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Hi Del! I left this fic off a LONG time ago, and since Review Blitz is going on, I figure that now would be a perfect time to play catch up! Well, as much as I can--I'm still 40 chapters behind ^_^; I'll pick up where I left off! Chapter 25 Can't blame Tinker for wanting to keep the Swablu...

Heya! I know I've fallen quite behind, and it's been nearly a year since I left you a review. This review has been in the works for QUITE a while ^_^; I'll leave what I have for now, and hopefully will catch up on this fascinating tale someday! Chapter 22 Heh, I feel like this could be taken a...

Starlight has fallen behind ^_^; It's been a month but I'm back! Granted, that month was NaNo, so I'd like to think I have adequate reason for falling behind ^_^; Really looking forward to taking a break and settling down to read some of this! :D Just a quick note back on chapter 19: Enigma's...

Hey hey hey! Here for the latest chapter! Aww yeah, an Enigma opening! This certainly doesn't bode well for Rio. Super nitpick here--whenever I see any quotation marks, punctuation (like that period) is put inside them, not outside. I think it should just be "forward." Heh, this is a funny...

Hey hey! Here for Chapter 18: Oooh once Spark said that her whiskers shorted out, I reralized that Harlequin was right about the food being tainted. Ooooh dang Rio is cold. He comes across as genuinely scary/frightening and capable in this scene, what with successfully tainting the Pokemon and...

Hi! Quick reply before the chapter review: Oh cute! And yep, 'Cloe' is pronounced as 'Chloe'--her family is from Ecuador, so I think it's a Spanish spelling of the name. Here to take a look at chapter 17 =D 3 things about this paragraph: 1. I normally associate the term "sleazy" with a...

Here for Chapter 16! Wow, so many already--for some reason, I felt like we were on 14 ^_^; Get what beating? The egg? Must be a near fully-formed Swablu in there, if that's the case! lol Tinker can try sitting on the egg himself and see if it'll hatch XD Though I agree, it just wouldn't be the...

Here for Chapter 15! Love this opening description <3 Wondering what the past between Harlequin and Harbinger is! :O same, bro This sentence took me a couple reads--I originally read "they" as Harlequin and Cleo together, since the two of them were mentioned in the previous sentence. I...

Glad to see anothe chapter! LOVE the new banner :) Looks like we'll be seeing more of Rio! :D Oh, good point! Poor Eevee line--the Umbreon are being locked up by the Guild, and the others are all hunted down by Hydreigon. Which isn't much different from the other Pokemon, I suppose. I like the...

Here for chapters 12 and 13! Chapter 12 was real good (I forgot to actually take down notes/thoughts as I read it, so this'll be brief ^_^;) Enigma came across as legitimately scary. Up until now, others had mentioned he was scary and high-ranking but when we saw him he was usually with...

Hello hello hello! I've seen you around a lot, both here and on Serebii and I always thought you were cool and I enjoy talking to fellow Christians. I read some of Pokemon:Life when it was on Serebii and I like your writing style. I know this fic was finished there, but when I saw you were...