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So to me kind of everything before this had Salem acting very tired and reluctant, so her excitement here felt kind of sudden. I think there could be a bit of honest self-hyping on her part before this to show she's actually interested and motivated. Chapter 5: Salem Fucking Dies How much of a...

Got in the catch-up-with-stuff-you-should spirit of Blitz and read chapters 3 and 4! Chapter 3 Quotes and then she said "encyclopedia", funniest shit ive ever heard I understood "starkly-coloured" as meaning many strong colors rather than the... black? that Veracity is. you see i took shits...

Chapter Two italian swearing On the one hand this is thoughtful, but on the other I'd expect a lot of morphs named ShadowBlood DarkFury walking around With how much description this scene had of Salem's sensations, I was expecting a mention of the floor being cold but it didn't come...

Heyyyyyy I'm here for chapter 1 and it's not late at allll I swear. This entire scene is an oof and then finding out it's happened multiple times just elevates that into a mega oof. me when im in the zone drawing and my dad tells me its time for bed >:( Establishing the feathers as...

deja vu, ive just been in this place before Hey there! I got rolled Different Eyes for the review exchange game, and I've now read the prologue. It certainly is different from the one before, though I did recognize some traces of the old one in there, like Fuji's explanation of pokémon DNA...