of the trees nearby came a pack of Beautifly and a Dustox, looking to be in fairly poor shape. They flew in erratic, off-kilter patterns, and their chitinous bodies were scuffed-up and dirty.

"Huh?"

"Oh, it's just a bunch of fera-" Kiran began, only to be cut off by a slicing gust of wind.

"ACK!"

"Wh-What are you doing?!" Pladur exclaimed.

Pladur watched as the Dustox in the group beat her wings and her eyes began to glow. The Dragon-Type felt an unseen force shove him from the front, yelping as he lost his footing and tumbled backwards. The Fraxure hit the ground and with a panicked flail, spat up a blue column of fiery light into the bug's face. The Dustox screeched and let go of her Confusion, leaving Pladur to hurriedly right himself onto his feet as both sides assumed battle positions and watched each other closely.

"Grr… what are we doing?" a Dustox spat. "You have some nerve showing your face anywhere near these parts this late, Inkfoot!"

"B-But we're trying to fix the shrine here," Crom insisted. "We're not threatening you at all!"

"Why would you defilers care about this svetilishte?" the ringleader Beautifly hissed. "You stole our god's egg from us!"

The four Bug-Types began to encroach on the Druddigon and his companions, only to be hastily cut off by a buffet of slashes, slicing winds, and gouts of dragonfire. The four insects hastily fell back, and with their confidence of an easy victory shattered and their mind turning back to their lingering wounds, decided to take flight.

"A-Ack!" the lighter-colored Beautifly squealed. "Retreat! Retreat!"

The four Pokemon breathed a sigh of relief as their aggressors flew off, leaving them in relative peace for the time being. As silence settled back into place, one question nagged at Pladur's mind…

"… What just happened?" he asked.

"'Defilers'? Stealing a god's egg?" Kiran murmured. "What on earth were they going on about?"

Ander cast a wary glance back at the ruined shrine. The Scyther paused and mulled, looking back after the direction the four ferals fled in before giving a shake of his head.

"I think I'm starting to understand why this place is abandoned," the mantis muttered.

"But- But not everyone in Fensedge could have been involved in something like that!" Crom exclaimed. "Maybe the ferals just need something to remind them of that?"

Pladur paused and looked warily at his surroundings. Mengir clearly was a place that was very different from Tromba if its townsfolk and the local ferals' behavior were anything to go by. Even if they knew the place better, just what would they be able to give as a reminder that the town hadn't been able to for who knows how long?

Though… perhaps there was one thing that they could try.

"Well… I suppose repairing that ánima would be a good start," the Fraxure said.

"Come on, let's hurry up and figure out everything we'll need to do before it gets too dark," Kiran insisted. "This is going to be a longer mission than I thought."

The four took a final look around the site around to size up the work to be done, keenly watching the lowering sun in the sky and being mindful of presences from the nearby forest. It would be a stretch to get done, but they should be able to get the shrine repaired before Hertsog left, and the Pokémon here on Mengir would surely appreciate having their god's monument restored…

Or so they hoped.



"Eh?! Didn't we already pass by that drawing a little earlier?"

Pleo gestured at a crude scrawl of a Nidoking in a Company scarf flailing furiously at similarly crude ships around him. The scrawl was accompanied by sloppy runes that were illegible to the young Protector and his Cubone teammate, but drew stunned blinks from his Nidoran counterpart. It had been half an hour since they entered Rosequartz Town, and Elty had been tasked to help the group find a hostel. They had passed Juice Bars, gambling halls, and some buildings with red lanterns that were strangely shuttered up in the middle of the day, but all the while they had not found a single hostel.

"Elty, you said there was a hostel around here!" Nida growled.

"There is, alright!" the Growlithe huffed back. "Just get off my case!"

"So why is it taking so long?!" Guardia hissed.

"Because this part of town is a maze of alleys, and I don't have a scent of someone who's gone ahead to track?" Elty spat. "Excuse me if I don't remember every single nook and cranny around here-!"

"I saw Captain Sibich hanging out at our old place earlier today chatting up the kids there."

Team Traveller's members stopped in their tracks as the sound of a low voice floated through the air. The four looked around them, when suddenly, from further down the alley, another voice spoke up.

"The Day Care full of Marked kids?" a clucking voice asked back. "He's not recruiting there, is he?"

"Huh?" Pleo murmured. The young Lugia ruffled his feathers uncomfortably, before creeping along in the alleyway, his teammates following along closely behind.

"Well, I mean he has a stake in the place," the lower voice said. "So why not?"

"Because that's super creepy of him?" the bird's voice retorted. "Most of those kids are little ankle biters who are still chewing on crayons."

"Hey, I'm sure whatever he's up to there isn't that bad," a third and raspy voice offered. "He gave us our first jobs when we were younger right? And we turned out fine."

Nida froze and pricked her ears up. As she processed the raspy, reptilian voice in her mind, she realized more and more that she had heard it before. Wasn't this…?

"Wait, that voice…" Nida murmured. "That's-"

Nida tensed up as a Scraggy rounded the corner suddenly. The lizard bumped into her, knocking the both of them backwards with a start. His scarf had changed from the striped blue design with the red arrow on it into a black cloth with a gold, frond-like design, but the Marked comet on his head told all. Following the Scraggy was a Combusken and a Grotle, all three of them sporting the five-tailed comet of the Marked on their heads and going wide-eyed out of shock at the sight of her seabird companion.

"Ack!"

"A-AAAAAAH!" the Scraggy shrieked. "Y-You again!"

"A-Again?! Wh-What do you mean again, Eric?!" the Grotle whimpered. "Y-You mean you weren't high on Lansat back in Andaku?!"

"You're- You're-"

The Combusken looked around frantically, searching for something that she could use against the white-feathered fiend before her. Her eyes found nothing to set alight, nor anything to throw down onto the beast…

Except, she saw that the Cubone with it was without a club and undefended. Impulsively, the Fire-Type threw a claw on the Ground-Type and drug her up by the scruff of her neck with a yelp.

"You're coming with me, lizard!" the Combusken shouted.

"A-Ack! Guardia!" Pleo cried.

"Let her go!" Nida demanded.

"Sela?!" the Scraggy exclaimed. "What are you doing?!"

The Combusken, evidently Sela, blinked incredulously, half disbelieving that her desperate gambit that the white bird saw some value in the Cubone had paid off. The Fire-Type's eyes narrowed, realizing that she now held an effective shield to keep the demon at bay. Her confidence returning to her, the chicken held a claw up to the neck of her flailing captive, the Ground-Type's struggles stilling in blind, wide-eyed terror.

"Getting us out of here!" she answered.

"A-Aah…"

"Not one step further, demon!" the Fire-Type demanded. "Or your friend here gets it!"

"But- But I'm not a demon!" Pleo cried. "I'm not evil!"

"Yeah, sure you are," Sela snorted. "And I'm just giving your friend a playful hug here!"

"Sela, don't taunt it!" the Grotle pleaded. As her captors continued arguing, the Cubone looked desperately at her teammates, shivering and rigid with shock at her mortal predicament.

"G-Guys…?"

"Just let the bonehead go!" Elty barked. "We don't want to fight you!"

"As if! Let me tell you what's gonna happen!" the Combusken snapped. "The three of us are gonna back up and get out of here alongside your little friend here. If we're far enough and you don't follow us, maybe we'll let her go-"

Sela was interrupted by a minty-green claw digging into her shoulder. She flinched visibly, her muscles tensing at the forceful prick of the claws' points under her plumes.

"W-what the-?!"

"This seems far enough, don't you agree?"

The three brigands gulped and looked up behind, where there was the looming, glaring form of a Flygon, the creature's tail swishing impatiently. The Dragon-Type growled lowly and bared his fangs, squeezing Sela's shoulder with his claws.

"Let me tell you what's going to happen," the Flygon snarled. "You're going to let the Cubone go, or you blotch-heads are gonna have bigger worries than your 'demon' there."

The Combusken and her companion's eyes widened and their bodies froze, leaving the three appearing not unlike Deerling about to be struck by a Flash Cannon. The Fire-Type moved her beak weakly, struggling to form a coherent response.

"We- We…"

The Combusken's mind blanked as she stared ahead at the snarling Dragon-Type, not noticing her grip slackening and Guardia wrenching herself free and running behind her teammates for cover. The Flygon leaned in on the petrified bird, flashing his fangs in the Fighting-Type's face.

"I think you three should get out of here," the dragon growled. "Anois."

The Grotle and Scraggy instinctively turned and bolted down a nearby alley, the Dark-Type realizing halfway down that Sela still had not come, prompting him to rush back and tug at the arm of his still-petrified partner.

"Sela, come on!"

The Combusken stumbled back and hastily lurched to her feet, fleeing with the Scraggy as fast as their legs could carry them. The Flygon watched intently as the last of the brigands slipped away, before he shook his head and turned his attention back to the four panting and shaken members of Team Traveller.

"Are you alright?" the antlion asked.

"Chigau yo! A yajū just threatened to kill me a few seconds ago!" Guardia fumed. "Of course I'm not alright!"

"Er… we could be doing a bit better, yeah," Elty admitted.

"What are you all doing in this part of town anyways?" the Flygon pressed.

"Well… we haven't really found our footing in this town and were kinda looking for a place to stay the night," Nida admitted.

The Flygon cocked his head slightly, eyes turned to the sky, deep in thought. After his moment's consideration, he shrugged and opened her arms in a welcoming gesture.

"Then follow me," the bug-dragon said. "I might be able to help with that."

The four youngsters looked hesitantly among one another, wondering if it really safe to trust a stranger in this town of all places? After a pause, Nida decided to step forward, motivating Pleo, then Guardia, and finally Elty as the Dragon-Type bade them to follow. With the need for rest weighing heavily on their mind and the timely save the Flygon had made, their suspicions gave way to thanks and cautious anticipation as they followed their newfound guide down the warrens of Rosequartz Town.



Back in Braveshoal Town, the waters surrounding the settlement's web of air tunnels teemed with life. Sea Pokémon of all shapes and sizes flitted about between reefs and stony sunken buildings. A few of the creatures stopped at flooded storefronts set up specifically to cater to them, including a shop lined with metalware stored in a small air pocket in an attic with a space to smith to protect them from rust. There, a Slowbro slipped a pair of glinting metal lumps through the seawater across the counter, to a waiting Clawitzer.

"Here you go," the Slowbro said. "Two badges, as ordered."

Nagant snatched up the metal baubles, giving each a careful inspection and feel with her mouthparts. The badges were freshly-made, to the point where the metal was still warm to the touch. Barring the obligatory misshapen part here or there, there were no defects, nor impurities. Though one glaring flaw still stood out to the crustacean…

"I was hoping for more," the Clawitzer sighed. "But it'll have to do."

"Eh?" the proprietor asked. "Got a big team for your next mission?"

A dark shadow passed overhead, prompting the Howitzer Pokémon to look up and see the hull of a frigate with the accompanying form of escorts in the water drift by overhead. Her cue that while not ideal, the pair of badges would have to do.

"Something like that, yes," Nagant answered.

The Clawitzer snatched up the badges and hid them underneath her scarf before swimming up, leaving the rapidly-fading reef town below her as she breached the surface. Nagant surfaced in the middle of a group of her ship's sea escorts, and without missing a beat, leveled her claw and shot a pulsing burst of water at the tip of her Vasilek's center mast.

Splash!

The ball exploded into a deluge of water, drawing yelps and whines from the crew aboard. Along with the rude disruption of their calm, Nagant's Water Pulse served to draw the attention of the entire crew, as a sea of eyes on the ship, the water, and in the air focused themselves on her.

"I'm back," the shrimp grunted. "Jun, is everything prepared for the ship?"

"Aye," the Beedrill first mate buzzed back from aboard the ship. "All the armaments have been stocked, Captain."

"Good," she harrumphed. "Then let's hurry and cut to the chase."

One by one, the members of the crew gathered to listen to their captain, along the ship's rails, and around the shrimp in the water. A few grumbles over the sudden drenching floated around, only to be silenced with a hard tap against the hull from their captain's big claw.

"Alright, listen up everyone," Nagant barked. "We're about to sail off to what might be the most important mission any of you have seen in your Indigos, so pay attention and don't make me repeat myself."

The Clawitzer swam away from the hull, gave a hard look at her gathered audience, and buoyed herself upright in the water, taking the opportunity to clear her throat before speaking.

"As you all know, the Protector we've been chasing was sighted going into the Crystal Mangroves," she said. "I wasn't able to get badges for everyone, but there is still plenty of stuff to be done."

Nagant shook her head and turned her body to face Cyanea and Katyusha, gesturing at the pair with her large claw.

"Cyanea. Katyusha. Since you two were so… 'eager' to go on this mission, you two will be the ones to go into the dungeon after the Lugia," the shrimp snapped. "You'll be coordinating with Schuster so that we can set up an ambush that will catch them."

"Oh, so like a Monster House!" a Vespiquen exclaimed. "But without the ferals!"

"… Something like that," Nagant said, rolling her eyes. "As for the rest of you, if you're not on standby to head into the dungeon, I want you either out in the sea, in the Subway routes looking for those kids, or on the ship to keep an eye out for trouble!"

The Clawitzer gave a dismissive wave of her claw before shifting her gaze back to her Tentacruel and Sharpedo underlings from the corner of her eye, giving a grumbling huff.

"And it goes without saying that this is not the time for any stunts for personal glory," the shrimp chittered. "If we're going to get that bird, we're all going to have to work together and do the parts we're assigned. Are we all clear?"

The Tentacruel's bell deflated a bit, the jellyfish blowing annoyed, grumbling bubbles under the surface before reluctantly acknowledging her captain's order.

"Da, Captain…"

"I can't hear all of you!" Nagant repeated. "Are we all clear?"

A chorus of affirmations came at the Howitzer Pokémon's insistence. Satisfied that her orders had been heard by her crew, the wizened shrimp swam out in front of the Vasilek's bow, and gestured up to the deck .

"Good, take the ship hard to starboard," the Clawitzer barked. "We're getting out of here."

The crew quickly flew into a hurry, unmooring the Vasilek as her escorts in sky and sea whipped up currents to speed it along for one of the atoll's exits. All the while, Nagant swam at the front, keenly casting her gaze over the horizon, eager to finally snatch her ticket to rebuilding the lost world of her youth.



Deep within Rosequartz Town, Hess had been led along by the Conkeldurr messenger into the seaside manor formerly used by Rosequartz's nobles. The gable-roofed chalet was made of stone, its walls covered in painted scrawls and obvious patchwork from past punitive raids on the town. In spite of its battered and diminished appearance, the place still managed to carry an imposing air, weighing down on Hess as he uneasily drew his head and tail close to his body.

The pair made their way through a set of hardwood doors, through an entrance room, and down a hallway where surly guards stood at attention here and there in armor plates that had been stolen in past raids and re-dyed to complement their crews' colors. Hess and his guide passed a series of doorways, some barred, others opened to reveal disused rooms that had been picked clean, perhaps once-proud studies or salons. There, the Conkeldurr took the Steel-Type into a darkened chamber, where under an overhead skylight was a table next to a pool surrounded by a motley collection of seats including a stump-stool, a cushion, and a wooden throne. Seated on the respective places were a Primarina, a Tyrantrum, a Cofagrigus, and a Bisharp, all waiting and chattering in indistinct, impatient-sounding voices.

"Break a leg out there," the Conkeldurr said. "Or considering your audience, maybe don't."

Slam!

As the heavy doors slammed behind him, Hess gulped and inched along. The chamber had been designed as a gathering place in the past, with its high ceiling and a pool connected to the sea evidencing its intent to be accessible to guests of any sort. The four members of the Council had since put the room's layout to good use, gathering around a round table with maps and modest trophies of their exploits lining the walls.

There was Ingela, the cold-tempered and cold-hearted siren of a Primarina who had grown her mate's fleet after his abrupt passing into a scourge above and beneath the waves. On the cushion was Captain Sibich, the Cofagrigus captain who was connected to a good deal of the Marked in port. His reasons for doing so had always remained an enigma, and those from outside his crew who pried too deeply into the matter had a knack for meeting untimely ends. Tarquin of the Strongjaw Gang — the newest member of the Council — was also there. Although the Tyrantrum was by far the least experienced member of the Council, the stories surrounding him painted a picture of a Pokémon who was every bit as cutthroat as in his days as a Commander for the Company.

"Ahem."

And of course, the Bisharp ringleader, Captain Dirk. The sole holdover from the Council from Rosequartz's glory days under the dread Captain Beatrice. Since her demise, he had fought his way up through cunning and ruthlessness, now the proud proprietor of a fleet of five ships and the first among his peers from Orleigh's current leadership.

With every trudging step forward, uncomfortable thoughts of his own mortality swirled in his mind. If the Council was displeased with him, they could easily pack him into an Apricorn to send him into the Wastes… Or they could trip the rumored trapdoor under their floor that — depending on the teller — supposedly held an inescapable oubliette to starve in, a cistern of water to drown in, or more Apricorns… Or perhaps they might get more direct and reduce him to a stain on the chamber floor, and use his armor as ship cladding…

"You can stop stalling," Sibich said. "We just had a couple questions that we needed you to answer."

"S-So I'm not in trouble?" Hess stammered.

"You will be if you don't hurry up!" Tarquin growled.

"Gih!"

The Aggron hastily darted over to the seated Pokémon and greeted the gathered council. After giving the Steel-Type a nod back, the Bisharp from the group stood and sized up his trembling guest.

"So… we heard that you came into port with some mast trouble after paying a visit to Tromba," the Dark-Type began.

"Er… well, I did, Captain Dirk," Hess answered. "But that was almost three weeks ago."

"Yes, I know that," the bladed creature replied, glaring sharply. "But some other developments have come up since then, and we wanted to hear from you about what happened."

"Developments?"

"Well, there's the rumor of a god appearing in Boisocéan. The Marked have been trading stories of their own, of a demon prowling the docks in Kenobi…" the Cofagrigus responded, idly whirling one of his right hands. "You know, little things."

"All stories which seem to point to the arrival of a Protector," Ingela added. "If there is indeed one that has just awoken, it provides our haven the opportunity of a lifetime if we can make cause with it."

"So…" Dirk pressed. "What happened out there, Hess?"

"Well, we'd pulled into Tromba after doing a little scouting. My ship's sea escorts sent the local harbor dorks swimming off easily enough, and we landed right in the main square," the Aggron started. "Everything was going just great until that strange bird showed up."

"Tell us about this bird," Tarquin said. "What did it look like?"

"Well, it looked kinda like an overgrown Wingull," Hess answered. "With a big long neck and tail, blue plates and a crest… Came up to about my belly or so."

The four Pokémon of the council turned and traded skeptical looks with each other. An "overgrown Wingull" that was about as tall as a pushover like a Parasect was hardly the description of a mighty Protector…

"Well, that's certainly a… different Pokémon," Sibich muttered. "And how did you run into this 'overgrown Wingull' in the first place?"

"I was heading down one of the paths into the interior trying to get my claws on this local shrine bell I heard about, and ran into him with a bunch of kids and some Nidorina," Hess explained. "I handled the kids just fine, and I had the Nidorina on the ropes, but then that bird suddenly started glowing and it threw me into the air-"

"Stop."

"E-Eh?!" the Aggron exclaimed. "But I wasn't finished!"

"I've heard enough to know when I'm being fed a blatant cover for someone's screwups," Dirk snarled. "And here I thought that this might have actually been something important."

The Steel-Type began to stammer, looking around nervously. Sure, his story might sound a little absurd, but it was true! If the Council called him out here to talk about it, they had to understand that!

"B-But that's really what happened-!" Hess began, only to be cut off by a chorus of snarls.

"Oi, you heard the mon," Tarquin snapped. "Take a hike!"

"You would be wise not to test our patience, Aggron," Ingela growled. "Take a hint, and get out with all your limbs attached while you can."

"Y-Yeek!"

The Aggron turned and bolted for the doors in a blind panic. A loud crash rang out, followed by a yelp and pained whine as Hess nursed his toes from stubbing them into the door. The creature stumbled out of the doorway, and hastily took off, leaving the darkened chamber to return back to an uneasy, unimpressed silence.

"Unbelievable," the Bisharp grumbled. "Next time, bring some actual proof behind your claims, Sibich."

"Very well, Dirk," the Ghost-Type answered, giving an exasperated sigh. "Though with all due respect, there are some things that you just have to go with your gut about."

The chamber started to clear out of its occupants, Dirk making his way for the door as Ingela shuffled from the pool's edge and slipped under the surface. Sibich too rose up, and started to float over for the exit, only to hear a growling voice call after him.

"Hey, Sibich," Tarquin said. "You didn't really believe that metal-headed screwup, did you?"

"I do, yes," the Cofagrigus replied. "Because if there's one thing that I've learned about this world in my career, it's that there's usually more than meets the eye."

"But Tromba's Protector waking up and turning out to just be some kid? That Pokémon's supposed to be able to shake the heavens and earth like all the other high gods," the Tyrantrum scoffed. "I spent years on that island and that take sounds fishy even to me. What are the odds that story's real?"



Meanwhile, back in Rosequartz Town, Team Traveller followed their impromptu Flygon guide down a back alleyway, passing stony buildings flecked with grimy shops and similar unseemly customers. The Dragon-Type led the four into a small plaza overshadowed by an apple tree in the center. Behind the tree, there was a wide, low-slung building with two levels and an entrance fortified with sturdy doors and reinforced shutters over windows with crude planters dangling outside.

"Is this what you were looking for?" the Flygon asked. The bug-dragon opened a push-door and bade his accompanying guests enter, the youngsters blinking to adjust to the dimmer light inside.

As their vision began to adjust, the four Pokémon looked around and saw that the antlion had led them into a room with tables lined with cushioned stools and a pawful of benches hewn from rough wood along the wall. In one corner was a desk with some papers strewn about it, and the back wall was a wide entrance to a courtyard surrounded by wings of the building. By chance, the team noticed some stray straw on the floor, which made them instantly perk up in realization.

"Ah!" Pleo cried. "This is a hostel!"

"Nieważne, I could've found it eventually," Elty grumbled.

"Thank you so much for taking us here, Flygon," Nida said. "I don't know what we would have done earlier without you."

"You flatter me, and the name is Rasp. My family and I run this little joint," the Flygon replied. "My dad helps fill my vacancies by picking up Pokémon crawling the dungeon and pointing them to this hostel if they need a place to spend the night."

Hold on- did he say his family owned this hostel? Which would mean that…

"You brought us here just so that way you could get money from us?" Guardia asked skeptically.

"Well, we do have a business to run. And you seemed rather tired of trying to find one on your own," Rasp answered with a chuckle. "Call it a symbiotic relationship."

"Well, whatever it is, it's good enough for me," Elty sighed. "I'm beat."

"I've got a little spare time," the Dragon-Type said. "Come along and I'll show you around a bit."

The Flygon ushered the youngsters along, taking them down a windowed hallway ringing the courtyard on the first floor as the group passed doors that had been shuttered. Claimed accommodations, perhaps?

"So are you looking for a place on the mats in the common quarters or a room?" the Flygon asked.

The four passed a room with the door slightly ajar, revealing an open, furnitureless room filled with mats spread on the ground…

THWACK!

…and the sight of a Gligar sailing across the doorway and into a wall with a yelp, an irked Bagon pawing at the ground and a displeased Snover following shortly after.

"That's what you get for trying to cheat! Don't think I didn't see that Fire energy you snuck in!"

As the three Pokémon continued their heated argument with each other, Nida, Pleo, Elty, and Guardia blinked and noticed that their three potential roommates seemed to be rough in looks and temperament. The youngsters looked at each other, then back at their prospective roommates for the night, before finally turning to the waiting Flygon.

"… A room."

"Excellent choice," the proprietor answered.

Rasp carried on, prompting Team Traveller to follow after him, eager to put distance between themselves and the common room's occupants. The group began to set down a hallway lined with papered windows, Guardia casting wary glances at her surroundings all the while.

"What is wrong with this town anyways?" the Cubone huffed. "You're supposed to be attacked less often inside a town, aren't you?"

"It comes with the territory unfortunately," Rasp said, shaking his head. "Rosequartz Town is pirate territory and while pirates are good business, they bring a lot of unsavoriness with them."

"Why don't 'mons like you do anything about it?" Nida asked.

"Who would we get help from?" the Dragon-Type replied. "Neither the Company nor the Empire can take this place for themselves without tripping off a border war, and half the town doesn't want them back anyways."

Pleo, Nida, and Guardia jolted upright out of surprise at Rasp's response. Company rule was undoubtedly a harsh burden, and if Nerea was right, the Empire was little better… but even so, wasn't living with pirates who were constantly prowling the town worse than that?

"They don't even want their help? But why not?" Pleo exclaimed. "These pirates are a bunch of meanies!"

"Maybe so, but they generally leave the locals alone," Rasp explained. "Since the Empire and the Company split, honest trade here has ground to a halt."

Nida folded her ears back and gave a dubious twitch of her whiskers. Was Rasp just making excuses here? Seahive Square and Braveshoal were both towns that weren't controlled by the Company, and neither of them had turned out anything like this.

"Can't you make gummis like Boisocean though?" the Nidoran pressed.

"It's a bit of a different island," he explained. "It's not nearly as easy to get lots of food in and out, so for the town in general, this is the best option we have."

"But you don't seem like the kind of Pokémon who'd just be okay with this…" Pleo said.

"I'm not, which is why I try to do my part to help Pokémon like you kids out," Rasp responded. "But as things stand, there's not much Rosequartz can do until the Company and the Empire sort themselves out."

The Flygon turned from his passage across the courtyard and flitted over to a door, pushing it open to reveal a stone staircase. Rasp gestured to Team Traveller to follow him, leading the group up a hallway overlooking the courtyard and to a simple wooden door that was parted, opening into a dimly-lit room.

"Well, this is it," the Flygon said. "Nothing too fancy, but the best you'll get around these parts for 400 Poké a night."

Rasp propped the crude shutter over the window open, letting the evening light filter in and better illuminate the room. The space had four straw beds, with blankets spread out over them, evidently for cold nights. The furniture was spartan, much as the hostel in Fensedge, consisting entirely of a low table with cushions for seats and a set of drawers that had been pushed up against the side wall.

"How long will you be around here?"

"Just tonight, hopefully," Nida muttered. "The sooner we can move onto Sormus, the better."

The rest of Team Traveller tensed up as soon as the words left their teammate's mouth, realizing the potential repercussions of letting their plans slip in a place like this. Then again… this Rasp 'mon seemed nice enough and he really didn't seem like the type to get them into any trouble for a passing remark like that. Before they knew it, the four youngsters once again began to relax somewhat at this realization, reassured by the Dragon-Type's seeming failure to make much of Nida's slip-up.

"Completely understandable," the innkeeper offered. "In the interim, make yourself at home and enjoy the full moon tonight."

Guardia fidgeted uneasily at Rasp's mention of the moon, taking a small step back from the group. Her teammates, eager to finally get some rest, failed to notice their partner's reaction as they continued chattering with the Flygon innkeeper.

"Thank you, Rasp," Nida replied, giving a thankful bow.

"Well, since we're here, we might as well figure out who's getting what bed tonight," Elty grunted.

"I call the high bed," Guardia said.

Pleo, Elty, and Nida turned their eyes and followed the Cubone's claw as she pointed off… at the top of the dresser by the wall.

"Uh… Guardia?" Nida murmured. "That isn't a bed."

"We have those cushions by the table and they'll fit nicely on top," Guardia huffed. "It's soft and you can lay on it can't you? How am I supposed to gather lore about how well you can sleep on it without trying it out?"

The Cubone's insistence drew eye rolls and groans from Elty and Nida. Even Rasp found the Ground-Type's thought process to be strange, as he turned to look down to his Nidoran guest for clarification.

"She's a recent recruit of yours, isn't she?" the Flygon asked.

"That obvious, huh?" Nida sighed.

"Whelp, suit yourself," Rasp answered. "If you four are hungry, we'll be having dinner for our customers in a few minutes in the dining hall downstairs."

Rrr

The four youngsters looked down at their bellies as a chorus of faint growls filled the room. It had been a while since they last ate, and being able to eat something more than the spare berries and Apples they had purchased with Dimitri sounded awfully tempting right now.

"Uh… that sounds pretty good, actually," Elty said.

With that, Team Traveller set off, following after their Dragon-Type guide back out into the hallway as their yearnings for food and rest bubbled up. They could sweat the details of getting to Sormus later, after their stomachs were full and fed.



Nights in Braveshoal were always darker than above the sea's surface, the familiar comforts of the moon and stars dimmed by the volume of water in between. In their stead, the Pokémon that passed through Braveshoal made a point of gathering the glowing algae in the sea into bottles and jars, forming crude lanterns that served to fleck the reef and its stony monoliths with bluish light.

As on land, nights generally ebbed to a slower pace, as the diurnal residents began to shutter their shops and the local night owls came out to take their place and keep the town functioning in their absence. At a square in the web of air tunnels that crisscrossed the town, a Samurott and a Jellicent were closing a well-built stone bank down for the night. As the otter helped throw netting over the entrance and windows to seal up the store, the Ghost-Type floated over, eyeing his companion dubiously.

"Eh? You're still working, Sevan?" the Jellicent proprietor asked. "But your shift ended half an hour ago!"

"I don't like seeing work go unfinished," the Samurott answered.

"I think that I can handle the rest," the Ghost-Type insisted. "Go and take the evening off, the night-watchmons will be here shortly anyways."

"Hmm… right," Sevan replied. "I'll see you in the morning, then."

Sevan put down the netting in his paw and crossed the square. The Samurott set off down the cramped and winding back alleys he usually did after work, the sound and smell of food cooking from cheap eateries pricking his ears and nose all the while.

"Hello, brother…"

The Formidable Pokémon froze and instinctively grabbed at the handle of one of his seamitars when he paused. Sevan realized that the voice was familiar for good reason, and if not necessarily friendly, it was not hostile. The culprit soon became clear, as a familiar looking Samurott donning a white scarf with a blue sun stepped out and gave a welcoming bow.

"Let's talk someplace quieter," Lyn said. "I had a few questions for you that I needed to get to the bottom of."

The younger Samurott motioned with his paw for Sevan to follow. After giving a glance around, the mercenary followed his brother down an alley and into a small clearing around a support tower festooned with bubbleweed, the older otter giving an agitated twitch of his whiskers.

"What is it that you need?" Sevan demanded.

"Have you seen a strange seabird around town lately?" the Commissioner prodded. One resembling an overgrown Wingull with a long neck?"

"I have," the older Samurott answered. "Why?"

"Good," Lyn grunted. "I'm here because my superiors want them brought in, and you're going to help me."

The Commissioner's insistence was met with a long face and a skeptical frown from his older brother. Sevan hardened his eyes into a fierce glare, and turned his head away with a derisive snort.

"Right," Sevan snorted. "I'm going to help the organization that ruined our father after he spent his life faithfully serving them. Get real, Lyn."

"He ruined us, Sevan. If he hadn't been a bleeding heart and just done his mission all those years ago, we wouldn't have fallen into penury," Lyn spat back. "All those nights going to bed hungry, having to constantly move from one den to the next looking for some dead-end job… none of that would have happened. And if you had just owned up to that years ago, you wouldn't be here bouncing from job to job as a sellsword for your next pittance."

"Lyn, if you came all the way out here to Braveshoal just to lecture me, then I'd be better off moving along," Sevan growled. "It's been a long day of work and I haven't had dinner yet."

"I didn't, actually," his brother insisted. Lyn stuck his paw into a satchel made of netting on his back, pulling out a stack of wanted posters printed on stiffened cloth. There on them were the unmistakeable forms of that group of children with the white bird from the day before.

"This is why you're going to help me find that bird and his friends," he explained. His brother grabbed the posters, browsing them, before squeezing them into crumpled lump with a sour look.

"Yeah, I'm not buying it," Sevan snapped, turning to leave. "Go find someone else to do your dirty work with those kids, Lyn."

"There's nothing to buy, Sevan," Lyn retorted. "That bird and his friends are dangerous, and the sooner they're taken off the seas, the better."

"So you're telling me that a group of pups are strong enough to menace the Company's warships?" Sevan scoffed. "I knew that the Company bent the truth from time to time, but this is just ridiculous."

"Because they're not alone, Sevan," the Commissioner insisted.

Lyn fished out another pair of posters and pushed them into his brother's face. On them were the forms of a Nidorina and a Hydreigon, the two evidently being extremely dangerous pirates from their descriptions.

"It's the company they keep that's the problem," Lyn explained. "If we can grab the weaker ones, we can use them as bait to capture the real villains."

The skeptical expression on Sevan's face was evidence enough that he wasn't terribly convinced. Lyn thought to himself whether or not he had a better argument to offer. Maybe if Sevan had a stake in the matter, he'd feel different?

"Look, who's the current client that you're working for?" Lyn asked.

"Bunge's Bank," Sevan answered. "I'm sure you saw the building while waiting for me."

"If you let those kids just go off, what's keeping them from telling their buddies about what they saw at Bunge's place, huh?" the Commissioner pressed. "They surely saw all the ways to get in and out of this town while they were here."

"… They seemed fairly lost for scouts when I ran into them," the mercenary snorted.

"Do you think you're the only Pokémon that made that mistake when dealing with them?"

"Well… but, I- ergh…" Sevan faltered, failing to find a counterpoint to his brother's question. His gaze fell to the ground for a moment, the older Samurott contemplating the situation for a bit before finally looking back up at Lyn and giving his begrudging answer.

"… Fine. I'll help you," Sevan sighed. "For a price."

"How much?" Lyn asked. "And Poké, or-"

"Keep your Company money, Lyn!" his brother snapped. "The price that I want is what you're going to do with those kids after you find them."

"And just what would that be?" Lyn demanded.

"I want you to go easy on those kids once you get them," Sevan said. "I doubt they fully understand what they're into, and you know as well as I do what it's like to suffer because of someone else's actions."

Lyn scowled and tensed his paws against the sand on the seafloor. The Water-Type paused and stared at his sibling, carefully mulling over his next words. Finally, he sighed and shook his head.

"Fine. I promise that I won't punish them for what their companions did," Lyn replied. "I'm a bigger 'mon than that."

Sevan sighed, feeling a twinge of pre-emptive regret for what he was about to say. Even if he could hold Lyn to his word, gambling with the wellbeing of his own employer felt wrong to him. Despite that, he'd already given his promise to his brother… Begrudgingly, he finally offered what information he could spare.

"They went to Sormus with a local guide," Sevan answered. "It sounded like they were planning on heading deep into imperial waters."

"Hmph, thanks for the heads-up," the Commissioner grunted. "Anything else?"

"This isn't who you have to be, Lyn," Sevan said.

Lyn's eyes narrowed, staring harshly over at his brother. Sevan met his gaze, tensing up slightly under his withering glare.

"I could say the same to you, but I honor your decisions," Lyn snapped. "I expect you to do the same."

Sevan hung his head, heaving a resigned sigh. His brother hadn't been like this in bygone, more innocent days, but… was it really so foolish to hope to see a bit of his brighter former self in him? Whatever the case, if such a personality change would ever happen, it seemed now wasn't the time.

"So be it," Sevan muttered. "Good luck with your mission, Lyn."

"The same to you, I wish you the best," Lyn replied. "Who knows, maybe we'll meet again after things settle down."

The Commissioner leapt up and cut through the wall, seawater washing over his body and into a freshly punched hole. The otter climbed in the water and began swimming for the surface, a knowing smile creeping over his muzzle all the while. With the Lugia and his friends' element of secrecy spent, the Protector, and his promotion to Administrator were finally within grasp again.

"You won't escape me this time, Guardian."



Author's Notes:

- (¡)Cuidado! - Spanish: "Be careful!" / "Watch out!"
- svetilishte (свeтилищe) - Bulgarian: "sanctuary" (location) (BGN/PCGN Romanization)
- Anois - Irish: "Now"
- Chigau yo! (違うよ!) - Japanese: "No!" (emphatic) (Hepburn Romanization)
- Nieważne - Polish: "Whatever"
 
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Chapter 46: All Ears

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
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On Orleigh, Team Traveller slumbered away in a quiet guestroom in Rasp's hostel, the only audible sound being the faint snoring of the room's inhabitants. Everyone was sound asleep - save for Elty, who stirred slightly as a beam of moonlight hit his face through the shutter over the room's window. He blinked himself awake blearily, jolting upright with a start.

"Kurczę!" the Growlithe grunted. "I fell asleep!"

The little dog padded over to where Nida was sleeping, stepping carefully across the hostel floor. With every tense step, he dreaded the possibility that he'd stumble and wake up the rest of his companions. Elty shook those thoughts from his head; he couldn't let such thoughts distract him from his objective. He was getting his bag back, one way or another.

After tiptoeing across the room for what felt like an eternity, he finally reached Nida's sleeping form. There, loosely hanging from her shoulders was his bag, the last thing he needed before moving on and leaving Team Traveller to be Rasp's problem. He lowered a paw down to the strap of his bag, pulling it away with as much precision he could muster, and-

Waaah…

"Ack!"

A sudden cry in the distance snapped Elty out of his focus, causing him to flinch and yank the bag back far harder than he'd intended. Nida and Pleo both stirred, prompting the Growlithe to give up on the bag and dive back into his bed, pretending to snore as the others were roused from their slumber.

"Nrgh… Nida?" Pleo groaned. "What's that?"

"… Eh?" the Nidoran yawned back.

U-Uwaaah…

"… I think it's someone crying," Nida murmured. Pleo's eyes snapped fully open from their prior sleepy squint, the young Protector jolting upright and looking around uneasily as an expression of startled concern settled across his face.

"Huh?!" he exclaimed. "But then we should go and help!"

"Gah… right now?" Elty grumbled, rousing himself with forced lethargy. "Listen to how distant that cry sounds!"

Uwaaah…

"I may be familiar with this place, but I'm not going around looking for some stranger at this hour!" he snapped.

Pleo and Nida looked at each other hesitantly before grudgingly sinking back into their bedding. Their own run-in with the Marked from earlier was proof enough that Rosequartz Town was already dangerous by day... so whatever they thought about Elty's outburst on the outskirts, perhaps it was better to defer to his judgment here.

"I guess…" the little Protector murmured.

"... Let's just go back to bed," Nida sighed.

"Yeah, bonehead had the right idea," Elty grunted. "I haven't heard her all this time, so she must be out like a rock on her little drawer."

Nida and Pleo watched as Elty flopped back down in his bedding, curling up against the straw under his body. The two looked back at their own bedding and uneasily settled in as the echoing wails continued outside, prompting Pleo to look in the direction of the shutters.

"I wonder why that Pokémon is crying…" Pleo muttered.

"… No te preocupes, Pleo," Nida insisted, giving an exasperated shake of her head. "I don't think it's something we can really help with."

Nida nestled deeper into her bedding, pulling her bed's blanket around her sensitive ears in a vain attempt to muffle the mysterious crying. She groaned, coming to the sinking realization that her blanket barely helped a thing.

"Urgh… I hope that Crom's getting better sleep than we are right now."



Back on Mengir's olivine-green beaches, work on repairing the Siglo Swellow had continued through the night. Pladur roused Crom awake that morning, leading his child through the ship's passages and onto the deck where they passed numerous Pokemon hard at work. The young Druddigon saw for himself several crewmates dropping off coins into a collection box as others labored on various repairs and odd jobs around the ship. One recently-finished job could be seen through a freshly patched hole in the hull, where Kiran and Ander had been waiting for them, examining the new timbers.

"One down, three to go," the Fraxure sighed.

"Well, at least there's been some progress on getting the ship back in order," Ander buzzed.

"Hopefully the payout from our work at the shrine helps close the gap, 4000 Poké ought to buy that pitch the ship needs… right?," Crom asked.

"If I remember prices back home, that should be 30% more than we'd need, but it's handy to keep a margin for error," Kiran said. "Speaking of which, have you got the receipt for our supplies, Pladur?"

"Yup, lumber, nails, roofing, and the delivery fee for bringing it up to the shrine," Pladur answered, proudly displaying a paper slip laden with sloppy runes. "Right here."

"Then let's get moving," the Swellow replied. "The sooner we get started, the more progress we'll be able to make before sundown."

With their team prepared and their materials accounted for, the four Pokemon set off for the path to the shrine they'd covered the previous day. However, before they could get more than a few paces into their walk, a Servine's voice shouted out from behind them, stopping them in their tracks.

"Hey, Pladur! Wait up!"

"Huh?"

Pladur paused and turned on his heels in the greenish sand. There behind him were Natrix and Philips darting up as quickly as their bandaged forms would allow, the Servine of the duo clutching tightly to a cream envelope in his nubby hands.

"A Skarmory brought this letter by earlier," Natrix said, handing over the envelope. "He said it was for you."

"Eh? Pat sent someone else to bring the mail in?" the Fraxure wondered, drawing a shake of his Raichu counterpart's head.

"No, he's someone unrelated," Philips responded. "Though he was insistent that you read it right away."

The two turned their heads as a scolding cry came from back in the direction of the ship. The pair muttered a few hurried and apologetic farewells before heading back off to the Siglo Swellow to continue repairing the stricken vessel, leaving Pladur behind to blink and stare down at the letter in his claws.

"Er… thanks?"

"What's it say, Dad?" Crom asked.

"Well, let's see," the elder Fraxure muttered, tearing open the letter. He squinted at the shoddy print of the message, taking a moment to make sense of the Torchic-scratch handwriting before reading it aloud to his companions:

"'I want to help your project, meet me at the fork in the path to the shrine at mid-morning,'" Pladur murmured.

"Eh? But we didn't ask anyone for help," Crom insisted. "And it doesn't look like Hertsog's handwriting."

The quartet looked to one another, unanimously sharing a skeptical expression. What a strange letter to receive out of the blue, and unsolicited at that...

"... Esto no me gusta," Ander muttered. "What if it's a trap?"

"Eh? But if the Company knew what we were up to, why wouldn't they come and bust us right now?" Crom asked. "It's not like we can just sail off right now."

"Let's see who wrote this," Kiran said. "It's on the way, and more help certainly couldn't hurt…"

Pladur moved a claw over his chin in contemplation before looking back at the letter. After a moment's pause, he stuffed the message back into his bag and turned to Kiran with a nod. The die was cast, and the four headed off down the beach, wondering just who and what would be waiting for them en route to the shrine this time.



The echoing cries around Rasp's hostel carried on deep into the night before finally abating, allowing Team Traveller to finally slip off into slumber.

"Nrgh…"

One which was rudely interrupted by the sun's rays poking through gaps in the shutters a few hours later. Nida stumbled to her feet, and propped open the window to let light in. The flowers in the planter had been damaged by something weighty pressing down on them overnight, perhaps a stray feral resting on it. Before the Nidoran could sniff and investigate the cause, she heard her teammates stir deeper within the chamber and turned to shuffle to them with a drowsy yawn. The Poison-Type lurched back and joined her sleepy companions at the door, setting off on a laggardly journey that took them down the hallway, downstairs, and into the lobby of the hostel.

"Blurgh..." Nida groaned. "What a night."

"So tired…" Pleo yawned. His drowsiness similarly spread to Guardia, who strangely enough had reddish eyes with dark circles underneath.

"You all had trouble sleeping too?" she asked.

"Eh? You couldn't sleep last night?" Elty exclaimed. "But you were quieter than a sleeping Abra during all that crying last night."

The Cubone grew suddenly silent at the Growlithe's words and shifted uncomfortably. Nida and Pleo looked at each other as the lizard seemed to pause for thought, only for the Ground-Type to shake her head and clear her throat to reply.

"… I was hoping that things would just move on a bit quicker, that's all," the Cubone answered.

Nida, Pleo, and Elty gave puzzled stares at their Ground-Type companion. Before the matter could be pressed, the bone lizard continued on, seemingly overeager to keep a topic of conversation going.

"Anyway," Guardia said, hastily changing the subject. "Now we're up, what should we do?"

Nida turned and looked at the light filtering in through the window's shutters, where some unseen Pokémon were having an indistinct conversation of some matter dealing with 'booty'. The Nidoran shook her head and raised her barbs out of disgust. The sooner they all got to Sormus and found Dimitri, the better! Though there was one complicating factor to their journey…

"Pleo," she murmured. "How’s your wing doing?"

Pleo eyed his busted wing dubiously, feeling his faith in his ability to fly diminish by the second. It couldn't hurt to try, though... right? Carefully, he exercised his wing, rolling it around back and forth to make sure it didn't hurt only at a certain angle. To his delight, he realized that no matter how he twisted his arm, it didn't seem to hurt one bit!

"I- I think it's better!" he cried.

The young Lugia hastily pulled the bandages off of his wings with his beak, leaving ribbons of cloth in his wake as he hopped forward with his neck lowered to build up speed. He gave a few more beats of his wings, relishing in the feeling of wind beneath his wounded wing, and gave one last push off the ground...

"Ow, owowow!"

…only for a sudden cramp in his injured wing to throw him off-balance as he clutched it to his body, flopping facefirst into the floor with a defeated groan.

"Ow..."

"Not that much better, it seems," Elty sighed.

"It looks like it's coming along, though," Nida murmured. "If we had a way to speed it up a bit, I think he'd be able to take us to Sormus and Blackmoon just fine."

"Eh?! We can't just fly off without replacing my bone! I've already had enough close shaves since I lost it!" Guardia protested. "We don't even know where Blackmoon is beyond being in 'Imperial Territory', how do we know that there won't be danger waiting for us on the way?"

Nida paused and blinked at her teammate's protests, giving an uncomfortable shake of her barbs as the Nidoran realized that they were a little light on supplies and leads for how to get to the 'Blackmoon Village' Nerea told them about.

"Er… point. And we don't have Dimitri to ask right now about the place…" she admitted. "Maybe we could talk with someone about how to get there?"

"In this town?" Guardia scoffed. "Just who are we supposed to trust?"

"What about Rasp?" Pleo offered. "He seemed nice enough… Why don't we ask him?"

"Oh? Ask me what?"

The Nidoran looked over her shoulder and saw that Rasp had come down one of the hallways, waiting expectantly behind her. The little spike ball reared up on her hind legs and gave an uneasy twitch of her whiskers, before shaking her head, reassuring herself with all the help he'd already given the team, surely Rasp of all Pokémon would be safe to trust with such a question…

"Well... we were wondering what you could tell us about Blackmoon Village," Nida began.

"Eh? Blackmoon Village?" the innkeeper replied. "That place was destroyed years ago."

"Huh?" Pleo chirped. "What happened to it?"

"There are a lot of conflicting stories about what exactly happened," the Flygon answered. "The Empire claims it was a pirate crew who did it, but a lot of folks around here say the Empire burned down the village themselves after they tried to break away."

The Cubone stared stunned at the Flygon for a moment. A group of scarf-wearers that would destroy one of their own settlements for not following their leaders? Even the Company had not engaged in such behavior! Or at least, none that Tetsuzui and the others from the colony had ever heard of…

"That's… awful," Guardia murmured.

"What makes you ask anyways?" Rasp asked.

"Eh... you see we were supposed to head there with our friend after meeting up," Nida responded. "But he didn't really tell us where it was or even what island it was on before we got separated."

"I know it's on Pioppo Island, and as for getting there… you can still find it on maps easily enough, though I can't imagine why you would want to," he said. "The place is supposed to be cursed."

Team Traveller's eyes widened with a start, and Nida and Elty's fur stood on end. Had they heard Rasp right? If so, what did he mean by…

"…Cursed?"

"Yeah, Pokémon that get too close tend to get driven off by the island," the Dragon-Type explained. "And it's said that those who pry too deeply into the island never come back."

The four youngsters gulped and began to flush pale at the description of the island. With such a frightening-sounding island like that, it was no wonder that even a Protector like Nerea would have trouble reaching the place! But… if she already struggled so much, would they really have that much more of a chance?

"... Anyway, if you insist on going there, you could try to ask Laurens," Rasp suggested. "He led a crew from here out to the island some years ago, and got deeper in than anyone else around these parts."

"Gwark?!" Pleo exclaimed. "You're telling us to meet with a pirate?!"

"Ex-pirate," the Flygon insisted. "He currently owns a charm shop at the town market. It's on the east side of town and built along the creek that goes through there. That old alligator hasn't stolen from anyone in years… that I know of."

Nida frowned and bunched up uneasily. First a cursed island, and now having to ask a former pirate for directions? On the other hand, as intimidating as the matter sounded, Nerea was insistent that the part of the Knights' Ledger was in Blackmoon Village… or at least whatever was left of it. And if whatever was in there was important enough to keep the Company and the Empire in line…

"I think we can work with-" she began, only to be interrupted by a Cubone voice.

"But what about my bone?"

"Didn't we need to buy any supplies, Nida?" Pleo added.

"If you need to do a little reprovisioning, there are all sorts of traders in the market district," Rasp offered. "It's a bit of a shifty place, though everything you're looking for should be there, even a scavver where you can replace your friend's bone."

Nida looked to Rasp and bowed her head low in appreciation, breathing a quiet thanks to the stars that her team managed to run into the Flygon.

"Thanks for the tip," Nida said. "We'll be sure to stop by."

Nida hopped ahead, pausing at the door frame as her teammates shuffled along following her heels. After they had caught up with her, Team Traveller headed out the door and into the morning light, venturing deeper down the warrens of Rosequartz Town in search of their guide at the market.



"Ugh… how on earth did this happen?"

Back in Bluewhorl Town, Pyry's words floated around Mirlia's bar. The stools and tables were mostly vacant during the early morning hours, with the visible exception of a table claimed by a sour-faced Gabite, Trapinch, and Quilava, with the bar's Sableye help taking a nearby seat to join them. The four had finally won some much-earned rest from their Community Service, which was used in their customary way in the wooden-floored Juice Bar by taking swigs of drink from simple clay cups.

"Things were finally looking up for climbing the ranks," the Gabite moaned. "Yet, here I am stuck on some backwater island, drowning my sorrows in cheap berry juice in between shifts at a hut kneading dough with some lippy brat."

"Oi, you're not the one digging ditches and holes all day!" Pekka interjected. "And every time I just make it in my normal way, my boss complains that it's too big and a safety hazard!"

"And those little terrors at the Day Care keep sticking me with their barbs," the Quilava at the table added. "I haven’t gone a single day in the past week without needing a Pecha Berry just to make it through!"

Pyry and Pekka traded blank, speechless stares at the Fire-Type, and the Sableye toppled back out of his chair. The Darkness Pokémon picked himself off the ground and gave a shake of his head, glad that he had been fortunate enough not to get the stoat's assignment on that fateful night.

"Yeah, I think you win, Kenny," the Ghost-Type sighed. "I can't say mopping up around here for that overgrown kangaroo and her kid really compares…"

"You know, I can hear you, Orlov."

The four froze and looked back at the counter, where they saw a Kangaskhan and her child looking up with a scowl in between cleaning cups. The Sableye blanched and fumbled with his clay cup, before hastily attempting to change the subject.

"Ehehe… weren't you out buying more berries for the rush tonight?" the Ghost-Type asked.

"Yes, we were," Mirlia growled. "We got them and now we're back to work."

"Why are you all still bellyaching anyways?" Minia retorted. "I heard you bragging about getting your bread put on Gwenith's main display earlier, Gabite! And your Trapinch friend was talking about getting extra apples from Mildrew just yesterday!"

The four ex-pirates traded looks with each other, before Pyry gave a stubborn harrumph back at the Normal-Type.

"Because it's the spirit of the matter that counts!" the Dragon-Type insisted.

The Kangaskhan and her child buried their faces into open paws, shaking their heads at the former pirates' stubbornness. How had they managed to last so long prior to their capture with attitudes like that?

"I can see your captain didn't bring you aboard for your smarts…" the little Kangaskhan sighed.

"Actually, now that she mentions it. What has the old boss been up to?" Pekka asked. "I haven't heard anything since we got stuck here."

As soon as the Trapinch stopped speaking, the sound of beating wings and a commotion outside rang out. The occupants of the bar turned their attention to the open windows, where they saw that an Unfezant with a brown courier bag had landed, prompting a small crowd of villagers to gather around him.

"Eh?! Pat?!" a Rhyhorn cried.

"What took you so long?" a Pinsir from the guards demanded "The entire town's been worried about the lack of word from your ship!"

"The Iron Fleet ambushed us off of Mengir," the Unfezant began. "And-"

"WHAT?!"

The exclamation quickly gave way to an indecipherable stream of confused and anxious questions to the Flying-Type. Mirlia and Minia left their posts to hear the Unfezant outside, leaving behind their ex-pirate patrons to peer out the window and sink in their seats.

"Uhm… on second thought, getting stuck by those Nidoran doesn't sound so bad right now," Kenny gulped.

"Yeah, I should get back to cleaning up around here," Orlov added. "Preferably in a backroom."

The Quilava and Sableye quickly darted away from the table and slipped into the backroom of the Juice Bar to avoid the crowd outside. Pyry and Pekka decided that it was perhaps best to similarly return to their work, hastily gulping down the remainder of their drinks before sliding off their stump-seats. Pekka left his place more reluctantly, hopping to the floor with a sighing shake of his large head-maw.

"Urgh… wonder if anyone else is having a bad day like us?"



Crom and his companions steadily made their way up the path from Fensedge Village leading towards the shrine. As they hiked, they noticed the sun began to climb higher into the sky and the shadows on the ground grew steadily smaller. The four carried along past the same fields and groves of trees as the day before, casting anticipatory glances here and there, only for their expectations to go unfulfilled.

"Shouldn't we have run into that help by now?" Ander asked. "We've gone halfway up the trail already!"

"Maybe it was just a prank," Kiran muttered.

"Eh? But it seemed too earnest," Crom murmured. "Maybe we just passed up the-"

The leaves of a nearby tree rustled, and a green, sleek-looking reptilian Pokemon clung from the branch overhead. She dropped down, landing in a crouched position as the Pokémon from the Siglo Swellow stumbled back in a start. The gecko rose up, dusting her scales off and cocking her head slightly at the four Pokemon before her who seemed frozen in shock, jaws agape.

"Oh, so you're the Pokémon working on the shrine," the Grovyle said, before giving a blinking pause.

The Grass-Type's audience traded quiet, surprised glances with one another, prompting a glimmer of doubt to surface in the lizard's eyes. She cleared her throat and gave a sheepish rub of the back of her head.

"Er, you are the Pokemon who came to work on the shrine, right?"

"Uh… that's right," Pladur said. "But who are you?"

The Grovyle cocked her head further to the side, befuddledly holding her chin in an open claw.

"Eh? What are you talking about? I'm Salvini," she replied. "Why, someone sent me a letter saying that Hertsog asked you for help and needed a few extra claws to pitch in."

The Wood Gecko Pokémon held out a small scrap of paper, upon which was scrawled a short message to a 'mon by the name of 'Salvini'.

"Dear Salvini, I heard your friend Hertsog wanted to handle something before he left," Kiran said, reading from the scrawl. "I can't make it, but I’ve got a few friends to help you out. Please meet them at the fork in the path up to the shrine at midmorning and help them with their current mission."

"Eh?! But we got a letter from a Skarmory saying that someone would help us with the shrine!" Crom cried, fishing out the group's letter from Pladur's bag. "... Except, we never got a chance to meet the Pokémon that sent it."

A Skarmory? The Grass-Type paused and looked blankly at the Druddigon's letter. Now that the two letters were up side by side, it was evident the two had the same handwriting, and the same style of dictation. The gecko paused with a knowing look, as a weak smile began to creep up over her snout.

"... I might have an idea," Salvini said.

"You do?" Pladur asked. "Who is it?"

"A friend of mine, he doesn't stick around places for too long," she answered, brushing off the matter with a wave of her claw. "Anyhow, you still needed that extra set of claws to help you?"

"We'd love it, actually."

Kiran gave a bat of his wings bidding the Grovyle to follow. After a short rebalancing of the satchel on her shoulders, the gecko set off, the newly enlarged group following along for the shrine in the distance amidst a new atmosphere of camaraderie. But even so, the shrine needed to be repaired before Hertsog’s reassignment. While the extra set of claws would help, would it be enough to finish those repairs in time with the state they’d found it in?

"We… kinda need all the help we can get right now."



After following Rasp's directions and following the creek that sliced through Rosequartz Town, Team Traveller came to a bustling warren of stony shops and stalls punctuated by the occasional building in the shape of a Pokémon head. The settlement's status as a pirate haunt was evident from the shops in the market.

There was the berry stand manned by a Comfey that openly hung Lansat Berries along with the expected Oran and Sitrus. Further along, there was another shop tended to by a Trumbeak with harpoons mounted on the wall and with wooden tubes poking out of the backroom. Even the shipping supply store was disproportionately sized for the settlement, no doubt due to the large amount of ships in port. Although the market straddling the creek was undeniably lively, a thick aura of peril and menace hung in the air, prompting Guardia to occasionally shoot a wary glance over her shoulder.

"Are you supposed to feel like you're being watched around here?" Guardia murmured. The Ground-Type's apprehension was echoed by the young Protector in the group, who ruffled his feathers uncomfortably.

"Wait, you feel watched too?" Pleo asked. "This town reminds me of that one place in Aisle Town… except bigger and without the pretty colors."

"So then it won't be so bad now that you know what to expect," Elty snorted. "Just look around, watch your back, keep your 'nipper's discounts' to stores that won't miss the stock."

"'Nipper's discount'?" the Lugia chirped.

"Nip something quickly enough from a shop and you'll get it for free," the Growlithe explained. "Simple, really."

"Hold on, what's the difference between that and stealing-?" Guardia began, only to be interrupted by an irritated thump of one of Nida's hindlegs against the ground.

"Enough already, let's just go find Laurens," she sighed. "I think that I can see the charm shop that Rasp told us about."

The Nidoran gestured ahead at a wooded storefront set into a squat stone building with a crude sign depicting a crystal shard with sloppy runes underneath. A row of pendants dangled from the eave and charms made of various gem and glass fragments were carefully arrayed on the counter, a Feraligatr proprietor occasionally leaning over the edge to attempt to badger passersby to browse his wares.

The four youngsters made their way over as Laurens tried and failed to sway a Crabominable's interest in purchasing a protective charm, leaving Team Traveller to sit and wait expectantly. After a moment groaning an exasperated sigh, the Water-Type looked down, and quickly sprouted a toothy smile.

"Hoy, aren't you a bit young to be shopping around for protective amulets such as these?" the Feraligatr asked. "Not that I'm complaining, mind you."

"Protective amulet?" Pleo asked. "You mean like this lucky rock I'm wearing?"

Pleo fished under his scarf with a beak and displayed his King's Rock necklace. Laurens sized up the white bird's bauble, before giving a bemused chuckle at the comparison.

"Heh, I suppose you could think of it like that," the proprietor explained. "Well in the olden days, Pokémon would go up to the local shrine to this island's Protector, the Queen of Jewels, to wish for fortune and protection."

"Eh? Used to?" Guardia asked. "What happened to it?"

"It kept getting wrecked whenever the Company or Empire came by, and the place supposedly had these big crystals that weren't easy to replace," Elty said. "Eventually the Pokémon around here got tired of trying to repair it over and over again."

"Which is where shops like mine come in. They may not be as fancy as the old decorations from the shrine, but my wares are made of the same dungeon crystals mons would wish on," Laurens chortled. "Did any of them in particular catch your eye? They might be fun-sized, but they'll bring you the same luck!"

"Actually, we were hoping you knew some lore about a place called 'Pioppo Island'," Guardia said. "A friend of ours told us that you knew stuff about it you could share with us."

"Well, I do, but I can't just go around chattering willy-nilly," the alligator shopkeep answered. "Time is money, after all."

The Feraligatr's insistence drew a quartet of groans, prompting Nida and her companions to shake their heads. Even in a pirates' den, merchants truly were one and the same with each other.

"Uh… You wouldn’t happen to have practical stuff behind that counter like a bone, would you?" Guardia asked. "I… kinda need that a bit more than any of these crystals."

"No,” the Feraligatr retorted. “What you see is what you get."

"Then what's the cheapest thing you have?" Nida sighed.

"The small crystal there for 200 Poké," he said, gesturing at a twine pendant with a small, pinkish crystal at the far end of the counter.

The team rolled their eyes as the Nidoran slid a few coins over the counter. The Feraligatr took the glinting metal pieces and pushed them into a coin-box before passing over the amulet in return.

"Pleasure doing business with you," Laurens grunted.

"We did our part," Guardia huffed. "Now, what can you tell us about when you went to Pioppo?"

"It was six years ago, back when I captained my old ship. I'd quickly gotten into the swing of this 'civilization' thing after the Company kicked me out of my old sea den in Vollezee and eventually made a name for myself as a pirate," the Water-Type said. "At one point I was hitting my stride as the captain of the Wraaknemer. We were in the business of plundering back then, and we needed an easy score after a rougher job in Imperial waters, so rooting around a ruined town for salvage seemed right up our alley."

With the exception of a visibly unfazed Elty, the Pokémon of Team Traveller shifted uncomfortably at the towering reptile's account of his past. The Company kicking ferals out of their homes certainly didn't sound like a pleasant business, though then again, Laurens' cavalier demeanor in bringing up his career as a brigand wasn't much more reassuring. Even so, Nida reasoned that they would do well to leave no stone unturned with their lead.

"So you saw Blackmoon Village there?" she asked.

"What was left of it, yeah," the shopkeeper replied. "The place was completely burned down by the Imps and didn't have all that much left in it aside from a few coins and cheap baubles."

"Doesn't sound like anything worth sticking around for," Elty grumbled. "So why didn't you just leave after that?"

"I was, though a few of my 'mons were telling me they were seeing signs of life. Ashes from recent campfires, a small shack here or there in the woods, one of them even found a berry field," Laurens explained. "We cleaned out what we came across, and I sent out some scouts to try and go deeper to see what they could find."

"And what did they find?" Guardia prodded.

"Beats me, they never came back," the Water-Type replied. "After that, we spent the night camping out in Blackmoon Village's ruins and that's when the wraiths came."

Nida and Elty's fur stood on end, the two pulling their ears back out of reflex at the Feraligatr's ominous sounding words. She wasn't terribly sure she wanted to know the answer, but Nida pressed on, curious as to just what were these...

"Wraiths?" the Nidoran murmured.

"Big, purple cloudy spirits who nearly scared us to death. They chased us back onto our ship threatening to drag us off to the Spirit World," the ex-pirate answered. "We took off and never looked back on that blasted rock."

"And those Pokémon that got left behind?" Pleo asked.

"Those wraiths made good on their threat, I assume," Laurens said, shaking his head. "For obvious reasons, we didn't bother going back to find out for sure."

A shiver went down the backs of the four Pokémon as unpleasant mental images of being dragged away screaming by billowing clouds flickered in their mind. No wonder why no one had managed to find the part of the Knights' Ledger there! But… if Nerea was sure it was there, there surely had to be a way around them…

"But we're supposed to go to that island," Nida insisted. "How are we supposed to get anything done if there's a bunch of evil spirits floating around?"

"Wait, you're going there?" the Feraligatr pressed, raising a brow skeptically.

"Don't ask," Elty sighed. "It's something that they set their mind to and I couldn't talk them out of it, so I don't think you'll have much luck either."

"… Perhaps if we impressed them with the teachings of the dead they would be more accepting?" Guardia offered.

The Feraligatr gave a flummoxed stare at the bone lizard, with even her teammates seeming to be at a loss for the Ground-Type's logic.

"Not sure what sort of 'teachings' you're going on about, but if you're serious about this… I'd try finding out if those shacks are still around and who lives in them," Laurens suggested. "I can't say if they'd be friendly or not, but if they're still around, they'd certainly know how to get past those wraiths."

"How do we find them?" the Ground-Type pressed.

"Like so."

Laurens slid over a simple map that depicted a mountainous island with a dense forest in the middle. On a bluff near the eastern coast, a few lines depicting the paths of a town had been drawn, along with a few red crossmarks just beyond the town's fringes.

"When we were around, we saw a few empty huts with fresh bedding spread out on the floor nearby as we got closer," the shopkeeper said. "If the shacks aren't deserted, then you'll likely see something similar."

"Right. I think we can work with that," Nida answered. "Thanks for the tip."

The Nidoran hastily doodled a rough copy of Laurens' map onto a sheet of paper from deep in her bag, before she and her partners gave a hasty farewell to the Feraligatr and ventured out into the market. As the charm shop and its crystalline baubles faded into the commotion of the market, Elty gave a dubious frown and pawed at the Poison-Type.

"Was that really enough information to move around in a place like that?" he asked.

"I mean, we have a map now, and before this we had nothing," Nida replied. "That's a pretty big step up."

"I personally think we could have gotten more lore out of him," Guardia grumbled. "What about you, Pleo?"

Guardia waited for a response, only to be answered by the din of the market behind her. The Cubone turned and went wide-eyed after seeing that Pleo was gone. Nida and Elty similarly looked unsettled, trying to catch a glimpse for any sign of their teammate.

"Pleo?" she asked.

"Hey!"

Nida pricked her ears and turned to see Pleo waddling triumphantly down the lane, his beak filled with what appeared to be a brown, sugary-smelling bun. The young Protector set his treat on the ground before craning his head up to his teammates.

"So, we're shopping for supplies before we go now?" he chirped. The little Lugia craned his neck down to give an exploratory peck at the malasada, tearing little hunks off and gulping them down, blissfully unaware of the dubious looks his teammates were trading one another as they tried to puzzle out how their companion had stumbled across his treat.

"Um… Pleo?" Nida asked. "Where did you get that?"

"There was a shop with these sweet bread thingies down one of the alleys they called a 'mah-lah-sah-dah'. I used a 'nipper's discount' to get it and it worked fine," Pleo cheered, before turning back to continue pecking at his pastry. "The only thing that I'm a little confused about is why it's free. Since doesn't a 'discount' just make a price lower but not get rid of it completely?"

The Nidoran turned and glared at Elty. Of all the things that stupid mutt had to teach Pleo, it just had to be how to shoplift.

"This is your fault!" Nida hissed.

"My fault?!" Elty spat, arching his back irritatedly. "He's the one that took the damn malasada!"

"Hóigh tú!"

Nida whirled and saw a visibly livid Slurpuff storming up the path, with a small group of thuggish characters following after the Fairy-Type. The Poison-Type was under no delusions as to why they had come, prompting her to hastily tug at Pleo's wing with a squeak.

"Come on, let's get going!" the Nidoran cried.

Pleo hopped up with a startled squawk, hastily abandoning his pilfered pastry as he and his companions bolted through the market. The four tore ahead, not stopping for the yelps or angry shouts of disrupted shoppers as they eagerly took flight from the wrath of a merchant unwillingly parted from his wares.



"See anything?"

Deep inside the Crystal Mangroves, the forms of a Tentacruel and a Sharpedo floated about root-lined walls of the dungeon. The two looked here and there amidst a watery maze with seawater overhead flowing off into a void; but all the while, their search had been crucially absent of any leads towards their target.

"Just the same old scenery and ferals as the last floor," Katyusha said. "I don't see any sign of the bird anywhere."

"Ugh…" Cyanea groaned. "This just isn't our day."

"Well, we've at least narrowed things down to one conclusion," the shark offered "That Lugia and his friends didn't fall in anywhere close to the midpoint of this dungeon."

"We shouldn't even be looking for him right now!" the Tentacruel hissed. "We found him once already, and if it wasn't for the help of that lousy crab, he'd be on the ship and en route to Tidemill right now!"

The Sharpedo rolled her eyes and gave an unamused scowl. Between the dungeon and Cyanea's attitude, this search for the Protector was turning out to be more tiring than she had anticipated.

"Yeah, yeah, whatever-"

"Any luck?"

Katyusha clamped her mouth shut as a voice sounded from somewhere nearby. Squinting into the distance, she scanned the waters around her, searching for the source of the noise, but nothing made itself readily apparent.

"Who said that?" Cyanea murmured.

The jellyfish bobbed uneasily along with her partner, as the sound of murmuring filtered along with the flowing water. The two swam along quietly towards the voices as they began to hear the hazy sound of arguing. Finally, a small group of sea dwellers sporting blue belts with a red central dot design came into view. A Dewgong and a Whiscash grumbled impatiently as a Kingdra bickered on with a Kabutops, who seemed awfully familiar to the Tentacruel and her partner.

"Ah!" Katyusha whispered. "It's that crab from earlier!"

"Then he must be after what we're looking for," Cyanea growled. "Let's see if he's found any leads we haven't."

Cyanea and Katyusha hastily dove behind a nearby stone wall, peeking out from their cover just far enough to keep an eye on the targets of their eavesdropping. From this nearer location, the sound of the argument seemed a bit clearer, the pair finally able to understand most of their words properly.

"I'm telling you," a Dewgong insisted. "If they're still in this dungeon, they're not below the midpoint anymore!"

"But could they be waiting for us in a stable zone?" Dimitri asked. "Or what if they were moving and we missed them?"

"We already checked everywhere on this floor!" a Whiscash huffed. "And we did it on the last floor, and the floor before last!"

"If you'd just done your job in the first place, we wouldn't be in this mess, Dimitri!" Kuda snapped.

Dimitri and Kuda withdrew and shot hardened glares at each other. As the pair locked themselves into an uneasy standoff, a sighing voice filled the minds of the nearby Pokémon.

"… Looks like it's time to head back."

"Huh?!" Dimitri cried. "What do you mean, Gersch?"

"I mean that all of the other teams are turning up nothing too, including the ones above the midpoint," the teleporter's voice chimed.

"So in other words, the kids aren't in this dungeon anymore and we've all been wasting our time," Kuda huffed.

Dimitri's Dewgong and Whiscash partners traded concerned murmurs as the crab rubbed his scythes together nervously. The Kabutops turned back to his Kingdra partner, waving his arms as he stammered out in protest.

"We- We must be overlooking something!" he insisted. "There has to be someplace that we didn't get to-"

"Dimitri, just give it a rest. We'll tell the Ataman about this and try to figure out what our options are."

Dimitri opened his mouth to protest further, but he fell silent, mulling over the teleporter's words. After a moment's pause, his gaze fell to the floor as he begrudgingly conceded his point.

"I mean…" he murmured. "If we're really sure they're not here…"

"Ugh, just hurry up and get us out of here, Gersch," Kuda growled.

Right as the Kingdra finished speaking, a blip of light illuminated the dungeon floor, revealing a waiting Cloyster. Tired and frustrated, the four Pokémon from the Khranitel Rod swam over and joined appendages to form a circle. Just after closing the ring, the mollusk teleported the whole group out of the dungeon. From their hiding place, Katyusha and Cyanea slipped out, and traded each other blank looks.

"Eh? The bird's not in here?" Katyusha murmured.

"That's what I heard too," Cyanea answered. "Come on, let's get going."

"Huh?"

"You heard 'em, the sea god's not here and those kocevniki outnumber us," the Tentacruel insisted. "We're better off going back to the ship and tipping off the Captain."

"Right."

The Tentacruel moved a tentacle towards her scarf, and after running it along the metal badge affixed to it, she clung down on it and began to speak.

"Schuster? Come and get us out of here," she said. "We've just stumbled across something big."



Author's Notes:

- Esto no me gusta - Spanish: "I don't like this"
- Wraaknemer - Dutch: "Avenger", lit. "Revenge Taker".
- Hóigh tú! - Irish: "Hey you!"
- kocevniki (кочeвники) - Russian: "nomads" (BGN/PCGN Romanization)
 
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Hello! Nipcat time! Finally, I meet the one who challenged my rank in the blitz (and who I got to log so much :) )

Before anything else, congratulations on this megachonker of a fic! 400k and no end in sight? That is some dedication. Awesome! And kudos on the orderly way your intro-post is structured (with the extras and bonus and stuff). I get that 400k of material is hard to navigate after some time.

So far I've been through the prologue. Here's my usual disclaimer that I'm an absolute PMD noob, and everything I know about PMD is from Eternal Shadows and osmosis on discord. Right out the gates I like that we start with a pokemon living in this world. It's nice to see them have connections and a family and share the history of the place, as opposed to the isekai trope that (at least I think) is common to the genre.

Nida is a cutie! (I love f!nidoran line! They are a must in any of my gen1 and remake runs they are so adorable!!!) She sneaks out of her nest at night, hoping to spot something called a traveler. Idk if this is common PMD lore or part of your wb, but you can instantly sell me on anything that involves travelers and stars. Very very cool! I wonder what those are about.

Buuut before we can learn more, she is abducted back to the burrow by her very mom-like mom. I love that even in pokemon world, moms insist that you should get enough sleep during the night. Much to her chagrin, Nida begs her for a bedtime story, and so she casually whips out the creation of the world! (which is by far not as crazy as it sounds, I grew up on bible bedtime stories, you had an apocalyptic flooding every monday)

At first I was a little bummed out that there are those pesky humans again, but then I realised that they are less of an active factor and more a instrument to justify the pmd worldbuilding (with ferals and the like). Humans here are also these uber-beings that are totally awesome because they are so smart, but I can kinda live with it, because by now, they are more a thing of legends and therefore most likely placed on a very high pedestal.

The "voluntary" (if I read correctly) distinction between ferals and civilised pokemon is a neat one. It sounds like, if an individual desires, they can cross into the other camp rather easily. It's just a different lifestyle and not something determined by your birth and unchangable from thereon. The thing with the marked mons on the other hand... oh boy. That sets them up for systemic stigmatisation... I feel very sorry for them. Something like this can only go wrong in the long term. Kinda like a self fulfilling prophecy. "Here are these mons that are descendants from 'evil'. They don't have anything to do with their ancestors, but lets marginalise them until they have no other choice but to antagonise us. See, evil runs in their blood" ;) Very curious about where that's going.

Style-wise, I sometimes couldn't follow the longer sentences, but when I revisited, I couldn't exactly put my finger on what's the matter.
The little creature silently crept up the snug tunnel little-by-little and reached a reed-woven mat just beyond its opening dimly lit up by the moonlight.
These are on the surface two sentences joined by an "and". Nothing too fancy. But I think I had problems keeping track of the many adjectives and what they refer to (snug, reed-woven, dimly lit). The "opening dimly lit" is also a bit awkward. The descriptor seems to be slapped onto the already finished sentence and would work better standing on its own.
After the Nidoran’s captor released their grip on the back of her neck, she shook off some saliva and finally whirled around to come face to face with a rather unimpressed-looking Nidorina staring down at her, wearing a white scarf with a blue whirlpool design.
Same here. It feels like two sentences have been merged into one. I think it would have more of an impact to end the sentence after the Nirdorina and then add her description in another one.

But that's just my observations, and those are just two examples. I don't want you to be all insecure about your writing or even look in the existing story for things to change. (and it could also simply be my brain not being in reading mode, who knows).

All in all, solid if a little info-dumpy chapter (which is totally cool, I don't mind a good lore dump). Will take me forever to catch up, especially since PMD is not my forte, but so far, it sounds very interesting. Prose is good, Nida is lovely. Two thumbs up from me!
 

Virgil134

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Before anything else, congratulations on this megachonker of a fic! 400k and no end in sight? That is some dedication. Awesome! And kudos on the orderly way your intro-post is structured (with the extras and bonus and stuff). I get that 400k of material is hard to navigate after some time.

Thank you so much! Fledglings has actually even surpassed the 1 million mark on FFN, and it still has several arcs to go before it’s finished. I’m definitely proud of what me and @Spiteful Murkrow have managed to write so far, and we’re certainly planning on seeing things through until the end. I’m also glad you like the way we organized the first page, since we definitely put some careful thought into it, even if it’s not as complete as the one on Serebii.

Right out the gates I like that we start with a pokemon living in this world. It's nice to see them have connections and a family and share the history of the place, as opposed to the isekai trope that (at least I think) is common to the genre.

That’s good to hear! A lot of PMD writers indeed seem to stick to the trope of there being a human-turned-Pokémon as the main protagonist. Not that there’s anything wrong with people who do that, but I always liked the idea more of following the story from the perspective of a Pokémon actually born in that world, and I’m happy how we’ve handled that in Fledglings.

Nida is a cutie! (I love f!nidoran line! They are a must in any of my gen1 and remake runs they are so adorable!!!) She sneaks out of her nest at night, hoping to spot something called a traveler. Idk if this is common PMD lore or part of your wb, but you can instantly sell me on anything that involves travelers and stars. Very very cool! I wonder what those are about.

D’aww, I’m glad you like her! And the Travellers are indeed something unique to Fledglings’ setting.

The thing with the marked mons on the other hand... oh boy. That sets them up for systemic stigmatisation... I feel very sorry for them. Something like this can only go wrong in the long term. Kinda like a self fulfilling prophecy. "Here are these mons that are descendants from 'evil'. They don't have anything to do with their ancestors, but lets marginalise them until they have no other choice but to antagonise us. See, evil runs in their blood" ;) Very curious about where that's going.

Yeah, the Marked’s situation certainly ain’t an easy one. Their role in the story is one of the more interesting aspects I’d say, and something I hope you’ll enjoy if you do end up reading more.

These are on the surface two sentences joined by an "and". Nothing too fancy. But I think I had problems keeping track of the many adjectives and what they refer to (snug, reed-woven, dimly lit). The "opening dimly lit" is also a bit awkward. The descriptor seems to be slapped onto the already finished sentence and would work better standing on its own.

Ah, I think that’s a fair point! We went back and tweaked this part.

Same here. It feels like two sentences have been merged into one. I think it would have more of an impact to end the sentence after the Nirdorina and then add her description in another one.

Same for this one.

But that's just my observations, and those are just two examples. I don't want you to be all insecure about your writing or even look in the existing story for things to change. (and it could also simply be my brain not being in reading mode, who knows).

All in all, solid if a little info-dumpy chapter (which is totally cool, I don't mind a good lore dump). Will take me forever to catch up, especially since PMD is not my forte, but so far, it sounds very interesting. Prose is good, Nida is lovely. Two thumbs up from me!

No worries! Your criticism was very helpful, so if you end up reading more and you see other sentences that feel like they could be better, feel free to let us know! Either way, I’m glad you enjoyed the prologue and hope you’ll read more eventually, since your review was fun to read. ^^

And with that said, let’s go check up on our favorite Rescue Team in this week’s update:
 
Chapter 47: A Pirate's Life for Me

Spiteful Murkrow

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Things had not gone as smoothly as Ellsberg had hoped since his meeting with Elilan. Thanks to having to switch the Nektar Weide's sails with ones carrying decoy patterns and Ketu's sudden bout of stubborn hostility, the sloop was slow to leave port from Mengir. That delay in turn forced a grueling overnight run powered by a constant current from the escorts, the exertion and long hours grinding the crew down as the hours whiled by with the passing waves. When the sun dawned on the now white and blue-sailed ship, it was finally slipping into Otvaga's lagoon, the sight of the atoll's low-lying islets came as a relief to a yawning and increasingly restless crew. Among them was a familiar Mothim in a Second-Rank scarf, watching intently from a perch on the bow's railing as the ring of islands passed by.

"Slow us down and take us into a circuit!" Ellsberg buzzed. "We'll wait for the Captain here!"

At the Bug-Type's command, the crew hastily began pulling up the sails as the escorts whipped up a decelerating headwind. Before long, the Nektar Weide was left slowly drifting along, tracing the shore of Otvaga's islets in a laggard circuit. A frown crossed Ellsberg's face as he scanned the horizon for any sign of Lyn amongst the wild, overgrown islands of the atoll and their surrounding waters.

"Come on, Lyn…" Ellsberg growled. "Where are you?"

"Tch, don't get your wings in a twist, Elmer," Ketu scoffed from beside the front mast, looking up from an idle pick at his claws. "He'll show up on his own timing."

The Mothim shot a sour frown at the Weavile, unpleased with having to tolerate being called "Elmer" for the umpteenth time in front of the crew on his own ship since they'd left Mengir. The moth's frustrations were quickly distracted by the sound of churning water coming from behind him, followed immediately afterwards by startled shouts from the sea. The Bug-Type reflexively whirled around to sea, just in time to see a blue form with a horned helmet riding a cresting wave heading straight for him.

SPLOOSH!

Ellsberg tumbled onto the deck as the water washed over him, sending the Bug-Type flopping over in a sopping pile against the mast. The moth glanced up and saw Lyn before him shaking some excess water off his pelt; prompting Ketu to pace over and give a dismissive shrug of his shoulders.

"See what I mean?"

"You're late, Ellsberg."

"We- We had some troubles at the dock in Mengir," the stunned Mothim coughed. "Things went smoother with your contact, I hope?"

"It did," Lyn answered. "He informed me that the Guardian's making his way for Sormus Island along with a local guide."

"Huh?" Ellsberg asked. "Was there anything else-?"

The Bug-Type was cut off as the Commissioner thrust out one paw, motioning to silence him.

"That's not relevant right now, Ellsberg," Lyn scolded. "We don't have any time to waste, and I say we move on for Sormus immediately."

Some uneasy murmurs floated about the ship, surprised at Lyn's adamance to leave so soon after they had just arrived at Otvaga. There were surely supplies to be gathered, and some of the crew cast longing eyes at Otvaga's sandy beaches... only for a loud, belligerent roar to snap the lot back to attention.

"You heard me! Draw up the battle preparations and get this hulk moving!" the Samurott bellowed. "I wanted to be out and at Sormus yesterday!"

The crew jolted upright with a start before hastily breaking for tasks about the ship, letting the sails down and pulling the anchor up with uncharacteristic vigor in the wake of their superior's ill mood. One of the few Pokémon to not be swept up by the hurried business was Ketu, who gave a skeptical tilt of his head back at the Nektar Weide's new captain.

"Battle preparations?" the Weavile asked. "I understand the urge to light a fire under Elmer's butt here, but aren't you jumping the gun a bit, Captain?"

Ellsberg buzzed indignantly, shooting a burning glare at Ketu as he muttered under his breath about the nerve of that weasel to demean him so. The moth flitted up aggressively, only to be cut off with an impatient stomp and growl coming from Lyn's direction.

"We've had the Protector elude us three times already because we weren't prepared," Lyn spat. "I'm not letting that happen again if I can help it."

The Samurott paused before giving an irritated twitch of his whiskers at the lack of a response. Much to the Water-Type's annoyance, Ellsberg continued flitting in place and Ketu still whiled away his time leaning against the ship's railing. Lyn's face wrinkled with a deep scowl, muttering unimpressed gripes about the pair's lack of contributions to the Nektar Weide's departure.

"As for you two, stop standing around and go get this ship moving," he barked.

"Aye!" Ellsberg said, the Mothim's salute quickly followed up by an unenthusiastic huff from his Weavile colleague.

"Yeah, yeah, we’ll get to it."

The two watched as Lyn turned and left before parting ways, Ellsberg flitting off for the stern as his thoughts began to settle back down into his work aboard the ship. The Bug-Type flew over, and perched on the rigging of the rear mast to begin to inspect it…

"Yeah, Elmer! Make yourself useful like the rest of us!"

…only to tense up as he heard the sound of squawking laughter from behind. The Mothim whirled around angrily, just in time to see a snickering Fearow and Swanna flying off. From the corner of his eye, Ellsberg saw Ketu watching, a smug smirk creeping over his face.

"What can I say? It's a catchy name, Elmer."

The Mothim huffed angrily and for a moment entertained thoughts about knocking the miserable peons out of the air and into the sea with a timely Psychic. Rationalizing that a fight would surely not help Lyn's temper, the Bug-Type decided to leave the matter be and flew off grumbling. The sooner the Sea Guardian hurried up and fell into his tarsi, the sooner the days of being called 'Elmer' could end.



For a few harrowing minutes, Team Traveller ducked down alleyways and between stalls, trying in vain to shake off their Slurpuff pursuer. The group's lucky break finally came when the four came across a wall in an alleyway that they hopped across, Elty requiring a few tries more than the others to finally cross it. Winded, the team staggered to a small pile of crates in the alley where the four flopped down and paused to catch their breaths.

"Did- Did we lose that Slurpuff?" Pleo gasped.

"Yeah," Nida panted. "I think so."

The four eased up to their feet, still drawing labored and tired breaths. Guardia pulled her helmet tighter to her snout, giving an irked grunt about their current state of affairs.

"Ugh… well this is just great. We've gotten chased across that entire market and we didn't even get to stop by a single shop," the Cubone fumed. "How are we supposed to get a replacement bone for me now?"

"Jedną rzecz na raz!" Elty scolded. "Let's start by looking around here, maybe we'll find someplace to grab some supplies."

"Actually paying this time, I hope," Nida grumbled.

The Nidoran rounded the corner and came across a lane filled with shops that were half-shuttered, a few others similarly closing down as chatter of 'food' and 'lunch' floated through the air. As the four carried along, they watched as the street slowly emptied of customers, shifting for other lanes with more edible wares to peruse.

The lone exception, and the only place that seemed to carry anything passing as food was a long shop made of stone with a battered slate-tiled roof. The sliver-like structure opened out to the lane through a narrow dingy storefront riddled with slabs of ruddy matter on the counter and hanging from hooks on roof's rafters. There at the counter, a displeased-looking Purugly carried on with a heated, hissing exchange with the Doublade proprietor.

"Hey! You can't expect me to pay 200 Poké for this!" the Purugly cried. "As ucht déithe, it's not even properly dried yet!"

"What you see is what you get," the Doublade behind the counter shot back. "So are you going to take it or leave it?"

"... I'm going to a different shop," the cat spat.

The Purugly wrinkled her nose and turned, stomping away in a huff as Team Traveller watched.
They glanced over at the shop she had stormed away from, sizing up the contents of the storefront. There, mixed in with the pieces of meat were shells, colorful birds’ feathers, and much to Guardia's delight, a few strong, hefty-looking bones.

"Ah! That shop has bones!" Guardia exclaimed, drawing some hesitant looks from her Nidoran and Lugia teammates as they sized up the uncouth proprietor.

"... I guess we could check it out a bit," Nida murmured.

Guardia darted ahead towards the scavver's shop, followed reluctantly by the rest of her team. The Doublade behind the counter scowled down at the young ones dismissively as they approached.

"Hm?" the Ghost-Type asked. "What do you kids want?"

"That leg-bone over there on the left would make a perfect club," Guardia said, pointing at a tapered bone near the edge of the counter. "What do you want for it?"

"That'll be 300 Poké," the Sword Pokémon replied.

Nida began to fish around in her pack for the money, only to be paused as she was assaulted by the rancid odor of decaying meat. Elty and Guardia seemed to smell it too, judging by how their noses wrinkled in disgust.

"Oi, aren't you scavvers supposed to try and hide your spoiled stuff?" Elty barked. "You'll scare off your customers with stuff like this!"

"Eh, I'm not worried about it," the Doublade shrugged. "This shop's gotten by just fine doing things my way all these years, and I don't see a need to change things up."

"Huh?" Pleo chirped. "What do you mea-?"

"Don't sweat it Pleo," Nida sighed. "Let's just pay and get out of here before I gag."

She dropped the coins on the counter and left, motioning for the rest of her team to follow as she prayed for some pleasant smell to overtake the stench that clung to her nostrils. The four ducked into an alley running along the windowless length of the shop, the vile smells of the scavver's putrid storefront fading away as fresh air came in, along with some lingering uncertainties.

"Was there something wrong with that shop we went to?" the little Protector asked. "It seemed… different."

"How on earth do you town 'mons get suckered into giving away money for that?" Guardia grumbled. "My colony wouldn't touch that stuff even if you gave it to them!"

"Beats me," Elty grunted. "Why, if I didn't know better, I'd have thought they dug their stock out from a garbage heap behind a real scavver's shop."

"Still, isn't it a little weird that a cajero would care so little about what he's selling?" Nida murmured. "Especially since that Purugly did say there were other shops in town like this…"

"You know, this isn't exactly what I had in mind when you said we'd get a job for the Torrent Tsars."

The four paused and looked around for the source of the voice. After seeing nothing but stony walls around them, Guardia chanced to notice a barred basement window up ahead, where the sound of grumbling could be heard. One by one, the members of Team Traveller crept over, where they saw a vaguely familiar-looking group consisting of a Zangoose, a Flareon, and a Banette seated around a crude table, playing a game of cards with flowery designs on them.

"You should be happy 'mons are hiring us at all after all the crews you've gotten us kicked from," the Flareon huffed.

"Well hey look at the bright side," the Banette offered. "At least our job is as simple as pushing around Pokémon like that yappy Sentret down there."

"Fair enough," the Zangoose admitted, giving a bemused sneer. "That little loudmouth wasn't talking so high and mighty after I gagged his mouth shut!"

Nida's eyes widened at the mention of a 'yappy Sentret.' One logical part of her brain told her it could be anyone, but the phrase brought to mind one Sentret in particular: one with a penchant for showing up time and time again in unexpected places. Her conscience simply wouldn't let her write this off - if it really was Scout, she'd never be able to live with having left him behind… probably. The Sentret could be annoying at times.

Her mind was made up when she noticed a nearby back-room, conspicuously unguarded and wide open with opportunity to rescue the pirates' captive.

"Let's go in," Nida whispered. "I think that Scout's in there."

"Whoa! You can't just sneak into there! There's guards inside!" Elty protested. "And you don't even know if that's him! It could be some random Sentret for all you know!"

"But it could also be Scout!" Pleo squawked. "Either way, we have to help whoever's down there!"

Guardia and Elty looked at each other uneasily, only for the matter to be decided for them by Nida marching on ahead. The other Pokémon of Team Traveller followed in, and discovered that strangely enough for what they heard of scavver's shops, the backroom was large, open, and dusty from disuse.

Perhaps the reason why the Doublade went out of his way to have such terrible goods was to keep Pokémon from wanting to hang around the shop in the first place. After all, judging from the room and its emptiness, it seemed as if its role as a scavver's shop was a complete afterthought! At the far left of the room, the team spotted a stairwell where the pirates' voices filtered up from.

One by one, the group followed Nida's lead and crept down the stairs. There at the bottom they saw the three brigands from earlier distracted with cards in a side room, along with an unguarded hallway lined with doorless rooms. Nida motioned for them to follow, prompting the youngsters to inch along the hall.

They passed one room, and then another, discovering spaces that were empty barring boxes and some scattered rope. All the while, the stale, musky scent of various Pokémon lingered in the air... were all these places used to keep captives?

The group came to the fourth room, where after poking their heads inside, Team Traveller came face-to-face with a bound and gagged Sentret, who true to Nida and Pleo's suspicions was none other than…

"Scout!"

"Mrrph!" the Sentret answered.

"Hang on," Nida whispered. "Let's get that gag off of you."

The Poison-Type moved her paw over the knotted cloth and tugged it down. As Scout started to spit up fabric fibers, Guardia gave a puzzled shake of her head at the Sentret.

"What are you doing here?" she questioned.

"And for that matter, what did you do here?" Elty demanded. "If whoever grabbed you went through all the trouble of chaining you up instead of using rope, they must want you for something big."

"Yeah, so after we met in Otvaga, I wound up getting back onto the circuit to deliver Hariti's next letter," Scout explained. "And that involved hitching a ride with a Lapras out here in Rosequartz Town."

"Oh? But we didn't see any Pokémon that looked related to Hariti at this shop…" Pleo murmured.

"I know that. I got snatched by those swirl-scarfed hoodlums as soon as I hit the docks," the Sentret snapped. "They thought I was a courier for some rival crew of theirs, and nothing I said convinced those block-heads otherwise."

"Uhm… are you sure it was what you said and not how you said it?" Elty sighed.

"It doesn't matter!" Nida insisted. "Let's just get you out of here and get going."

The Nidoran hurriedly shook a quill loose from her back and grabbed it from the floor, only for Elty to cut her off by pushing an Iron Thorn in front of her.

“Look, we don’t have all day, so no need to try out desperate solutions when we don’t need to,” the Growlithe said. “Use something that’ll definitely push that pin down once you find it.”

Nida blinked a moment, before taking the Iron Thorn and carefully working it into the crude padlock on the chains keeping Scout shackled to the floor. After a few tense moments of Nida blindly feeling around the lock, she finally felt the Iron Thorn brush up against the pin and started to push against it.

"Ah!" she cried. "Got it-!"

"Hey! What do you brats think you're doing?!"

She was interrupted by a voice calling from the doorway, a shiver running up her spine as she spotted its source: the Zangoose pirate she oversaw from the basement window, backed by his Flareon and Banette companions.

"Great save by the way, spike ball," Scout grumbled.

The four youngsters looked around as the pirates closed in on them, finding that the room had only been built with a single doorway, which the Zangoose and his buddies were currently blocking. After being backed into a crate, Elty looked up, and saw that they carried up to a basement window that had a visibly rotted bamboo bar. It was a squeeze and there was no guarantee the bar would give, but with every other exit to them blocked off, there was only one thing to do.

"Run!"

Elty bolted for the crates, hastily bounding up them and squeezing through the basement window. After briefly struggling with the rotted bar, the dog broke it with a crack and forced his body through the newly formed aperture. His teammates followed after, though before they could reach the top, they dove off with a yelp as a plume of fire swallowed up the crates, quickly reducing them to a collapsing pile of cinders and charred timbers.

"End of the road, punks," Scian growled.

"Yeah, maybe we'll keep you down here to keep your courier friend company!" Cerny added.

"Take this!"

The pirates' jeering was cut off by a sharp cry and the sight of a Cubone jumping at them with her club ready for a downward smash. Reflexively, Scian stepped forward and parried the Ground-Type's blow with one of his claws, knocking her back and sending her tumbling back along the floor.

"Agh!"

"Hah, take that you stupid liz- Oof!"

The Zangoose yelped after feeling a sharp kick to his gut, stumbling back from its Nidoran culprit after she swiftly followed it up with a second blow. As the Normal-Type steadied his footing, Nida's ears perked up at the sound of a ghostly screech, whirling her head just in time to see Cerny running at her with his claws trailed by a shadowy aura.

"Here, lemme give you something to remember me by, Nidoran!"

Nida's barbs fanned out in a panic at the sight of the Banette diving at her. The Poison-Type attempted to turn and bolt, only for her legs to go wobbly and unresponsive from petrified shock.

"A-Aah!"

"Stay sti-!"

A loud whoosh followed by a hard smack and a pained cry rang out. Nida looked up just in time to see Cerny sailing off headlong into a wall as Pleo skidded to a stop, trailing fiery blue light. The bird chirped surprisedly at the light and its sudden dissipation, only to be cut off by an aggressive yowl.

"Game over, you lousy gull!"

The Lugia whirled his head and went wide-eyed as he saw Scian lunge for him with his claws ready for a slash. The bird hastily hopped back, but too late to avoid a painful scrape from the Zangoose's sharp claws. The Cat Ferret Pokémon raised his other claw for a strike, only to see his foe turn and hastily bolt away.

"Hey, get ba- Agh!"

The Normal-Type ducked just in time for a plume of fire to pass by, prompting the creature to hastily roll on the ground to put out some stray embers that had singed his pelt. The cat shook his head, and glared furiously at the source of the fire, where a sheepish-looking Flareon stared back at him.

"Er… you kinda need to stay out of the way, Scian," the Fire-Type said.

"I need to stay out of the way?!" the Zangoose fumed. "Maybe you should learn how to aim, you-!"

"Oi you stupid clods, the room is on fire right now!"

At Scout's exclamation, both Team Traveller and their foes looked up to see that orange flames had spread over the boxes and clutter in the room. The pirates looked up and went wide-eyed as they saw that tendrils of flame had spread to the rafters and begun to char them black.

"Gah!" Scian yelped. "Quick! Grab the rodent and let's-"

Nida grabbed a Blast Seed from her bag and wasted no time lobbing it right into the roaring flames. A deafening explosion rocked the room, chased by a wave of heat from the combined power of the flames and the seed and the crash of rafters and dust falling into the room. As the pirates struggled to regain their bearings amid the cloud of disturbed dust and smoke, Nida saw her opportunity for an escape and motioned to her teammates to follow her out.

"Now!"

The three ran out the doorway, tearing through the now smoke-filled hallway and up the stairs coughing and gagging. The trio wheezed and panted for air at the steps, limping along for the door, just as the Doublade from the counter floated in from a door separating the backroom from the front.

"Hey!" the Ghost-Type shouted. "What are you-?!"

Guardia didn't wait for the Doublade to finish, instead slamming the door behind her and following the rest of the team forward. After putting a good distance between themselves and Scout's captors, they found an alleyway shaded by canvas awnings that looked to be a safe resting place. They gathered there, each Pokemon run ragged and gasping for breath as the smell of dust, smoke, and exertion swirled in the air around them.

"I- I think we lost them," Nida stammered.

"Wait…" Pleo said. "Did Scout get out? And where's Elty?"

Each member of the team looked around, as if expecting the two to simply have rejoined them while no one was looking. Indeed, the Sentret and Growlithe were nowhere to be found. Guardia hummed, one paw on her chin; she couldn't remember seeing where Scout had gotten to, but she did recall seeing Elty scamper out of the basement window in the chaos earlier.

"He must be off on his own right now," the Cubone murmured. "He managed to get out before that Booster torched those boxes we were climbing on."

"So, then all we have to do is meet up with him again, right?" Pleo answered.

The young Lugia waited expectantly for an answer from the pair, only for Guardia and Nida to remain silent and shift their glances away uncomfortably. Pleo began to pull his wings up against his body, the young Protector growing increasingly uneasy at his partners' lack of reassurance.

"… Right?"

"... Let's head back to the hostel. We can get the rest of our stuff and try to help Scout again before leaving the island tomorrow if things have settled down enough," Nida said, shaking her head. "If he didn't leave us after all this time over this bag, Elty will surely be back later tonight."

The Poison-Type sighed and led her teammates along to retrace their route back to the hostel. All the while a nagging sense of unease tugged at the three as one question kept coming back to mind over and over again:

Elty was adamant that he wanted to return back to his crew, but he wouldn't just leave them like this so suddenly…

Would he?



After a long day of searching for Team Traveller in the Crystal Mangroves, the Pokémon of the Khranitel Rod had finally returned to the clan's claimed grounds on Braveshoal's outskirts. The creatures were visibly tired and worn-down from the long search, with audibly dispirited grumbles from a day coming back empty-finned drifting along the currents in the water.

"Urgh… what a day," Dimitri groaned. "I feel like I'm about to faint."

"You're in no position to be complaining," an accompanying Kingdra scoffed. "It's your fault we had to spend the day searching to begin with!"

"Wha- My fault?! How is this my fault?!" the Kabutops spluttered. Kuda huffed and gave a glaring scowl at his counterpart, loosening his tongue to give a verbal lashing.

"If you had just listened to Ataman Viktor and stayed away from that blasted island's waters-"

"Enough!"

Dimitri and Kuda turned, seeing the form of a Dragalge glowering at them. After a tense silence, the Poison-Type moved on, swimming up to take his place above the seabed in the midst of a growing throng of Pokémon from the Khranitel Rod.

"Everyone listen up," he grunted. "I've got a lot to say and not a whole lot of time to say it."

The gathered sea Pokémon abruptly quieted at their Ataman's barked order, leaving the assembly punctuated only by the quiet churning of the sea and the sound of Viktor clearing his throat to continue speaking.

"Today, we found out that the Protector and his companions aren't in the Crystal Mangroves or any of the tunnels around it," the Dragalge began. "There's a few possibilities that could have happened, but all of them point to those kids having gone onto Orleigh."

The Ataman's words drew gasps and a torrent of loud concern from the gathered Pokémon. The god they had encountered was stranded all alone in a pirate haven? Just how much worse could this situation get?

"Naturally, this means that we're going to have to pay a visit to the place," the seahorse continued. "I will be talking through mission planning with some scouting teams, but I expect the rest of you to prepare for your parts in the matter."

A chorus of startled murmurs and wide-eyed stares followed the Dragalge's statement. Was Ataman Viktor seriously insinuating that they should try and attack Orleigh? Surely he of all Pokémon had to know that wouldn't end well.

"I know that this is a more dangerous mission than normal, and I don't ask this lightly of you as your Ataman," Viktor said. "But the future of the waters we swim in could hinge upon what happens out in Orleigh in the next day, and I expect all of us to stick together and fight to make sure that our future wins out."

The gathered Pokémon bobbed and traded hesitant looks with each other. When he put it that way, it was harder to disagree... but even so, it was hard to work up confidence when even by Viktor's admission the mission was a long shot.

"That is all," he concluded. "Get whatever you need together tonight, we swim in the morning."

A long pause hung in the water among the gathered creatures before one after the other, Pokémon from the crowd began to scatter and rummage through bags of netting or hiding places in the reef for supplies for their coming trial. Kuda too turned and began to swim off, only to pause when he felt movement in the water behind him and noticed Dimitri following him.

"Look, Kuda," the Kabutops began. "About earlier-"

"Enough," the Kingdra huffed. "I still don't like this, but I know when to table an argument."

The seahorse turned away and prepared to swim off, only to be stopped by Dimitri raising his voice once again.

"I'll have your back out there, Kuda," the Kabutops offered.

The Kingdra turned his head and after a brief pause, gave a nod of his head before continuing on. Content with his comrade's quiet rapprochement, the Kabutops parted ways to grab supplies of his own and prepare for what would surely be the most important mission of his life.



Back out at sea the search for Team Traveller continued, with Pokémon from the Vasilek prowling the sea and the nearby Subway tunnels in search for the Protector and his compatriots. On the deck, the Clawitzer captain had taken a break from searching, the sound of rummaging coming through an open cabin door before she exited carrying along a cup and a glass bottle sloshing with clear fluid.

"Ugh… I'm getting too old for this," she grunted.

Nagant poured the contents of the bottle out into the cup and took a swig. As the shrimp began to indulge herself in some much-desired refreshments, her first mate flitted by with a skeptical shake of his head.

"Uhm… Captain?" the Beedrill buzzed. "Isn't it a bit early to be drinking?"

"I've been looking through kelp forests and reefs for the last four hours, Jun," Nagant huffed. "A little vodka won't be the end of the world."

"No, but it might be the end of the crew's…" her first mate murmured under his breath. Much to Jun's chagrin, Nagant proved to have a stronger sense of hearing than he assumed, as his comments were quickly answered by an agitated wave of her claws.

"A little flexibility would do you good, Jun," she said as she sucked in a swig of the clear fluid. "Rules are made to be bent every now and then…"

"Captain! Captain!"

The pair turned and saw that Cyanea and Katyusha had swum back up against the side of the ship. They were back rather soon from the Crystal Mangroves, but whether that was a good or a bad omen remained to be seen.

"Does that also extend to those two?" Jun asked, drawing a grumbling roll of his captain's eyes.

"I'm not dignifying that with a response," she harrumphed, before training her attention on the duo in the water below.

"Back so soon?" Nagant asked. "What did you find out there?"

"Erm… about that…" Katyusha began. "Well, the Protector is kinda not in the dungeon."

"Katyusha! Give her the context!" Cyanea hissed before trying to reframe the Sharpedo's words to her superior. "We found that out after we ran into that Kabutops from earlier again!"

The Clawitzer dropped her cup, splashing the remains of her drink on the deck. The shrimp carefully balanced herself on her tail, and peered down at the pair with a stern and impatient gaze.

"And what exactly did you hear?" Nagant prodded.

"Well, he was there with some other Pokémon from his rod, and they were calling off the search for the Lugia," Cyanea explained. "They apparently figured out that he'd managed to get out of the dungeon."

"Ah!" Jun buzzed. "Then they must have made it to Rosequartz by now!"

"Yeah. When we chased them into the Crystal Mangroves, their guide had most of their stuff," Katyusha added. "A bunch of kids like them would run into trouble fast out in the wilderness without someone to hide behind, or at least some more supplies."

Nagant moved her little claw to her mouth deep in thought. Whether or not the Protector and his compatriots knew about Orleigh's nature, what she had heard of them hardly seemed to indicate that they were accustomed to roughing it in the wilds. In that case, all routes seemed to lead to Rosequartz Town…

And to the assumption that they would be encountered by many other Pokémon while there.

"… Then we should assume that we'll need to extract them," Nagant grunted. "And that the local pirates have figured out his true nature and started making moves to keep the Protector and his companions for themselves."

"An extraction?" Cyanea asked. "But there's other Pokémon actively hunting for that Protector! We'd have a day at most to get a feel for the town!"

"It would be a difficult operation for a small team, Captain," Jun murmured.

"I'm aware of that," the Clawitzer rebutted. "Which is why we're going to have to engage in some gunboat diplomacy."

Cyanea's eyes widened and her Sharpedo partner's jaw dropped. Even Jun was taken aback with a startled buzz as Katyusha stammered and tried to articulate a response.

"Captain Nugget, that's insane!" Katyusha exclaimed. "We're a single frigate and that's Orleigh!"

The captain reflexively glared at the sound of her name being butchered yet again. After a tense pause, she harrumphed and decided to let the matter slide... for now.

"I didn't say we were going to be doing it alone!" Nagant hissed. "We'll have to rely on some outside assistance."

"From whom?" her first mate pressed. "We'd never be able to get reinforcements from the Admiralty in a day, let alone the means to hire mercenaries for that sort of raid."

The Clawitzer turned to a map pinned on the wall in the cabin where her drink had come from, prompting her to hurry and pull it down to spread it on the deck before her audience. Her eyes darted over the illustrated paper, before settling on a patch of sea with the forms of jellyfish and sunken ships on it, the cartographer's representation of Spirit Trench. The Water-Type paused, before a devious look started to glimmer over her eyes.

"Don't be so sure about that, Jun."



Back on Orleigh, the form of an orange dog paced down the tight alleys and lanes of Rosequartz Town. Far from his teammates' worries, the Growlithe hurried along, tracing his way down the warren of alleyways for the half-finished Aggron head that marked the Iron Fleet's hideout. With the scaffolding poking out in the distance in between lanes, the Fire-Type began to wag his tail expectantly, newfound vigor coming into each and every step.

"Almost there," he said to himself. "Almost-"

"Well, well, well… What do we have here?"

Elty's fur bristled on end as he recognized the chittering voice from Kenobi. The dog turned to run, only for Valatos to dart out in front of him from above, the Yanmega's Marowak and Manectric teammates quickly closing in from behind with low snarls.

"Ack!" the Growlithe yelped. "What are you doing here?!"

"We could ask the same of you, mutt," Nori growled. "After everything that you and your dweeb friends have put us through, you've got some nerve to show your face around us!"

The Fire-Type began to backpedal and noticed that the three weren't wearing the Company scarves he was expecting. Instead, they were golden, with a silver, spiky teardrop shape on them… the scarves of the Iron Fleet!

"Why are you wearing those scarves?" Elty stammered. "You're supposed to be stuck in some dead-end job with the Company!"

"We had to make a sudden career change thanks to you," Alvise snarled. "And we never did get the chance to properly thank you for it."

Elty gulped at the mention of a "proper thanks" and pulled his ears and tail tight against his body. The dog desperately looked for a route to slip away, but every escape was blocked by the Yanmega and his companions pressing in ever tighter on him.

"I see you've realized what's going to happen, too," Valatos sneered. "We gaan veel plezier met je hebben, Growlithe. Lots and lots of fun-"

"Eltenios?! Is that you?!"

The four looked behind the Yanmega to see a surprised-looking Ledian and a flummoxed Hoppip in golden scarves. After a brief moment of stunned silence, the beetle shook his head before giving an annoyed glare at the Growlithe ringed by the new recruits.

"Ah! Kichiro!" Elty cried, the dog's yelp drawing an annoyed huff from the Ledian.

"It's Keiichiro," he snapped. "And where have you been?!"

Valatos flitted quietly, casting confused glances back and forth between Elty and his new teammate, who seemed… familiar with him?!

"Eh?!" the Yanmega spluttered. "Wait a minute, you know this fleabag?!"

"That's because we're from the same crew, geniuses!" Elty huffed.

Valatos and his companions looked at their cornered prey, and then back at their Ledian teammate. They could overpower the Bug-Type and his Hoppip comrade to get their revenge on the mutt… but if they got thrown out from a bottom-feeding crew like the Iron Fleet, just where would they go afterwards? The three furrowed their brows and glared back at Elty before backing off, deciding to relent for now.

"This isn't over, brat," Nori growled.

The trio sulkingly backed away, letting their captive walk free and towards an irked Ledian. Kichiro's companion, delighted to see a new face, was quick to offer cheery commentary.

"Wow!" the Hoppip exclaimed. "There's new recruits for our crew everywhere!"

"Shut up Wilhelm, nobody asked you," the Ledian buzzed annoyedly.

"… You had trouble filling spots again, didn't you?" Elty sighed.

"Oi, you didn't help by standing up the crew back at Andaku!" the Bug-Type fumed. "What on earth were you doing there?"

"… It's a long story," the Growlithe grunted. "I'll explain when we get back to the hideout."

Kichiro gave a skeptical glance before shrugging the matter off with both sets of shoulders and led his returned teammate ahead, Valatos and his friends following right after. The Ledian carried on down a side lane, leading Elty through the door into Hess' half-built base. The Aggron captain was there at the front, chattering with Rodion about a recent visit to the Council. Their chatter didn't continue for long, as the room went quiet and all eyes fell upon the Growlithe as soon as he stepped through the doorway.

"Eh?! You're back!" a Cherrim exclaimed, only to trail off blankly. "… Wait, what was your name again"

"’Eltenios’, he's one of the ship-burners we lost on Tromba," a Litten whispered.

"... Wait a minute," Hess began. "How'd you manage to get all the way back here on your own?"

"Well…"

Elty quickly launched into his tale about what he had experienced since being stranded in Tromba. Of the first night being assigned to 'Community Service' and his time as Team Traveller's punching bag-turned-teammate that drew surprised murmuring after the culprit of the storm turned out to be none other than a fabled sea god.

From there, the Growlithe continued on with Lyn's arrival and how fate and perhaps divine interference roped him into a narrow escape to Boisocéan. He then moved on to telling them of their time at the treehut-laden isle before being forced to take flight to Kenobi, the turn of events serving to draw an irked buzz from Valatos as memories of the first time he crossed paths with that mutt and his friends were stirred up.

"Oh, so that's how you all already knew each other," Kichiro said.

"Well, frosty introduction aside, your story sounds exactly like why I signed up!" Wilhelm burbled, drawing a skeptical frown and muttering under the Ledian's breath.

"Someone never learned to be careful with what he wished for."

Elty's mention of his time in Kenobi drew some sour glares from Valatos and his friends. It was a special indignity to have to listen to that tubby mutt talk about how he and his runty friends had upended their gig on that island. Though since he was talking about it in the first place, it begged a question...

"Hrmph," the Yanmega hissed. "So where's your friends now then?"

"Eh, I had to split tracks with them earlier today," Elty said, waving a paw.

The room suddenly went deathly silent, as the gathered pirates stared at the Growlithe. A few surprised looks went around, others apprehensive. If Eltenios hadn't misspoken, then that meant...

"Wait, so you're telling me that that 'Lugia' thing from Tromba is here?" Hess asked. "How come you split up only now?"

"His spike ball friend is holding my bag hostage," Elty grumbled. "It's why I didn't ditch them earlier."

"Oh, you mean that thing that you got when you joined our crew?" the Aggron prodded.

"Yeah," the Growlithe sighed. "I still need to figure out how to get that back…"

"Oh, don't worry about that," the Steel-Type replied, giving a reassuring wave of his claws. "I'm sure we can work something out."

"Wait, really?" the dog asked.

"Of course!" the captain insisted. "This is the Iron Fleet, after all we look out for our own!"

"Uh…" a Noibat murmured. "But what about all the 'mons that we left behi-"

THWAM

The Flying-Type's chatter was swiftly replaced with a heavy blow and a yelp as Hess slammed the bat out of the air with a downward punch. The hapless creature plummeted to the ground with a loud thump, and sprawled out on the floor dazed and groaning. The Aggron cleared his throat and gave a wag of his tail, trying his hardest to sweep the Noibat's undue frankness back under the rug.

"So… what do you say?" Hess offered. "Needed a helping hand there?"

"I'll take it," Elty answered. "It'll let me hit the ground running joining up with the crew again."

"Enough about the bag already," a Pawniard snapped. "Keep going on with the story."

The Growlithe opened his mouth to continue, only to notice that the shadows from the window had grown long and the sky outside had turned a dim orange color. The Fire-Type paused for a moment, wondering if it was proper to leave Team Traveller to take care of themselves. Bag aside, this was a rough town…

Though then again, they'd handled themselves just fine back on Kenobi. And he knew from experience that the spike ball and bonehead could give some mean hits...

"Eh…" Elty whispered to himself. "One night won't hurt that much."

"We're waiting..."

"Aherm… right," the Growlithe said. "So as I was saying…"

He continued with his story, the rapt attention from his old peers serving to make him more and more at ease inside the half-built base. Elty carried on with his tale, covering mishap and misadventure as he told of the team's stint in Otvaga and their meeting with Nerea. As the sun began to set and the skies darkened, his concerns about Team Traveller's well-being similarly ebbed away.

Life had been a whirlwind since that fateful day in Tromba; but in that moment, everything seemed to melt away as the Fire-Type once again began to feel at home.



Back on Mengir, the day quickly whiled away under the glare of the withering sun. Crom and Pladur passed the hours fitting planks together and driving Iron Thorns in to fasten them in place. Kiran and Salvini spent their time flying and carrying up rafters and wooden shingles for the shrine's structures, where they slowly began to assemble them into something vaguely resembling roofing. Ander too was kept busy, spending his time hacking and sawing wood with his blades, if careful to avoid straying too close to the shrine or its shadow.

In spite of all this, the same gnawing sense that something was amiss with the shrine's site was never far away. While laying the foundation, Pladur chanced to notice the Apricorn fields in the distance, manned by Pokémon toiling away in between the rows of bushes. Even Salvini didn't seem to have much of a defense for the fields, brusquely dismissing it as how Administrator Zorn ran things and beyond her ability to question.

"Wait!"

"Huh?!" Pladur cried. "What's wrong?!"

But more pertinently to the five's efforts, they had discovered one of the beams holding up the shrine's unfinished roof was noticeably thicker at the top than at the bottom....

"We put in the support beam upside down!" Kiran exclaimed.

"But we already nailed it in," Ander said. "If we take it out, we're going to have to also take out everything that's been built on top of it."

The group looked at the beam, and blanched as the enormity of Ander's words began to sink in. They had already fallen behind just getting to where they were with the shrine. If they had to redo the entire roof, they'd have better odds of finding a Red Gyarados than finishing in time to collect their reward from Hertsog!

"Ugh… figures that the last thing that I wanted to do for this town would also be something I couldn't finish," Salvini mumbled.

"Huh?" Crom asked. "What do you mean by that?"

"I mean that I'm getting reassigned after tomorrow night," the Grovyle explained. "There's no way we'd be able to finish this just between the five of us by then!"

"… I'm sure that we can work something out, Salvini-" Kiran began, only to be interrupted by an abrupt question.

"But why are you getting reassigned?"

An uneasy silence followed, as Crom quickly became aware that all eyes in the group had shifted to him after his outburst. The young Druddigon batted his wings uncomfortably, before deciding to try asking again less emphatically.

"Did something happen?" he questioned.

"… Nothing that you need to worry about," Salvini muttered.

"Eh? But why not?" Crom pressed. He looked at Salvini with an expectant gaze, only for her to rebuff him with a defensive cross of her arms.

"Why do you care so much about some stranger's problems?" she huffed. “It’s rude to nose around in others’ lives unasked, you know.”

"Because you seem like a nice Pokémon and I want to know what's wrong…” Crom trailed off.

Why was Salvini being this evasive…? What could she have gotten involved with that would make her so unwilling to talk...? The thought crossed the young dragon's mind that the two had both received messages from a common stranger earlier that morning. So then...

"Did it have something to do with the Pokémon that wrote our letters?" the Druddigon asked. "He was a Skarmory, right?"

Salvini stomped her foot and reflexively fanned out her arm blades, making Crom jump back with a yelp. Wh-What was wrong? Why'd she get mad all of a sudden?

"I said it’s nothing you need to worry about, Druddigon!" she fumed. "I’ve already gotten enough headaches thinking about birds to last a lifetime, so either lay off, or leave like that Skarmory and that overgrown Wingull!"

Crom and his companions went slack-jawed at the gecko's explanation. There was only one Pokémon that that 'overgrown Wingull' could be, prompting a torrent of exclamations to break the stunned silence.

"Wh-What?!" Kiran squawked.

"You saw Pleo and helped him get away?!" Crom exclaimed.

"Where did he go?!" Pladur cried. "He had to have told you something, right?"

The Grovyle froze, her yellow eyes widened and startled as she realized that she'd spoken too much. If these strangers felt like it, they had all they needed to dredge up the Company tribunal that had almost ended her, without the benefit of a superior to vouch for her innocence.

Then again, they too seemed to have something to hide. But after everything that had already happened, it was hard to think of anything to say that wouldn't potentially make things worse…

With one exception.

"I- I've already said too much as is," she muttered.

"Look," Ander began. "If you would be able to tell us-"

"No. I've already messed up my life enough by doing things without thinking them through," Salvini hissed. "I don't need to do it again with you!"

Salvini and the others stared down each other, each waiting for the other to yield. Much to Crom's dismay, the gecko's scowl remained as firm and entrenched as ever... Was there really no way to convince her to tell where Pleo went?

"Is- Is there really nothing you can tell us?" the Druddigon pleaded.

"I'm sorry. I've already paid a lot for what I did," she answered. "I can't risk letting that sacrifice be for nothing."

A tense silence hung in the air as Salvini and the Pokémon from the Siglo Swellow stared at each other, only for a sudden flare of light to sweep over their eyes. The group turned off towards the horizon, where they saw that the sun had begun to set, turning the sky a dull orange. It wouldn't be long before it slipped over the horizon and the visibility started dropping, a dangerous situation given how aggressive the local ferals had shown themselves to be just yesterday.

"It's getting dark," Ander murmured. "We'd probably do better to call it a day here and come back tomorrow."

"That's right. Those ferals will be back before long," Pladur gulped. "I don't think we'd be able to get much done having to constantly fight off ambushes."

"I mean... I don't know how much I'll get done," Salvini said. "But I won't give up on this shrine while I'm still here."

The five uneasily started to pack up the supplies and tools around the worksite, eager to beat the sunset. All the while, Crom still felt a nagging dissatisfaction with how things had gone, prompting the young Dragon-Type to sidle over to Salvini to try and appeal for her help one last time.

"Salvini, can you-" Crom stuttered. "Please... at least think about telling us where Pleo went later?"

"... I will," she hesitantly answered.

The group set off shambling down the path for Fensedge, weighed down by the exertions of a long day of work, along with a sense of looming dread. Every time Crom and his companions looked back in the direction of the shrine's hilltop, they saw the incomplete bones of their work. If they weren't able to finish tomorrow, they wouldn't be paid by Hertsog, and the Siglo Swellow would be stuck in port for at least another a few days, perhaps longer. But… with everything that was left to be done, how on earth could they overcome this obstacle?



Back on Orleigh, evening gave way to night, but even after the full moon reached its zenith in the sky, Elty still had not returned back to Rasp's hostel. The Growlithe's absence started to weigh on the remaining members of Team Traveller, prompting them to ask Rasp for help keeping an eye out for the dog around the market district, just in case he had not been as fortunate as they presumed.

The three ate dinner at the hostel's dining hall and retired to their room, the unease over Elty's absence compounded by the discovery that the team's coin purse was running low yet again. And so it was that the three opted to retire for the night under the glow of the full moon.

Uwaaah…

Or, at least, they had been trying to for several hours. Every time the group finally fell asleep, they were startled awake by the sound of mournful crying from outside. Pleo stirred drowsily in his straw bedding, looking over at his Nidoran teammate at the other side of the window.

"Nrgh… Again?" Pleo yawned. "I thought that the crying stopped earlier!"

"It did," Nida groaned. "But I don't know why it's back, or how Guardia can sleep through this. I haven't heard a peep from her tonight!"

The young Protector shifted tiredly against his bedding, trying in vain to sleep in spite of the crying. It had been a second night with the same voice crying off in the distance, the voice they hadn't gone to help last night…

Was it crying because it was alone? That would surely be a tough thing to bear alone in this town... Though... Elty was probably all alone himself. Was he also going through something like this?

"... Do you think that maybe someone else here has been going through a hard time too?" the little Lugia murmured.

"I don't know what that crying Pokémon is going through," Nida sighed back. "But we're the ones having a hard time thanks to it right now."

"Actually… I was talking about Elty."

Pleo looked around, his glances doing nothing to dispel the sense that the room felt noticeably emptier than the night before. Elty's bedding was still empty and unclaimed, and Guardia's spot from the dresser still sounded as silent as ever. The young Lugia pulled his head against his neck uncomfortably, giving an uneasy glance over to his Nidoran partner.

"Are we doing the right thing just trying to sleep, Nida?" Pleo insisted. "What if Elty's hurt? Or worse?"

"He's not that helpless, Pleo," Nida countered. "And as long as I've got his bag, he won't be going too far…"

"Are you sure about that, Nida?"

Nida thought and twitched her whiskers uneasily. On one level, Orleigh's alleyways weren't that safe given their run-in with the Marked pirates yesterday. On the other hand, if they went out to search for Elty, they'd be doing so knowing even less about their surroundings than he did... and with how they had entered town, would he even want them to find him?

"Yes. Let's just try and get some rest," she sighed. "We need you rested up if you're going to be able to fly us to Sormus tomorrow."

Nida settled back into her straw bedding, watching as Pleo preened a few feathers before he too settled down for rest. The Nidoran closed her eyes, only for the crying outside to stifle her attempts to drift off into slumber. After some turning this way and that way, the Poison-Type cracked her eyes open and looked up at the full moon in the sky.

Even in this safe harbor on this pirate-infested den, it seemed that proper sleep was ever elusive. Hopefully Pleo's wing would be better tomorrow, so that Orleigh and its unwelcome environment would soon be able to be left to slip into the realm of unwelcome memories.



Author's Notes:

- Jedną rzecz na raz! - Polish: "One thing at a time!"
- As ucht déithe - Irish: "For the gods' sake"
- cajero - Spanish (Southern Cone): "shopkeeper, cashier"
- Booster (ブースター) - Japanese: "Flareon" (Official Romanization)
- We gaan veel plezier met je hebben - Dutch: "We’re going to have a lot of fun with you"
 
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Shadow of Antioch

Viaggiatore
Location
Messina, Italy
Pronouns
he/his
Partners
  1. charmeleon
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Back in Mengir Island's Mystery Dungeon, Team Traveller continued their mission to search for the murals. Starting from the seventh floor, the team kept their eyes peeled, remembering Salvini's words about how the stable zone that held the paintings was at most two floors from them. Guardia walked slightly ahead of everyone because of her past experience ferreting out such zones on Kenobi, and surprisingly enough, Elty seemed to have a sharp nose for them himself...

Except, the seventh floor only had a small stable zone while the eighth floor had no stable zone at all! They were now on the last floor, with not a hint of fog to be seen.

"I think we've been had," Elty grumbled. "No stable zone is this hard to find!"

"This is the last floor it could be on, Elty," Nida said. "Maybe we just aren't looking hard enough?"

"Then… does that mean that we passed it?" Pleo nervously asked.

Both Nida and Elty blanched for a moment as they realized that the little Protector might be onto something. If the stable zone was this hard to find, then it was entirely possible that they had passed it earlier! Then they'd be forced to choose between finding a way to backtrack, spending the Escape Orb they'd bought from the Kecleon shop, or clearing the whole dungeon and return later...

"Hey! I found something over here!" Guardia's voice suddenly rang out.

Or it could be right in front of them. After poking a bit at a mat of vines, Guardia swatted it down with her club, revealing a thick fog which swirled and ebbed out slightly.

"Bah, knowing our luck, it'll be another dead end," Elty grunted.

"Elty, think positive," Nida snapped. "The third time's the charm, right?"

"Whatever, let's just get this over with," he sighed, rolling his eyes. "Pleo, you stay on my tail while I follow the bonehead."

"But what about Nida-?" Pleo began, only to squawk with a start as he felt a weight land against his back.

"Heh, being on top of you does give a better view, right?" the Nidoran chuckled. "It couldn't hurt once we come out the other end."

"Oh!" Pleo chirped. "I guess that makes sense."

The four Pokémon formed a line and began to make their way into the fog. Guardia was first, followed by Elty, who had latched onto Guardia's club with his mouth (much to her growling displeasure). At the end of the line was Pleo with Nida on his shoulders, his beak gently grabbing Elty's tail for guidance as the team carried on. The group continued trudging along as the fog started to thicken, when Pleo noticed a stone spire in the distance that looked much like the ones back in Fensedge Village. The sight made Pleo's mind turn back to the day they arrived on Mengir Island…

"Nida?" He asked muffledly.

"Hrm?"

"What does it mean to be 'dead'?"

The Nidoran froze and twitched her whiskers uncomfortably. What on earth had lead Pleo to bring up such a morbid topic now of all times?

"Er… why do you ask?" Nida replied.

"Well, Guardia said that Fensedge reminded her of a graveyard. And a graveyard is supposed to have 'dead' Pokémon in it," he mumbled. "But Fensedge had a bunch of Pokémon and the 'graveyard' place didn't."

The Lugia waited expectantly for Nida to give an explanation clearing the mystery up, only to be answered by a long and awkward silence, punctuated by the sounds of the team's footsteps.

"Nida…? How come you aren't saying anything?"

"It means that you aren't here anymore, but your body stays and won't move or breathe or talk again," Elty suddenly answered. Nida shook her head and shot a glare at the obscured Growlithe.

"Elty!"

"What, he was going to have to find out eventually anyways!"

"Maybe that's how your dead work, Gardie," Guardia chimed in. "But for Karakara and Garagara like me, their spirits guide us, much like the Travellers-"

The fog grew thick enough to muddle the sounds of their voices from that point, which caused Guardia's lecture to come in erratic snatches before fading entirely. As Pleo continued on, he thought and realized that being 'dead' sounded an awful lot like being a Substitute…

It couldn't move… It couldn't breathe... It couldn't talk…

And it couldn't keep itself from being broken apart…

The sound of a flowing stream pricked Pleo's ears, followed by the sight of desiccated leaves and flowers on the ground. They must have gotten through the worst of the fog already, which brought another question to his mind…

"How does a Pokémon become 'dead' then?" he asked.

There was a deathly silence, and had it not been for the thinning fog, Pleo would have thought that Guardia had led them back deeper into the fog. Finally, her voice answered from the front.

"It can happen in many ways," the Cubone explained. "Sometimes it happens when a Pokémon lives long enough… Other times, it happens when a Pokémon gets really sick or hurt."

Pleo trembled. He remembered the team's escape from Lyn's ship and the harrowing crawl through the Mystery Dungeon afterwards, and how everyone had gotten hurt. Could they have stopped moving... forever? And Nida had said the Crom was badly hurt... what if he-

"Hey, I think I see it!" Elty barked.

The Growlithe nosed off ahead, where there was a mural of a blackened, dead forest ringing a white, stone-like tree in the center. The four carried on a little, where there was another painting of a blue deerlike creature springing from the tree with a flash of light, followed by one where the stony tree in the center was absent and the deer roamed freely about a now lush and verdant forest.

"What's this island's Protector supposed to be?" Guardia scoffed. "Aside from the color and the bigger horns, it looks just like that cart-pulling yajū we saw back in the village!"

"Protectors are supposed to come in all sorts of shapes and sizes," Nida replied. "Maybe this one is just a little different."

"L-Look!" Pleo exclaimed. "There's more!"

The team stopped to take rubbings of the murals and labeling the different sectors for colors before carrying along. Nida, Pleo, Elty, and Guardia passed a few more murals with the blue Protector and repeated the process of taking rubbings as the fog started to thin. Eventually, the team came to a painting of a waterfall set against a burning sky. In it, there was a depiction of the deer being pierced with a pillar of burning light coming from a blood-red star in the sky. To the side, another mural showed the Protector falling dead to the ground in a burning forest.

The fog grew thinner and thinner with the next few murals the team recorded, going from the Old World's death to scenes from the new one. There came paintings of figures flying and swimming alongside a ship for an island with needle-like peaks surrounded with mist, and of Pokémon beginning to settle among tender-looking trees. As the team came out of the last stretch of foggy trail, they came before a final mural depicting Pokémon with scarves and without scarves moving an egg into a fog-surrounded clearing filled with tender saplings.

"Wait, this Protector…" Guardia murmured to herself. "If I didn't know any better, I'd say that it has something to do with giving life."

"It makes sense though," Nida said. "With the Wastes as dead as they are, wouldn't it be faster for them to be restored after the Protectors started to wake up if a few of them could give life?"

As she pondered what a restoration of the Wastes might look like, her teammates pulled ahead of her. Pleo noticed her fall behind, and turned back to wave at her to move on.

"Eh? Nida, there's still more paintings up ahead!" Pleo squawked.

"Huh?"

The team drew closer to the pillars, where they saw that the shapes were crude and forceful strokes of various scenes. One showed Pokémon with purple scarves coming into a grove of tall trees and driving various moth and worm-like creatures away from an egg. There was another one showing the purple-scarved Pokémon exiting a cave's maw with the egg, the bugs from the earlier scene lying in disarray on the ground.

At the sight of the third pillar, Nida, Elty, and Guardia began to flush pale. In it were pictures of various Pokémon with scarves being attacked by the Bug-Types from the prior steles, some shown lying on the ground. One of the paintings was still fresh, of a Roserade being set upon in a crude depiction of Mengir's wrecked shrine.

"Why are these pictures so different?" Pleo asked. "And why do you all look so scared? What's wrong?"

"What's wrong is you having the nerve to come here, Inkfoot!"

Team Traveller looked up and watched as three Beautifly and a Dustox swooped down from above and ringed the team. The four bugs were obviously agitated and erratic, their voices coming out in hateful chitters.

"E-Esperen un momento!" Nida squeaked. "We didn't come here to cause trouble!"

"Yeah, we just wanted to look at some pictures for Salvini's friend back in the town!" Pleo cried.

"We've come to learn more about your Protector!" Guardia shot in.

The young Pokémon's earnest pleas drew bitter and derisive laughter from the Bug-Types, who started to flutter around their trapped foes, glaring and sneering all the while.

"'Come to learn about our Protector', huh?" one of the Beautifly, the apparent leader of the group, hissed. "Oh, that's rich coming from an Inkfoot like you."

"Wh-Why's that?" Elty stammered.

"You all stole our Protector from us!" the Bug-Type shouted. "Your vile village broke the Pact so you could take it all for yourselves!"

"And you didn't just move it into town either!" a lighter-colored Beautifly angrily chittered. "You sent its egg over the sea to a faraway island that we couldn't find!"

Wait- this island's Protector's egg had already been found?! Then- those paintings… they were of the Company? But then why hadn't anybody heard about-?

"And now you've come to wreck our grounds again on top of all that!" the Dustox spat.

"That's- That's not-" Elty stuttered, looking around desperately for some way to escape. "L-Look, th-this is all a big misunderstanding! Isn't there something we can do to show you that we don't mean you any trouble?"

"There is," the last Beautifly, a grizzled individual with tattered wings, growled back. "You can die!"

The color drained from Team Traveller’s members as they shrank away from the encroaching Bug-Types. Nida, Pleo, Elty, and Guardia wound up backing into each other, the four Bug-Types surrounding them and flitting their wings more and more aggressively, leaving Pleo to turn nervously to his Nidoran companion.

"N-Nida?!" he cried. "Wh-What do we do?!"

The Nidoran froze, her eyes widening and her mind running blank as she saw no way to escape. She attempted to stammer something back, only to notice that orange and purple powder was beginning to accumulate on their assailants' wings.

"What are you waiting for?!" Guardia shouted. "Rush them before they dump that powder on us!"

The Cubone leapt at one of the Beautifly and swung at him with her club. As the sound of a scuffle rang out, Nida, Pleo, and Elty likewise rushed ahead. Blindly sending spikes, gusts of wind, and cones of cinders at their assailants as they charged on.

Pleo felt a chitinous body tumble against his, and swatted desperately at the presence with his wings, only to feel air.

"A-Aaaah!"

Pleo, Nida, and Elty heard a loud scream come from back towards the entrance, where Guardia had been covered in orange powder and then knocked to the ground by one of the Beautifly. Her assailant had jabbed her with a long proboscis, which retracted from an ugly-looking mark on her left shoulder dribbling ruddy fluid at the end. To everyone's horror, a Dustox and a second Beautifly were closing in on her position.

"G-Guardia!" Pleo squawked.

"Ack!" Elty yelped. "Trzymaj się!"

Nida watched as the dog spat out a cone of cinders, which drove the Beautifly off Guardia with a pained screech and cleared the way for Elty to rush to the Cubone's side. Pleo disgorged a glowing ball of light which caught the other Beautifly and sent him tumbling to the ground with a yelp, as Nida ran for the Dustox to fend her off from the Ground-Type...

"A-Aah!"

… only to pratfall as a sticky thread shot out and enveloped her body. The Poison-Type hastily stumbled back to her feet, only for a cry to come from behind.

"Where do you think you're going?!"

Much to Nida's shock, a third Beautifly dove at her from behind. The Nidoran hastily flicked a spike at the diving bug, only for him to blow it away with a cutting gust of wind, which carried on straight for her.

"Augh!"

The spike ball went tumbling head over heels, her satchel opening and spilling a pawful of items all over the ground. Before she could get up, Nida felt a heavy weight pin her down and chitinous claws grabbing at her pelt. The Poison-Type raised her barbs in a panic, drawing a pained yelp from the Bug-Type above her. Nida felt her attacker fall off of her and darted forward, where down at her feet, she saw a scaled, orange seed. She hastily picked it up with her mouth, turned back as the sound of angry wingbeats fluttered towards her…

And bit down.

BLAM!

The sound of pained screeching rang out, followed by a dull thud as the Beautifly crashed into the earth, twitch and groaning. The Nidoran shook her head, panting, when the sound of Elty's cries came from further back.

"Eyaaah!"

Back at Elty and Guardia position, the Fire-Type reeled from a fresh spike in his flank still dribbling venom. His Ground-Type teammate was in similarly bad shape, struggling against unresponsive limbs to keep fighting while a Beautifly and Dustox circled and harried them with narrowly-missing cutting gusts of wind.

"P-Pay more attention, Gardie!" the Cubone huffed tiredly. "You'll get us wiped out like that!"

"Worry about yourself, alright!" the Growlithe snapped back. "I'm fighting for two of us here-!"

"You're done for, lizard!"

The Growlithe turned and watched as the Dustox dove for Guardia. Reflexively, Elty ran in between them, and spat out a cone of embers, only for them to get blown back by a gust of wind. As the Growlithe watched the sparks fall back to the ground, he charged on undeterred as they fell on his body and kicked up flames along his pelt. Without thinking, the little dog somersaulted forward and vaulted his flaming body feet-first directly towards the moth's face.

Thwack!

The sound of a loud smack followed by chittering screams rang out, as the Dustox attempted to flee, only to stall in midair and flop to the ground, unconscious. Guardia stared wide-eyed at Elty as he came to a gasping, skidding stop along the ground, the fire on his pelt finally dying down.

"Wh-What was that?!" she cried. "You never told me you knew how to do that!"

"I didn't know that I did," he panted. "But it works great!"

"N-Nida! H-Help!"

Back towards the entrance, Pleo had managed to get himself chased and boxed in against the fog by one of the Beautifly. The Bug-Type fluttered here and there, his erratic flight thwarting many of the little Lugia's attempts to strike back at him. The Beautifly beat his wings together and sent a cutting gust along the top of Pleo's left wing, sending the young Protector tumbling out of the air with a squawking thud, landing hard on his wing against a sharp stone.

"A-Aah!"

The bird cried out and writhed as pain shot through his wing. He attempted to get back in the air, only for his wing to ache and grow unresponsive, leading him to pratfall as wingbeats approached him.

"Pleo! Stay down!" Nida's voice suddenly called.

The little Protector pulled his head low to the ground as an object sailed overhead and struck something with a thwip and a yelp. The white bird watched as the Beautifly pursuing him staggered up the ground, a spike lodged in between segments of his exoskeleton…

"L-Leave us alone!"

And spat up a glowing ball of light, which sent the butterfly tumbling out of the air and falling limply against the ground. As the dust settled around the fallen bug, Nida and Pleo panted tiredly, looking around frantically to try and place where their fourth assailant might be.

"A-Aah!"

Following the sound of a loud smack from the sound of Guardia's club swatting chitin, all became clear. The last Beautifly came to a pinwheeling, panting stop along the ground. The creature tried his best to get up, but staggered and flopped forward after discovering that his right wing was unresponsive and hurt to move.

"Ha! And you said you were fighting for two!" Guardia jeered, tiredly poking a tongue out at Elty. "That was my hit there!"

"Yeah, yeah, enough," the dog growled, shaking a weary head. Back closer to the entrance, Pleo raised his head warily, turning to Nida.

"Is… is it over?" he asked.

"Almost, Pleo," she sighed. Before raising her barbs and shouting over to the winded Bug-Type.

"Before you slink off!" she hissed. "Why did you attack us like that?!"

"I'm… I'm not slinking anywhere," the Beautifly spluttered back. "This is our territory…"

"Sure you aren't," Elty growled. "We're not the ones limping off with our tails between our legs here!"

"A-All the better," the bug coughed.

The four's breaths came out in ragged pants as they looked over at the felled Bug-Types, relieved that their ordeal was behind them. Just then, a humming sound began to roll in from the treeline.

"Wh-What's that noise?!"

"That's-"

It got louder, and louder, and louder, and with the sight of yellow and purple bodies tearing through the canopy, it became clear that they were not dealing with a few reinforcements, but a massive swarm.

"Run- AAUGH!"

A cutting gust of wind suddenly flew out, sending Guardia sprawled out over the ground. Elty's fur bristled, his tail folded tight against his legs, and likewise pinned his ears along his head. The Growlithe turned and bolted blindly back for the fog, only to be caught by a dark purple blob from behind and flop forward limply.

"A-Ah!" Pleo squawked. "Elty! Guardia!"

"Pleo! Quick! My bag!" Nida squeaked. "There's an Esca-"

The duo was interrupted by a cutting, cross-shaped gust striking the two and sending them tumbling along the ground. As Pleo struggled to get on his feet, he saw that Nida wasn't getting up, and worse still, the horde was nearly upon them.

"A-Aah! Wait! Stop!" the Protector pleaded. "If my friends get hurt too much, they might become 'dead'!"

"You should have run while you had the chance, Inkfoot!" the wounded Beautifly sneered. "It's over for all of you kirlivi paraziti!"

In the midst of the din and Pleo's frenzied attempts to evade the Bug-Types, Pleo heard the sound of soft voices piercing through. There was a tired-sounding voice that wished for the olden days where the shrine was there to visit… Exhausted groans from haggard Pokémon wishing that the Apricorn fields didn't exist… And voice after voice that wished for a Protector to watch over them again…

All of them wished for an end to the disturbed state of affairs that loomed over the island, the same state of affairs that was about to take his friends' lives. Unless, no matter how futile it seemed…

He didn't give up.

"St-Stop! You can't do this!" Pleo cried. "We didn't take your Protector! We came to look at pictures!"

In spite of his pleas, the only answers the little Lugia received were ugly taunts. A number of the Bug-Types were preparing sickly-looking globs and cutting gusts of wind, ready to shut up their intruder for good. Their attacks zipped towards the stricken bird when all of a sudden, a forceful burst of air forced the charging creatures back with yelps and cries. As the swarm focused back at the entrance near the fog, they saw that the white-plumed bird's markings were now glowing bright, and his voice had become a feral shriek.

"I won't let you make my friends 'dead'!" he shouted. The bird then brought his wings together, and a roaring column of air shot forth and swept up the Bug-Types. Their jeers and threats became panicked cries and screams, intermixed with the sounds of tree branches rending and bending. As Pleo drew back his wings, pain shot through his left wing, leaving him painting and flinching, expecting his assailants to swoop down upon him at any second.

"M-Monster! Monster!"

"F-Fly away! Fly away!"

Only to see that the shapes in the trees were fleeing as fast as they could. From deeper on, Pleo could hear frightened crying from younger-sounding Pokémon. The leader Beautifly with the wounded right wing had been blown up against a tree trunk and curled up, and was whimpering and shuddering out of fright at the sight of the strange white bird.

Did he... just really do that...? Was- Was that what evoking his true powers would do to other Pokémon?

Whump

Pleo craned his head, where he saw Nida groaning, stretched out before a glassy, black Escape Orb. The light was glowing bright, much brighter than it had when they bought it… Did- Did that mean it would work here? Then Nida must have been trying to use it to get them out! She, Elty, and Guardia weren't moving much. If they stopped moving… then- then they'd be dead!

"Nida! Elty! Guardia!" he begged. "P-Please! Just hold on a moment!"

The little Lugia limped over to the Escape Orb, picked it up with his beak... and then threw it against the ground with all his might as the sound of shattering glass rang out.

A bright, white light exploded from the shards, and enveloped the young Protector and his teammates in an overpowering gleam. There was a faint blip as the horrid clearing faded in front of his eyes, followed by the sound of branches gently swaying in the wind...

Joined with a long and pregnant absence of his friend's voices.



The prior night, Crom, Kiran, Ander and Pladur were at the Andaku Docks, continuing a fruitless search for clues of where Team Traveller had flown off to. Somewhere in this wretched hive of scum and villainy, there were the Yanmega, Manectric, and Marowak who had last sighted their blue-scarved friends.

After asking Pladur about the places he remembered of the district during the Siglo Swellow's last visit as free traders, the team figured this district's guild would be a good starting point for their search. Except… things did not go according to plan, with the night's search devolving into aimless wandering around in the shifty district. After a few hours of fruitless search and noticing that the locals were thinning out into ever more menacing-looking characters, the group chose to return to the Siglo Swellow to try their luck again after a safer rest.

Their attempt to resume their search the following morning had thus far been just as fruitless. Unfortunately the Fraxure seemed to be less familiar with the neighborhood than his words let on, especially when entering the district from the bluffs and not the docks.

"Pladur, what direction was that guild again? We couldn't find it last night, and we've been wandering around in this place for about an hour now!" Kiran squawked.

The Fraxure hesitated with answering, before his son interrupted with a tug at his father's shoulder and a question of his own.

"Dad… are we lost?" Crom prodded.

"I- I know it's supposed to be around here somewhere… I know it's in a group of buildings right along the sea," Pladur murmured as he scanned his surroundings puzzledly.

"Then why aren't we walking by the water?" Ander asked skeptically.

"Because that's where all the pirate crews hang out! You don't want to get too close to any of them!" Pladur quickly countered before pointing a claw off down past some ramshackle shops. "Uh… pretty sure it was this way!"

The three sighed and followed after the Fraxure down a lane lined with seedy-looking shops. Now that they walked through Andaku during the day, they noticed how much of a contrast the district was from the rest of Aisle Town. The buildings in this district were noticeably gaudier than the ones they had seen in the rest of the town, and their clientele was similarly more… 'colorful'. Even some of the mundane shops had a noticeably rougher crowd, as a Ledian with a golden scarf ordering at a "sushi" stand was chatting up a rather gruff looking Pangoro with leaflets.

The group continued on until the Scyther of the bunch noticed the scarf design of the Ledian looked awfully familiar… and then quickly pushed his teammates down a back alley.

"Gwark! Ander?! What's the big idea?!" Kiran demanded. "This is 60% rougher than you need to be to get us to go someplace!"

"Más bajo!" the mantis hissed. "You'll give us away!"

The four Pokémon watched as the Ledian flicked out his elytra and flew off, the unmistakable Aggron-head pattern of the Iron Fleet on the scarf around his neck.

"Those pirates who raided the town are here as well," the Scyther buzzed. "And the last thing we need is for one of them to recognize us."

The young Druddigon paused, gears turning in his head as he realized how close they all had come to a nasty encounter.

"Right, we'll be more careful-" Crom began, only to be cut off by a sudden chirp.

"Pladur? Didn't you say that the guild was a group of buildings by the sea with a canvas-covered courtyard?" Kiran asked, before gesturing ahead and to the right. "Like that one over there?"

The team poked their heads around a corner, where sure enough, there was a collection of stilted shacks by the sea with canvas roofing over a corner. Pladur's eyes lit up immediately at the sight of the sorry collection of shanties, as he recognized them from his prior time in port.

"Ah!" He cried. "That's it, come on!"

The four hurried along the lane and ducked down the entrance of the seaside guild into a courtyard that had been dimly lit by candles in jars. The courtyard was still mostly empty due to the early hour, but even so, a few scruffy and shifty-looking characters roamed about. There was a Zubat and Stunky who chattered about a team that had come back soaked after failed attempt to drill through a ship hull. Over in a corner, a Lucario audibly fumed about comrades who took the fact that local Pokémon were exempted from the three-day limit on visitation in Andaku as an excuse to leave him behind. Crom chanced to look down a gap in the wooden planks and into the water below, which revealed a Tentacruel with a white and red scarf passing by, muttering about 'what's taking the captain so long?'…

"I'm telling you, Eeden, we need to lay low for a while! Those square-necks have been coming around and asking questions ever since we got Valatos and his buddies out of the dungeon!"

In addition, there was a Drowzee and Beheeyem by a mission board, who both looked unsettled and deeply agitated.

"Yeah, well whose fault is that, Zamora? I say you'll look more suspicious if you bolt!" the Drowzee shot back. "Really, this wouldn't have been a problem in the first place if you didn't let that accursed dragonfly and the rest of those dweebs arm-twist you!"

Wait a minute, dragonfly? 'Valatos'? Then...

"Ack! Those two know the Pokémon that ran into Pleo earlier!" Crom exclaimed, pointing a claw off at Zamora and Eeden.

The Druddigon's shout caused several Pokémon nearby to turn to see what the ruckus was all about, only to see a party of four Company grunts and two startled-looking Psychic-Types. The two teleporters blanched and then soon closed their eyes and started making the sweeping motions of a teleport…

"Wait! Wait!" Pladur cried out. "You met a 'mon called 'Valatos,' right? Do you know where we can find him or the Pokémon with him?"

The two Psychics abruptly froze and turned to each other, blinking incredulously. Their expressions notably relaxed, as if a great weight had been removed from both their shoulders before Zamora began to speak back.

"Oh! You just wanted to know about them," the Beheeyem said, sighing out of relief. "And here I thought you were here to-"

The Beheeyem was cut off with a yelp as an unseen force knocked him down against the ground. Crom and his companions whirled their heads just in time to see a glow fade from the Beheeyem and his Drowzee companion, clearly displeased at the Cerebral Pokémon's talkativeness.

"Shut up, Zamora!" The Drowzee growled, before turning to the four lavender-scarved Pokémon. "Look, I don't know what your game is, but there's no way-"

"We'll give you immunity for whatever you two have been up to if you tell us where to find these Pokémon," Ander cut in. Almost immediately, the Drowzee's demeanor became more amicable, as he hastily amended his words.

"Er… that we wouldn't tell you where to find them!" he chuckled. As the tension thinned, the prying eyes of the other Pokémon in the courtyard shifted away and back to their various busywork, leaving the Drowzee to grunt and then pry a bit into his interrogators.

"So, what is it you need from them?"

Ander opened his mouth only to freeze and blanch. The mantis had been in such a hurry to find out where Valatos and his friends were that he hadn't thought through an excuse as to why they were looking for them! The Bug-Type stammered and fumbled with his words, only for Crom to come to his aid with a hasty interjection.

"Uh, well," Crom began. "They're in big trouble because, er…"

"They've been withholding evidence! Evidence about a witness for a trial!" Kiran interjected. "So we need them to cough it up!"

"Wait, those three helped with legal proceedings?" Eeden asked. "I thought all they did was shove crates ar-"

"Eeden, not now!" Zamora hissed. "Look, if you're looking for Valatos and his friends, you might as well try out that dump of a bar they like hanging out at. It's called 'bokuya or something like that."

"Ryūbokuya," the Drowzee corrected. "It's a little ways inland and to the north from here. You'll know as soon as you see it, like its name it's pretty much a lump of driftwood."

The two were answered by an agitated buzz, as Ander raised a scythe and pointed it accusingly at the two Psychic-Types.

"N-Now hold on here!" Ander interrupted. "What sort of lead is that?! What are we supposed to do if we head to the bar and Valatos and the Pokémon with him are already gone?"

There was a noticeable pause as the two Psychic-Types traded looks with each other, before turning back to their questioners and quickly attempting to wave away their fears.

"Well, that barkeep over there has a bit of an axe to grind against them," the Beheeyem explained. "And he is a bit of a neutral type, so if you wanted to say, pass on a bounty…"

"A bounty?" Pladur murmured. "He wouldn't happen to be able to take in other ones, would he?"

"I mean, if you make it worth his while, sure," Eeden said. "Though not sure who else you'd need to get at those backstabbing dimwits…"

"That's confidential," Kiran replied. "But thanks for the tip, we'll make sure it's worth your while."

The four turned and made their way out of the ramshackle guild complex. Crom briefly looked back and saw relieved expressions on the two teleporters' faces, which made the little dragon grow uneasy and turn a wary eye to his father.

"Do you think we can trust them?" Crom asked.

"We don't have any other leads right now," Pladur answered, shaking his head. "I think it's as good a shot as any."

The four trudged on, vanishing down the winding alleys of Andaku in their search of this 'bokuya', looking here and there for the 'pile of driftwood' the teleporters spoke of.



Outside Mengir's Mystery Dungeon, the foggy approach was its normal, eerily quiet self with branches and leaves swaying in gentle breezes. This all changed when suddenly, a bright white flash appeared, depositing the forms of a Lugia, a Nidoran, a Growlithe, and a Cubone onto the ground. Once the burst of light faded, Pleo flopped forward against the ground, panting. As his senses began to attune to their surroundings, Pleo slowly began to piece together that the Escape Orb had deposited him in front of the misty entrance to the dungeon.

The place was eerily silent, with the only companions being the mist, the jagged rock formations that formed the spires in between the dungeon... and of course the unconscious forms of a Nidoran, a Growlithe, and a Cubone up ahead.

"A-Aah! Nida! Elty! Guardia!"

The young Lugia tried to beat his wings and fly over, only to wince and gasp as he felt pain shoot through his left wing. The bird uneasily pulled his wounded wing back to his side, and darted along to the prone bodies ahead.

"G-Guys? W-Wake up," he pleaded, nosing at the unconscious Pokémon. "We're out of the dungeon now, we can go back…"

No matter how he pushed or pecked at them, there didn't seem to be any reaction from any of his friends. Pleo began to grow uneasy as he started to realize that his friends were surely badly hurt- Wait a minute! He had something that could help them!

"H-Hang on!" he chirped. "I'll- I'll heal you, and then you'll be all better!"

The Lugia searched through Nida's bag, and came across an Oran Berry. After some clumsy attempts at peeling away the rind, the little Protector remembered that Crom had just eaten them in the past.

Pleo quickly stuffed the berry into Nida's mouth, waiting for her to bite down on the berry… except she never did. The berry just flopped out, with a faint coating of spittle attached. The bird tried moving the berry over to Elty's mouth, and then to Guardia's, but none of them seemed to get any better.

Wh-Why hadn't it done anything?! Wh-Why hadn't the berry made any of them better like in the past times when the team was hurt?! The little Guardian then remembered that Guardia had said that Pokémon became 'dead' when they were hurt very badly… What had Elty said about being 'dead' again?

Your body couldn't move, couldn't talk back...

D-Did this mean that…? Nida… Elty… Guardia… They were all...

"N-No! You can't be 'dead'! You can't!" Pleo cried. The little bird futilely tried to rouse his teammates, as his fears began to mount and tears started to well in his eyes. "W-We were gonna go home together! We- We were-"

The Lugia's voice hitched as he began to sob. He tried to save them! Why weren't they fine now? He was supposed to be a Protector... but he failed at protecting them… If he wasn't a Protector... what was he then? And what would he do without his friends?

"Ahoy!"

Pleo quickly turned around upon hearing a squawking voice behind him. In the distance he could see the shape of a large, metallic bird flying towards him, the light of the lowering sun reflecting of his metal feathers. This was a 'Skarmory', like the one Nida was afraid of the other day…

Wait a minute, this was the Skarmory Nida was afraid of the other day! The one who was the 'Warrior of Life'!

"Thank gods I ran into you before you-" the Skarmory began, only to clamp his beak shut as he noticed "Wait, what happened to your friends?"

"T-Those bug thingies!" Pleo sniffled. "They attacked, and now Nida, Elty and Guardia t-they're d-d-dea..."

"Calmo! Calmo!" The Steel-Type reassured, before gesturing at the fallen Pokémon. "Nobody's dead yet! Your friends are still breathing, don't you see their chests rising and falling?"

Pleo turned and saw that true enough, his teammates were still breathing, if barely. So- So they weren't dead! Then that meant…

"Then- Then they can get better?!" he cried. Trizano nodded before giving the young Lugia a reassuring pat with one of his wings.

"They should, but it looks like they've been hurt rather badly," the Skarmory answered. "Can you fly, little one?"

Pleo looked uneasily at his left wing, and attempted to bat it out to take flight. The little Protector grimaced as his wing began to throb, but still stubbornly hopped up and beat his wings. The Lugia gave a few beats, before the pain overcame him and caused him to cry out, tumbling to the ground with a pained squawk as Trizano fluttered over.

"It's alright! It's alright! Don't force a bad wing!" the Steel-Type squawked as he inspected Pleo's wounded wing. "Hopefully it's just a sprain, but I think it's probably safest to try and walk back."

The Steel-Type looked at Pleo's unconscious teammates. "We'll have to carry them," he determined, before he set off for Nida and began to hoist her limp body onto his shoulders.

"Looks like you're not in good shape yourself," Trizano muttered as he slung Elty and then Guardia one by one onto his back. "What happened earlier?"

"We were doing our mission when we came to this stable zone full of trees and paintings," Pleo explained. "Then all these Pokémon came and hurt us like this!"

Trizano paused as he stooped to grab Guardia's bone from the ground. So Administrator Darzin's trap had caught the children up...

"Ah, I see… but then how did you all get away?" the Skarmory asked.

"Well, I remember there being a glow, and then when I beat my wings, all of the mean bugs got blown back," Pleo answered. "Then I took the the Escape Orb from Nida's bag and-"

Pleo noticed that the Skarmory had abruptly stopped in his tracks and beaten his wings out in surprise. The creature tilted his head, with a wide-eyed curiosity as if he had just heard Pleo say that the Travellers were falling from the sky.

"Did- Did I say something wrong?" the little Lugia murmured, only to be answered with a wing spread over his right shoulder.

"... Don't worry about it, little one," the Skarmory reassured. "Let's just get you and your friends patched up for now."

As the two limped off down the path back to Fensedge, Trizano pondered what he had just observed. This Pokémon had to be something special...

The kind of special that he knew, from personal experience, would need a guarding eye to see him out of this Pyroar's den.



Back on Kenobi, while Crom and his peers from the Siglo Swellow looked around for this 'bokuya, other ne'er-do-wells were busy going about their routines in port. One of those was the Ledian the group noticed earlier, still wearing the familiar gold and silver patterned scarf of the Iron Fleet. The beetle fluttered throughout Andaku, zipping here and there until he came near a stretch of sandy shoreline where some ships had been shoved ashore.

The Bug-Type landed on the beach and folded his wings behind his elytra before making his way down the beach for a large, two masted caravel with golden sails surrounded by a flurry of activity. There were crewmates hard at work swabbing the deck and repainting some scuffed sections of the ships' trim, others set about examining the hull for any signs of damage or rotted timbers. The bulk of the activity however, focused around the stump of a mast that was being torn out, with a small crew of Pokémon waiting impatiently with a new mast that had been 'borrowed' on short order from a local shipyard.

"Where have you been, Kichiro?!"

And of course the ship's captain was also there right behind him, thumping his tail impatiently and glaring at the Ledian. A rough looking Aggron wearing the same kind of golden scarf as most of the other Pokémon currently tending to the stricken Mistral Marauder's repairs, and clearly in a less-than-chipper mood.

"It's Keiichiro, and give this 'recruiting' thing a little time!" the Ledian buzzed back defensively. "I'm sure that something will turn up eventually once the rookies here forget about us pulling in with a missing mast… twice."

Hess growled and fumed at the Bug-Type's response, before stamping his feet angrily against the sand.

"Don't give me that, Kichiro! My ship needs more recruits than a solitary Hoppip and we need them today!" he bellowed. "It's the third day and not all of us have residence papers for this island to hide behind like you!"

The Aggron's shout drew the attention and quizzical stares of his laboring subordinates, including a Pawniard and a Voltorb who were hoisting several buckets of paint with ropes and pulleys up the ship.

"Eh? But it's only the second day!" the Pawniard protested. "We've only been here two days since we came back after that ocean clan broke the front mast again!"

"Wait, then why are we in such a rush?" the Voltorb added. "If we're allowed to stay here for three days in a row- Aaah!"

The duo were swiftly cut off by a number of rocks flung from under the sand, sending the pair tumbling along the beach along with the contents of the paint buckets. As the pair staggered up groaning and dripping pigment, the Aggron captain gave an irked stamp of his feet and glared at the Pokémon.

"Because we only get three days a month to work with, you morons!" Hess growled, before stomping back over in the direction of an increasingly-nervous-looking Ledian who was backpedaling along the sand.

"N-Now hold on here! Just what am I supposed to do, huh?!" Kichiro buzzed. "I can't just magically make potential recruits change their minds, and the last time this crew tried press-ganging anyone, it was a total debacle!"

"He does have a point there, captain," a Floatzel's voice added, its owner giving a sighing roll of his eyes at the whole exchange. Hess muttered under his breath, complaining about 'Couldn't you back me up this time, Rodion?' before turning back to the Bug-Type before him.

"I don't care what you do, Kichiro, just get me someone!" the Steel-Type demanded. "Or if you need something else to keep you busy, you can get started on scraping the ship's hull!"

Kichiro hastily darted off and took wing, buzzing up into the air and away from the beach. After losing his line of sight with the Aggron, the Bug-Type sighed, and came to a rest on a roof eave overlapping an alleyway.

"'I don't care what you do, Kichiro, just get me someone!' Bah, who does that useless debutcho think he is? He can't even get my name right!" the beetle angrily buzzed. "So what if I've been taking it a little easy? It's not like a recruit would just fall into my lap!"

"I don't believe this, how did we get rejected by the Strongjaw Gang?!"

The Ledian twitched his antennae and looked around after hearing a yipping voice from below. After a puzzled "Huh?" and failing to see any sign of Pokémon around him, Kichiro realized the conversation was coming from below. Down there he saw a Yanmega, a Manectric, and a Marowak in lavender scarves talking amongst each other in hushed tones

"We're tough enough to hold our own on a crew like that!" Alvise complained. "What gives?!"

"I told you we should've done something about these Company scarves," Nori muttered, shaking his head.

"Well what are we supposed to do, huh?" Valatos snapped. "Administrator Farn's out for our heads, and the moment we get caught by another Company grunt, we're through!"

Wasn't that the group that had been hogging the stools at Ryūbokuya a couple nights ago? What were they doing here? Kichiro paused and flicked his antennae as a devious smirk began to spread over his face with a dawning realization...

Maybe he had gotten some recruits that had fallen into his lap. And the Garagara in particular would surely be just the sort that Hess needed after shoving him around like that earlier!

"Oi, you three down there!" the Ledian cried.

"G-Gih!" Alvise gulped. The three whirled their heads up to see the eavesdropping Bug-Type from above, who cheerily waved and carried on.

"You're looking to join a crew, right?"

The three blinked and began to shoot incredulous looks at one another, wondering all the while what this strange Pokémon wanted from them.

"Er… yeah? Why?" Valatos asked.

"Funny thing, because my crew's actually in need of some extra hands right now," Kichiro answered, before fluttering down into the alleyway. As soon as the Ledian landed, Valatos quickly pulled his friends aside to discuss what they should do here. After some hastily-whispered strategizing, the three decided to press further on Kichiro's offer, the Marowak of the group leading the charge.

"Wait, what crew is that?" Nori asked.

"The Iron Fleet," Kichiro chittered back, adding a pair of emphatic punches with his right arms into the air. "The gold-threaded crew with fists of iron!"

"Wait, the Iron Fleet?" Alvise muttered. "Weren't those the losers that pulled in with the missing ma- Ow!"

Before the Manectric could continue he was cut off by a sharp gust from his Yanmega teammate. The dragonfly irkedly shook his head, and turned back to address Kichiro.

"As Alvise here was saying, we'd be thrilled to come aboard," Valatos hastily interjected. "Really, it's quite the lucky draw for both of us, we were looking for a change of pace."

"Oh, I know," Kichiro said. "And the Captain has been looking forward to getting a crewmate just like your friend there."

The beetle adamantly pointed out the Marowak of the three, a wide, somewhat unsettling grin starting to creep across his face. Valatos and his companions blinked and traded looks with each other, before Nori cleared his throat and tried to respond.

"Er… like me? What do you mean by that?" Nori replied. "And what's with that grin on your face?"



"Heave!"

After shooing Kichiro off, the repairs of the Mistral Marauder had finally wrapped up, and the process of bringing the ship back into the water started. The Iron Fleet's more terrestrial members shoved the ship from the bow along with their captain, while the sea escorts tugged from the water. Except, as Hess' panting and labored breaths evidenced, something about today's pushoff seemed more tiring than normal...

"Hah, hah… what are those swimmers doing?! It's never this much work pushing the ship back into the surf!"

"I'm telling you, we need to put more backbone into this!" a Seadra's voice cried. The seahorse's call was answered with a snorting "some of us don't have backbones!" along an indistinct mass of squabbling.

The muddy sound of the voices chattering off ahead reached the Aggron's ears, which prompted him to leave his place at the bow. The Steel-Type ignored the protesting grumbles from some nearby lackeys as he paced over towards the water.

"Eh?"

There, he saw the bulk of his sea escorts squabbling with one another. Their group was split into two camps: one who weren't tugging at their tow ropes… and another one that also was not tugging at their tow ropes and berating the others for not helping.

"You know what I meant!" the Seadra huffed. "If the Captain finds out about this, we're in for a world of hurt!"

"Relax, the ship is barely out of the water anyway!" an Octillery answered back, "No point in wearing ourselves out this early in the game!"

Suddenly, the Seadra and the other Pokémon gathered around the octopus went wide-eyed, and began to dart off in the water in a hurry. The Octillery looked around, puzzled at his colleagues' sudden change of demeanor...

"Uh... why are you all swimming aw- Argh!"

A change that was quickly felt after the octopus was swept up in a sudden wave, which drew a few yelps from some other unfortunates that had not swum out of its path in time. One by one, the sea Pokémon turned and came face to face with the culprit, the glaring form of their captain, lurking in the water.

"Get back to work!"

The sea escorts hastily went back to their tow ropes, and even invertebrate Pokémon such as the now-bruised Octillery discovered that they indeed had a newfound backbone for their work. The ship tugged along a bit quicker now, as Hess left the water, still dripping along the beach sand as he made his way back to the ship's bow, growling all the while.

"The things I have to put up with from this crew..."

"Captain, I'm back! And I've got some recruits!"

The Aggron paused after hearing a Ledian's chittering voice. That must be Kichiro, and it sounded like all he needed to do his job properly was a good kick in the rear.

"Hrmph, about time!" he grunted. "Let's see who we've-"

Hess turned back, and saw that waiting for him was the expected Ledian, along with a Yanmega, a Manectric… and a Marowak. The Aggron and the three Company Pokémon went wide-eyed and stumbled back, recoiling from each other as a mutual cry filled the air.

"A-AAAH! You again!"

The four Pokémon traded incredulous glances with each other, until finally, after gulping and shaking his head, Hess turned his attention to a bemused-looking Ledian. The Steel-Type attempted a bellowing roar, only for it to come out instead as a whining squeak.

"Ki-Kichiro?!" he demanded. "Wh-What is the meaning of this?!"

"Well, you said that you needed new recruits, right?" the Bug-Type answered, crossing his arms with a smug, satisfied smile. "Whelp, I got us a better batch than we've seen in ages!"

While the beetle and his captain began to argue heatedly with each other, Nori uneasily fidgeted around with his bone as the Aggron seemed all too familiar to him..

"Valatos," the Marowak whispered. "This is that 'mon who was glaring at me the other-"

"Nori, shut up!" the dragonfly hissed, before dusting his exoskeleton's segments off and flitting up to the golden-scarved Aggron. "Aherm, as your friend was saying… we've seen our share of action on the seas before."

"Yeah, so you won't be going wrong taking us aboard!" Alvise chimed in. Valatos gave a strong beat of his wings as his partners puffed their chests a bit, hoping to make a positive impression on this… unexpected potential employer.

"N-No way! I don't need the likes of you on my crew! Take a hike!"

Only for their confident expressions to melt into wide-eyed panic as the Aggron shot back with a stammering rejection.

"Oh, but didn't you say you needed more recruits than just a Hoppip by today, Captain?" Kichiro demanded. "Are we really going to shut them out when the only other recruit we've gotten was that loser Wilhelm?"

"Hey! I'm right here!" a Hoppip protested. Some other murmurs started going around the gathered crew such as "is he daft?" and "he can't be serious about turning away help, right?" Hess bit his tongue as he realized that no, he couldn't very well turn away help in front of his crew for no reason, but even so...

"Rgh… I'll take the bug and the wolf," he conceded. "I'm not taking that lizard on board though-!"

"Um, Hess? Need I remind you that we'd still be around ten heads short from our losses back on Tromba?" Rodion interrupted, tapping at the armored lizard's flank for attention. "I mean, the extra strength offsets that a bit, but still."

The Aggron's eyes went wide and he gritted his teeth uneasily as he realized that these newcomers had put him into a bind with his crew. One which his Ledian subordinate was all too keen to spell out.

"So, as you can see Captain," Kichiro continued, a smug, satisfied look creeping over the creature's face. "Like Rodion pointed out, it looks like we're not in any shape to be turning down any extra hands, doesn't it?"

Hess shot a piercing glare at the Ledian, growling and grinding his teeth. That miserable bug knew that those awful bone lizards made him nervous, and had done this on purpose! How could he?! That ungrateful louse-!

"G-Gih!"

Hess recoiled as he felt a Marowak's bone prodding at him, which made him jump and backpedal against the side of his ship. After looking down, the Aggron saw Nori waiting, curiously tilting his head a short distance away.

"So, uh… we're on, right?" The Ground-Type asked.

Hess looked around, and became acutely aware that everyone around him was staring at him, with a few snickers starting to go about. There wasn't really a good excuse for rejecting the little monster in front of him… let alone one that wouldn't make him sound pathetic in front of his crew. The Aggron closed his eyes, shook his head, and resigned himself to the fact that he would be stuck with this Marowak until he could find a convenient raid to be rid of him.

"Ugh… fine, you're on," Hess groaned, putting a claw over his face.

Valatos, Alvise, and Nori collectively exhaled a sigh of relief. After all this digging and searching, they finally got a way off this accursed island... and even a way back into the old business! …

Sort of. But those details could be sweated later, and any port in a storm would do for now...

"Right, so… looks like we're pushing a ship out?" Valatos asked.

"Yeah, we can do that!" Alvise added.

"We'll finish that later, I need a break," Hess said, quickly making his way up the beach before turning back to his crew from a safely distant spot. "And a nice, stiff drink at Shuho's…"

The mention of 'Shuho' instantly electrified the Steel-Type's crew, as cheers and whoops broke out among the gathered golden-scarved Pokémon.

"Woo hoo! Break time!"

"Dibs on the counter stool at 'bokuya!"

"I call the corner booth!"

Hess screwed his eyes shut and shook his head before shuffling off for the crew's haunt, most of the other members of the Iron Fleet eagerly following after their captain. Valatos and his friends stayed behind as Rodion passed the trio a set of new, golden-threaded scarves from his satchel. After a quick 'Welcome to the team' the first mate followed after his captain, leaving three newly-minted recruits behind on the beach to slip into more appropriate attire.

As the three set to work replacing their Company garb, the crowd of crewmates thinned down to a handful of sea escorts who didn´t feel like making the trip on land. The beach settled down as the Aggron and his mob of cronies slipped off, emboldening the three to begin to chatter about their new superior.

"I think the new boss doesn't like you, Nori," Alvise said.

"Gee, you think?" the Marowak grumbled, putting a claw over his face.

"Mrph, whatever," Valatos buzzed. "We've got our way out of here, let's just go get that drink."

The three finished tying up their scarves, leaving Nori to grab and ball up the group's Company lavenders and stuff them into their bag. The Yanmega and his comrades then set off after the Iron Fleet. There would be safety in numbers if other guards came for them, and besides, after such a long day, the lot of them could stand for a well-deserved drink at 'bokuya.



Back in Mengir, Pleo had managed to make his way to the medic's hut in Fensedge Village along with the Skarmory who had aided him. The little bird and his unconscious teammates were quickly whisked to a windowed room on the second floor where berries and bandages were applied, and a Luxio carefully examined each of the four members of Team Traveller, going on about "doesn't look like anything's broken".

After a while, things began to die down as Nida, Elty, and Guardia's bandaged forms were moved into freshly prepared bedding, and the Electric-Type applied the last few bandages to Pleo's wounded wing.

"You've all gotten roughed up a bit more than normal," the medic murmured. "But I don't see any wounds that can't be fixed by a few days of bed rest."

The corners of Pleo's mouth lifted, and hope returned to his eyes at the Luxio's words… Then… did that mean?

"Th-They'll be alright?" the Lugia asked.

"If they don't exert themselves. And that includes you, little bird," the Luxio instructed. "Your wounds might be less severe than your friends', but I don't want you stressing yourself if you can help it. Do you hear me?"

Pleo looked at his now-bandaged left wing and reluctantly nodded, it wasn't like he wanted to make his wing hurt more…

"Okay…"

The lion made his way past the doorway, where after a few indistinct words outside, the metal-feathered form of a Skarmory came into the room. Trizano sidled up against the young Lugia's form and ruffled his feathers before speaking to the little bird.

"You and your friends really ought to be more careful next time," Trizano sighed. "That mission of yours wasn't something that a band of rookies like you should've accepted."

"It… wasn't?" Pleo asked.

"No, and I'm not sure who put it in your heads it was a good idea to head into feral grounds on this island," the Skarmory squawked, shaking his head indignantly. "It was quite irresponsible of him!"

It… was? But if this mission was that dangerous, why didn't Salvini tell them? She just wanted to help her friend!

... didn't she?

"But- But Salvini said that it was to help the town fix their shrine!" Pleo cried.

The Lugia's outburst made the Steel-Type jerk his head back and ruffle his feathers uneasily. The little Protector nosed with his beak at a satchel that rested on the back of a softly breathing Nidoran, which made Trizano pause and blink uneasily as he realized there was another explanation for how Team Traveller could have been duped...

Could it be that Darzin and the Company's scheming had exploited the goodwill of a bunch of unwitting pawns?

"She said it meant a lot to her friend…" Pleo murmured, his head beginning to droop. "We even got all the pictures…"

"What pictures?" Trizano pressed. Pleo paced over uneasily and stuck his beak into Nida's bag, fishing out the rubbings they had taken along with the team's mission listing and placed them on the floor.

"These ones," he answered. "The ones we got for our mission…"

Pleo's eyes widened and his expression sank as he realized that if he were to stay in bed like the Luxio wanted him to… then they'd never be able to get their mission done! Unless...

"W-Wait! Could- Could you help deliver it for us?" Pleo asked.

Trizano cocked a brow and raised a wing in protest, only to see the white bird's pleading gaze. Now that he thought about it… if he were to have the listing delivered now it would be safer to do it in person…

And the guild wasn't that far away...

"It's not that much of a hassle. Just take it easy for now, okay?" the Skarmory reassured, giving a soft pat at Pleo's head. "I'll come back afterward to keep an eye on you and your friends until you get back on your wings."

The young Protector's anxieties eased a bit, and he settled down into his bedding. While it was comforting to hear that Trizano would be there to help for a little while, something nagged at him about the matter...

"But why?"

Trizano paused a moment, and seemed to be ready to say something only to close his beak. After shaking his head, the creature sported a small, reassuring smile on the corners of his mouth, and gave a reassuring wave of his wings.

"I suppose you could say it's because I sensed that you're a bit like me," the Skarmory said. "That we both have something a bit different than normal about ourselves."

Pleo blinked and tilted his head curiously. Something… different about themselves? The little Lugia wondered if perhaps the Skarmory knew about his nature, but then if he did…

What was different than normal about him? Was he also a Protector?

"Er… thank you," Pleo replied. "But, I don't really understand-"

"Ngh…"

Pleo's words were cut off by a weak groan and the sound of stirring. The two birds turned, and saw that Nida was shifting, her little red eyes starting to open.

"Ah! Nida! Nida! You're awake! You're awake!" Pleo chirped excitedly. Trizano for his part sized up the little Poison-Type, and after pausing in thought, turned to the little Protector.

"I'll explain another time, but it looks like I should get going for now," the Skarmory answered, before shaking a feather loose onto the ground. "Ciao, little one. Though do explain the calling card before I come back, alright?"

Before Pleo could squawk in protest, the Skarmory hopped along and quickly ducked out of the room just as Nida started to open her eyes. Trizano hastily slipped into the hallway, but not fast enough for the Nidoran to miss the glimpse of something metal passing by the door and go wide-eyed.

"H-Huh?!" the Nidoran squeaked, jolting up with a start. "Pleo, who was that?!"

"Oh? It was Trizano!" Pleo said. "The Skarmory that helped us all get here!"

"The- The what?" Nida exclaimed. The Poison-Type looked ahead and saw that on the floor was the unmistakable, jagged plume of a Skarmory resting on the ground. A- A Skarmory helped them?

"He was really nice and everything! He even said that he'd be keeping an eye on us!" Pleo replied. "But… I don't know why he left so suddenly…"

Nida stared ahead blankly at the feather, trying to make sense of Pleo's words. Before she could think about it for too long, her train of thought was disrupted by the tired groans of a nearby Growlithe and Cubone.

"Urgh, keep it down, you two…"

"Yeah, the noise isn't helping this killer headache…"

Their teammates had roused as well, making for a complete, if sorry-looking team of sore and battered Pokémon once more. As Elty and Guardia chattered on about idle nothings trying to piece together what had happened, the Nidoran shifted and turned to Pleo, folding her ears back uneasily.

"Pleo, I don't know if that was a good idea," she said.

"Huh?" Pleo asked. "Why not?"

"B-Because you don't know if you can trust him!" she cried out. "What if he comes back to hurt us while we're still weak?!"

"But he helped us, Nida!" Pleo squawked. "Why would he hurt us?!"

A dead silence fell over the room as Nida and Pleo traded fixed, uneasy gazes with each other. Guardia and Elty looked at each other, before turning their attention to their teammates.

"Eh? What are you two going on about?" the Cubone asked.

"Yeah, I think I'm a little lost here-" Elty added, only to freeze and flare his ears as the sounds of heavy footsteps and a commotion in the hallway broke out.

The sounds lead up to the entrance of the room, where a Leafeon with a Company scarf and the telltale blotch of a Marked burst in growling.

"Alright, pirate scum!" the fox exclaimed. "You're under ar-ah-ahh-"

The Grass-Type's eyes widened in terror and her fur bristled, her words coming out as incoherent stammers. The fox backpedaled a few steps at the sight of the white bird in the room, before turning and bolting for the door with a frightened whine, headlong into a group of three lavender-scarved Pokémon.

"Ow!"

The Leafeon bowled the Company Pokémon over, sending them tumbling over one another into the room in a rough pile, drawing a chorus of yelps and cries.

"Phyllis, kakvo pravish?! You're supposed to run towards them!"

"Agh… my nose…"

"H-Huh?! What's-?!" Pleo squawked. As he sized up the groaning Company Pokémon who were getting back up from the floor, he noticed that among them was none other than Salvini.

"S-Salvini?! Wh-What's going on here?!"

The Protector noticed that Nida and Elty's fur was standing on end, and that Guardia was grabbing for her club. As the lot of them attempted to stumble out of their bedding, the sound of heavy, lumbering footsteps coming into the room made the four freeze and go wide-eyed.

"Sit down!" a voice interrupted. After looking up, the four saw that the hulking form of an Armaldo entering the room. The anomalocaris made his way over to the increasingly pallid members of Team Traveller, before giving a satisfied smirk.

"To answer your question, little bird. They're here to put an end to your little adventure."



Author's Notes:

- (¡)Esperen un momento! - Spanish: "Wait a moment!"
- Trzymaj się! - Polish: "Hang in there!", can also be used as an expression analogous to "Take care"
- kirlivi paraziti (кирливи паразити) - Bulgarian: "filthy parasites" (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)
- (¡)Más bajo! - Spanish: "Keep it down!", lit. "more low"
- Calmo! - Italian: "Calm down!", "Take it easy!"
- debutcho (でぶっちょ) - Japanese: "fatty" (Hepburn Romanization)
- kakvo pravish?! (Какво правиш?!) - Bulgarian: "What are you doing?!" (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)

Chapter 36 Review:

"What does it mean to be 'dead'?"

That’s… dark O_O. But makes sense for him to ask. I had missed some of his childlike questions.

As Pleo continued on, he thought and realized that being 'dead' sounded an awful lot like being a Substitute…

Nida: “No, Pleo—before you ask, the Substitutes that we use are NOT dead pokemon” >.<

"How does a Pokémon become 'dead' then?" he asked.

There was a deathly silence

Hehe

In it, there was a depiction of the deer being pierced with a pillar of burning light coming from a blood-red star in the sky. To the side, another mural showed the Protector falling dead to the ground in a burning forest.

Hm… I wonder what that blood-red star is. I want to say it’s a depiction of some sort of satellite-launched nuclear weapons, meaning humanity wiped itself out—but since gods literally exist (proof: Pleo, Xerneas) then I can’t really discount the mainstream narrative of how the Wastes came about.

"It makes sense though," Nida said. "With the Wastes as dead as they are, wouldn't it be faster for them to be restored after the Protectors started to wake up if a few of them could give life?"

OwO, I am very much interested in seeing where this plot line goes. I’m still very invested in eventually visiting the Wastes.

"What's wrong is you having the nerve to come here, Inkfoot!"

Oh god, the bug-types even went so far as to draw scenes of their previous victims’ demise! That’s hardcore. I like it.

"There is," the last Beautifly, a grizzled individual with tattered wings, growled back. "You can die!"

Ah… I see that breaking the Pact turns ferals into extremists O_O

Okay, I’ve felt this way for a little while, and it’s finally time to come clean… I think there are too many fight scenes in the story so far. Even when there's a few chapters in between, it nevertheless feels like each fight drags out for a LONG time.

Don’t get me wrong: when taken individually, the fights are well-written. You manage the combat ebb and flow very well, and who has the upper hand is ever shifting. I like that. But… these fights all feel samey, you know? A bunch of ferals pop up, throw taunts, can't be reasoned with, and our heroes get pummelled and barely win after a gruelling fight to the end. Heck, I usually _prefer_ gruelling fights for survival. But here… there's just too many, and it doesn't feel like our characters' fighting styles develop much. What makes this fight different from the last… four or five fights with ferals? It’s not like our heroes have learnt new moves or tactics that radically change things.

"W-We were gonna go home together! We- We were…"

Daaaw, Pleo thinking his teammates are dead is one of the most heartwarming moment I've read in the story so far.


Woo! Italian 'mon to the rescue!

"To answer your question, little bird. They're here to put an end to your little adventure."

Well, we can’t quite have that—otherwise the story would be over. But it’ll be interesting to see them try :V

A great chapter all-around! It was good to read more of this story. I should probably dedicate more time to it—thesis or not, the individual chapters don’t take THAT long to read. U-usually “O_O
 

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
That’s… dark O_O. But makes sense for him to ask. I had missed some of his childlike questions.

Yeah, from the earliest stages of planning, this has been one of the darker Episodes of the story, especially for the point it’s in since meta-wise, it functions as a rude wake-up call for the gang to try something different about their strategy for going home.

Nida: “No, Pleo—before you ask, the Substitutes that we use are NOT dead pokemon” >.<

Pleo: “Oh thank goodness. Turning into a doll that rips apart after you ‘die’ sounds terrifying.”
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Hm… I wonder what that blood-red star is. I want to say it’s a depiction of some sort of satellite-launched nuclear weapons, meaning humanity wiped itself out—but since gods literally exist (proof: Pleo, Xerneas) then I can’t really discount the mainstream narrative of how the Wastes came about.

Why, it’s the Star of Destruction, silly! :V

Though as for your wonderings, those will get answered by the story later. Much later.

OwO, I am very much interested in seeing where this plot line goes. I’m still very invested in eventually visiting the Wastes.

Yeah, admittedly the story’s very focused in and around the Cradle and especially Anyilla, but Virgil and I are making explicitly showing what lies beyond the inland sea at some point a priority. Can’t promise it’ll necessarily be a long look, but I’m sure you’ll enjoy it when we get there.

Oh god, the bug-types even went so far as to draw scenes of their previous victims’ demise! That’s hardcore. I like it.

I mean, from their perspective, it’s like drawing the exploits of victorious battles over hated enemies. I’m sure that some of your characters can relate.
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Okay, I’ve felt this way for a little while, and it’s finally time to come clean… I think there are too many fight scenes in the story so far. Even when there's a few chapters in between, it nevertheless feels like each fight drags out for a LONG time.

Don’t get me wrong: when taken individually, the fights are well-written. You manage the combat ebb and flow very well, and who has the upper hand is ever shifting. I like that. But… these fights all feel samey, you know? A bunch of ferals pop up, throw taunts, can't be reasoned with, and our heroes get pummelled and barely win after a gruelling fight to the end. Heck, I usually _prefer_ gruelling fights for survival. But here… there's just too many, and it doesn't feel like our characters' fighting styles develop much. What makes this fight different from the last… four or five fights with ferals? It’s not like our heroes have learnt new moves or tactics that radically change things.

Hm. A bit unfortunate to hear that, though Elty did learn Flame Wheel here, so this fight isn’t quite the same as the last ones. Not to mention that a fight was needed here, given that the whole point of Zorn’s plan was to have Team Traveller get attacked by these ferals.

I do think that the Episodes following this one in general are a bit better about picking and choosing the battles they show off. Hopefully they’ll be a bit more up your alley.

Daaaw, Pleo thinking his teammates are dead is one of the most heartwarming moment I've read in the story so far.

I don’t know if Pleo would agree there, but it’s definitely one of the more heartstring-tugging moments in the story, yes.

Woo! Italian 'mon to the rescue!

Glad you’re liking Trizano. While he doesn’t stick around for much longer in this point of the story, this Episode won’t be the last that you see of him, since the ‘mon was always intended to have a presence. Even if it takes a while to stick.

A great chapter all-around! It was good to read more of this story. I should probably dedicate more time to it—thesis or not, the individual chapters don’t take THAT long to read. U-usually “O_O

Well, if you ever needed an excuse to break from the grind, Virgil and I are happy to oblige by giving you one. After all, it might be a couple days late, but we do have a new chapter ready for release today.
 
Chapter 48: Friend or Foe?

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. quilava-fobbie
  5. sneasel-kate
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Crom and his companions plodded up the path leading to the shrine, their glum and trepid mood from yesterday's rough progress hung in the air like a cloud as they beheld the half-repaired shrine before them. At least the supplies they'd left had gone undisturbed overnight, the lumber and Iron Thorns unmoved from the places they left from the prior evening.

"Er… where do we start?" Pladur asked.

"I suppose we could redo that support pillar," Ander buzzed. "But I'm not sure how we'll manage to get the roofing done in time… or the painting for that matter."

"… We're not going to finish, are we?" Crom murmured.

Kiran paused and went silent, struggling to try and think of something to say back, only to fail to come up with any candid reassurance. The Swellow ruffled his feathers uncomfortably and shook his head, deciding that perhaps the best that could be done was to simply speak his mind.

"Let's try at least, alright?" the Flying-Type offered. "I can't say how this will turn out, but let's do our best, and keep up hope that we'll make things work out."

"I guess so…"

"Hey!"

The group turned to the source of the voice, where they saw Salvini rushing up the path towards them. She covered the ground between them with impressive speed, only stopping to catch her breath once she'd caught up with the others.

"Sorry I'm late," the Grovyle said. "I got held up by some last-minute packing on the way up."

"It's fine," Ander sighed. "You haven't missed much yet."

"Oh?" an inquiring voice asked from the shrine's entrance. "But it seems that you've made a decent amount of progress."

The group turned to the entrance of the shrine, where a certain Mienshao waved over at them from behind the unfinished pavilion, ambling over as he passively sized up their progress on the shrine thus far.

"Hertsog!"

"Sorry I couldn't make it yesterday," the Mienshao apologized. "But since it's the last day, I decided to set things aside to try and make it count."

"Don’t worry about it," Pladur answered. "If it wasn't for Salvini here, I don't think we'd have gotten as far as we could have."

"Salvini?" the weasel wondered.

Hertsog turned and blinked, startling somewhat at the Grovyle's presence behind his hired help.

"What are you doing here?" he asked. "I thought you said you were too busy."

"Er… well…" she began. "A friend let me know that you were busy specifically with trying to fix this place up, and-"

Salvini stopped mid-sentence as a familiar Leafeon and Ariados emerged from around the bend of the path, scanning the scene for the whiskered face of their former superior.

"Hertsog?" the Leafeon called out. "Are you there?"

"Yeah, we got your letter," the Ariados added. "Why didn't you tell us that this was what you were up to the first time? We'd have helped-"

Payak abruptly froze in place as the rest of the gathering came into view, along with the form of a familiar Grovyle standing among them. The sight similarly did not elude Phyllis, who like her spider partner, uncomfortably shifted her glance away from the group.

"Oh… you managed to get everyone together again," the Leafeon murmured.

"Who are the new Pokémon anyways?" Payak questioned. The Ariados shifted his gaze and noticed Ander working at his woodpile, eliciting an uneasy shake of the Bug-Type's abdomen.

"And what's that Scyther doing here?"

"They're some help that I hired. But you'll help, won't you?" Hertsog asked. "With all the work that I see that needs to be done, I'm not sure we could finish without a couple extra paws."

The pair paused and looked at each other uneasily, unsure what to make about the unexpected Pokémon present. After a moment to visibly mull the matter, the pair turned back to the Mienshao, ready to announce their decisions…

"… Yeah, I guess I'm in," Payak chittered.

"I wasn't really sure what I could do to help," Phyllis mumbled, "But if you already have another Marked here…"

"Then let's get to work," Kiran chirped. "It sounds like we don't have any time to lose here."

The Swellow and his partners set off at once for the worksite, uncovering the supplies to begin their day's work. Phyllis and Payak similarly joined in, though for one reason or another seemed to keep their distance from Salvini… Ah, there'd be time to ask about it later, Kiran reasoned.

For now, there was a shrine to be rebuilt.



"He's still not back?"

Pleo's words hung in the air as Team Traveller shambled out of their room and into the hallway leading downstairs. The three Pokémon carried on tiredly, yawning and squinting against the morning sunlight coming through the windows as they made their way for the hostel's lobby. It was a brand new day, and in spite of their hopes, their missing teammate still hadn't returned.

"Maybe something really did happen to him out there..." Guardia murmured.

"But what are we supposed to do?" Pleo asked. "We can't wait here forever for him!"

The little Lugia hopped off a short flight of steps and soared down ahead into the lobby. The white bird pulled his wings in and started to sleepily preen his feathers when he looked up and noticed Guardia and Nida staring at him slack-jawed.

"Pleo, you just flew!" Guardia exclaimed.

"Did it hurt at all?" Nida added.

Pleo's eyes went wide as the realization dawned on him: he really did just take off, and barely felt a thing! The Lugia gave a surprised, disbelieving beat of his wing, moving it back and forth a few times.

"I mean, it's still a little sore, but I didn't notice it," Pleo replied. "Does… this mean it's better now?"

"If it's not, it's really close. And that means that we can get off this island and move on to Sormus-" Nida began, only to be cut off by the sound of a sharp hiss from behind.

"Oi, careful about flying around inside! These furnishings aren't easy to replace!"

The three flinched at the sound of the chittering scold and turned as heavy footsteps stomped up. There, looking over them was none other than the hostel's visibly unamused Flygon proprietor.

"Oh, er… sorry about that," Pleo said. "We'll be more careful next time."

"I guess it's alright," Rasp sighed, giving a shake of his head. "But did you not sleep well? You look a bit tired right now."

"We were kept up by a crying Pokémon last night," Nida explained. "By the time we finally fell asleep it was the early morning."

"And Elty still hasn't come back…" Pleo muttered. "You would still be able to help us find him, right?"

"I would," the Flygon responded. "But I have to drop off a replacement mat for my father first."

"Oh... well, I guess I understand," the Lugia murmured, heaving a heavy sigh. Even though Rasp had been so helpful so far, it was a shame that he wasn't able to look out for their lost teammate.

"Sorry if it's not all that helpful," Rasp said. "But I've already lost a bit of time unlocking this place and doing the morning rounds. Around these parts, you have to look out for your own first."

"I guess that's fair," Nida sighed.

"If he's still not back after I'm done, I'll take you around to look for him," the Flygon reassured. "But until then, hang in tight, okay?"

Rasp nodded to the young Pokemon and left, his father's mat under one arm. Nida and her friends watched him shuffle into the crowd outside, standing around for a moment unsure of where to go from there.

"There you all are!"

Pleo, Nida, and Guardia jolted upright and turned around at the sound of the familiar yipping voice. There behind them was none other than their missing Growlithe teammate, prancing along full of morning vigor… seemingly none the worse for wear and without a hint of unease over being absent overnight.

"Elty?!"

"So…?" the Growlithe began. "What did I miss?"

"Eh?! Where have you been?!" Guardia demanded. "We just told Rasp that you were still missing!"

"I had to lay low after some ‘mons from the Torrent Tsars spotted me leaving that 'scavver shop'," Elty answered. "By the time I got back, it was the middle of the night and you locked the room up."

"Wait, but then why didn't Rasp see you earlier?" Nida asked. "He would have told us if he knew you were around."

The Growlithe blinked, seemingly lost at his teammate's question. After a shake of his head, Elty folded his ears back, and gave a sheepish smile.

"Er… I wound up sleeping in a broom closet," the little dog insisted. "You know, someplace quiet to crash?"

"Eh? But Rasp just came by saying that he unlocked the hostel this morning," Pleo murmured. "How did you get in before then?"

Elty visibly paused, deep in uneasy thought. After having an answer come to mind, he sat down and gave a disarming wag of his tail.

"Uh… well, I didn't start in the closet," he explained. "I dozed off in a box in front of the door when I couldn't find a way in. Rasp must've moved it indoors while I was sleeping."

Nida and Guardia traded dubious glances with one another, and even Pleo seemed to find the Fire-Type's tale a bit hard to swallow. Elty found a box to doze off in right in front of the inn and Rasp brought it in without noticing the extra weight? There was surely something that he wasn't telling them...

"Anyhow, while I was out, I think that I found a lead for Blackmoon Village," Elty offered.

"Oh?" Pleo chirped. "What was it?"

"One of the shopkeepers near the docks said that she knew a thing or two about it," he replied. "She said that she'd be open to telling us about the place if we came during her break."

"Eh?" Guardia asked, eyeing Elty dubiously. "Care to give a little more detail there?"

"Well… it's hard to put in words, but I'll lead the way," the Growlithe insisted. "I'm the one who knows the way around this town, after all."

Nida, Pleo, and Guardia stared hesitantly at Elty. His story obviously sounded fishy... On the other hand, this was the port he called home, and he'd come back for them when he could have just run off. All the more to think that they were making making much ado out of nothing here.

"Alright, lead the way," Nida sighed.

Elty obliged with unusual enthusiasm, bounding out the door and beckoning for the others to follow. The others tagged along into the morning sun, eager to meet this shopkeeper to find a lead to Pioppo Island. The now-reunited group carried on following the heels of their canine guide, none the wiser that he once again led them along with a knowing smirk.



At the hillside shrine overlooking Fensedge Village, the repairs went by smoother than Crom had expected earlier that morning. The process of Pladur and Hertsog replacing the upside-down support beam went by quickly, leaving Kiran and Payak to work on the roofing and free the pair to help Salvini right and reassemble the toppled monoliths. Phyllis, unable to fully be swayed from her aversion to the site was kept busy providing support splitting shingles for the roof. At the same time, her Scyther counterpart took a reprieve to slip a pair of canvas sheathes over his blades. The Bug-Type stopped to dab some charcoal dust on them before sketching some shapes onto paper which the others surmised to be cutting patterns.

After a few hours of work, the shrine's buildings began to slowly take form, serving to lift Crom's spirits as he helped to ferry batches of shingles and Iron Thorns to and fro. His latest delivery took him over to the side of a small pavilion taking shape near the path where his team captain swooped down in order to carry them back up.

"Heh, I think it's actually starting to look like a shrine now!" the young Druddigon exclaimed.

"Well, let's not get too ahead of ourselves, Crom," Kiran chided. "The roof still needs to be finished."

"Er… right."

"I think I can handle the rest here," the Swellow chirped. "Maybe see if the others need an extra set of claws to help."

Crom nodded and wandered off to check on his coworkers. Up near the roof of the larger pavilion which needed the beam transplant, he found Phyllis and Payak working together. The former stuck tiles onto a strand of Payak's web on the ground so that he could pull them up to the roof. Currently, the Ariados looked a little disgruntled as he inspected a curved tile which didn't seem to fit onto that section of the roof at all.

"Eh? Phyllis?" the Bug-Type murmured. "You keep sending me tiles that don't fit for this roof."

"Izvinyavaĭ, it's just really hard to judge what you need from down here," the Leafeon said.

"... Look, I know you feel… different about this place than most Pokémon," Payak began. "But your help would really come in handy up here. I can't exactly cut these tiles up if they don't fit, you know."

Payak looked down and saw Salvini approaching under his rooftop perch. The Grovyle paused and looked up uneasily, placing a hand tentatively on one of the pillars and weighing whether or not to head up.

"Hey, Payak… did you need-?"

"... Nevermind, I'll figure something out on my own," the Ariados chittered.

Salvini glanced up at her former teammate, a pleading look in her eyes. It found no purchase with Payak however, who pretended to busy himself adjusting some roof tiles. The Grovyle sighed and let the matter rest, wandering off to make herself useful elsewhere, prompting Crom to turn back puzzledly to the rooftop spider.

"Eh?" he asked. "How come you didn't let Salvini help you?"

"Er… I don't think that she'd work well with us, Druddigon," Phyllis answered, shaking her head.

"Huh? But why not?" Crom murmured. "You need another Pokémon to help, don't you?"

"We had a falling out over her deciding to put her feelings before work, and it wound up coming back to bite us all," Payak harrumphed. "I just can't work with 'mons like that."

"... I didn’t get that sort of feeling from her at all, though," the dragon insisted. “She seemed like someone who always tries to help out other Pokémon.”

The two Pokemon eyed one another warily, glancing back at the young Druddigon with a hint of skepticism etched across their faces. Neither one said anything though, instead allowing Crom to continue his explanation.

"I mean, she does seem like the type who might get into more than she bargained for in the process..." the Dragon-Type began. "But from what I've seen of her, she just seems like she's trying to brighten others' days."

The three looked at each other uneasily for a moment, before Crom shuffled along. He looked over his shoulder and saw that Payak and Phyllis both seemed to be deep in thought, as if visibly wavering on a hard decision.

"Well, I can't say he was really wrong there," Phyllis murmured. "She always was one to try and help out, even if it meant crossing a line."

"If she'd only known where to draw the line," Payak sighed. "Then we'd all be doing our rounds right now and we wouldn't be having this conversation."

"... But, then would she really still be Salvini?"

The Ariados paused and mulled the matter over, before turning and calling out just loud enough for Crom to hear in the distance:

"... Salvini?" he asked. "Were you still up for helping out with those tiles?"

In the meantime, Crom continued along, heading over to the shrine's now-righted stone menhir to pick up a new bucket of paint when he heard footsteps pattering up behind him.

"Hey! Kiran let you go already?" Pladur asked.

"Oh, I was actually looking for some more work to do," the young Druddigon said. "Is there anything else we need to assemble?"

"Nothing here," his father replied. "Why, this shrine's been put together enough that we ought to start painting it!"

"Oh? What's this place supposed to look like?" Crom wondered.

Pladur opened his mouth to respond, but failed to find an answer as he stared blankly at the shrine and realized he didn't actually have any clue beyond Hertsog's sketches as to what the shrine looked like. While the Mienshao certainly had a decent command of perspective, there was not a clue as to what colors filled in the parts of the shrine scribbled out by the charcoal streaks.

"Er… now that you mention it…" Pladur murmured.

As he scanned the area for some guidance on the matter, he caught sight of Hertsog passing nearby. He held up a claw to stop him and ask for some advice.

"Hertsog!" the Fraxure cried. "Do you know how this place is supposed to be painted?"

"Well… the roofs were deep royal blue, and I remember the railings were grayish white," the weasel answered. "And there was a mural of our Protector on the rear walls."

"Oh?" Crom asked. "What did it look like?"

Hertsog frowned and held his paw to his chin. He thought, and thought, before giving an uneasy twitch of his whiskers. No matter how hard he racked his brain, he simply couldn't think of an answer to the Druddigon's question. Gah! If only he had better documented the shrine as it once was!

"Erm…"

"Check in my bag, Hertsog!" Salvini's voice called.

"Oh?"

The Mienshao followed Salvini's finger along to a small bag that had been set beside one of the menhirs. There, he slipped his fur-sleeved paws in and opened it to see a stack of papers blackened with charcoal. Hertsog pulled them out and began to peruse them, quickly realizing that they were all scenes depicting the great stag that was Protector of their island.

"Ah! That's right! They looked like these rubbings!" Hertsog exclaimed. "… Except, it's missing the colors for it."

"Er…" Pladur murmured. "I don't know how we could solve that-"

"Like so."

The Scyther held out his blades before the Fighting-Type, holding a few scraps of paper between them with his flats. Hertsog gave a curious twitch of his whiskers before taking them and looking through them. There, on them were the forms of a great blue-and-black stag with many-hued horns... Ah! This was it! These were the colors the Protector had been painted in so many years ago!

"These ought to give you an idea of what to work with," Ander offered.

"Huh?" Kiran asked. "But where did you get these, Ander?"

"... I remembered seeing some drawings from long ago," the mantis answered. "It's no big deal."

The Swellow paused, looking down at the sketches still incredulous at Ander's change of heart. Kiran slowly stuffed away the drawings, before clearing his throat, fishing for something to say back.

"... Thank you," the bird answered.

Ander gave a dismissive wave of his blade and shuffled off to go and help Phyllis with her task of splitting shingles. From there, Hertsog and Pladur headed off with the drawings to go and prepare paint for the emergent shrine as Crom and Kiran occasionally gave glances at the Marked Scyther wondering what had swayed him so...

And wondering how it would be best to give them their thanks later.



Back in Rosequartz Town, Elty's guidance led the team deep into the settlement's warrens. The four passed alleys and shifty-looking lanes before reaching a place where the whiff of seawater reached their noses. They were evidently close to the harbor, near enough that the masts of the ships in harbor peeked over the nearby rooftops. The Growlithe led his teammates along into a courtyard behind a cluster of sleepy shops, Guardia casting a wary glance at her surroundings as she paced deeper in.

"So... how did you meet this Pokémon again?" she asked.

"Yeah, didn't you say you had to lay low the whole time?" Nida pressed.

"I heard about her from the 'mons that hid me," Elty answered. "They told me she'd be here and that this was the best time to try and talk with her."

"Huh?" Pleo wondered. "But who told you?"

"A not-so little bird told him," a low, rumbling voice answered.

Nida and Pleo froze and felt their blood run cold at the voice. Just then, a flurry of activity broke out as one after the other, Pokémon in golden scarves emerged from alleys and behind boxes, casting predatory sneers. Guardia too blanched as she saw that intermingled among the faces were those of a familiar Yanmega, Marowak, and Manectric. With a series of dull thumping footsteps, it soon became apparent that the owner of the low voice was none other than the same Aggron pirate who’d raided Bluewhorl Town—Hess. The captain of the Iron Fleet stepped forward with a growl, staring down his newly encircled victims.

"It's been a long time, brats," the Aggron sneered.

At once, Nida, Guardia, and Pleo realized what Elty had been hiding from them. He was waiting to lead them into this ambush! Filled with rage and disgust, Nida whirled to the Growlithe, baring her teeth and seething.

"Elty, you betrayed us?!" the Nidoran shouted. "Why would you do this?!"

Some puzzled stares went about the gathered pirates, mixed with stifled laughter. Among them was a bemused-looking Ledian, who gave a teasing look at his Growlithe counterpart.

"Wait, Elty?" Kichiro snickered. "That's what they've been calling you?"

The Growlithe folded his ears back and snorted out a few cinders with an annoyed huff. That spike ball just had to leave something behind after they parted ways, didn't she? Elty shook his head, turning his attention back to the glaring Nidoran.

"Look, this is my place and I told you I was leaving once I got my bag back," he growled. "So fork it over peacefully, and then you're free to-"

"Spend a nice long stay with us as hostages," Hess added.

At once, Elty's eyes widened and his fur stood up out of surprise. That- That wasn't why he led Team Traveller here at all! What was the Captain doing?

"H-Huh?" Elty protested. "But I thought we were just getting my bag back."

"I'm getting something back for all the grief their stupid hick town has caused me," Hess growled. "Some ransom money sounds like a good consolation!"

"Ransom money?" Pleo gulped.

The Aggron gave a heavy stomp against the ground, prompting Team Traveller's hearts to race as a low snarl from the pirate captain filled the air.

"As for you three, I'd suggest you know when you're beat," Hess growled. "Even that little bone-headed monster of yours can't help you in a fight with my entire crew!"

A few of Hess' cronies chuckled nervously, no doubt remembering their recent abortive raid on Bluewhorl. Although their captain was menacing, no one could quite forget the sight of the Aggron being blown clear across the island by none other than the seabird he was currently trying to intimidate. Hess glanced at the uneasy-looking crew, his menacing visage quickly slipping into a nervous one as he too remembered Pleo's power. He quickly shook the expression away; his crew would never let him live it down if he backed down now. With some effort, he pulled his face back into a mean snarl and rallied his crew.

"H-Hey, what's with that attitude!" he chided. "It won't be that hard to teach these brats a lesson!"

Hess gritted his teeth and stomped the ground again, thrusting his face towards Pleo's. The young Lugia flinched and shrank away, but even after asserting his dominance, Hess had trouble shaking the nervous undertone from his voice.

"G-Go ahead, try me!"

Pleo brought his wings together with a startled squawk, prompting the Aggron to flinch and reflexively shield himself from the gust. After realizing that his feet were still firmly rooted to the ground and the attack left little more than a dull breeze, the Steel-Type blinked before turning back to Team Traveller with a malicious smirk creeping over his maw.

"I was right? I mean- I was right!" he crowed. "Hah! You really don't know how to control your own power!"

Some derisive laughs went around the gathered gold-scarves. Maybe they couldn't handle this 'Protector' back on Tromba, but they could certainly handle him now. Pleo, Nida, and Guardia inched back uncomfortably as the pirates began to close in with battle stances, not least including their Aggron taunter ahead giving a few explorative taps against the ground to sense out underground stones.

"Well, unfortunately for you, we do!"

Hess crouched and readied himself for a stomping leap, prompting Nida, Pleo, and Guardia to flinch and brace themselves for the Aggron's incoming blow. Elty watched as the Steel-Type leapt up and reflexively tackled the other members of Team Traveller back, sending them stumbling back as a mass of stones ripped out of the earth and sailed overhead. The Rock Slide carried on, sailing across the gathering trailing a plume of dust and dirt. The oncoming mass of earth prompted Pokémon to hastily scurry out of the way in a panic, before it collided directly into a hapless Voltorb.

"Augh!"

Nida thrashed against the feeling of a heavier body pinning hers down, reflexively kicking at the furry presence and flinging it off of her. As Elty tumbled back with a yelp, the Poison-Type saw that amidst the dusty confusion, there was an open path for the street outside, prompting her to reflexively cry out to draw her teammates' attention.

"Run!"

Team Traveller bolted for the exit under the cover of the nascent dust cloud as attack after attack flew in their direction. With each assault, the dust cloud grew larger and thicker until it enveloped the entire courtyard in a confusing mass of shouts, coughing, and pained yowls. Sensing that his underlings were now hitting each other more than their targets, Hess stomped the ground, hastily bellowing out for order.

"Gah! Cease fire! Cease fire!" the Aggron shouted.

The Steel-Type coughed as the dust swirled and settled out of the air, revealing a cohort of battered and confused pirates... with the three blue-scarfed brats nowhere to be seen.

"Wh-What?!" Hess exclaimed. "How did-?!"

As some confused looks filtered around, Elty felt something grab him by the nape of his neck and lift him off the ground. The Fire-Type reflexively flailed, before coming face-to-face with a seething Ledian.

"What did you do, Elty?!" Kichiro hissed.

The Growlithe pawed at the spot where Nida kicked him, scowling at the indignity of being lifted off the ground and having his name knowingly botched. Sensing that he needed to clear the air quickly, Elty quickly shot back at the Ledian's insinuations.

"I jumped the gun, alright?" the Growlithe huffed back defensively. "Why are you giving me the third degree? That rabbit just kicked m-"

"Hey!" Rodion exclaimed. "They're making a break for it!"

"Huh?!" Hess looked up, catching sight of Pleo beating his wings for takeoff. With Nida and Guardia hanging on tight, he finally managed to lift off the ground… but his flight was short-lived, as a sudden crosswind blew him off-course, sending him spiraling down again.

"After them!" he bellowed.

The Aggron stormed off, his underlings swarming after him as Nida, Pleo, and Guardia desperately ran past the courtyard's entrance. The Steel-Type charged after them, and after seeing an approaching cross-street, he reflexively went wide-eyed as he saw the three attempt to sneak off.

"Hold it right there!"

Hess leapt up and landed on the ground with a forward slide, sending forth a hail of stones that zipped along. The stony barrage narrowly missed the youngsters overhead, carrying on into the street with a series of loud crashes followed by startled outcries.

"ARGH! My leg!"

"My shop! My poor shop!"

"C-Cad sa diabhal?! Wh-What was that?!"

"Hurry!" Hess shouted. "Don't let that Protector get away!"

At once, a pregnant silence settled over the crowd, incredulous blinks going around both shopkeeper and pirate alike. The gathered Pokémon turned their heads to follow the fleeing Lugia and his companions, then to the Iron Fleet, and then to each other. Going wide-eyed at his realization that he'd spoken too much, Hess stammered, desperately trying to concoct an explanation to put the cat back in the bag.

"E-Erm," the Aggron stammered. "What I meant to say was-"

"Wait, that overgrown Wingull is a Protector?!"

"So those sea yarns the Iron Fleet were telling are real?!"

"Let's go get him!"

Much to Hess' dismay the nearby brigands and even a few shopkeepers took off running, some after his targets, others off to other parts of town to gather reinforcements. The Aggron grimaced, throwing a claw over his face with a groaning whine.

"Argh! Why does this always happen to me?!"

Hess gave an annoyed shake of his head before charging off, his underlings following suit in their pursuit of the Protector and his companions. At the back, a lonely Growlithe hesitated on a now-empty street.

This... wasn't how he thought things would go. He was finally back where he belonged, but for whatever reason seeing Team Traveller chased around like this didn't sit well with him.

"Oi, mutt! Schiet op! Get moving!"

Elty looked up and saw Valatos gesturing impatiently for him to follow. The dog shook his head and dashed along afterwards. A good run always helped him settle his mind, and who knew? Maybe he could use it to make things go as planned after all.



Two knots away from the unfolding chaos in Rosequartz, a school of marine Pokémon in blue bands with red dots cut through the water. The clan of sea nomads climbed upwards, breaching the surface and bobbing along the waves as Orleigh's green hills became visible in the distance.

"We're getting close," a Relicanth reported. "I can see the masts from the ships in port!"

"Then get ready to take your positions," the leader Dragalge instructed. "Sea team will create the diversion at the harbor, and the land team needs to make the most of our time to check the spots we talked about."

"That's your cue, Dimitri," Kuda grunted. "You're ready for it this time?"

"I'm ready- Huh?"

As the Kabutops whirled his head to respond to his Kingdra teammate, he blanched at the sight of what laid in the distance beyond. There, off in the rapidly approaching distance was a frigate with indigo sails barreling straight towards them followed by what looked to be a veritable of pink and blue shapes on the horizon. A volley of jets of water and shadowy gusts of wind sailed off from behind the ship as the hazy, incoherent sound of shouting rang out, which made Viktor's eyes widen as he realized the pink and blue forms were a sea of Frillish and Jellicent.

"Vniz!"

The nomads hastily broke ranks as the frigate barreled on ahead, Dimitri and Kuda diving down just in time to dodge the frigate's hull passing overhead. The Kabutops watched as the ship's accompanying swimmers zipped by, and looked up just in time to see a Sharpedo and Tentacruel zip by. The ship and its cohorts passed, leaving a wake of churning, turbulent water. The Kabutops stared blankly for a moment, before popping up to the surface along with his teammate spluttering out of startled shock.

"Those- Those were the same Imperials from earlier!" Dimitri cried.

"How did they beat us to the punch?!" Kuda exclaimed.

Dimitri froze as the frigate sailed on for Rosequartz, his eyes widening as a sinking realization dawned on him. The Imps who ambushed him just past Spirit Trench must have gone back and told their superior! If they didn't do something quick, they'd get Pleo before the rod could, and take him to a far more impossible place to rescue him from than Orleigh!

"We need to hurry," the Kabutops muttered. "If the Imperials are in on this too, we don't have much time to work with."

"You don't have to tell me!" Kuda snapped. "Get a move on-!"

"Hey! What are you doing?!" a roaring voice demanded.

The pair spotted Viktor glaring at them intensely, turned away from the frigate and motioning for them to follow.

"Huh?!" Dimitri exclaimed.

"I said get down!" Viktor shouted "Our plans didn't account for a bunch of Pokémon from Spirit Trench stirring the pot!"

"But Ataman," Kuda protested. "This is our only-!"

The Kingdra was cut off by a shadowy, cutting gust of wind slicing across his side, prompting the seahorse to thrash in the water with a startled yelp. Dimitri turned in the direction of the attack, seeing that a number of the shapes were breaking off from the horde, revealing themselves to be Jellicent preparing a fresh salvo of spectral attacks.

"Now!" Viktor snapped.

The three hastily dove under as a hail of shadowy beams and gusts passed overhead, slicing through the water as a number of the spectral jellyfish broke off in pursuit of them. As Dimitri weaved around jets of water and ghostly attacks, he was bothered all the while by how thoroughly the rod's plans had unravelled and how the situation had gone out of his claws.

"I just hope the kids will make it through alright…"



Author's Notes:

- Izvinyavaĭ (Извинявай) - Bulgarian: "Sorry" (informal) (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)
- Cad sa diabhal - Irish: "What the hell", "What on earth". lit. "What the devil"
- Schiet op! - Dutch: "Hurry up!"
- Vniz! (Вниз!) - Russian: "Get down!" (BGN/PCGN Romanization)
 
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Spoilers for future chapters... I read this one a bit ago, but couldn't find the chance to look it over again to properly review. Here it is now, kicking myself into gear for Blacklight rewards as well as the current event today~

Spoilering for readers here.

Nice, a bit of a sleuthing mission to get past a bunch of Company guards. I guess they really underestimated what the locals would be able to do, which isn't too much of a surprise, all things considered, with what they'd done with the island before.

The prison break went on for a smidge longer, and I wonder what significance that Dubwool's unexpected sturdiness will mean later since so much attention seemed to have been drawn to it.

Ahh, and now we can see what's going on with Ander all this time... Looks like Ander made his choice one way or another. That's quite a turn for him, but at least all of that time he spent with the team wasn't all for nothing. I really do like his character arc in particular--he might be one of my favorites.

"Back to the holes they crawled out from." --Wouldn't a line like that be derogatory here? Hell, pretty sure Nida lived in something that isn't too far removed from a hole...

Hey Pekka evolved! Another one mid-battle, not that it mattered too much, I suppose, amidst everything else that happened.

One thing that seems to bug me a little with this fight is how easily items seem to completely turn the tide of battle, to the point where their sheer strength feels like that's all you would really need to subdue them. Bunsen refers to it as a "simple" Petrify Orb but I've yet to see it be shrugged off in any notable way, even by trained guards. The power scaling is weird for how often or not-often certain strategies are used.

It also occurs to me that we've yet to see the old Company trick of pulling out a ton of apricorn cannons like before. Wouldn't that be the clear-cut easy way to finish things? Happened pretty easily last time, so I wonder why that wasn't so much as mentioned this time.

Boy, this is certainly an arc finale with everyone pitching in for the rebellion at least from the main island and associated Protectors that have been met. Quite a good climax.

Side note, "shot wide" is a term that was overused in this chapter.

And so the chapter ends with a rare and recover victory for the team. That will probably give them time to wind down and discuss everything they know. Could this be tying everything together for somewhat of a final act? Guess the next chapter or two will determine that.
 
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