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  1. The Walrein

    Pokémon Drowning

    Hello Starlight Aurate! Thought I'd give this a look for the first anniversary celebration event. I feel the passive voice at the beginning ("The bandanna was pulled upwards") combined with describing Sarah's eyes as doing the looking rather than Sarah herself made this read a bit awkwardly...
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