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Chapter 36 Review: That’s… dark O_O. But makes sense for him to ask. I had missed some of his childlike questions. Nida: “No, Pleo—before you ask, the Substitutes that we use are NOT dead pokemon” >.< Hehe Hm… I wonder what that blood-red star is. I want to say it’s a depiction of some...

Chapter 34 Review: Suddenly, Pleo’s voice blared from outside the window: “Th-the wind could have just carried it here from Kenobi!” >.< Ouch, poor Darzin ;(. Losing scales is customary for him at this point. Adrian: “From one inept Dragonite to the another, I’m rooting for you, Darzin!”...

Chapter 32 Review: Narrator: “It was here that Fledglings… lost its T rating.” Nida to Guardia: “A fair and impartial justice system, eh?” :v Guardia, swinging it around: “Hmmm… good weight. Sharp edges. Yes, this will do! Mine!” I do wonder if this Nori is at all related to the dungeon...

Chapter 29 Review: Oooh, cool! I like deviations from the standard cave dungeon. Why, it's almost as if this is a convenient... arena for Pleo to fly in during combat... 😰 Pleo: "Hey! Look at that book-shaped tile on the ground! That has to be it!" Nida and Elty: "PLEOOOOOOO!" O_O' Elty: "...

Chapter 28 Review: I'd tweak it into "Illumise captain", as I hadn't initially connected this Illumise with Beatrix. Sounds like a hostage situation, honestly. Hehehe... heh... Ooooh, maybe Ander will get to meet his Hydreigon counterpart! I'm really, really curious to see if her change of...

After a lengthy break, here's my Chapter 26 Review: I'll be a little brief on this one: Kenobi feels like a breath of fresh air! The narrow alleyways, the run-down yet brightly-coloured buildings, the small shops and stalls! It reminds me a lot of Murano, just with more crime. Between this...

Chapter 25 Review: What kind of splashing noise is that? xD Pleo: "Hey, what if we went to the beach today? I want to build another sand castle!" Nida: "I'm not sure why, but... my sixth sense is telling me that's not such a good idea" O_O" Elty: "Oh, and also Magikarp... Goldeen...

Chapter 23 Review: Celebi: Reverses time to give Nida a final chance not to say that Nida, whispering: "Maybe his parents haven't had time to teach him what the Protectors of other islands look like?" Pleo, grumbling: "Uglier than me, that's for sure." Daraen: "What was that?" Nida and Pleo...

Chapter 22 Review: It speaks volumes to their paranoia if they're assessing possible escape routes and trap placements... A "Fab"? Is that an actual slang term that's used in English, or something more story-specific? Perhaps derived from fábrica? Maranda: "You absolute FOOL! Do you realise...

Chapter 20 Review: Woooah, there's a submarine network of mystery dungeons? That's so cool! Props for the creativity. That sounds quite handy! Almost... too convenient to be a product of nature, actually. Hmmmm... Or maybe it was created by a human cough cough. Elty: "H-hopefully not into...

Chapter 19 review: Pleo, about to sneeze: "Ah... ah.... aaaaah...!" Nida and Elty, dying inside: 'O_O Pleo, not seeing the dozen empty tin cans on the ground: "Duh duh duh, la la la..." Nida and Elty: Quivering in place and about to fall unconscious Nida: "You know, if blast seeds here worked...

Chapter 18 Review: I hope you know how to swim! Or that they throw a piece of wood for you to hold onto, at least. Uh-oh. You know, canine 'mon are supposed to have a sharper sense of smell--and you both smell like awful-tasting berries... Heh, lucky. Better sense of smell doesn't mean much...

Chapter 16 Review: Imagine translating that literally. "Eye!" Huh. That was easier than expected. ... Right? Is the crowd really going to stand there and watch? I was really expecting the mob to rush these two and trap them. At least Osmund, maybe Hatteras. ...Right? Anyone? Ah; there we go...

Chapter 14 Review: Nida: "Your overconfidence is your weakness, young Elty." Elty: "Will you stop quoting that old human story?!" Crom: "Do a barrel roll!" Elty: "AGAIN, I said to STOP with the quotes!" If they both improve at a roughly linear pace, then Elty will most likely stay his...

Chapter 13 Review: Neat description, I like the uncertainty of that last sentence. Oh, dear. I can absolutely see the team (or, let's be honest, Pleo) taking a different exit from everyone else as they all try to escape the fight. I get that they're territorial, but these ferals would really...

Chapter 12 review: Hey! Economics can be incredibly fascinating at times. The phenomenon of financialisation and the institutionalisation of Chicago School economic theory are a prime example, and I better hope Mayor Hatteras knows how to handle a financial crisis if those banks start doing...

Growing accustomed to a god's presence so quickly... truly, a far too realistic quirk of psychology. Nida: "Good thing that we also have guards closely watching the ships currently moored at port, in case the former pirates get any ideas. ... Right?" Elty: "Hmmmm..." Elty: "In fact, I think I...

WOAH. Surely they don't actually ship off convicts to the Wasteland. Surely it's just an 'angry mob' thing. Because if it isn't... Nida: "Is there no such thing as 'separation of powers' on this island?" o_o' Crom: "What--you mean you're not supposed to have the Guildmaster, chief judge, mayor...

Uh-oh. Can't blame him--his training's just started, and he didn't fare so well in the only fight he's had so far. Nida: "Oh, no! Not the pirates from Suomi Island!" Pleo: "Wh-what's that?" 'o.o Nida: "A cold, alcohol-ridden island where--hey! Do I look like an encyclopaedia?! They're right...

Clever to have the translation be so easily accessible. I haven't had any trouble so far with the Spanish, but I can imagine it gets annoying to constantly go back and check the glossary at every new word. Ouch. It must suck to be a Zubat--I suppose its echolocation isn't precise enough to see...