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Oh my gosh what a chapter. This one, this one is my favorite yet I think. Everything about it pressed all my buttons. Self hating but determined protagonist who makes a choice to stand up do what the heck she wants and go on a journey, all the pokemon/human worldbuilding, the friendship and the...

As I was collecting things to quote and then put them all here, I switched back to check on what the latest reviewed chapter was an almost lost everything but luckily I got it back. Phew. Anyways, without further ado, the long, gloriously awaited, chapter 3! To begin broadly at first...

HHAHH I CAN DO THIS CHAPTER 2. This will be somewhat brief but I'll probably leave more thoughts another time. First up, chapter 2 is great. I can see a lot of the pacing and structure improvements you made. I think they're excellent. This version of the story is much clearer and the revisions...

I'll give some thoughts reactions to the prologue before I move on to the 1st chapter. Great prologue first of all!! Very poetic and dramatic. I don't have any real critique to give but I figured I'd just put some thoughts and musings. So Italy exists in this pokemon world? This evokes some...