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The thing I really love about this chapter is how efficient it is. I know it went through a lot of versions and a lot of stuff had to get cut, but it was worth it, because the end result is just so clean. It conveys a ton of stuff, and knows exactly what not to show. We don't need to see the...

chapter 5 is finallyyyy heeerrrrreee I appreciate how many characterful moments were jam-packed into this! I know that stitching all this material together was a real pain in the ass, but it all flows smoothly from one scene to the next, with threads linking one to the other, so none of the...

It's been 3000 years, but I am finally here for chapter 2! 🎉 I love how quickly and strongly this conveys Dusk's personality to us. I am always here for fun with names. Birth name, chosen name, human name, sign name, naaaameesssss. Salem nooo. Stop it, ackk. This entire scene is viscerally...

Hell yea, rolled this for catnip hell yea. 😎 I really love the intro paragraph. It reaches out and grabs onto you and doesn’t let there be any ambiguity as to what you’ll be presented with. I enjoy the way you use small bits of description to convey things about your subjects without having to...