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Finally got back to Drowning and I'm here for the sixth chapter. This chapter was mostly just characterization and I enjoyed reading through it. I notice that we see a lot of Derek in this chapter, and I've come to like his character quite a lot. I think you do a good job of incorporating real...

Chapter 5 was quite uncomfortable to read, and also a bit scary to be honest. I was pretty surprised when it was revealed that she'd ended up being caught by Team Magma. Here I thought she'd wake up washed up on an island somehow lol. You did well in selling how scary and manipulative Tabitha...

REVIEW FOR CHAPTERS 3 and 4 These two chapters I've read were pretty much largely pokemon battles and both had Maressa going up against Team Magma and pals. There were quite a few things that happened that weren't just battles though. I liked the conversation Maressa had with Golduck at the...

CHAPTER 2 REVIEW This chapter was pretty short, but quite a bit of stuff happened in it worth talking about. I think you did a good job showing how nervous Maressa was at the beginning of the chapter. Her interaction with Mark was also pretty nice. I wonder how the two became friends. The...

Hi Starlight! Thought I should check out your fic after our brief discussion in the server earlier, and I've read the first chapter now to review it. I honestly recall reading this fic at least once before, but I think I only read a bit of the first chapter long ago. Honestly I should've read...