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Did I really only get up to Chapter 20 in text reviews? Wow. Anyway, here I go reviewing again!

Here's a mini blitz review for Chapter 20~ Oh boy, I have to say I did spend large parts of this one wincing at the sustained awkwardness of the Mark/Alan interaction. They're both hopeless in their own ways, aren't they? In particular, Alan gives the vibe that he really doesn't have any normal...

Back again! Wanna return to a decent reading pace so I can actually finish your damn fic someday, eheh. So, next Mark is up against Marge of Aquarium City. This chapter's early scenes feel very functional; Mark muses on his undersea encounter, gets sleep, checks on Sandslash, and challenges the...

Could've sworn I'd covered this chapter already, but I guess not! As an aside, before I get stuck in, what is Victor's deal? He's really bad at communicating. 'Tips on catching a mutark', indeed. Also chuckling to myself at Mark being the world's biggest Legendary pokémon enthusiast yet not...

Chapter Sixteen Review Time~

Hi Free! Time for more Blitz. Thanks for writing a fic that's so fun and easy to binge-review lmao. That seems a good place to stop. Thanks for a fun read, Free! I'm certain I'll hit at least one more chapter in the final week~ <3

Howdy, my dear Free! As expected, you're the first of my Blitz targets this year. I'll probably do another three-chapter cluster in week three and/or four. We'll see, I guess! I'll start with impresions and commentary, and then sum up my thoughts at the end. Chapter 6: Chapter 7: Extra...

Howdy, Free! Time to churn out a bunch of chapter commentary for that final Blacklight logging rush. I know you've appreciated my liveblogging on vc and such, but I hope this'll be entertaining in text form. Off we go~ Introduction / Prologue I like how you've filled up much of the opening to...