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Aight here we go once more, and I’ll actually review the bulk of chapter 5 this time, lol.

HEEEERE WE GOOO It has been far, far, FAR too long since I have officially returned to this fic and actually reviewed it in earnest. I’ll be covering 3 chapters here, but I hope to come back and review 3 more before Week 2 ends!

So I figured it’s been so long since my last review, I wanted to re-read and re-write a review for the first two chapters :D I know you’re not looking for any major critique on the early chapters, so I won’t get into the nitty gritty too much! Though I do have some thoughts on chapter one—feel...

Here for two things! Last minute review blitz because WHY NOT, and to begin my end of our review swap! I gotta say, I’m already really enjoying the story so far. Koa has a distinct, if somewhat cocky, personality, and I love that you’ve built up his *lofty* expectations because we all know...